My attempt at writing fiction...

[curiouslala]

Originally Posted by drslump99

I need to be observing, so I cannot be in the test group.
Bully u, where. Who dares!!!

U did.
U tear my notes. Dare u say u didn't?
U see the proof urself!
I'm learninggggg.. yet u dun let me learn.. *cry*

Originally Posted by drslump99

Believe it or not, it works up about RMB 650, excluding the starter dish and beverages.
All in less than 1000rmb.
Split by 10 person, 100rmb a piece
The conversion rate 1 : 5.05
So less than sgd 20 per person.

Expensive?

Expensive in rupiah..
That's enough for my 10 days lunch in here..

[drslump99]

Originally Posted by curiouslala

U did.
U tear my notes. Dare u say u didn't?
U see the proof urself!
I'm learninggggg.. yet u dun let me learn.. *cry*

Actually the real reason y u dun have to copy is because I have already photocopy my own notes for you.
You dun have to tired your hand. I pamper you much much mah!
What left is practical


Expensive in rupiah..
That's enough for my 10 days lunch in here..

Not expensive for all those who'd dish. Thrust me!

[Tengkor]

So far so good at your attempt at fiction

[LovePotion]

thats one nice story.... gooood

[kittymae]

Originally Posted by drslump99

Huh huh, can always use google translate
Singapore probably will cost between 3~ 4 times more

Translate may not come out right leh...Lols

Originally Posted by curiouslala

U did.
U tear my notes. Dare u say u didn't?
U see the proof urself!
I'm learninggggg.. yet u dun let me learn.. *cry*

Sis, use electronic notes (type on Hp, comp or sthg lo)
Hm..but then the Godfather will prob just trash it or throw water on it..
He's getting very erh..barbaric!?!?

[curiouslala]

Originally Posted by kittymae

Sis, use electronic notes (type on Hp, comp or sthg lo)
Hm..but then the Godfather will prob just trash it or throw water on it..
He's getting very erh..barbaric!?!?

Yeahhh.. he's sooo bad to meeee..
I just want to learnnnnn...
and he just tear my notessssss..
*cry loudly*

[EnigmaofSorrow]

Liana was happy. Her first real sexual experience was a fantastic one, no doubt due to James massive member. She did not regret giving him her virginity.

She went up to James and hugged him, pressing his face into her chest.

J: Kakak, why is there blood? I'm so sorry...

L: You are my first. First got blood.

J: You never had a boyfriend before?

L: No. 18 I come here work. Before take care of family. No time.

J: Did it feel good?

L: Yes James. Very good.

J: Can we do it again?

L: Ok.

James went to wash his penis while Liana douched herself.

Going back into the room, she made James lie down.

She licked him all over, from head to toe, concentrating on his nipples, inner thighs and testicles, the same way she remembered the porn actresses doing.

James was getting hard again, his dick slowly rising in anticipation. Pre-cum seeped from the head and Liana licked it up, swirling her tongue around the head.

She wrapped her lips around it, creating a vacuum as she sucked him. Somehow, for an amateur, she was a fast learner, and a good one. James squirmed and flinched as her lips and tongue teased more pre-cum out. He was secretly thankful that she had caught him fucking Celine. Not that he had harboured any intentions about fucking his maid in the first place. But now at least he did not have to wait for his weekly sessions with Celine. Assuming she still wanted it. But he was pretty sure he did a good job making her feel good despite it being his first time.

Liana started wanking him as she continued sucking. She tried to deepthroat him, forcing it in further than she currently could, gagging in the process. James flinched as he felt her gag reflex. It felt good.

He reached around and started tweaking her nipples, feeling them stiffen slightly. He flicked them lightly and pinched. Liana moaned, causing vibrations around his cock.

She started rubbing her crotch on his smooth, hairless leg, the same way she did with her bolster. He felt her wetness on him. He desperately wanted to stick it in, and pound her until she screamed his name.

She felt her juices really flowing. She was going to take him from the top. From the videos she watched, it looked as though the girls really enjoyed it.

She straddled him and positioned his cock at her entrance, rubbing it around, coating it with her juices for extra lubrication. Inch by inch, she let it slide into her. She was still very tight. James struggled to control himself.

Suddenly, she went down full force on him. She grimaced as he hit her cervix.

She rocked back and forth, rubbing her clit against him while his long tool probed her cervix. After she got over the initial discomfort, she started moaning like a bitch in heat.

James grabbed her boobs.

L: Oh James!

She shuddered and shivered as the wave of intense pleasure hit her.

James was so turned on by her that he released his load, and immediately felt a little disappointed that he came so fast.

Liana moaned louder as she felt his sperm fill her insides. He started to get soft. But she was not done yet.

She pushed down further and rubbed harder, trying to make herself cum again. She succeeded within a few strokes and continued, cumming once more in the process. She collapsed onto him. He tried to kiss her but she turned her face away.

His flaccid penis slipped out of her, along with the creamy liquid from her nether regions.

L: We bathe?

J: Yes Kakak.

They headed to the shower where she scrubbed him good. He tried to return the favour but ended up playing with her boobs again instead.

After the shower, they got dressed.

L: What you want for dinner?

J: Nasi Goreng.

L: Ok.

She turned to leave.

J: Kakak, please wash my bedsheets too ok?

Liana smiled and nodded. She was after all still his maid.

[curiouslala]

Erm..
my cousin's indo maid isn't that clever in english lo..
Lol~

[EnigmaofSorrow]

Originally Posted by curiouslala

Erm..
my cousin's indo maid isn't that clever in english lo..
Lol~

Well, I don't have an Indonesian maid... so I dont know how good their English is... unless you are going to teach me some bahasa?

[kittymae]

Originally Posted by EnigmaofSorrow

Well, I don't have an Indonesian maid... so I dont know how good their English is... unless you are going to teach me some bahasa?

Wahhhhh teach what kinda phrases in Bahasa??

And...one-on-one private lessons??

[honeypig13]

For a young first timer , that guy has alot of stamina

[curiouslala]

Originally Posted by EnigmaofSorrow

Well, I don't have an Indonesian maid... so I dont know how good their English is... unless you are going to teach me some bahasa?

Erm.. bad english as she only can speak abit english nia..

Originally Posted by kittymae

Wahhhhh teach what kinda phrases in Bahasa??

And...one-on-one private lessons??

Lol..
I think he better use bad english..

[EnigmaofSorrow]

Originally Posted by honeypig13

For a young first timer , that guy has alot of stamina

That's why its fiction... haha...

But, I'm sure some young first-timers actually do possess such stamina.

[EnigmaofSorrow]

Celine's brain was in overdrive the minute she stepped out of James house.

Shit, I got caught.

What if the maid tells the father?

I'll never have his cock again.

But more importantly, I won't be getting extra allowance...

Was she in it for the enjoyable sex? Or just the money?

She opened the envelope and found a stack of crisp, new blue notes.

She counted them quickly. 40 pieces.

She gasped. Why did he pay her that much?

And it was already in an envelope. Had he been planning this all the while? Did he lie about being a virgin? And he had discharged his live ammo into her. Was that on purpose too?

Meanwhile, as James tucked into the Nasi Goreng that Liana had prepared for him, he marvelled at his luck. Two girls in a day. One a virgin. Suddenly he felt as though he had the power.

After dinner, he googled for "average penis size" and was slightly taken aback by the results.

He discovered that he was way above average. But to his dismay, he also realised that his blessing might also be a curse as not many girls could handle his tool.

But it did not matter to him anyway. It was already hardwired into his brain. The pleasures of the flesh.

His innocent search for cock sizes soon led him into the dark world of Internet pornography.

He was no longer the innocent boy he was a couple of hours ago.

Liana entered the room to put fresh sheets on his mattress. She caught sight of him surfing objectionable websites.

L: James!

He "innocently" turned around, stroking his 8 incher.

J: Yes Kakak?

L: Naughty boy...

She smiled and licked her lips. She knelt down between his legs and took his shaft into her mouth.

He slid his hands into her t-shirt and fondled her breasts through her bra.

J: I want to fuck your tits?

L: What?

James stopped her from sucking and directed her attention to the computer screen.

A busty blonde was giving a tit-fuck to a well-endowed dude.

Liana removed her t-shirt and bra and wrapped her breasts around his pole.

J: Spit on it Kakak. Make it wet.

She did as she was told.

James leaned back and enjoyed it. Liana tried to emulate what was happening onscreen, licking his dickhead as it reached the peak of her cleavage.

J: Kakak, can I cum in your mouth?

L: No. Don't like.

James opened his drawer and took out four blue notes.

J: You sure you don't like?

Liana felt slightly insulted, but took the cash anyway. It would help her family back home.

J: Now suck my cock till I cum.

She swallowed her pride and did as she was told.

She thought he would be nice to her, especially since she had given him her virginity. It was not as though he was not nice to her before, but she did not expect to become his paid sex slave.

Still, it appeared that he was going to pay her anyway.

She sucked his cock hard, massaging his balls at the same time, hoping that he would cum quickly and she could get back to the rest of her household chores before retiring for the night.

James grabbed the back of her head and forced it down. She choked, tears started streaming down her face. But strangely, she was enjoying it.

James was getting turned on by this and he released into her mouth, causing her to choke again.

He withdrew his cock and started stroking it, hoping to shoot again.

J: Open your mouth Kakak.

She did.

J: Oh yes....

He fired off another two streams into her mouth.

J: Swallow it.

Liana never expected that she would actually enjoy this. She played around with his cum in her mouth for awhile before swallowing, then showing him that she had swallowed all of it. Perhaps money was really her motivating factor.

J: Thank you Kakak.

L: No James, thank you.

She reached over, pulled him towards her and gave him a kiss, letting him taste a little of his sperm, before heading back down and bringing his cock to hardness again.

James smiled.

And thus began his sexual journey.

[Coffeecans]

Well done bro