My attempt at writing fiction... - Page 8

EnigmaofSorrow · #**106** 27-11-2012, 05:30 PM

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Originally Posted by Coffeecans

Well done bro

Thanks Bro...

On a sidenote... our thread is getting a little absurd. How about we start a new one but with specific themes so we wont stray that far off topic?

Coffeecans · #**107** 27-11-2012, 05:47 PM

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Originally Posted by EnigmaofSorrow

Thanks Bro...

On a sidenote... our thread is getting a little absurd. How about we start a new one but with specific themes so we wont stray that far off topic?

Yea i guess too hahahhaa. You became Hentai cartoon heehee

BMW69 · #**108** 27-11-2012, 05:50 PM

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Originally Posted by EnigmaofSorrow

Thanks Bro...

On a sidenote... our thread is getting a little absurd. How about we start a new one but with specific themes so we wont stray that far off topic?

Yes bro. Haha your thread is getting very weird. No offence.

EnigmaofSorrow · #**109** 27-11-2012, 05:51 PM

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Originally Posted by Coffeecans

Yea i guess too hahahhaa. You became Hentai cartoon heehee

Haha. Yeah. Must be influenced by all the manga I've been reading recently to pass time... which incidentally made me over shoot my 2gb data plan... thought I was still on 12gb... damn telcos...

EnigmaofSorrow · #**110** 27-11-2012, 05:53 PM

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Originally Posted by BMW69

Yes bro. Haha your thread is getting very weird. No offence.

None taken. I guess we are just exploring as many genres as possible... why don't you contribute as well?

Coffeecans · #**111** 27-11-2012, 06:02 PM

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Originally Posted by EnigmaofSorrow

None taken. I guess we are just exploring as many genres as possible... why don't you contribute as well?

Its quite amazing and enjoyable though cracking heads on it. haha.

BMW69 · #**112** 27-11-2012, 06:04 PM

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Originally Posted by EnigmaofSorrow

None taken. I guess we are just exploring as many genres as possible... why don't you contribute as well?

Hmm I'm exploring the possibilities of writing my own fiction thread after my non-fiction story ends. Wouldn't want to hijack my thread before it's created. Besides, it's fun watching how James humps everyone he can lay his dick on. Is Amy coming next or his dad or a new thread? Haha

EnigmaofSorrow · #**113** 27-11-2012, 06:13 PM

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Hmm I'm exploring the possibilities of writing my own fiction thread after my non-fiction story ends. Wouldn't want to hijack my thread before it's created. Besides, it's fun watching how James humps everyone he can lay his dick on. Is Amy coming next or his dad or a new thread? Haha

Actually I haven't really developed that part yet. Not sure why but I like using flashbacks.. and James has a good 8 years or so of fucking before he gets to amy... haha...

BMW69 · #**114** 27-11-2012, 06:16 PM

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Originally Posted by EnigmaofSorrow

Actually I haven't really developed that part yet. Not sure why but I like using flashbacks.. and James has a good 8 years or so of fucking before he gets to amy... haha...

We all like using flashbacks I guess. Writing based on the most memorable or favourite bits from the past and kinda joining them up together?

LovePotion · #**115** 28-11-2012, 12:18 AM

writing all this fiction need very good memory as well as inovative as well...

BMW69 · #**116** 28-11-2012, 03:59 AM

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Originally Posted by LovePotion

writing all this fiction need very good memory as well as inovative as well...

Bro fiction is fake. No nemory needed.

honeypig13 · #**117** 28-11-2012, 07:24 PM

He fuck 2 women then he discovered porn hmm weird but I like the general storyline. What's next his classmate?

kodoba70 · #**118** 28-11-2012, 08:27 PM

I like the story. Please continue

EnigmaofSorrow · #**119** 29-11-2012, 04:25 PM

James suddenly had a new-found self-confidence that he never felt before.

He begin to walk with a swagger, shoulders pulled back, chest puffed out to make himself look bigger.

His classmates noticed the change, and welcomed it. He was no longer the shy, timid boy who always refused to go out with them.

He continued sleeping with Celine and Liana on a relatively frequent basis. He had Celine after their weekly tuition sessions, and Liana every other day, sometimes a few times a day. His sexual appetite was getting out of control for someone that young. It was probably just a matter of time before he had to bear the consequences of his actions.

He was actually quite lucky that both of them did not get pregnant after the first instance of unprotected sex. Strangely, it was Celine who had sourced for condoms for him, one that could actually fit him well, and not threaten to cut off the bloodflow to his member.

He continued compensating Celine quite well for each session. It was a wonder how he managed to get so much cash. Luckily, him mom gave him allowances in five figures everytime she visited.

A smarter human being would have invested the cash somehow, instead of blowing it all on sex. But he was a young boy, having just discovered the most satisfying thing he ever experienced. So it did not really matter anyway. Besides, unless his mom's goldmine ran out, his cash flow was still constant. What he did not realise was that his habit of paying for sex was not a good one, especially since he probably could be getting it for free.

Celine was thoroughly enjoying herself, and not merely the monetary rewards. James came in especially handy during the exam periods, when he literally pounded away her exam stress.

Liana too was on the receiving end of James generosity. In fact, over the past few months, she had actually accumulated enough to buy a new house for her parents back in Indonesia. She too, was loving the pleasure that James could give her. She was unsure at first, if what she was doing was right, but at least using him to relieve her sexual frustrations was a lot easier than looking for a boyfriend on the sly.

But back to the story.

James started loving himself more, now that he possessed the self-confidence he once lacked. He started hitting the gym every now and then, watched his diet, took care of his skin, and actually styled his hair every morning. If not for his lack of height, he could probably be a model.

Now James was not the sort to actively meet new people, but now that he was hanging out a lot more with his classmates, his social circle increased exponentially.

He was known as the shy, quiet guy who was wealthy, but never arrogant, preferring to spread his wealth around to make others happy, rather than splurge on himself, other than on his trysts with Celine and Liana.

And that was how he met Denise.

She was part of a group of girls who he and his classmates hung out with after school at the shopping centre near both their schools.

She was slim, taller than him, curvy figure with long hair. What attracted him to her was actually her large, doe-like eyes, and captivating smile. It also helped that she was not the type of schoolgirl whose skirt was way above the knee, and blouse was not tight enough to reveal her chest size. If fact, she even turned beet-red on one occassion when James pointed out that her red bra could be seen underneath her white blouse.

In short, she was an innocent girl, and James wanted to be the one to take that innocence away from her.

EatPrayLove · #**120** 29-11-2012, 05:02 PM

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Originally Posted by EnigmaofSorrow

Thanks Bro...

On a sidenote... our thread is getting a little absurd. How about we start a new one but with specific themes so we wont stray that far off topic?

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Originally Posted by Coffeecans

Yea i guess too hahahhaa. You became Hentai cartoon heehee

totally agree!
I wanted to write but also don't know where to start from.