That one shade of Steele.

[BlackBirdFly]

A fan fiction from the 50 Shades of Grey, yes. Do give me feedback.. nothing is true in the story for sure. All characters and fictitious and blah blah blah..

First time writing, bruddas looking for a quick fap may wanna camp a little while longer while I churn out more.

It's a ficticious story of how Ray Steele was.. before He met Carla (Ana's mom). Totally no link some how.. but here goes..

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My name is Ray Steele. Taking pictures was what I was good at. Taking pictures of unfaithful men in bed with women, but not their wives. Wives comes to me, lamenting on what their husbands are, ends up no different from those unfaithful cheating men who comes home to them every night. I am a Private Detective.

It was sweltering in my office. The fan in the window was only blowing hot air around the room. The trees outside were nothing but still. I poured myself a double shot of whiskey as I lighted up that last stick of Lucky Strike

There was a knock on the glass office door.

“Come in.”

The door creaks and sways open and I see her. She was tall, with blond hair and blue dreamy eyes. She wore a powder blue suit that was tailored and made her look svelt that it shows out every curve that has to be shown. I straightened up my tie.

“What can I do for you, Miss-“

“Call me Jesele”

“Nice to meet you, Jesele. If you’re looking for Ray Steele, you found him. Please sit.”

She nodded, mildly, almost to herself and said, “Mr. Steele, I have a problem. I need your help.”

I waited for her to spill it all out. Most of them wouldn’t know about hiring a private dick (detective, if ur not getting it still) routine goes. Neither do I in fact, as each case is different from the all others.

The only thing that’s the same? Their cheating husbands.

She looked around my office and nodded meekly, doing all the same all over again. She pulled a flashy gold cigarette case out of her purse and asked, “Do you mind if I smoke?”

“Of course not.” I lit her cigarette with my lighter.

“So, you were saying?”, I prompted.

She took a long deep drag on her cigarette and exhaled with a sigh, while her breasts heaves lightly.

“I think my husband is cheating on me and I need you to find out if that’s the case.” It all came out in a rush as though if she said it quickly, it wouldn’t be true.

“I’m sorry to hear that. He must have been a foolish dick to have done so.”

She smiled, but shows no warmth in her smile. She was beautiful and for sure, she knew it. I’m sure men complimented her all the time. Her skin was creamy and perfect. There was not a single wrinkle on her face, except the creases on her cheeks when she smiles. Her hands were small and delicate. Almost angelic.

On her left hand, a big diamond and a gold wedding band.

“Thank you, he is. Can you find out for me?”

I softened my face and fumbled slightly from her magical beau, “Yes, ma’am, I’ll find out for you.”

“I don’t have much money, Mr. Steele.”

“I’m sure we can work something out. If you could kindly write down your address, where and when I can reach you, I’ll start after my next appointment.” I handed her a piece of paper and a pencil and she wrote..

I looked at the address, Queen’s Key. That’s a lot of money there.

She pulled out her purse and took out some money, “Will you accept a twenty-five dollar payment for my first visit?”

“Yes.”

She shook my hand and smiled, this time with some warmth. “Thank you so much, Mr. Steele. I look forwarded to hearing from you soon.”

But I thought I heard, “I’d like to feel your big hard shaft sliding in to me.”

I shook to clear my head, trying hard to stop that hard-on from stirring.

“Yes ma’am, I will call on you soon.”

With that, she left.

To be continued..
Action comes after this..

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[BlackBirdFly]

I went to my desk and pressed the intercom buzzer. Ginger, my secretary, said, “Yes, Mr. Steele.”

“Ginger, please come in here and take dictation.”

“Yes, Mr. Steele.”

I finished the rest of my whiskey. I heard Ginger lock the outer office door. She came into my office without a word and walked to the client chair. She bent over the client chair and pulled up her skirt. Her panties had been removed and she never had a habit of wearing her bra. I unzipped my trousers and pulled out the Steele Dick. I rubbed the tip against her button. She moved back against me and moaned. I put the head of my shaft in her. She moaned. “Come on, don’t hold back on me.” She purred.

I fed a little more of my 7 inch tool into her little pussy. She moaned louder. I pulled back so just the head was in her. She was panting now. Ginger never took long to get off.
I fed her even more. Her pussy was convulsing tightly around me. I pulled out and rubbed her clit again. She stared to shake and moan, a low noise that I’m sure scared some passersby out on the street. I pushed all the way in to the hilt. She started to come.

“Oh fuck, you’re going to split me in half.”

I grabbed her hips and started sawing, hard, right into her pussy. I could feel her tiny pussy struggling to take all of my manhood, but I didn’t wait for her to adjust. I gyrated my hips to match hers and she moaned even louder. She had one hand in her shirt playing with her nipples and one hand on her clit, rubbing herself into a climax. She chanted, “Fuck me, fuck me, fuck me..” as if it was a mantra, which for Ginger, it could have been.

She came again and I knew her legs were about to give up on her. I pulled my steele dick out of her and led her to the couch. I sat down and she placed her self over my dick as I impaled her little battered pussy.

She couldn’t take a full thrust on top of me,but her tight pussy was milking the life out of me as she grinded haphazardly while hovering over me, unable to consume the full length. I put one hand on her hip and with the other grabbed one of her hardened nipples, rolling it in my fingers.

That sets her floodgates open and she flooded my dick with her sweet juice. She got off my pole and put her lips on it. She rubbed her clit while taking half of my dick down the length of her throat. Her tongue continued to work the underside and the head while she was deep-throating me. Her other hand was jacking the other few inches she couldn’t get in her mouth. I could feel the boiling in my sack as she continued her excellent assaults on my love weapon. I grunted as I shot my load down her throat. She swallowed every drop as if it was water to her fire.

She smiled at me and poured us each a drink. She purred, “If Albert knew what I really did in my job, he’d hit me real bad.”

I said, “I’d shoot his miserable ass. It’s not your fault he can’t do the job.”

“You sure did his job well..” She said with a wicked smile. “I love taking dictation.”….

To be continued.

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[BlackBirdFly]

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Nice read.

Camping here to show my support!

[BlackBirdFly]

Originally Posted by ac171

Nice read.

Camping here to show my support!

Thanks! Fell asleep last night while editing the final bits.. Will be posting it up later tonight!

[BlackBirdFly]

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I drove out across the highway after my interlude with Ginger. The sun was still high in the late afternoon sky, but behind me, in the eastern sky, floated the late afternoon thunder storms everyone has come to expect.

I found myself in a while, driving into her Residence at Queen’s Key. The well-dressed guard let me pass without any interferences. Looks like they’ve been waiting for my arrival somehow. The house was a large beige stucco job with a fancy terra cotta roof, lined with three large balconies with double doors on the second storey. As I glanced through, I saw her. Jesele. She was sunning herself on a towel.

I called up to her.

“Oh, Mr Steele! How nice to see you again. Please, do come up and have a drink with me by the pool.’

There, she waited by the pool, seated on a chaise longue with a pitcher of martini on a small table next to her.

She was looking beautiful in the baby blue swimsuit..

Almost intoxicating.. My cock was stirring and I felt my sacks brewing..

I shook my head, clearing those dirty thoughts off.

“I’m sorry to have disturbed you. I have a few more questions for you”

“It’s not a disturbance at all. In fact I’m glad to have the company, Ray. I’m glad to have you as company. Let me pour you a drink and then we could discuss this awful business.”

She poured me a martini, and made a toasting gesture with her glass.

“To Love.”

Glasses clinked and I sipped. Too much vermouth. Picking out one of the olives wouldn’t even make it better.

“Let’s get down to the discussion about your husband.”

“That’s such a bore. Let’s talk about You. Are you married?”

“No. Never married.”

She downed the rest of her martini down and poured some more. She suddenly clambered over me and at a very close distance was her lips to mine. I could smell her, so intoxicating.

She hissed lustfully at me and said, “ My husband, Edward was the only man I’ve kept faithful to ever since I got married. I am sick of this. Now I want more.. I want you..”

“ I don’t think this is a good..”

She sealed my lips with her and had her tongue sliding in to my mouth. She leaned closer and there was body English. She needed more. I could feel her breasts, a handful, firm, on my chest. She came up for air after a good long wet sloppy kiss, and reached behind to pull her hair out of its clasp. Her hair cascaded down to her neck and onto her shoulders. Her deep blue eyes became even more blue, contrasted to her sexy swimsuit.

I knew better to screw a client, a married couple with marital problems. But there was no way. She’s intoxicating, desirable and beautiful and I was about to fuck her brains out.

“So you want to know how he lived his life? I’ll show you.” I grabbed her hand and led her into the house and up the stairs and into an open room. I got her to the bed and pulled her next to me and kissed her, tongues wrestling. Her breasts were mashed against my chest and I could feel her heat. I got her off her suit and she whimpered. She has no idea what was going to happen.

I pushed her back to the bed and hastily took off my clothes. I was on top of her and I assaulted her from her neck and tuning her nipples roughly. They were extremely hard and thigh, like fleshy thimbles. She moaned while I double-teamed her neck and nipple. I slid my mouth down to one of her nipples and sucked on it, making her moan even louder. I played with her other nipple while my other hand was lightly rubbing the insides of her thigh. I believe that made her a little crazier.

I found her clit and I thumbed it. She was already shuddering when I went on to stroke her clit. She was wet like a hurricane and breathing like one too. I put my middle finger in and she was moaning loudly enough that anyone outside could hear. To me, she felt like she was about to blow.

I wasn’t sure of how much I could handle from her hot and sweet body before I began plunging her.

Once I thought she was ready to go, I trailed my lips along her breasts, to her belly button and downward to her pussy that smells heavenly. I took her pussy in my mouth, sucking and licking her clit at the same time. Her hands came down and yanked at my hair and with a muffled scream against the pillow, she flooded my mouth with squirts and squirts of orgasmic femme cum. I stuck in my tongue in her already wet pussy and fucked her with it. She came again almost instantaneously, moaning loudly and bucking against my mouth.

Her eyes were closed and her chest was still heaving. She had a nice red flush on her breasts, neck, and her every so beautiful face.

How could ANYONE cheat on her? Idiot.

I spread her legs and put a little of myself into her. She was really tight. I never had trouble with entry like this and she was moaning and grunting at every touch this baby was touching her sensitive pussy. The head popped in and slowly glided the rest of my length into her.

I could feel her tighten her quim muscles around me, tight and eveloping my cock from inside, trying to repel the unnaturally fat intruder. I started fucking her, in and out, slowly. The base of my cock was hitting her clit. She started to match my motions and pace. She came again, digging her fingernails into my flesh and biting into me. The bites somewhat triggered me. I didn’t wait for her to finish as I sped up the pace.

She started moaning in a constant monotone coupled with a constant shudder.

I knew I had a long time to go before I filled her with my seed. She came again and I pulled out wit a loud plop with her own cum flowing out, soaking out the bedsheets badly. There were patches of wetness almost everywhere on the bed, and it turned me on more.

She turned it around so suddenly. I quickly found myself under her, and she sat on the waist, leaning forward to put that baby fuckstick in her while she moaned thru my length gliding into her sex. She started fucking me slowly and then speeding up. I palmed her breasts, feeling her nipples harden in my palms.

Her eyes were closed and she looked like an angel, and her silky hair was her halo. Simply exquisite.

I could feel the boiling and shiver from my sack. I was about to blow up. I pushed down on her fits and felt the hilt of her shallow but wondrously tight cunt. She moaned and thrashed wildly as another orgasm engulfed her thoroughly. She was having her juices flowing out like a rapid and I came right along with her, filling her up with as much spunk as I’ve ever shot in my life. I immediately felt my knees and hands go weak after..

She was looking at me as she laid beside me, looking all so liberated. She laid her head on my chest and we kissed again.

“What can I say? You hired a dick and a dick is what you got.”

She reached down and squeezed my cock hard with her hand.

“I might just keep you.. if you play your cards right…”


To be continued..

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[BlackBirdFly]

Originally Posted by man-on-fire

please keep the story coming enjoy it to bits

Originally Posted by ReelSchnick

Keep it coming .

Thank you guys for showing your support.

and here's my next installment. Enjoy!

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Edward was on the beach with his secretary, Georgia. She’s a brunette, with nice large breasts and a posterior that didn't look bad, either. Jesele and I were looking through binoculars at the festivities on the beach, separate binoculars. Presently, Edward was doing his best imitation of a man about to bury the hatchet.

Only his hatchet was on the short side. I'm not one to compare, but I can see why his wife preferred the axe in my pants to the hatchet in his.

Edward had his hands on his secretary's breasts and was doing a maneuver that I would have expected someone molding clay would use. I'm pretty sure he was confusing her yelps of pain for pleasure. She was lying on her back with her legs spread, the look on her face said, "Hurry up and get this over with."

He mounted her and I heard her make a little cooing noise. He closed his eyes and she yawned.

"Are you going to do something?"

"I was thinking about taking a few pictures of this love and then letting you sue the shit out of him in divorce court."

"That's what I wanted to hear." She said, leaning her head down into my lap. Her slim hands were on my cock through my slacks. She unzipped me and pulled my cock out. I took the camera and started snapping pictures of the happy couple doing it on the beach as I felt Jesele's warm breath on my pole.

She licked the head and stroked the shaft. I didn't think she'd had much experience giving head, but I was more than willing to let her practice on me. She took the head in her mouth and sucked down a little bit more. When my large cock hit the back of her throat she gagged and mumbled something unintelligible. It's been my experience that no amount of conversation while getting a blow job is good so I just ignored it and put my head back on the seat.

Jesele was sucking for all she was worth. Her hand was working the part she couldn't get into her mouth, which was a considerable amount. Her other hand was up her dress finger-fucking her own pussy like it had an itch. It was time to scratch the itch. I moved her hand away from her pussy and pulled her panties off her ass. Her cunt was dripping wet. I probe a pair of fingers into her lovebox, teasing her and thumbing her clit lightly.

She moaned around my cock and unbuttoned her dress, her firm perky breasts fighting against the silk bra. She took my rod out of her mouth and moaned, a long, low, loud moan. She put my dick between her tits and I could feel her nipples against my thighs.

It was time to start fucking...

I pulled her up and slid over to the other side of the car under her. She sat on my lap facing the windshield. She took my cock in her hand and rubbed it along her clit. When she did, she came instantly and loudly. The happy couple on the beach looked our way, but, couldn't see anything. I could feel her pussy quivering around the head of my lovestick as she coated it with her love juice.

She put the head inside her and whimpered. I knew she was going to go slowly. I gently twisted a nipple and lightly rubbed her clit as I waited for her to take more. She started to take a little more slowly fucking me, the top of my cock rubbing the soft spongy spot just inside her pussy.

Once I was in as far as I would go, she leaned back against me and started moving faster. She was so tight and I could feel my head rubbing against her cervix, an unmatched combination in the history of fuckitude.

She moved faster, out to the tip and then all the way to the bottom...

She started coming, her breathing sounded like a train coming down the tracks. I increased the pressure on her clit and on her tits. She stopped fucking while her orgasm racked her.

When she was finished coming, I pushed her forward against the dashboard and started setting the pace. I was banging the tip of my cock into her unmercifully. I could feel the delicious sensation of my balls getting tighter and tighter. Her hair was whipping my face as she shook her head. I let out a low moan and started flooding her with my love seed. She convulsed, signaling another orgasm and let out an earth-shaking scream.

I lit us each a cigarette, she licked my cock clean and wiped off her puffy pussy lips, moaning a little while she did so, with my handkerchief. "Oh baby, tell me you got some good pictures."

"Of course, baby, I'm a professional."

She smiled her million-watt smile, "What happened to not mixing business with pleasure?"

"What are you talking about, I'm always working."

Her smile didn't change.

"Always working my pussy."

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