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Re: My attempt at writing fiction...
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I'm slightly busy with mainstream writing at the moment...
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Re: My attempt at writing fiction...
Haha and I'm starting to wonder when my story will ever end.
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Re: My attempt at writing fiction...
Good stories never end.
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Re: My attempt at writing fiction...
For the first time in his life, James actually did not feel like having sex.
In fact, ever since the last encounter with Celine when he experienced his first anal sex, he somehow lost all his urges. Even now, one week later, as Celine was riding him after his tuition session, he felt indifferent. Celine grunted as she rode herself to orgasm. Dismounting, she removed the condom. C: What's wrong James? J: I don't know Jie, it's my girlfriend. Celine got a shock. C: You have a girlfriend and you're still sleeping with me??? J: Is that wrong Jie? C: Well... J: You seem to want my cock regardless. Celine tried to put on an angry face. But she failed. C: It's complicated. J: Your boyfriend not satisfying you? C: He isn't. J: So what's wrong with this? C: You have a girlfriend... J: So? I still fuck my maid... C: Don't you feel bad? J: Should I? Do you feel bad when my cock is in you? When you're screaming my name? C: Hey!!! That's not nice. J: But it's true isn't it? C: Let's not talk about this. Just tell me what's wrong? J: I told her I love her... C: Wow. My boyfriend never said that to me before... J: She didn't reply. I got upset. C: How do you know it's love? J: I don't. It just feels different. Sex aside, I feel different when I'm with her. C: You probably don't know what love is. J: Jie, I really feel different. With you and Kakak, when we have sex, the feelings are very physical... C: You mean like lust? J: I think so. C: Well, do you constantly think about her when she's not around? Do you wonder if she's ok? Does your heart ache when she doesn't message or reply? J: Not really... C: Then it might not be love... J: How do you know? C: Because I feel that way about my boyfriend. J: You do? C: Yes. J: And yet barely five minutes ago you were closing your eyes and telling me how good you felt. She slapped his shoulder. C: Idiot. It's the sex I enjoy with you. You're my fuck buddy. Unless you're saying you developed feelings for me? J: Not really. All I wanna do is pleasure you. That's all. C: That's sweet. And your own pleasure? J: Not important. I just enjoy it when you're moaning and asking for more... C: James, that's very dangerous. You're like a sex fiend. Only wanting physical pleasure. J: That's why I said it feels different with my girlfriend... C: Well, I don't think you're in love. Maybe you're getting there... but not there yet. J: Will I ever know what love is one day? C: Only you can answer that question. You'll know when you meet the right one. J: I see. Then how do you know if you meet the right one? C: You'll know... J: Ok. Celine started to clean up and get dressed. J: Jie? C: Yes? J: Thanks. C: You're welcome. James hugged her, feeling her soft breasts on him. His monster was stirring. She stroked it. C: You want to continue? J: Yes please. C: Well, you got to make me wet. She lay on the mattress and checked. She had indeed dried up. Probably from the serious matter that they were just discussing. No matter, he would encounter little difficulty anyway. He lay down between her legs and went to work on her. Sure enough, her juices started flowing readily and she was already grabbing his hair, trying to pull him towards her. He capped himself and entered. Celine's moans soon echoed through the room. Outside, Liana was feeling a tinge of jealousy. Why did James have to sleep with her when she was readily available every single day? And yet hearing Celine being pleasured by James was igniting the fire in her loins. She started rubbing herself and found that she too was wet from the thought of him fucking someone else. She wanted him badly too.
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Re: My attempt at writing fiction...
Liana tried to turn the door knob. It was locked. She could not take it any longer.
She headed to the master bedroom where the keys were kept. She found the key to James room and quickly unlocked the door. James was pounding Celine from behind. Liana removed her t-shirt and shorts and hugged him from behind, pressing her soft breasts against his back. The surprise she gave him made him grab Celine's ass harder. She moaned. J: Kakak, I'm busy... L: I want also. Now James had never been in a threesome before. He had no idea what to do. Celine wondered what the fuss was about. C: Hey... don't disturb us... L: Sorry Mam, I horny. I want James. Celine, at one point of time, had experimented with girls. She wondered if she should do the same now. Besides, she was enjoying James big cock pounding her from behind, and there was no way she would be willing to give him up now. C: Come here and lie down. Liana was confused. What did James tuition teacher want? But at the same time, she was curious and extremely horny. Liana lay down in front of Celine. Celine spread her legs, half expecting a hairy bush, but was pleasantly surprised to see a neatly shaven pussy. C: You shave? Liana was slightly embarrassed. L: James like. James wanted to say something but held his tongue, preferring instead to see his first lesbian act performed live. Celine gently stroked her labia, before moving her head forward. Liana smelt good, as though she had just showered. Celine caught a whiff of feminine wash, Lactacyd to be precise. She ran her tongue down the sides of Liana's pussy. Liana let out a soft moan. Why was she feeling so good? James licked her the same way, but somehow, Celine was sending more shivers down her spine. Celine flicked at the clitoral hood with her tongue, making Liana moan out loud. James was getting pretty turned on by the entire scene. He thrusted harder. It became a somewhat peculiar chain reaction. The harder he banged Celine, the more furiously she ate Liana out, and of course, the louder Liana moaned. James could feel Celine's vaginal muscles tighten around his cock. He struggled to maintain his composure. Celine inserted a finger, then two, into Liana's juicy pussy. She too could feel her vaginal muscles contracting. James pulled out, removed the condom and started stroking himself. He felt the familiar built up in his balls and went straight for Celine's mouth. Pulling her up, he shoved his cock in. Despite her initial shock, Celine reciprocated and sucked him. Within seconds, James released his load into her mouth. Celine swallowed and licked her lips as she continued wanking him to keep him hard. James started rubbing Liana's clit, causing her to moan again. Liana got up and took him into her mouth. She was still less experienced that Celine in the art of fellatio, but she was skilled enough to get James hard. He turned to go to his table to get another condom, but Liana stopped him, pulling him towards her, and guiding his dickhead in. James initially did not want to do her raw anymore, for fear more of unwanted pregnancy rather than disease. However, his mindset changed the minute her warm and wet hole engulfed his throbbing dick. Liana felt different today, her boobs looked bigger and she was definitely wetter than usual. Perhaps Celine had turned her on so well? Liana moaned incessantly as James thrust into her. Celine lay beside her and massaged her boobs, giving her nipples occasional flicks with her tongue. Liana automatically started rubbing her clit. Despite having just released a little while ago, James felt the urge again. He tried to pull out. L: Don't stop! Liana wrappped her legs around his back, forcing him deeper. James let out his usual groan as he deposited another round of cream into Liana. She gasped as the warm slunk coated her insides, but she still refused to let him go. Celine smiled knowingly as sometimes, she too enjoyed the feeling of her man's (in this case, boy) seed filling her up. Little did they all know, their fun was about to end.
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Waseh..
Liana is in her fertile period!! Oh myyy.... |
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Re: My attempt at writing fiction...
Orh... Naughty James
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James pulled out of Liana. His seed seeped out. Liana tried to catch her breath.
He was still young, but somehow, his refresh rate was amazing. If there was a contest for the most amount of ejaculate in a specific time frame, he would probably get a podium finish. He was wiping himself with wet tissues when he heard the familiar sound of a car pulling into the driveway. J: Shit. His father was home early today. Liana scrambled off his mattress and hurried wiped herself and got dressed. She had to appear as though every thing was normal. Celine too got dressed. They all heard the automatic gate opening and the Volvo drive into the driveway. Liana rushed down and to open the door. James quickly passed Celine the money for today's session and they both headed downstairs too. James dad was walking through the door when they came down. L: Evening sir, would you like dinner? JD: No. Go do your chores. L: Yes sir. Liana disappeared to the kitchen. C: Hello uncle. JD: Celine! It's been a long time! How's your father? C: He's doing well. Celine's dad used to work for Mr. Tan before he fell ill and had to stop working. JD: That's good. Do let him know he's welcome back anytime. C: Yes uncle. JD: I hope James hasn't been giving you any trouble? Celine felt herself blush a little. C: No uncle. He's a very good student. His maths is very good. JD: That's good. James have you paid her for this month? J: Yes dad. Not as though the money comes from you anyway, he thought to himself. C: Well uncle, I'll be going now. JD: Do you need a lift? C: Oh its fine, I've got a direct bus home. JD: Ok then. Let me know if James gives you any trouble. C: He's a very good boy. A hard worker. He won't. Bye uncle. Bye James. J: Bye Jie. James dad watched as Celine walked through the door, her skirt swishing around her ass as she walked. His eyes travelled down her slim yet toned legs. She was indeed getting very attractive. It was too bad she did not have huge knockers like his ex-wife, or his current secretary Laura. He was a boob man. He tried to banish any impure thoughts he had about his ex-employee's daughter. After all, he was old enough to be her father. But he was a man after all. One who busied himself with his work even though it caused his marriage to break down. He tried to recall the last time he had sex. He could not. Yes, it had been that long. He did not understand why he was lusting after her. Perhaps it was the pheremones released during and after sex that affected him subconsciously. He turned to James. JD: You better do well for your exams. I don't want you chasing girls at your age. J: Yes dad. If only he knew the truth. That James was already sexually active. That the amount of sex he was having in the past few months probably outnumbered the total number of times he did in his life. James dad retreated to the bar counter and pulled out a cognac glass and his XO. He usually did not drink on weeknights unless he was entertaining clients. He poured himself half a glass and let it settle before downing it at one go. Thank god for briefs, he thought. It would have been embarrassing if anyone knew he had gotten a hardon just by looking at Celine. He adjusted himself behind the bar counter. His 10-inch trouser snake was struggling to rear its ugly head. He needed to get laid.
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Re: My attempt at writing fiction...
Oh yea! His dad is on 'heat'.
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woahh..
james dad have 10 incher.. nice.. nice.. lol |
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Re: My attempt at writing fiction...
James went back to his room and took a shower.
After showering, he lay on the mattress and tried to sleep. However, the scent of both Celine and Liana lingered. He was getting horny again. His thoughts flitted to Denise. Did she love him the way he loved her? But then again, he was not sure if it was love after all. Perhaps he was just a sex addict. But that still did not explain the ache in his heart whenever he thought of her. He decided to drop her a text. J: Hey. I cant sleep. You awake? There was no reply. He assumed she was already asleep despite it being barely past 9pm. He too tried to sleep, but could not. Instead, he spent the next two hours tossing and turning, his dick inflating and deflating almost at will. At around 11, he went downstairs to get a drink. As he passed by Liana's room, he realised that the lights were still on. He immediately recalled the way she grabbed him towards her when he was about to cum. His monster stirred. He knocked on the door. J: Kakak? There was no response. He opened it and got the shock of his life. Liana was lying face down on the bed, a pillow propped under her hips. She was naked, and breathing heavily. James father was by the side, hurriedly pulling on his shorts. James caught sight of the abomination. He gasped. He never thought that he was big, but now he felt small compared to his father. Liana looked at him and smiled weakly. James spotted semen oozing out of her pussy. JD: What do you want? J: Dad... I... JD: You did not see this... or else. J: Yes dad... James father pushed past him as he left the room, giving him a cold stare. Liana wiped herself, and quickly got dressed. L: Yes James? J: Kakak, I'm hungry. Can you cook something? L: Ok James. She went to the kitchen and took out the Indomee mee goreng and started to boil the water. James sat at the table. J: Kakak? L: Yes James? J: Do you sleep with my father often? L: No James. Today first time. J: Oh. L: I prefer you. He rough. And big. J: Don't tell him I sleep with you ok? L: Yes James. Our secret. Liana finished cooking and returned to her room. James ate and contemplated his next move. So now his own father was a rival in his sex life. And he possessed a much more powerful weapon. But he was comforted by the fact that Liana preferred him over his father. He finished his supper and washed the plate. He crept upstairs and checked if his father was asleep, before sneaking back downstairs to Liana's room. She was about to take a shower. He stripped and followed her in. Inside, they washed each other and kissed. She stroked him to full hardness before leaning against the wall. He plunged in. Perhaps it was the thrill of getting caught by his father, or maybe it was the need to prove his dominance, but he came rather quickly this time around, spewing his seed deep into her again. Liana smiled to herself as they washed each other again. Never had she thought that this would be her life when she started working for his family. The pay was good, much better than any of her peers. Plus the extras she received from James helped supplement the money she sent back home every month. But Liana was still inexperienced in sex and contraception. In fact, she was clueless. For at that very moment, a battle for supremacy was taking place inside her. Two armies of sperm were fighting for control deep inside her body. And unknown to her, her eggs were eagerly anticipating the victors arrival.
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Re: My attempt at writing fiction...
My money is on the dad..Lols....
Then James must contend with a new step brother or sister.. and mother... Sniff sniff...incest down the road in 15 years time?? |
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Re: My attempt at writing fiction...
Hahahaha wah 15 years time... You're very optimistic leh haha.
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Re: My attempt at writing fiction...
U mean u want him to attack his half sister when she is like 10? 12? Omg..
Kidding..well, I'm not the author of this story so.... Btw, Where is our TS? I got same question as James leh...how do u know if u meet the right one? Can enlighten??? Last edited by kittymae; 29-12-2012 at 12:56 AM. Reason: Typo |
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Re: My attempt at writing fiction...
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Hahahaha wah as if he knows when he meet the right one. See his fiction thread you'll know le lor. He obviously doesn't have a clue.
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