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Old 18-11-2012, 03:11 AM
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Re: My attempt at writing fiction...

Camper reporting. Nice to know you started another thread as you are good at writing.
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Old 18-11-2012, 10:49 AM
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Re: My attempt at writing fiction...

Celine could not take it anymore.

C: James. Stop.

J: But why?

He looked bewildered. Were the soft moans that escaped from her lips, punctuated with the ocassional shudder and grabbing of his hair, along with the constant "Oh, James!" an indication that he was doing things right? Why then would she ask him to stop? She sounded a little like the Japanese girls in the videos he had seen his friends watch. Furthernore, her juices were flowing like a waterfall, he definitely had to change the sheets. Or maybe it was just his saliva.

C: James, you're killing me...

J: But Jie...

C: Shhhh.... Lie down.

James did as he was told.

Celine got on top of him and positioned herself directly on top of his rock-hard cock.

C: Now listen carefully. I don't have condoms, and I'm not on the pill. But I want you inside me so badly...

J: Ok Jie.

C: When you feel like cumming, tell me, so I can get off.

J: Yes Jie.

Celine rubbed his dickhead around her labia. James shuddered. While he was leaking pre-cum, Celine was also extremely wet. She was never this wet before. Not with her boyfriend, or even the random flings who picked her up at Zouk before she was attached.

She inserted the tip slowly and carefully. She was not a virgin, but James had a huge member for someone his age, and it was as hard as a steel rod. One wrong move and she could be ripped apart, permanently.

Inch by inch, James watched as his cock disappeared into the warm, wet hole that was Celine's pussy. The sensations felt unreal to him, and so much better than when she stroked him and sucked him. His wildest dreams were coming true. Never in his life had he ever imagined that he would be having sex now, and with his tuition teacher at that. All his so-called friends could only brag about how they fingered their girlfriends, or forced them into oral sex. James was going all the way, and it was consensual. Truthfully, he was already very satisfied to be touching and hugging her. He would ensure that she would be well compensated.

Celine gritted her teeth slightly and let out a moan as he hit her cervix. And he was not even halfway there. He was so thick that she could feel the ridges and veins of his cock on her vaginal walls. It felt good. So much better than when her boyfriend tried using a ribbed condom to enhance her pleasure. She lost count of how many orgasms she had faked to give him the impression that they had cum together, and that he was a stud of a man in making her feel that way. With the virgin James, she was more than certain that she was going to cum for real, and it was going to happen soon.

She rode him slowly, controlling the pace and depth of penetration. She thought she was going to explode but managed to keep a relatively straight face, other than the bitten lower lip, dry mouth from the non-stop moaning, and the fact that she was soon going to run out of breath.

J: Ahhhh.... Jie... It feels so good.... You're so tight...

C: Uh, oohhhh, ahhh, James! Ahhh! God!!!

Celine's lower body spasmed involuntarily and she collapsed onto James, catching her breath. She slid him out and rolled onto her back and spread her legs.

C: Fuck me James.

J: Yes Jie. I will make you cum.

C: Slowly...

James got between her legs and inserted slowly. Celine thought she was going to die from the pleasure. Her pussy had expanded slightly to accomodate his length and girth. He thrust in and out slowly.

C: Ohhh James.... Fuck me harder....

His strokes became more deliberate and fast. He felt himself hitting something at the end even though he was not fully inside. His short stature allowed him to lean forward and attack her boobs at the same time. Celine grabbed his ass and guided each stroke.

C: Don't stop! I'm gonna cum!!!

He continued humping away, controlling himself as he promised not to cum inside.

Celine dug her nails into his back as she shuddered violently, having achieved the strongest ever orgasm in her entire life. With it she let out a scream.

James was spurred on by this and continued thrusting, intending to bring her to pleasure heaven.

Suddenly his bedroom door swung open and his maid entered.

Maid: James! What's - Oh my God!

J: Kakak! I-

And he lost concentration, releasing a full stream of semen into Celine. He tried to pull out, but another stream escaped.

Celine felt the warm, sticky man-juice hitting her cervix.

C: SHIT! TAKE IT OUT!

James pulled out but he was still ejaculating, shooting another three streams onto Celine.

Maid: James! What you think you doing?

She rushed over and pulled him up as Celine ran to the toilet, her hand covering her pussy, trying not to leak on his floor.

His maid stared in amazement at his engorged prick.

Maid: James! You very naughty boy!
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Old 21-11-2012, 05:10 AM
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Re: My attempt at writing fiction...

Making my rounds on updates fr my fav writers...
Ur turn now..Updates pls!!! Or are u hvg too much of the other kind of fun...??
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Old 22-11-2012, 10:51 AM
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Re: My attempt at writing fiction...

Celine squatted down and turn on the shower at full-blast, trying to wash out James sperm from her pussy.

C: Shit. Shit. Shit. Shit.

It was definitely not the safe period. She could not afford to get pregnant. Not now. Not when she had so many things to do. She definitely did not want to sacrifice her studies for a baby. She was half sure that she would not be so unlucky. Was it even possible to get knocked up from just one time? After all, her boyfriend had sometimes ejaculated too quickly, and sometimes the condom broke. And she always managed to scrape through. But some part of her was actually happy. She had never had such great sex before, and would give anything for James to fuck her again. Over and over. As many times as she wanted.

The maid opened the door and passed her a towel.

C: Thanks.

Celine wiped herself dry and wrapped herself with it before stepping out.

James was crying again.

J: Jie! I'm so sorry!

C: Shhh... It's ok.

She hugged him and he nuzzled her breasts again. His maid looked on disapprovingly.

Maid: James! Go wash!

James reluctantly pulled himself away from his source of comfort.

Celine got dressed and packed her stuff. James went to his drawer and took out an evelope, passing it to Celine. She put it into her bag without opening it. His maid saw her out.

James sat on the toilet bowl. He did not expect his first time to be this traumatic.

Maid: James! You ok?

J: Yes Kakak.

Maid: I'm coming in.

His maid entered the bathroom. James was still sitting on the toilet bowl.

Maid: James. I understand you have needs. But she's your teacher!

J: Kakak. I'm sorry. I don't know why I did that.

Maid: Don't say sorry to me. Tell your father.

J: Don't tell him! He'll kill me!

Maid: I have to tell him. Otherwise you'll keep getting into trouble.

J: Please Kakak! Don't tell him!

James started crying again.

J: I'll do anything!

Maid: Anything?

J: Anything.
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Old 22-11-2012, 04:08 PM
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Re: My attempt at writing fiction...

oh my..
the maid rape himmm..
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Old 22-11-2012, 09:19 PM
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Re: My attempt at writing fiction...

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oh my..
the maid rape himmm..
And maybe start an extortion scheme- in cash & kind both to pay for her silence...
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Old 22-11-2012, 10:53 PM
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And maybe start an extortion scheme- in cash & kind both to pay for her silence...
here.. here..
let me be the kakak.. lol..
james, help kakak open clothes please..
then massage my boobs..
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Old 22-11-2012, 11:32 PM
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here.. here..
let me be the kakak.. lol..
james, help kakak open clothes please..
then massage my boobs..
Someone's horny...
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Old 22-11-2012, 11:55 PM
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Someone's horny...

Are u gonna help solve her problem? Lols
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Old 23-11-2012, 08:04 AM
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Are u gonna help solve her problem? Lols
Errrrr. I don't possess the innocence of James... nor his 8-incher...
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Someone's horny...
Err..
Like this nia and u think I'm horny?

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Are u gonna help solve her problem? Lols
Need him to help me solve meh?

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Errrrr. I don't possess the innocence of James... nor his 8-incher...
Lol.. I dun need James innocence and also his 8 incher. I got shallow pussy..
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Lol.. I dun need James innocence and also his 8 incher. I got shallow pussy..

Maybe he has Ray's 10 inch =P
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Maybe he has Ray's 10 inch =P
If I had Ray's 10 incher or FML's soon to be 12 incher... I'll be destroying a lot of ladies....
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Maybe he has Ray's 10 inch =P
lol~

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If I had Ray's 10 incher or FML's soon to be 12 incher... I'll be destroying a lot of ladies....
erm.. i think its not destroying la..
but u cant shove it all in..
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lol~


erm.. i think its not destroying la..
but u cant shove it all in..
Force it in lor... haha...
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