My attempt at writing fiction... - Page 17

kittymae · #**241** 29-12-2012, 12:57 AM

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Originally Posted by BMW69

Hahaha ehhhh how about not at all LOL. Incest eh

Hahahaha wah as if he knows when he meet the right one. See his fiction thread you'll know le lor. He obviously doesn't have a clue.

Wah.....
Give him a chance to defend himself...
He No update his non-fiction thread...so can't tell for sure..
Maybe now we gotta take lesson from him!

BMW69 · #**242** 29-12-2012, 01:49 AM

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Originally Posted by kittymae

Wah.....
Give him a chance to defend himself...
He No update his non-fiction thread...so can't tell for sure..
Maybe now we gotta take lesson from him!

Hahahaha wah so optimistic eh? We shall see ba. EoS! Better come out of your blanket and reply leh. Kitty already put in a good word for you. Let's see if you can deliver

EnigmaofSorrow · #**243** 30-12-2012, 10:37 AM

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Originally Posted by kittymae

U mean u want him to attack his half sister when she is like 10? 12? Omg..

Kidding..well, I'm not the author of this story so....

Btw, Where is our TS? I got same question as James leh...how do u know if u meet the right one? Can enlighten???

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Originally Posted by BMW69

Hahaha ehhhh how about not at all LOL. Incest eh

Hahahaha wah as if he knows when he meet the right one. See his fiction thread you'll know le lor. He obviously doesn't have a clue.

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Originally Posted by kittymae

Wah.....
Give him a chance to defend himself...
He No update his non-fiction thread...so can't tell for sure..
Maybe now we gotta take lesson from him!

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Originally Posted by BMW69

Hahahaha wah so optimistic eh? We shall see ba. EoS! Better come out of your blanket and reply leh. Kitty already put in a good word for you. Let's see if you can deliver

Seriously?

How to tell?

If I knew I would be the love/sex guru.

I suppose when you are with him/her, it just feels right.

You can talk about anything, have intellectual conversations, appreciate the same things...

Stuff like that I suppose?

So what do the two of you think?

BMW69 · #**244** 30-12-2012, 10:52 AM

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Originally Posted by EnigmaofSorrow

So what do the two of you think?

I think, it's time for an update. ^^

kittymae · #**245** 31-12-2012, 01:30 AM

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Originally Posted by EnigmaofSorrow

Seriously?

How to tell?

If I knew I would be the love/sex guru.

I suppose when you are with him/her, it just feels right.

You can talk about anything, have intellectual conversations, appreciate the same things...

Stuff like that I suppose?

So what do the two of you think?

U sound like ure speaking from ur life experiences!

IMO, Even more, with the right one, I guess u'll never feel the need to be more than who u already are.
Contentment.

And yes, an update is due...

limesmile · #**246** 31-12-2012, 04:38 AM

yup awaiting an update

EnigmaofSorrow · #**247** 31-12-2012, 08:54 AM

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Originally Posted by BMW69

I think, it's time for an update. ^^

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Originally Posted by kittymae

U sound like ure speaking from ur life experiences!

IMO, Even more, with the right one, I guess u'll never feel the need to be more than who u already are.
Contentment.

And yes, an update is due...

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Originally Posted by limesmile

yup awaiting an update

I'm on a 24 hour shift protecting the nation while it parties 2012 away... if there's time I'll update...

BMW69 · #**248** 31-12-2012, 11:57 AM

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Originally Posted by EnigmaofSorrow

I'm on a 24 hour shift protecting the nation while it parties 2012 away... if there's time I'll update...

Salute you bro! Nation comes first, family second, updates third

EnigmaofSorrow · #**249** 31-12-2012, 01:36 PM

The relationship between Denise and James eventually degenerated into a purely physical one.

James felt that her refusal or reluctance to affirm her feelings for him indicated that it was not love as he thought.

In any case, they both enjoyed sex with each other. And James was still sleeping with both Celine and Liana.

After the last session with Liana though, she became pregnant. James father, consumed by guilt assuming that he had impregnated her, paid for her abortion and gave her a five-figure sum for her silence.

Liana continued to work for them, and carried on her trysts with James after she recovered from the D&C. To her, he was a nice size. She would have continued sleeping with his father, as obviously, his tool was bigger, and could hit all the right spots. But obviously, he was so traumatised by the incident that he hardly spoke to her. Liana, strangely, was seemingly unaffected by the abortion. In fact, she wanted more sex from James. Perhaps deep inside her, she wanted to get pregnant again so that she would receive another big pay-off for her silence.

James was smarter this time, and persuaded Liana to take the contraceptive pills that Celine had helped to purchase from Malaysia. She reluctantly took it, but secretly skipped doses after finding out from her friend how the pills worked. Unfortunately for her, and fortunately for James, she did not get pregnant despite the gallons of semen that he had deposited into her over the course of a year.

James and Celine too were still going strong in their "relationship". As it was nearing his O levels, the frequency of his weekly tuition sessions was increased to thrice weekly, and obviously, so did the sex. Celine obviously did not mind, and even told James that he did not have to pay her anymore. But being the nice guy that he was, he doubled her tuition fees, on top of the triple he was paying her for the increased frequency. She was probably the best paid private tutor in the country. Celine, however, had other reasons for continuing to sleep with James. Other than being addicted to his cock, she had also broken up with her boyfriend when he enlisted for National Service. James then became her convenient substitute. At least she did not have to worry about being a good girlfriend to him.

James dad, despite the pregnancy issue with his maid, was still extremely horny after seeing the grown-up Celine. Unfortunately, due to his busy schedule, he hardly found the time to get out and have fun. This led to him starting an inappropriate relationship with his personal assistant, Dawn.

Dawn was young, a fresh poly grad who was looking for an easy job. James dad was paying way above the starting salary for a fresh graduate so she jumped at the opportunity.

She was fair, petite, but had a rack that was the envy of the entire office. 36Ds on a 1.5m frame. That was also the reason why James dad chose her. He found himself attracted to women with enviable bosoms. That was the exact reason why he fell for James mom. However, he could not explain why Celine, whose bust size was nowhere near more than a handful, managed to reignited the fire burning in his loins.

Dawn knew her strengths, and played to them. She wore tight fitting low cut tops, giving her boss and male colleagues more than an eyeful. Obviously, the female staff were not very pleased, especially the older ones. They passed remarks about her. But she did not care.

The money was good, and the job was simple, what was there not to like? Besides her boss treated her very well.

In any case, she was comfortable in the job, was single and carefree, and did not mind using her body to get ahead.

Over time, she started dressing even sexier, wearing miniskirts with killer heels. She would drop papers on purpose and bend over to retrieve them, giving him a teasing view of what lay beneath her skirt, sometimes unprotected by undergarments. She would also get very close to him while updating him on his schedule, her ample cleavage inches from his face.

Mr. Tan always struggled to conceal his erection, but secretly enjoyed the attention.

He decided to something about it.

EnigmaofSorrow · #**250** 08-01-2013, 02:50 AM

Apologies to anyone who was anticipating an update.

I have decided to take an extended break from writing due to personal reasons.

Perhaps it's an unexpected writers' block.

Belated happy new year to all my readers...

Coffeecans · #**251** 08-01-2013, 08:40 AM

Will be drinking a lot of kopi and waiting for your updates.

BMW69 · #**252** 08-01-2013, 04:57 PM

Personal reasons too? Doesn't matter if you write again but I ope that everything ends well. I really do.

kittymae · #**253** 08-01-2013, 09:39 PM

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Originally Posted by BMW69

Personal reasons too? Doesn't matter if you write again but I ope that everything ends well. I really do.

Maybe busy with CCAs!!

BMW69 · #**254** 08-01-2013, 11:29 PM

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Originally Posted by kittymae

Maybe busy with CCAs!!

Hehehe he had better be xD awaiting updates to his non-fiction thread.

Psst psst hint hint EoS ^^

kittymae · #**255** 08-01-2013, 11:31 PM

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Originally Posted by BMW69

Hehehe he had better be xD awaiting updates to his non-fiction thread.

Psst psst hint hint EoS ^^

Hmm..somehow. I tink he really meant it when he wrote "the end"
It'll take a lot for him to ever revive that thread...
Quite a pity given the views are like 960k plus!?!?!?