True Story

[10 cc]

during love making, there are guys who dont like to do or dont do foreplay, and there are guys who do it for too long. most of us, i believe, are somewhere in the middle of the spectrum. so some of us may be the "wham bam thank you mam" man, while others are different.

being h24b's friend, i am obviously bias towards him. so read the following with this in mind, with a large dosage of salt.

i think his story is giving sufficient details without feeling a drag (at least for me). giving details and painting a better picture is a story-telling skill. too little and the readers cannot be drawn in, too much and it gets repetitive. constructive suggestions/criticisms are always good for new writers - as so to learn when too much is too much.

and i believe h24b is learning. remember the time when he always wakes up with a bbbj? i, for amongst the first few, pointed that out. thereafter, he doesnt get much of a morning-blow anymore...

just 1 more point. anything can be "cut-to-the-chase". but that wont make a story great. it will like reading news - "today, train crash, 100 died, 140 inhured." this is cut to the chase. but from a story telling point, we might zoom in on 4 family/couple/friends/group/individual from different background boarding the train, with diff emotional state, and then their activities on the train, leading to the point of impact, and the fight for survival thereafter. this is story-telling (remember the stallone movie, Daylight?).

JK Rowling could have written: "Harry left Hogwarts at 17, where he had many thrilling adventures with his friends, Ron and Hermione, and joins the Ministry of Magic as an Aura". Where would the fun be then?

the cliche of someone's meat and poison applies. i like this meat. some think it shit. well, u know the usual ways to stay away from shit, don't you?

finally, read this as a blog and not an FR (or a collection of FRs) if you want, and perhaps it will feel differently.

and you can always stay away from this thread (unless it is so additictive for u to want to know what happen in the end, much like the old 100 ep hkg dramas), then stay tuned for more...

[born_mean]

Originally Posted by 10 cc

the cliche of someone's meat and poison applies. i like this meat. some think it shit. well, u know the usual ways to stay away from shit, don't you?

Well said bro...* CLAP CLAP CLAP *

Pls bro Harrier...ignore the barkings and continue in whatever style u liked, IT'S YOUR STORY. BM

[canny]

why people like this thread becos everything is very detail...
I just feel like reading a romnatic story..
I agreed with 10cc ... if everything so straight forward would there be readers ??

Bro H24 i support u .. Pls continue... but don waited till so long... hahah

Hope u have recovered by now

[Wannabeone]

Originally Posted by 10 cc

i think his story is giving sufficient details without feeling a drag ......
and i believe h24b is learning. remember the time when he always wakes up with a bbbj? i, for amongst the first few, pointed that out. thereafter, he doesnt get much of a morning-blow anymore...
............finally, read this as a blog and not an FR (or a collection of FRs) if you want, and perhaps it will feel differently.
.......

Well said bro, cannot disagree with u.........anyway, you should be an editor...u got the cut...... oh by the way....keep up the good work bro harrier.....

[pendragon_sg]

well i take his stories with a wee bit of salt.

but what i know is his stories are like Viagra to me. A couple of readings makes me damn horny and off i go ravishing the ladies in Geylang.

[hunter89]

Bro 10cc, well say well say...... as the saying goes, One man's meat is another man's poison.... this statement not only apply to gals, but apply to alot of things......

If people don't like to read, why bother coming to this thread???

Bro Harrier.. keep coming...... If I'm not wrong, maybe she bought an airticket and decide to fly with you????

[sugardad]

I agree with 10cc and I am not a friend of harrier24b at least. Maybe for middle age man like us, we sometimes are lucky enough to have encounter of this nature.

I am not saying younger single guys don't get it. I don't know, sometime married man do get something different, maybe is the gals' competitive nature , eyeing for that "replacement position". Thinking "I must do better than wifes " to even have a chances to be consider by us. Usually after relationship stable down, you don't get to hav fantasy coming your way.

Yes, by nature man are more visual than woman but having know most woman understand that why can't they just keep up the good work since the start??

You can say that experiences of these nature are fantasy comes true . So we only discuss what we can discuss..... If you pay attention, Harrier has not say anything abt his wife at all only for us to know he has a wife that is irreplacable.

Learn that the rest of u, have decent respect for what is important.

[Harrier24B]

WOW!

half a day of not logging in and so many things happened?

Thanks for all the support. Will start writing after dinner.....

[Harrier24B]

SG BOYTOY, my TUMI was bought in Honolulu some years back.......

Here's the next part since I have some time to write......



“Oh come on baby……why are you suddenly thinking this way again?” I asked rather irritated with her again.

I started walking out of the terminal with her following behind me quietly with her head bowed low…..

We shared a cigarette in silence as we watched the cars and taxis alighting their passengers with luggage at the entrance.

After the smoke, she apologised “Baby, I’m so sorry BUT the reason why I’m feeling paranoid is because I LOVE YOU too much and cannot bear for you to not be by my side…”

“But, you know that I do not have a choice and have to travel in my business…..and you can’t possibly follow me everywhere…..RIGHT?”

“Yes….but I still feel a sense of loss knowing you won’t be around with me over the weekend…….”

“Ok, I have to go in already. Have a discussion inside before buying my cigarettes and liquor for the clients. Let’s proceed in”

We walked hand in hand to the gantry gates and as I turned her around and gave her a hug, she hugged back very tightly, tears starting to flow……

We kissed, in full view of the other passengers walking through, and after re-convincing her that I’m not leaving her for good, I walked in pulling my trolley bag with my TUMI bag slung over my shoulder…….

A couple of hours later, I disembarked from the plane and was walking over to the immigration counters when my mobile rang.

“Hello?”

“Baby! You have arrived safely?”

“Yap! Or else I wouldn’t be able to answer your call and talk to you right?” I replied sarcastically.

“What are you doing now?”

“I’m about to go through immigration. I’d better hang up in case I get into trouble with the immigration officers…Bye”

“Ok then, call me later when you reach you hotel, ok baby?”

“OK, Bye” I said coldly. (I was getting irritated with her constant calling)

I cleared immigration without a hitch and was waiting for my luggage when my phone rang again.

“HELLO?” I answered rather rudely

“Hi, where are you?” It was my missus calling

“Oh hi, I just touched down in BKK airport…..why?”

“OH….i just touched down in BKK airport too! I thought I saw someone who looked like you…what are you doing in BKK anyway?” IT’S MY MISSUS!!!

“You just touched down in BKK too?” I asked rather taken aback

“Yeah, I decided to do stopover to relax and do some shopping before going back home………since you are here, I can make arrangements to fly back together with you and we treat this like a short holiday then?”

“Ok..that sounds cool…..I have nothing on besides work anyway….” I replied as I cursed my luck since I had already planned to party and maybe have some ‘fun’ with the 2 MILF’s who are already in BKK……

“OK, I’ll go make arrangements with the TG office and meet you outside.”

“Ok then….see you outside, Ill be by the money changers changing a bit more Thai baht ….”

[Harrier24B]

When my missus came out with her luggage, we hugged and walked over to get a limo service as the taxi queue was very long.

“How was India?” I asked as we got into the Toyota Camry.

“Horrible! Dirty and smelly and my stomach didn’t agree with the food! I had diarrhea a few times. However, the business part was good, we managed to close quite a few deals. My colleagues are still there. I couldn’t take it anymore and hence decided to come back first…..How’s baby?”

“Oh..she’s great…..and she’s really growing up to be a very beautiful and intelligent girl (Which parent wouldn’t say that about their own kid?)

“Btw, you haven’t told me why you are here except the general term ‘work’?”

“Oh…sorry, I’ve got a project on Sathorn Road and I’m here for some meetings…..”

“Cool…..business good these last few weeks? Sorry haven’t been able to talk much as the lines there were really bad too….”

“Have you booked your hotel room?” I asked as the car got up the flyover, avoiding the congested traffic below.

“Actually, no…I had contact your cousin James to put up at his apartment since he has 2 spare bedrooms…..”

“I’ve booked a room at the Arnoma hotel, same as my last trip, cos I liked the location and decent rooms that didn’t cost very much” I told her.

“Why don’t I give James a call to inform him that I will be staying with you and we could all meet for dinner tonight?”

“Cool! Haven’t seen him for quite a while….”

With that said, we realized that the car was going through some backlanes and before we knew it, we were at the hotel lobby (These Limo drivers really know the shortcuts, unlike the taxi drivers that do not mind taking the main roads and getting in jams as they charge by the meter)

I check in and after converting my room into double occupancy, we went up to our room to rest and freshen up before meeting my cousin for dinner in Song Boon restaurant nearby.

While my missus was in the shower, my mobile rang and THANK GOD THAT WE HAVE CALLER ID IN THAILAND because I saw HER number flashing on my screen.

Knowing that I would be flirting with danger if I answered her calls while my missus was here, I decided to not answer her call and just switched my phone to silent mode….

I left my mobile in my pants and laid back to relax while watching ESPN on TV….

[sg_boytoy]

This is more like it , I hope we are en route to the grand finale...

[Harrier24B]

We had a sumptuous dinner comprising of seafood and meats washed down with beer at the restaurant and caught up on old times with my cousin, who has been based in BKK for the last 3 years.

During dinner, my phone lit up and seeing that it was a call from Thailand, I picked up and answered “Sawasdee Krup” “ Hello? Harrier, It’s Chris. You are in BKK already? You joining us for drinks later?”

“ER…hi…I dunno leh…..where you heading to?” I asked hesitantly.

“We actually do not have a clue BUT we do not really mind just getting some drinks and catching up, either in your room or ours. Where you staying btw?”

I was kicking myself for having this kind of luck where I had to bump into my missus here as most people would know the outcome of drinks in a hotel room between 1 guy and 2 hot chicks……..

“Tell you what, I’ll call you back ok? I’m in the middle of dinner now…..”

“Ok then, FYI…. I brought some nice lingerie to wear when we have drinks later…..”She teased.

After dinner, feeling rather lethargic from the full meal, we decided to retire for the night as I had an early morning meeting the next day.

When we got back to the room, my missus being exhausted from her flight immediately changed to her PJ’s while I switched on my notebook to run through my work to ensure that all was in order for tomorrow’s meeting.

After some half an hour, fully satisfied with all the reports. I switched off my notebook and was surprised that my missus had fallen asleep……

My BIG head immediately started a mental tug-of-war with my small head on whether to risk going over to the 2 MILF’S hotel room, which was conveniently located nearby.

Eventually, my small head won and since I didn’t change earlier, I took my key card and went out of my room quietly and once clear, made a call to the ladies to inform them that I was going over…..

[10 cc]

Originally Posted by Harrier24B

Eventually, my small head won and since I didn’t change earlier, I took my key card and went out of my room quietly and once clear, made a call to the ladies to inform them that I was going over…..

bro, given the circumstances, i would have done the same as you. mistake #1 man...

[siambee]

can't agreed more, i will be in the same shoe like u also.

[Harrier24B]

Originally Posted by 10 cc

bro, given the circumstances, i would have done the same as you. mistake #1 man...

Hahaha...given that situation...I seriously DOUBT that any sane and potent man would be able to resist the temptation.....