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09-10-2012, 09:26 PM
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Thank you bros for your encouragement. You guys make my day.
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09-10-2012, 09:33 PM
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TS u write damn well. I loved reading your stories! They are not sex stories, they are romance stories! So romantic
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09-10-2012, 11:58 PM
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encore! encore..
tell your wife she's a lucky lady to be married to an excellent wordsmith.. seriously bro, if you decide to take up writing, I'll be there to support you by buying your books. Me and my girl will be there to line up and get your autograph!
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10-10-2012, 12:46 AM
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NOOOOOO!!!!!! I shouted as I woke up with sweat all over my head.
My gf was shocked by me. GF: You ok hubs? Me: Had a nightmare dear. I dreamt of the accident. She went to me and hugged me. GF: You think too much hubs. Everything is going to be ok. She kissed me on my cheeks and we slept. The next morning she woke up early to prepare breakfast. Though she wasn't really the one to cook, the sheer effort makes my day. GF: Omelette, your fav hubs. I was surprised by that and kissed her as we sat down. Me: Do you remember that you yelled at me before for not buying coffee? She slapped my thigh and blushed. GF: so petty. you still remember that. We giggled. Me: So where are we going later? GF: Where else? Visit DG. You know where she stays right. I've thought of a good plan Max. And you will like it too. Me: ...???? What? GF: Secret. It was quite unusual for my gf to keep secrets from me. Took my gf to DG's house. Yes, she's another rich kid. Yea yea. Everyone is except me. GF: Wow. Her house is big too! Pressed her doorbell when her maid came out. Maid: Yes? You look familiar... Max? I nodded. Maid: ok wait wait I get missy. DG was surprised to see me and my gf. DG: Yes? Didn't I promise you already? Why are you here? GF: I've decided. DG: What? Me: What dear? GF: It's going to be a real prob. So I'm agreeing to Max having another girlfriend. Until you find a good boy DG. Until you find a good one. DG eyes shone with excitement. DG: Really? really? GF: Of course its not forever. When I want Max to return I will not hesitate to do so. DG: Yes yes! I agree I agree! Tears of happiness ran down her cheeks. Me: Oooi! What am I to you dear? GF/DG: Who are you calling dear? Me: ..... arrghhh! Both my GF/DG clamped my arms and walked... Yes. And that marked the tiring threesomes in history. Super shag-out Max and little max spitting off. Did DG ever find her true love? Well it's kinda hard to say and describe. We are still having the threesome. No choice. My gf and her are closer than siblings. If one day I were to marry, I wonder how. __________________________________________________ Spitting Tales. Adventures of Little Max. http://thesbf.shop/showthread.php?t=317499 Enough is enough. The 3 years of hell. http://thesbf.shop/showthread.php?t=314480 Steamy Windows. Aromatically erotic. http://thesbf.shop/showthread.php?t=313807 Days with Jean. Sequel to What are words. The story of Jean. http://thesbf.shop/showthread.php?t=313013 What are words. Love hurts. Sacrifices only for the sake of love. http://thesbf.shop/showthread.php?t=310476 The Floral Top. An unexpected sexual awakening. http://thesbf.shop/showthread.php?t=302329
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10-10-2012, 04:17 AM
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10-10-2012, 04:37 AM
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Son of a bitch! this is by far one of the best stories ever! n its not even rated a single star??! ...
well done TS. great plot, fantastic story line, not too draggy and perfect ending. A master at its best. thanks TS for sharing n appreciate all the effort.
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10-10-2012, 06:17 AM
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10-10-2012, 07:34 AM
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Coffeecan, superb writting, with twist & turns; and a happy ending. Can't wait for new threads from you.
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10-10-2012, 04:37 PM
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Thank you guys for all the support.
Am thinking of writing the next one. It will be most probably something quite long liao ba. But still organizing my thoughts. It's most probably going to be a work of fiction. Something about a long awaited love. Till then. Cheers!
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11-10-2012, 12:34 AM
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Nice!!!! Ha.. Better then 50 shades too dreamy le ha
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11-10-2012, 09:34 AM
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Great story bro, thanks for sharing, cheers, .....................
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11-10-2012, 04:51 PM
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Superb... Nice to see stories like this... Stories nowadays all about sex sex and sex, but this stories has the right amount of sex with a hint of romance. Well written! Cant wait for your next story. Can I also congratulate you on your phenomenon usage and command of english. Well done.
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