Love life? Nah, just a growing boy.

[smallpigu]

This story is 75% fictional and 15% non fiction. Characters are all fictional! Just adding some stuffs to spice things up. Please pardon me for my english.

It's the start of sec 3. Zane was excited for school. (Sec3, new class due to streaming) But of course, meeting new classmates. Due to his personality, he wasnt close to guys in school. Maybe just a handful of his 'brothers'.

As usual. He woke up at 6am to prepare for school. Took a shower and changed into his school uniform. He then left home for school. On the way for school, he was looking around for new faces. Hoping that he could be friends with some of them. While settling down for assembly, he sat at the row his class is positioned at, behind a girl that he wasnt friends with. His eyes then drifted off to the girl in front of him.. and something caught his eye! A light blue coloured bra right in front of him beneath the girl's uniform! His lil bro slowly begun to harden up while his thoughts went far ahead of what he's staring at! What went wrong was.. he had to sing marikita with 'a marikita' in his pants. Oh.. the awkwardness..

He then went back to his new classroom with his new classmates and his form teacher, ms alicia li . As usual, the teacher have already planned out the sitting arrangement and they will be sitting in pairs!

'Zane Wong!' Ms Li called.

'Yes cher?...'

TBC'

[Johnston]

*stomps down

You've attracted a great beast of fearsome visage and immense build into your realm.... now choose

1) Complimentary rewrite x 1 into Air Level class England
2) Complimentary rewrite x 1 into ah beng England

before you mock my seemingly poor England I feel compelled to inform you that I have forgotten more than a lot of people know about England

[~Starhub~]

Ist camper to support

[Johnston]

Exmple

OriginalAs usual. He woke up at 6am to prepare for school. Took a shower and changed into his school uniform. He then left home for school. On the way for school, he was looking around for new faces. Hoping that he could be friends with some of them.

Air-Level
As was his custom, he woke up at the crack of dawn in order to prepare for the day's mission, namely the acquisition of academic knowledge. After undergoing his morning ablutions he donned the uniform of his academic institution, following which he then left home to travel to school. While he was on this journey, he kept his eyes peeled for fresh faces hoping that perhaps he could befriend some of them.

AH BENG
KnnbCcb limpeh qi lai 6 am prepare go to school as usual lah........ after I go pom pom I wear the stupid school uniform then go to school lor. on d way to school ah, my eye look see look see for any face that limpeh don't know one, scarli later I can be friend friend with them how????

[Bigthorn]

You sure can write bro Johnston

[BMW69]

LOL bro Johnston. Good one man.

[Surpreme]

TS missing liao. Going for long weekend.

[smallpigu]

Haha sure. Thanks guys for the feedback. I'll change the style of the story to a more localized kinda thing.

[Johnston]

waH ts you don't like a free rewrite of one part of your story? just tell me and I will apply the rewrite to any part of your story you desire

the general tone of your sotry already quite local, how much more local u want to make it...

P.S I don't do complimentary rewrites often these days

[smallpigu]

haha sorry guys. busy at the moment. shall continue with the update.


'you will be sitting beside samantha, dont even think of bullying her. is that understood?!'

zane was thinking, who the hell is this samantha. he then took a glance towards his desk. 'OMG IT'S HER. THE ONE IN FRONT OF ME THIS MORNING WITH THE LIGH BLUE COLOURED BRA.' zane stood rooted to the ground while staring at samantha's flawless beauty.

Henry, one of zane's brother. started teasing him.

'EH HURRY UP AND SIT BESIDE HER LEH. YOU WILL SHY ONE MEH!!! '

The whole class started laughing and both samantha and zane blushed. After finishing the seats placement. the self introduction started. ms li, the form teacher started introducing herself first.

'Ms li, 23 years old, 163cm tall. 32B bust size. killer figure maybe.. ', henry's mind was drifting away.. sitting beside him was joanne, his new partner. 156cm tall, maybe her boobs are too much for her to handle, a 34C!! henry started getting a hardon while his dirty thoughts were revolving in his dirty mind! Just then, Ms li called henry to introduce himself!! But having a hardon, it was too awkward to stand up.

So while sitting down, henry introduced himself while trying to hide his hardon from joanne.
'im henry. 173cm tall. i like to play basketball. errrrr.....NO MORE!' gosh. zane saw what was going on and texted henry. 'eh, first day alr horny ah. fantasizing about our teacher and your partner issit! :P' henry saw the msg zane sent to him and gave zane a 'peace' sign. zane gave himself a facepalm.unknowingly samantha was glancing at zane for that moment and giggled at zane's hopeless expression.

time passed pretty quickly. but zane, samantha and some of the rest didnt get a chance to introduce themselves. Zane being the shy one, written something on his foolscap paper, heart thumping rapidly like as if he fell in love. or maybe.... he already did.. he quickly folded the paper and passed it to samantha. zane quickly made the run for the toilet, not knowing how samantha will react to his advance. 'hello.. hehe. my name is zane. erm.. haha i dont really dare to talk to you because im overwhelmed by your beauty.. ermm.... haha.. i hope we can be friends..', upon reading the letter, samantha was grinning to herself. she replied to the letter. 'hi zane. why are you so shy?? stop being such a cutie. we can talk you know? there is no need for hand written letters like this you know, sillyboy.' she then placed it on zane's table and mingled around to make new friends in the class. zane came back into the classroom and saw the folded letter on his desk. he opened and read samantha's reply, his eyes sparkled while reading her reply. he smiled to himself having a thought of being friends with a pretty girl.

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soon after it was recess, zane took the initiative to ask samantha if she was willing to head down to the canteen with him. samantha gave him a pinch on his nose and agreed. zane's face immediately went red. Trying to be a gentleman, zane wanted to pay for the food samantha ordered, and samantha on the other hand, tried to be funny by telling zane that she ordered 2 bowls of noodles, 2 plates of chicken rice, and 4 cans of drink. zane's jaw dropped, and samantha started laughing at his reaction and said that she was joking!

'if ive been eating so much, wouldnt i be unable to fit into my uniform now you dumbboy.' , samantha said to him jokingly.
zane blushed again and laughed along. little did he know, there were many eyes watching him and many guys who were envious of what's going on with him and samantha. afterall, she's one of the pretty girls in school. the bell rang and everybody have to ge back to their classrooms. while going back, samantha stuffed a small little note into zane's back pocket without him knowing. but hopefully he finds it and take a look at it. class started and zane was trying hard to concentrate. what can he do when a beauty is just sitting beside him.

little did he know, she was aware of him looking at her, and playfully tickled him while he wasnt noticing. zane jerked when samantha tickled him, causing the table to fall onto the floor..

'YES MR ZANE? ARE YOU HAVING A FIGHT WITH YOUR TABLE??' , mr choo, his fierce maths teacher growled'

'Er... no mr choo. im sorry for causing such a commotion', glancing at samantha, trying a way to get back at her while replying mr choo. he then thought of something. he tried to tickle samantha, but being defensive, she covered her body with her arms and zane couldnt do anything to her at all! zane got bored at trying to get back at her for it and rest his head on the table.

'heehehe, why so fast give up?? i thought you want revenge?', samantha whispered into his ear. immediately, zane took this opportunity and tickled her.. but
... 'why does it feel...'
'hey! watch where you are touching!' zane immediately turned and retracted his hand. 'oops.. im sorry. i didnt mean to..' before he could complete his sentence, samantha pulled his right ear and gave it a flick. 'such a naughty boy!'. zane blushed and apologize profusely for what he have done..

Ding dong ding dong (LOL)

school's over. and zane walked home in a daze, recalling what have happened today...

heh. continue next time.

[BMW69]

Uncle ah. No head no tail leh. I see until who is Joanne ah? Oo

[smallpigu]

Originally Posted by BMW69

Uncle ah. No head no tail leh. I see until who is Joanne ah? Oo

Joanne is henry's partner