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Hahaha yes. Jenny is my personal favourite too she has so many issues but they're always there for each other. So sweet...
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^5! Indeed...ure my ah-di! We hv same thoughts....more like...she accepts him for who he is..not an illusion she hope he becomes...
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Hahahaha and as usual EoS disappears when it's time for him to comment hahaha.
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Which I should too... Recd my 'instructions' an hr ago.. Oops. Reminds me....u got nominated by him at the polls... Abit too late tho...haha...time warp |
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Hahaha oh thanks EoS for nominating me. It's the thought that counts. My thread doesn't have a star, not sure if it's worth nominating. Voted for both you and kitty though
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Actually there are loads of good writers here. We should all just find a wealthy backer and self-publish...
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After the movie and a light meal, James and Denise headed home on the same bus service. Sadly, being late afternoon, the bus was packed and there would be no repeat of the earlier hijinks of the morning.
Denise was eagerly anticipating a proper popping of her cherry. James really felt different when he was with her. It was something he could not explain. Was it really love? With Celine, he knew more or less that all she wanted was his cock, and perhaps, his money. He was merely a tool for her to get the satisfaction that her boyfriend could not give. With Liana, he was the one fulfilling his sexual needs conveniently, considering she was always available. But neither of them gave him that feeling that he felt for Denise. He really wondered what it was. For Denise, James was not an option for her before. She only found him cute and nice, a little on the short side. Her dream guy had always been tall, dark and handsome, and would sweep her off her feet. However, having discovered the deadly weapon that James possessed, and the way he treated her, she decided that maybe she should not be greedy and just take whatever life gave her, short or not. Besides, his monstrous tool gave her immense pleasure that her fingers and bolster could not give, and she was maturing sexually. She did not believe that she would fall in love with him at this age. This, at most, was puppy love, and a convenient excuse to experience sex. They walked hand-in-hand to her flat. J: No ones home? D: Bro in camp, parents working. J: I don't have any protection. D: Its the safe period. James tried to recall what Celine had explained to him. J: Erm. You sure you want to do this? D: Yes. It felt so good just now. I want more. I want to cum. And I want you to cum... James was extremely turned on by her words. He felt a stirring down below. She unlocked the door. They started frenching like long-lost lovers the minute she shut and locked the door. They disrobed automatically, throwing their clothes and undergarments all over the living room floor. Soon enough, James was sitting on the couch with Denise kneeling between his legs. For someone who had just been introduced to sex, she seemed to be addicted to it, and especially enjoyed sucking him. Perhaps it was the power she felt she yielded over him when he was in her mouth. Ever suppressed moan, every squirm, every display of pleasure from him made her wet. She was thinking about how lucky she was to have such a huge dick as her first. She had thought her brother was huge when she caught him masturbating in the toilet. Now she kind of felt sorry for him, and assumed that the only reason, other than being horny, for her brother to be engaging in self-pleasure was because he could not find a girl to satisfy. She, on the other hand, despite only being penetrated by James once, was totally satisfied, especially with the way he used his tongue and fingers on her. Not once had she wondered where he learnt his skills from, and never thought to ask. James, strangely did not really want to sleep with her. He already had a constant supply of pussy. Yes, he craved intimacy, but above that, all he really wanted was for someone to love him too, to accept him the way he was. He was slightly afraid that all Denise wanted was his cock. And when she was done, she would just drop him and move on. His worries were forgotten the second she lowered herself onto him, her tight vaginal muscles gripping his pole as she rocked back and forth, rubbing her clit on him. Her soft moans indicated how good she was feeling. He wanted to take her from behind and pound her hard, to exert his dominance on her. To show her who was in control. But that was on the assumption he could control himself. Even though Liana was a virgin as well, Denise was way tighter. And the way she worked his dick just made him want to fill her up with his seed. He tried to think of boring stuff to take his mind off cumming. Simultaneous equations did not work, and neither did the experiment for dissolving calcium carbonate in acid to get carbon dioxide. Funnily, he was recalling the result of sodium reacting with water when the exact same thing happened down below. D: Yes James! Shoot into me! I can feel it inside! He pulled her off his cock after unloading. He wanted to do her badly. J: Turn around. Get on your knees. D: Yes James. He positioned for entry and rammed home. Denise was shocked by the initial forceful entry. The pain of it caused her to shriek. But his subsequent thrusts felt so good. D: Harder James. HARDER! James pounded her as hard as he could with his currently semi-erect cock. The sound of his thighs slapping againsts her firm butt was strangely arousing. J: On your back. She flipped over as requested, already delirious from the pain and pleasure. James spread her legs wide, his 8-inch monster already back at full hardness. D: Don't go too deep please. It hurts a little... James pushed it in, and angled upwards, propping her legs against his thighs. D: Oh shit..... Denise could not explain why it suddenly felt so good. James continued rubbing against her g-spot. He pulled back the clitoral hood and teased her engorged clit with his fingers. D: Ahhh... James... stop... I need to pee... James ignored her and continued. He rubbed her clit in slow deliberate strokes. His other hand reached forward and massaged her breasts, running his fingers around her areola, watching her nipples get erect. D: No.... please... stop... I beg you... He pinched her nipples lightly and rolled them around in his thumb and forefinger... D: Please James... I don't want to pee on you... Her breathing quickened and her lower body convulsed violently. James pulled out but continued rubbing her clit. D: Shit......... Stream after stream of liquid escaped from her as she screamed and cursed at the same time. She felt embarrassed. Why could she not hold it in? And yet the sensation did not feel like peeing. to get carbon dioxide. Funnily, he was recalling the result of sodium reacting with water when the Her lady parts were by now extremely sensitive, and James took the opportunity to torture her even more. He got between her legs and gave her a tentative lick. D: No... stop... please.... But she offered no further resistance. In no time, he had two fingers in her and he was tracing the alphabet on her clit with his tongue. D: James.... please... I can't take it anymore... But he was having too much fun to pay attention to her. She was moaning so loudly that she had to cover her mouth. D: I want it in me. This time, he complied. He rubbed his dick around her labia before slowly inserting it in. She was practically leaking juices. J: All the way James. Do it hard... He thrusted in and out as she desired, alternating between fast and shallow strokes, and slow and deep ones. Denise lost count of the number of times she came. She did not even know if it was an orgasm. But if it was, she probably had more than a dozen so far. D: Baby, I want you to cum too... J: Soon soon. Suddenly, Denise clenched her PC muscles. J: Oh god... what did you just do... She smiled at him in between moans. She was already tight, and now, James was the one going crazy trying to delay his orgasm. He failed miserably. J: Dee I'm gonna cum! D: Inside! I want it inside! He pumped her hard and fast and within a few strokes, his monster was relieved of its load. Denise refused to let him go and clenched tighter. He collapsed into a quivering heap onto her, his deflating dick slowly exiting, bringing along with it copious amounts of semen and juices. She squirmed a little as it tricked down her ass. She kissed him. D: That was fantastic. J: Sorry for taking your virginity. D: I'm not sorry for giving it to you. J: I love you Dee. She had no reply for that.
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nice story bro!
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nice story bro!
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Now James was hurt.
He had just confessed what he thought was love to Denise, and she could not reciprocate. Was she just another girl who only wanted his dick? He did not even bother to shower. He could do that in the comfort of his own home. He merely wiped himself with the wet wipes she provided. J: I have to go. D: What's wrong? J: Nothing. I just have to go. D: Shall we go for dinner? J: Sorry. My maid is cooking. D: Oh ok. I'll see you soon. She unlocked the door to let him out. She wondered if she said or did something wrong. James was tearing as he walked home. How could she do this to him? He bared his heart and soul to her and she crushed it like a cockroach. But then again, he was overreacting. He had no idea what love was. Just because he felt different when he was with her did not mean he was in love with her. He reached home, went straight to his room and took a shower. He was going to try his very best to fight this strange feeling he had about Denise. If stronger feelings developed, then so be it. But in the meantime, he was going to have as much sex as he could. J: Kakak! Liana came running over. L: Yes James? J: What's for dinner? L: What you want to eat? I cook. J: Anything. Have you eaten? L: No. He pulled down his shorts. J: Eat this first. Then cook something for me. L: Yes James. She knelt down in front of him and sucked him to full erection. There was something about him that made her horny. She wanted his dick in her all the time. She wondered if he had used black magic on her. James was totally enjoying her blowjob. They all had different styles. They all felt different and gave him different sensations. He instantly forgot the supposed hurt that Denise had caused him earlier. L: James, fuck me? He did not need a second invitation. He lay her down on the mattress and spread her legs. She was already wet. It was as though sucking his cock was such a massive turn on. He positioned himself between her legs and slid in. She had already become accustomed to his length and girth so entry was not a problem. Liana moaned and mutter a couple of words that James did not understand. No matter, he moans were indication enough of her pleasure. This time, he did not even bother changing position, and pumped her in missionary until he came inside. Liana was a little worried. Her period was late, and yet she still let him cum in her. She did not know how to broach the topic to him. James withdrew, satisfied with himself. He cleaned up and offered her tissues. She stemmed the flow and got up. L: What would you like to eat? J: Mee goreng? L: Ok. I cook now.
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Celine moaned non-stop as James thrust into her. The new condoms she had got for him were ribbed. Along with his already long and thick dick, the sensations in her nether regions were driving her nuts. Her juices were already overflowing and running down her thighs as she bent over his study table.
J: Jie. How come this condom is so thick? I can't really feel much... C: Ahhh... is it?? Oh yes.... don't stop... Ahhh... it's very... oh.... good.... yes.... for me.... Ahhh... J: Huh... you're having all the fun... C: Yes... Ahhh... I'll suck you... yes... later... J: Never mind. Since you prefer this. He reached over for his digital watch and started the stop watch function. C: Ahhh.... Ahhh... what... Ahhh... you doing? J: Seeing how long I can last... this is weird. Really no feeling... C: Just... Ahhh... don't stop! Truthfully, James was getting bored. There was something about this new condom. But he could not figure it out. He continued pounding her from the back anyway, bringing her to the height of her esctacy, down again, and straight back up. Celine's mouth was dry and her throat was sore from the moaning. She was also feeling a little sore from the punishment she was getting from his member. But somehow, her pussy continued secreting their natural lubricant. And as long as James could carry on, she did not mind the pleasure she was getting. Five minutes. Ten minutes. Fifteen minutes. J: Jie. I'm not running 2.4 leh.. this is tiring... C: Please don't stop! J: Ok Jie. Anything for you... James carried on. Celine was already dizzy. She estimated an average of 2 orgasms each minute. And despite the slight soreness, the sensations were getting pretty intense. James could feel her pussy contracting involuntarily. And yet he still did not feel like he was anywhere near the end. Half a freaking hour. Celine had spaced out. She did not know what she was saying or doing anymore. Was this what it was to be delirious? She was also damn thirsty. Perhaps adding the numbing cream to the condom was not such a great idea. She felt like she was floating. She wanted to die. And yet she did not want him to stop. Forty-five minutes. Beads of sweat were already running down his temples and down his chest all the way to his penis, adding extra lubrication to her already soaked hole. His own legs were wobbly. And his hips were sore from thrusting. J: Jie can I stop please? The only reply he received were her crescendo of differently pitched moans and sighs. James gave up. He wanted desperately to cum. He withdrew and ripped off the condom. Celine staggered off the table and wobbled her way to his mattress. He started wanking. She flopped onto his mattress like a dead fish. C: Come.... here... I'll suck you... J: No need. C: Come. He did as he was told anyway. She spread her legs. Her pussy looked red and raw. He entered and she grimaced. J: You ok? C: Yes... She smiled through the pain as he resumed thrusting. J: Jie, never mind. C: No. Its ok. J: Can I try the other hole? C: My ass? J: Yes. C: I don't know if I can... Celine only had anal sex once before, when her substantially smaller dicked boyfriend conned her into it. She knew it would hurt like hell. But since he let her use him for so long, she decided to give it a shot anyway. Besides, her brain was still high from all that endorphins. She could probably take it. C: Lubricant. My bag. He searched her bag for it and found it. He applied it liberally around her anus and his dick. Thankfully for her, he was getting soft. He started slow, inserting a finger, then two into the alternate entrance. She flinched a little, then relaxed to allow him to attempt penetration. C: Oh my god. He penetrated her slowly, inch by inch. She gritted her teeth until he was halfway in. J: How does it feel? C: Wow. I don't know. It probably hurts but I can't tell. James thrusted slowly, enjoying the sensations as her rectal muscles gave him squeezes he never felt before. J: Oh jie... its so tight... He felt the urge to cum and pressed on. Couple of strokes later, he felt it. He pulled out and continued stroking himself. Interestingly, he only had a single shot in him and it erupted with amazing velocity. The thick stream landed on her face and flowed down her neck, the remainder landed on her cleavage. For Celine, it hurt like hell, but at least they both enjoyed it.
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Orgasm too much get dizzy?
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Ask Mr. T to show you la...
Or maybe I can try to find a real life James for you? No holes barred...
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Ooooo...getting real steamy yeah? heee
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Eh bro EoS, advertising yourself ah? Real life James Hahahaha
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