The Garden

[Coffeecans]

Max chiseled the stone, slowly bringing back the image of her. She looked so beautiful and he knew that it would be simply a dream just to talk to her. He had been observing her for a while, yet he did not even have the courage to approach her for her name.

Yes, I'm a sculptor and a rather creative one on this. But its not really a profitable business yet I'm really passionate about what I do. I have a super harddisk in my brain where I can remember every single detail of what I see.

And she caught my attention the first time I saw her.

And I can’t get her out of my mind. Her hazel colored wavy hair, her naturally curled eyelashes and that watery large brown eyes. That thin lips. And her pointed face frame. She was like the ‘Girl with the pearl earring’ portrait to me.

She wasn’t particularly tall, about 1.6m. Slim and curvaceous in the right proportions. A ‘B’ I presume. But what’s stunning is her natural look, without any makeup, she looks so radiant and cheerful.

But I have never approached a girl before. Nor had any girl who would want to talk to me.

I looked into the mirror and sighed.

Perhaps its just not meant to be.

Because I would never ever be a Prince charming. Never.

As I brushed the thoughts aside, I continued chiseling on my sculpture. For that was my greatest joy.

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[milkyshake]

Another blockbuster in the making...

[cramlover]

Good introduction and beginning...
Waiting for more.

[Typewriting]

Camping for this as well!

[jazp]

camping here! support! :D

[Smallandstrong]

Camp !

This looks... Like a novel.

[Coffeecans]

My name is Max, 32, the only son to my family. My dad was a sculptor and I inherited his skill since I was young. But tragedy hit when he passed away 5 years ago, leaving me a fortune but I was lonely. Mum had passed away since I was ten.

Business was not doing well and the orders was declining. One by one my dad's staffs left. And what's left of the shop was a warehouse.

I took a break and looked at the sketch that I drew and was only half way to completion. On my table were multiple sketches. And yes. All of them is all hers.

The timid me could only try to snap pictures of her far away.

Friends around me would only like to spend their money on pubs, ktvs and girls. Because I only have this bunch of friends I can only hang out with them.

It was until this day they took me with them to a pub where I almost lost myself.

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[Coffeecans]

Ben, me and Ryan are best of friends. We hang out together most of the time. They were like brothers to me. Though sometimes I do wonder do they have a motive to hang out with me. With me around they would always stand out.

On this day, they brought me to a new hangout. A KTV they had not gone too.

Ben: Come on! Let check out this place!

Ryan: Let's go!

I paused and stood rooted to the ground. Staring at the neon lights.

Ben: Hey Max! What are you waiting for? HEY!

Ryan gave me a knock on my head and gestured me to go.

It was a first time for me. And truly an eye opener.

The interior was quite dim with red and purplish lights with huge leather sofas. We were guided to a room where Ben ordered a bottle of liquor.

Me: Erm. I don't think we can finish the bottle.

Ryan hit on on the head again: Who says we are finishing it today?

I scratched my head as they giggled.

Ben: I'm wondering if you are living in Mars.

A group of beauties came in and they were flirting around the two handsome man beside me.

Ben and Ryan was laughing and teasing the girls while I could only browse the song lists.

Ryan: Go and say hello to my friend Max, pretties.

They turned around, looked at me and they giggled.

The ladies were asking Ben and Ryan what they worked as.

Ben: I'm a sales manager.

They screamed with excitement.

Ryan: I'm an account director.

They screamed again. And it seems that the attention was more on Ryan.

They asked what Max was working as.

I replied softly: Sculptor.

They shunned like I was a piece of dung, paying no attention to me and they crowded themselves around Ben and Ryan, letting them touch their assets.

I could catch a glimpse of their undergarments. It seemed deliberate and they were overjoyed. Ben was wasting no time caressing their assets. Ryan too was invited to go on a drinking contest. After a while they were playing finger guessing games and the loser would take off their clothes.

Then Ben was thinking of a real funny game. He asked Ryan over and they were up to something.

Ben: Ryan, let's help Max 'shoot' shall we?

Ryan's eyes shown with excitement as he nodded.

He asked the ladies to crowd around.

Ryan: Pretties, I will tip those who is the first to successfully make my friend here ejaculate.

This surprised the ladies as they paused.

Ryan: He's still a virgin.

The ladies turned their heads and stared at me with their red hungry eyes, ready to pounce on me anytime. I was intimidated by their stares. They came with different styles. One stood on her fours, like a wild fox, where you could see ample cleavage as she slowly came over, the others treated the room like a fashion walkway. One stared at me with her tongue lashing out.

I could feel myself getting real aroused yet scared. I retreated a little. And a little. The hissing sounds of the ladies came nearer and nearer as Ben and Ryan looked in excitement.

Ryan / Ben: No more virgin! No more virgin!

The ladies laughed as they ran towards my direction.

It felt weird. More scary I would think. I closed my eyes and the first image then came to my mind was her.

I did not know what came to me as I shouted: Help me! Go away!

The ladies froze then broke out in laughter. They were holding their stomaches as they laughed it off.

I never felt so embarrassed. I saw the door and ran towards it.

The moment I opened the door and dashed out, I bumped into someone really hard. She lost her balance and fell too.

A loud thud was heard and immediately the ladies came out to see what was happening.

I was sitting on the floor and the lady I hit was patting her knees.

Lady: Watch where you are going idiot!

I apologised as I stood up.

A loud 'zekk' was heard beside me as I looked at her.

She walked pass me. I could smell the sweet perfume she was wearing and her hair smelled good too. I tried to take a deep sniff of her hair but my actions were far too obvious and out came a slap to my face which shattered whatever I was thinking.

But that slap felt good in a way.

I could not take my eyes off her.

She was the one.

I didn't know what I was reacting, I replied: Thank you.

Lady: Nutcase.

I saw her walk past me. And that was already heaven.

Before I knew it, a cold splash of liquor came onto my face, followed by a strong punch.

Man: Watch your eyes you bloody country bumpkin. She's mine.

And came another kick which sent me flying back as I lost my balance.

Ben came out to see the commotion and quickly helped me up and pulled me back to the room.

One of the lady in the room came over to me.

Lady: Don't you even think about it. She is too good for you. She's the maiden here. One from the heavens. Not for any toads like you. And she belongs to a man you would never want to offend. No one dares to even steal a glance at Dawn knowing his background. Stay clear of Dawn. And if you treasure your life, stay clear.

I wiped off the blood from the side of my lips and smiled.

Now to me. It was worth it.

Now I know her name and where she works.

Dawn.

Beautiful name for her. Truly.

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[furritales]

Ahhh....the sculptor and his forbidden lady... an exotic combo
Will he one day sculpt the image of his lady? Kekeke :D

[gotnotime]

Yay, yet another blockbuster story in the making :D

[LuAhBai]

Nice Story

[Coffeecans]

The ladies were nice as they came to me, using tissues to clean my face, asking if I was alright.

My buddies did not really pay attention to me as they were busy keeping their hands full on the other ladies who were with them.

One of the ladies who was treating me mentioned: Don't go close to Dawn. She's dangerous.

I looked at her, and looked deep in her eyes. It seemed that she was not lying. Her affectionate eyes, and her frown was sincere.

Me: What's your name?

She replied: Snow.

I did not know how to react but probably it might be her nick.

I replied: Mine's Max.

She smiled.

Snow wasn't the aggressive type and she had the look of the girl-next-door. Petite and thin, and her voice was soft.

The other ladies turned their attention to my buddies as they crowded around them, leaving only me and Snow in the corner.

Me: Wow. My buddies are magnets.

The ladies screamed when they were tipped as they buried my buddies's heads onto their breasts. And they would play along, pulling down their top to get a glimpse of their shape and colour, taking the chance to coat it with their tongue.

The ladies would always give a soft slap on their shoulders with a seductive voice: You are naughty...

I was lost in staring at my buddies and their seductive voices that I forgot about Snow who was sitting beside me. She was looking down and her hands were on her lap, looking distracted and there seemed to be something bothering her.

I turned my head.

Max: Snow you alright?

Suddenly Snow embraced me tightly and I could feel the softness of her small breasts on my right arm. And then she starting crying softly.

I gasped.

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[genesis01]

bro kopi, i leave u no chance to take a break from this.... keep it cumming more!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Johnnykhan]

wooo interesting!! camping for the next installment..

[Coffeecans]

I was totally caught off by Snow's reaction. Did I do something wrong? My shoulder soon became wet with her tears.

Me: Erm. Are you alright?

There was no sound from her, she just continued her embrace.

Ben and Ryan were having so much fun when they stood up. And each of them had three girls each.

Ben: Come! Let's go to the hotel!

Ryan: Let's go!

The girls were so excited as they kissed them.

Ben: Max, how about you?

I just stared at them blindly with Snow on my shoulders.

Ryan: Not bad, you picked up one. I was starting to worry you are not straight. Ben, don't worry about him. Let's go.

Ben: Laters Max!

I stood alone in the corner with Snow. And soon half an hour passed.

My phone was now flooded with Ben and Ryan's whatapp images of the fun they are having.

*What a lucky guy I thought.*

It was when Snow lifted her head.

Snow: Can you book me tonight, please?

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[demonhunter]

"clap clap clap "

support !

[Coffeecans]

Steven gave Dawn a hard slap as she fall on the floor.

Steven: Slut! Did you hit him purposely? You are trying to tell me that I'm not good enough for you right?

Dawn: No.. Steven... it was really accidental... he just dashed out suddenly...

Steven: Enough!

He said as he slammed the liquor bottle on the table. He splashed the cup of liquor on her face. And pulled her near his face.

Steven: You bloody slut. Let me REMIND you again. You are not entitled to answer back. You understand you cheap slut.

He pushed her aside then asked the mamasan to send new girls in.

He spat on her face.

Steven: Get out. Piece of shit. You bloody hell spoilt my mood. GET OUT!

He said as he threw a stack of notes on her face.

Steven: Pick it up! Pick it up like a dog! Hahaha hahahhaha!

Dawn bit her lips as she wiped his spit off and picked it up.

Steven walked to her and kicked her hard on her stomach.

Steven: Cheap. You are really cheap! Now take the money and go!

Steven was the only child of a rich businessman. Spoilt and rotten to the core, he was one who loved to flaunt his assets and wealth, spends without thinking, loves to flirt and reserves girls, keeping them as his pets. He was often told off by his dad, but he refuses to listen but being the only child has its perks.

Dawn's face was bruised a little as she covered it with her hands.

Mamasan: Are you being hit again? Dawn... please.. you know that...you can...

Dawn stopped her from continuing.

Dawn: I can do it... just a little more...

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[Coffeecans]

I stared at Snow.

Me: How do I do that?

Snow: Bring me out, please.

Me: Ok. But to where?

Snow: Wherever you want.

Me: Wherever?

Snow: Yes wherever?

Me: But what do we do after?

Snow (in an irritated voice): Whatever you want. Can you stop asking questions and go?

Me (in a daze): Alright then. So we go out like this? Need to tell anyone?

Snow: ArgghhhH! Just go!

Her attitude made me jump. She grabbed my hands and showed me out of the ktv.

It was a quiet night out there.

Snow: Where's your car?

Me: At home.

Her attitude suddenly changed.

Snow: God. Who did I hook up with? A dimwit?

Me: What did you say?

Snow: Nothing.

Me: Why were you crying?

Snow: ...

Me: Did anything happen?

Snow: ...

Me: Erm..

Snow: Just shut up! Sharks! I'm going back! You are... you are... you are so bloody BORING! Give me your wallet!

Me: For?

Snow went red with annoyance as she turned and ran back.

I stood there, not knowing what I had done wrong.

Puzzled. I went to hail a cab.

But in a distance I thought I saw Dawn sitting at a corner with another lady. Curious, I went to see what was happening.

She was weeping. My eyes captured her expressions, but I knew approaching her would be a big mistake.

I hailed the cab and headed home.

Strangely enough, I took the carving tools and continued my works till dawn broke, eager to finish it and start on a new one in the backyard.

But deep in me, I was yearning to know more about her. But how? Perhaps the cliche answer would be: YOU NEED A PLAN.

I need a plan. But how?

I scratched my head. Tried to think. And think.

But nothing came to mind.

I brushed off the thought and went back to chiseling.

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[Rick555]

Camping...

[Coffeecans]

Just a little bit more.

I thought to myself as I added the finishing touch to the sculpture. A life sized one. A bit more on the right, pare a little on the left. I stood there looking at my finished piece, satisfied with what I have done.

Now I cleaned up the place. Swept and washed. And washing the sculpture before covering it.

Went for a bath and dozed off soon after.

But soon I woke up, eager to start on the next piece.

As I checked on my plants, I sat down and sketched out the next piece.

Ryan called: Hey, shall we go to the ktv again? I bet you had a good time yesterday.

Me: When?

Ryan: Perhaps end week. You keen?

Me: Sure.

Ryan: Wow. Someone lost his virginity eh? And eager for more action?

Me: Nothing happened yesterday. Snow stormed off just outside the ktv.

Ryan: Say what? What happened?

Me: Not sure too.

Ryan: Uhhh.. ok we talk another time. Going meeting.

Me: K.

As I put down the phone, thoughts of Dawn came to mind.

I knew I really needed a plan.

I wanted to see Dawn.

I wanted to talk to her.

I'm in love with her.

With a dose of determination, I headed out.

To the library. Hoping to find books or novels. On relationships.

Yes, I was such a blockhead.

But I was sure I will be able to find something like a theory. Something like a plan. I smiled to myself as I combed my hair and headed out.

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[Coffeecans]

Going to the library had it's perks.

From the CSI angle to romantic and tactical approaches were there to be discovered.

Penned down all the ideas. And stretched.

A good 4 hours there.

Now I was all prepared to draft out my plan.

I shall officially call this: Plan to know Dawn.

Set on my table, turned on the lamp, took out a chunk of papers and pens.

Started to work on each step, taking the photocopies of the essential sections from the novels and guidebooks.

Now.

Step 1: Know someone through someone. And who might be the best person.
Snow? Mamasan?

Mamasan.

Yes.

Mamasan.

I wore a huge grin on my face as I planned to go there this evening, without Ben nor Ryan. Just to find mamasan.

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[Coffeecans]

I saw Mamasan some distance away and ran towards her direction.

Me: Mamasan! Mamasan!

She stood there, shocked by the way I called her.

Without saying a word, she gave me a knock on my head!

Mamasan: Who the hell calls people like this and who are you?

Me: My name is Max, mamasan.

Mamasan: One more mention of that name I'm going to kick your bloody ass. Call me Mary.

Me: Yes.. mama... Mary..

Mary: Yes? Why are you looking for me?

Me: I.. would like.. to find out more... about...

Mary: About who?

Me: D.... aa.....

Mary: Who?

Me: Dawn.

Her eyes opened wide.

Mary: What?

Me: Yea. Dawn.

Mary: Why?

Me: I... like her.

Mary: Please... everyone tell me the same thing.

Me: I saw her crying when she was talking to you that evening. She was very sad.

Mary: It's none of your business.

Me: Please. Can you tell me something about her?

Mary: Go home toad. It's no use. Forget about her.

Me: Why?

Mary: Shut up! I am late already! Shoo!

She said as she turned and walked away.

I walked off dejected. But I was not going to give up.

I wasn't paying much attention when suddenly I knocked onto someone again.

This time it was Snow.

She stared at me. And she seemed to know the reason why I was here.

Snow: Zek. Sickening. You again. zek.

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[Coffeecans]

Me: Hi Snow

Snow: You must be here to find information about that girl, isn't it?

My eyes shone and she seem to notice it.

Snow: Well, I can answer your questions.

Me: Really?

Snow: Ahem. But everything comes with a price. Can you afford it?

Me: Yes.

Snow: Good. I want you to book me the whole night today. And you follow everything I say. And no bargaining. Else it's game over.

Snow's face gleamed with delight as she gestured for me to follow her as we got into a cab.

Snow: Swissotel Stamford Hotel please.

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[WithoutEuu]

It would be very selfish of me to ask you to not post until you finish the entire story because the suspense is really killing me!! Keep up the good job bro!

[Coffeecans]

Snow might have been waiting for my face to turn pale.

The reaction she wanted should be: "Why are you taking me to some place so expensive? Can I afford it? What mess have I gotten into?"

But my face was expressionless. It wasn't the money that I was going to spend. It was the info that I could get from Snow. I wanted to know more about Dawn.

Snow: Go get a room. A deluxe one.

I did as I was told.

We went into the lift without saying a word to each other.

Then she broke the silence.

Snow: Why ain't you affected by the costs? You have to earn so long just to have a night's stay here right?

I looked at her and smiled.

Snow: Is she that important to you? Where has that nerd or idiot went to?

We arrived at our room and Snow gasped seeing the room. She was jumping in joy. Perhaps it was her first time. She was so happy that she was screaming.

Snow: I've finally had a chance to see and live in this room for a night! Gosh! I dreamt and heard so much about it!

She jumped onto the bed and plunged her head deep in the pillows.

Snow: This is just unbelievable!

She took the pillows and hugged it tightly. Then she checked out the toilet. And screamed.

She threw out her clothes one by one as she played with the shower. Suddenly she shouted at me.

Snow: Max! Come! I need help!

I went in and saw her stark naked on the tub.

My eyes were locked at her body for a while when she shouted.

Snow: Quit looking at me. Can you help me fill the tub with water?

Me: You only have to press this.

Snow: How did you know you country bumpkin. It must have been a lucky guess. Now get out.

I did as I was told and the image of her naked body was locked in my mind.

Snow was whistling happily in the shower. I just sat on the chair, waiting to pour her with questions.

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[Coffeecans]

She took a long time in the shower as multiple questions came to mind.

I sat at the balcony, taking out the small sketchbook in my bag, and drew the delicate hands of Dawn. Her slender fingers with long and well shaped nails. Probably that would be the next piece I would be working on.

The bathroom door opened and there Snow was, with her hair still wet from her shower, and the only thing covering her body was the white towel.

Without much thinking, I pointed to her that the bathrobe was in the wardrobe.

Me: Bathrobe is in the wardrobe.

That must have pissed her.

Snow: You blockhead! Can't you see the reason I draped myself with a towel?

Me: Cos you don't have extra clothes?

She ran forward to me and gave me a slap on my face.

I was caught off guard and her motion caused her towel to drop on the floor.

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[Coffeecans]

There stood a naked lady in front of me.

My very first seeing one.

Snow was thin and I could see a bit of her ribs, her small breasts was hanging freely with a twenty cent sized pink nipples, erect probably due to the wind. Her tummy was flat and there was this brown patch, probably a birth mark beside her belly button. My gaze went down, her bush was full and black as it fully covered the triangle in between her legs. Her legs were thin yet it portrayed a sensuous feel.

I was having a bulge already. She was quickly covering her assets as she scolded.

Snow: Have you seen enough? Pay me!

She said as she picked up the towel and took the bathrobe from the wardrobe.

I was still sitting on the chair where the evening sky caught my attention.

The sky was painted purplish orangey swatch and it looked as though we are part of the majestic artwork.

Snow came charging to where I was until I turned and placed a finger on my lips. She was puzzled until I pointed outside the window.

She was too caught by the scenery.

The magic hour was here.

In a closeup of her eyes, the clouds moved slowly. It was the most beautiful sight she had seen. Unknowingly she wrapped her arms around my shoulders as she leaned her head on me.

Snow: It's so beautiful. Thank you.

She smelled really good closeup and though I could feel my shirt getting wet, it felt as though time had stopped. I looked sideways to her and saw a sight that was really an unforgettable one.

Snow was smiling and she was happy but on the side of her eyes, I could see tears forming.

Her embrace tightened and I could feel the comfort.

Sometimes there was no need for words to know whether that certain someone is comfortable or not.

Or would this be described as chemistry?

Deep in me I could feel her happiness at this moment. But what was her story like? And how Dawn's will be like?

I wanted to ask her but I know she was now enjoying every moment of the magic hour.

A moment that was framed in her heart.

And so I waited. Perhaps she would pour everything out.

That was how I felt, for I was lost in the stunning scenery too.

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[genesis01]

Max lost in the stunning scenary and I lost in your story too!

The Garden & The Writer.

[Coffeecans]

Dawn wore a forced smile when she entered the ktv room. Her face was still bruised but she had to keep on.

Mamasan: Dawn, are you ok? Do you need to rest? You don't look well.

Dawn: I'm fine Mary. Is Chee Beng here today?

Mary: Yes. He's in the usual room.

Dawn: Got it.

Mary: You don't have to do that Dawn.

Dawn smiled weakly.

She knocked the door and bought in the liquor and cups. To her surprise, he was trying to get fresh with one of the newbies and she was resisting his actions.

Newbie: No sir, please... no..

Dawn: Hi King, your liquor is here.

He turned and his eyes grew red with rage.

Chee Beng (nicknamed King): Who ASKED you to come in!

The girl quickly grabbed her clothes and wept at the corner.

Dawn: She's new, King.

He turned to the newbie and gave her a slap on her face.

King: Come here!

He dragged her in between his legs.

King: Give me a blow.

The girl looked at him, totally shocked by his request.

She did not know what to do.

A slap came upon her face again.

King: Don't bloody waste my time. Is it money you are after?

He took out a stack of notes and threw it on her face again.

Dawn could feel herself boiling in rage too but she knew he was not to be trifled with. She put on a smile and said.

Dawn: Don't be like this, King. Perhaps I can help you with that. She's too new for this.

King stood up. And slapped Dawn again.

King went close to Dawn and she could feel his breath on her face.

King: You slut. Don't you question what the fuck I'm doing. I have no interest in old things. Get out. And look at that face. A slut would always be a slut. What do you want? Money? I have!

He threw it hard at her face. Stacks and stacks, until her face was red.

King: Is it enough? Then pick it up and go.

Dawn squat down and took the money. Suddenly out came a kick towards her as she fell.

King: Hahaha... how cheap can you get?

King took the remaining stacks on the floor.

King: You want this? Go on all fours and bark like a bitch.

Dawn could feel her emotions boiling but she needed the money.

Resigned to her fate, she did as she was told. There were tears on her eyes as King laughed.

His attention soon wore out as he forced the new girl to do what he wants.

That was all Dawn could do to help. The only thing is to ask Mary to handle him.

Dawn cooped herself in the ladies and let her emotions flow.

She was thinking to herself *How long must I still do this?*

Mary could hear Dawn's cries. She too covered her mouth and silently wept in her heart *Poor child*.

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[Punder]

camping for more! :p

[Coffeecans]

Snow embraced me as she planted her tongue in my ears, swirling around it, giving me goosebumps. It felt ticklish yet good, something that I have not experienced before. Soon she moved towards my neck, brushing the sides of my side as though she was painting a canvas, followed by her sucking on my neck like those of a vampire. I felt a little pain and her heavy suction. Her hands were now roaming my body, rubbing my chest to my stomach. Slowly she reached below...

The doorbell rang as we both jumped in fright.

She quickly dived into the bed, covering herself with the blanket before I answered the door.

"Room service Sir."

I thanked and tipped him and took the tray to the table.

Snow was surprised. She wasn't expecting the bottle of wine.

Snow: When did you?

Me: You were taking too long in the toilet. So I was thinking perhaps I can order some food.

Snow just sat there. She did not know how to react.

She stepped out of the blanket and walked towards me, and planted a light kiss on my cheeks.

Snow: Thanks. You are so thoughtful.

I covered my eyes as I replied: Go wear the bathrobe. Please.

She hit me gently on my arms: Why? You don't like to see me naked?

She did as she was told as she wore the robe and sat on the chair.

I poured the wine and passed her the glass.

She took a sip and then asked: So what do you want to know about her?

Me: Everything. Please.

Snow was taken aback. She was thinking why is he so attracted to her?

Snow: Why do you want to know so much about her? Isn't I worth the attention?

There was a tinge of bitterness and jealousy in her voice, but she knew she had promised him.

She took a deep breath as she savoured another sip.

Me: Perhaps after dinner? Let's tuck in.

Snow nodded as she ate the dinner, feeding me some chunks too.

She was smiling radiantly. But little did I know that this staycation was her sweetest moments in her life.

There was a teardrop at the edge of her eyes as she ate.

Snow: It feels good to be loved, doesn't it?

With that she teared.

And trembled.

Snow: We were broken toys Max. It happened about 5 years ago. When Dawn and me were the few who joined the ktv...

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[gotnotime]

Such intense emotions..

[MissPooh]

nice writing.

[Coffeecans]

Snow took a gulp of the wine as she sat cross legged. She turned her head towards the balcony:

Dawn and I were the newbies back then. We were both not well educated, and probably it may seem that this was the fastest way to earn money. And we tried. But both of us had a limit. No sleeping with any guys.

Mary was good to us, teaching the ropes patiently. And soon we became the hot favourites, and it was good money I must say. Everything was good until that bastard came. That guy named King.

He was filthy rich as his dad was a very successful entrepreneur. He treated girls like they were playtoys. Abusive, arrogant and filthy. He took a fancy to us and kept coming back. He wanted to buy us out so he could do what he pleases. Being blinded by the amount, I agreed to him but Dawn did not. He made a contract for us to sign. He would buy us for a period of a year. And we would need to standby whenever he wants. Of course it was not easy.

He was rough and aggressive. I had to go to the doctor almost everytime I was with him. He did not treat me like a woman, he loved beating me, dropping hot candlewax on me... to the extend of... sharing.. me...

I had enough of being abused and tried to get him to terminate the contract. He threatened me and raised the amount I had to pay.

I only work for a living, how could I have the money to pay him?

I had to tolerate his every actions. It was a nightmare Max. Every single day was a nightmare.

Snow began to weep thinking of the past.

Me: So what happened to Dawn?

She took another gulp.

Dawn was always there to comfort me, she was like another sister to me. But her background seemed complex. Her mother was a compulsive gambler and her dad was struck with a terminal illness. She had a brother whom she had to support. She was always beaten by her mum for being a jinx, she blamed Dawn for the plight she was in. She blamed her for her bad gambling luck.

It was not until last year, her dad had to had an operation. And a very expensive one. Her brother had to go to university to. Her brother did not help out in the family expenses and he was brainwashed by his mum that it was Dawn's job to be the breadwinner. It was only right that Dawn should be the one supporting him through university.

Her dad's condition got worse and he needed that operation to survive. To Dawn, her dad was the only one who knew of her hardships. He wept every time he saw Dawn. And Dawn could only smile at him, telling him that everything was alright.

Her mother was still the same, gambling every single cent she gives and always tell Dawn that it was not enough. And her brother too would always ask her for money.

It was her last resort. She agreed to King's request.

I clenched my fists. And thought to myself: Bastard. Freaking bastard.

Snow looked at me, with a frown on my face.

Snow: No Max. You are no match for him. He's really rich and you are just a pauper. Please. I know my request to be here has already burnt a hole in your pocket. I'm thankful for this. But please. It's after all Dawn's decision.

I did not know what went over me. But I knew the desire to win Dawn back was even stronger.

Me: Snow, tides will change. The winner do not stay at the top forever. Given that bastard's way of spending, he would be in debt if anything happens.

And I was right.

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I started on the other sculpture, eager to finish it. Now my business was starting to pick up. I started to showcase my artworks in art exhibits, and they were well received. I just just received an award for best masterpiece from an international art festival and was invited to fly to receive that award.

I must have been a fortune teller. For what I told Snow the other day, my prediction came true.

The stock market plunged to a real low, hitting the world hard. Punching many a great blow to their pockets. Many went bankrupt in an instant. That very day was a day where everyone would never forget.

King's face turned pale. His dad had to sell everything, every single asset and it was still not enough. They had to be declared bankrupt.

King: What are you saying daddy? We have to sell everything? Then what about my expenditure, my allowance, my car, my credit card?

King's Dad (KD): Didn't I give you enough for your savings?

King: You didn't say anything about savings daddy?

KD: Didn't I tell you not to spend unnecessary money?

King: You didn't tell me that daddy. Now give me another $10k. I need to go out with my friends.

KD: Stop your nonsense son. Don't you know what we are facing now?

King: Face what? Give me my money or else.

KD: Or else what?

He stared at King sternly.

King: Just you wait!

He kicked the table and slammed the door.

It has been days he did not visit the ktv.

I went there again, this time alone. And then I asked for Snow.

Multiple exposure to the media and news had boosted my confidence. And perhaps, this time, it would be a golden chance for me to see Dawn. Probably saving her.

But before that, I needed some inside intelligence. And that would be Snow. Not about Dawn. But that bastard.

I wanted him down. Down where he would never stand up again. Never. In his life.

"I'm going to make you pay thrice for what you have done to my future girlfriend." I thought.

Hmmm. Probably not thrice. But endless.

I pulled up my collar as I stepped into the ktv.

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[KLKOOL]

Very nice .. Please continue :)

[Coffeecans]

Snow stared at me for a while. Seeing me in shirt and pants, my hair all combed neatly and well shaved.

Snow: Max?

Me: That would be me, miss bathrobe.

She slapped me on my arms and gave me a pinch.

Me: Free?

She nodded as she leaned close to me: Are you going to date me out?

I nodded. She leaned and gave me a kiss.

Snow: Wait for me.

I waited and saw Dawn in a distance. Her gaze was as cold as ever. And there seem to be something troubling her.

Perhaps I would be able to find out why later.

Snow came out and waved goodbye to Dawn. Dawn smiled at Snow.

Dawn: Good for you to find someone, Snow.

Snow: I'm not sure of that Sis. But I'm contented being his friend.

Dawn: Don't say that I'm sure he likes you.

Snow sighed: Well, it's complicated.

Seeing Dawn smile was the best thing.

Snow cross her arms around mine as she leaned on my shoulder as we left.

Snow: Where are we going?

Me: Up to you.

Snow: Whole night?

Me: Whole night.

Dawn looked at Snow and she gave a smile before she went back to the room.

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waiting for the next :)

[Coffeecans]

Snow: Let's go to the coffeeshop. My treat!

Me: What's the occasion?

Snow: Because I feel like it!

True enough, she was radiant. She held on to me and led the way.

Sitting at the coffeeshop, she ordered many dishes and ate happily. I was amazed by her appetite.

Me: Are you so hungry?

Snow: No. I'm very happy.

Me: Ok.

It feels weird that it feel good seeing her happy.

Snow (with her mouth full): Yooooouu noooot eatiing?

I giggled looking at her like how hamsters store their food in their mouths.

She slapped me on my shoulders.

Snow: I'm so full! All your fault. You ate so little I had to finish them! Bill, boss!

She asked for the bill and paid happily.

Me: So where to now?

Snow: Take a walk with me.

Me: Sure.

She swung her little handbag to and fro, and was silently hymning a song.

Me: Tong Hua?

She stopped. Looked at me and smiled as she carried on walking.

We walked along Fort Canning Park where she sat at the patch of grass, looking at the full moon.

Snow: Beautiful isn't it?

I nodded.

She then leaned her head on my shoulder. And that feels warm. Something left as though we were lovers.

Me: I...

She placed her fingers on my lips, asking me to be quiet. She liked the feeling of leaning on me. We sat there, for more than an hour. Perhaps the silence seemed really romantic.

She lifted her head and stared at me. Her intense look, as though she could see the inner side of me through my eyes. She leaned closer, her eyes closed. Her nose touched mine, as she rotated her head, letting her soft lips touch mine.

Her tongue came and circled mine. Her lips closed gently, causing a suction in both our mouths. Her fingers now was placed on my cheekbone as she pulled me even closer to her.

I could smell her hair, and her delicate skin. I did not know what to do but let my instinct take control. Soon we were locked up in each other's embrace, letting our passion flow. I could feel the heat from both our bodies.

She stopped, looked at me, and pointed to an otherwise place nearby.

Merchant Court Hotel.

And the expression in her eyes were something I had not seen before. Somehow it was something that I would probably never experienced.

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Snow was breathing heavily for a reason I did not know. Her face was red. As we checked into the room, she quickly slammed the door, put down her bag and pushed me to the bed.

Snow (panting): hurrrrgh... hurrgh...

She started to unbutton my shirt in a hurried motion. She lowered her head towards my body as I could feel her hot breathing on my chest. I could see her two breasts resting nicely on her blue coloured lingerie cups through the top of her black dress. She immediately planted her lips on my right nipple, sucking gently and licking the tip.

Her fingers were massaging my left chest before she unbuttoned the whole of my shirt. She pulled it off as she started licking on my left. Her nimble fingers went down to my belt and unbuckled it in one go, she circled around my crotch, as she grabbed Little Max from the outside.

It feel good as I stood erected.

She stopped, dragged her dress strap sideways, revealing a nude shoulder with her straps hanging on the side. A super turn on for me, I could now see her strapless blue bra in full view.

I laid there, letting Snow do what she wanted. Her hand temperature was hot and it seemed like it was sweating too.

She unclipped my pants and in one single motion she pulled it down. Now only my boxers were left. She stood up, looking at me from the top, giving me a glimpse of her matching blue laced panty.

She slid her dress down and I could feel the soft fabric resting on my knees.

What a sight. Her body was beautiful and slim.

Her face still red. It was as though she was on drugs. She stared at me with hungry eyes as she licked her lips. Her hands stretched behind, to unhook her blue cups, and she threw it on my face.

It smelled really good. Feminine, with a tinge of sweat. I took it and studied the bra, looking at its detail and contours. I took a deep sniff again, loving the fragrance of her breasts. There was a tag hanging on the back, near the clip which read 34A. Though I did not know what that was, the numbers was etched in my mind.

I flipped the lingerie again and gave out a lick at the cups, wondering how it tasted like.

Snow placed her small feet on Little Max as she stroked it with her toenails, in circles. It felt really erotic, and her feet reached for the top of my boxers, using her toenail, she grabbed it and pulled it down with her right foot.

Now Little Max was in full view.

She continued, using her toe to stroke the outermost skin up and down, slowly as she stepped on it gently, letting LM lie on my crotch and fastened the rubbing with her feet.


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It felt really exotic with her using her feet to stroke my prick. Snow was looking at my erected Little Max when a pool of saliva came on my crotch. Snow proceeded to take off her blue panty.

She used her legs to part my legs, where she squat down and stroked my prick with her hands slowly, pulling the foreskin down before slowly pushing it up. Her grip was intense yet satisfying.

Snow shot me a look.

It's that hungry eyes again. She resembled a tiger with its eyes fixed on the prey, ready to pounce anytime.

She spat on my prick and in one shot, she gulped down my entire shaft into her mouth.

It was the very first time for me.

And it felt really good.

I threw her lingerie aside, and stared at her giving me the blowjob of my life. Her eyes was still fixed on me. And that was totally erotic.

Then she spoke with my prick in her mouth: Duuu yeeww liikkee kiiit?

I seem to be able to hear what she was saying and I nodded.

She took my bundled bags on her palms and gently gave it a squeeze, before her fingers worked on it like an octopus clinging on a round ball. That combo was beyond belief.

I was having my ecstasy now.

I closed my eyes.

And tried to visualise.

Snow fastened her movement.

I could feel my veins tightening on my prick.

The words 'Ahhh' escaped out of my mouth.

And that cue seemed to please Snow. She slowed her pace and used her tongue to play with my tip.

I could not help but arch my back. I loved how she plays with my balls.

I fantasized.

Yes. I imagined her to be Dawn.

Snow now fastened her mouth work. I did not know why but suddenly I reach for her head, and took her mouth for Dawn's vagina. Holding her head and I mouthfucked her.

Within minutes, I ejaculated a huge load all into Snow's mouth, with the visual of Dawn's vagina in my mind.

Snow choked but she did not spit out my cum.

She waited for me to finish my load before she took it out.

Snow looked at me with her mouth full.

She walked towards me.

Sat beside me and she opened her mouth to reveal how much I have deposited in her mouth.

Seeing the semi white semen in her mouth may have looked sick but it felt really good.

Then she swallowed it all.

She held my hands and headed to the shower room.

Snow: Let me clean you up...

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Mary looked at Dawn.

Mary: Isn't that the guy who bumped into you? He really looks different when he dresses up isn't it?

Dawn smiled.

Mary: Have you heard?

Dawn: About?

Mary: King.

Dawn: What about?

Mary: I heard he lost everything after his dad went bankrupt. I hope he does not come and create trouble.

Dawn was dumbstruck.

Dawn thought to herself "What would happen to my dad?"

She was demoralised and there were still few months left in her contract with King. He would only pay the full amount after the contract.

Mary: Are you alright Dawn?

Dawn nodded but deep inside her she was afraid what would happen to her dad if she did not have enough to foot the hospital fees.

Snow gargled her mouth, getting rid of the residue of my semen. She then tied up her hair, where she looked like a perfect housewife. She turned on the shower, and tested the temperature of the water.

Snow: Alright, come here Max.

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King was not convinced that his dad is bankrupt and that he would be living a low life where he had to work hard to earn that little wage. At a tender age, he was accustomed to living the high life, spending money like a tap, womanising and 'buying' women.

He blamed his dad for the plight he was in. He was in alot of debts too, swiping his credit card for everything. Previously the debts were piling but he did not care.

They were now living in a rented place his friend had. Small and cramped. And the bed wasn't the springy one but only cushioned. His dad was still going to work like normal and he treated the bankrupt issue with ease.

King's Dad: Son, I'm going to work.

King: Fuck you. Go for all I care.

His dad shook his head as he left the house.

King smoked heavily in the cramped 2 room flat, swearing vulgarities. He was unshaved and looked really untidy.

He was sick of the small bathroom. And the maids he had previously.

King: Marie! Fetch me my orange juice!

Nothing happened.

King: Fuck Marie! Give me my orange juice or I'll fuck the brain out of you now!

There was no reply.

King shouted his vulgarities until the neighbours shouted back.

Neighbour: Stop shouting you bloody man. Everyday know only how to grumble, swear and smoke. Useless!

King: Who are you to tell me, you fucking neighbour.

He was fed up and he slammed the door and went out.

And he wanted someone to vent his anger on.

And immediately he knew who.

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[kunt69]

Hey bro.- good write up can make into a book.please continue 😌

[Coffeecans]

Snow coated me with the shower foam from my back, she pressed her body against mine, rubbing her nipples on the surface of me, with her skilful hands working on my front.

She pinched my nipples hard, causing me to twitch and she giggled. She sucked at my back, as though she was extracting blood from me. And her fingers went to Little Max again, stroking me gently.

She whispered to my ears: Want another go?

She blew and licked my ears.

Me: It's fine Snow. You seem to be... hungry today ain't you?

Snow: I'm going to eat you alive tonight Max. Are you scared?

Her look was really foxy and any man who saw this look could rape her multiple times and shoot every single drop in her.

She proceed to give me a massage in the shower before washing off the foam.

Unlike the first time I saw Snow, she was a really sweet and great girl. It's just too bad. There isn't any affinity. I thought.

Snow: Can you sleep naked with me tonight please?

I looked at her.

Shouldn't these questions be asked by the guys?

I turned my head and nodded.

She buried her head on my shoulders.

Me: Snow?

Snow: Yes dear?

Me: Tell me more about that bastard.

She paused.

Sighed.

Then she started describing about him. His temper, his hangouts and his bloody habits.

It went on more than an hour.

Snow: I'm tired dear. Shall we sleep?

Me: Sure Snow. Sure.

With the info in my head, now all it takes is an evil plot.

Snow: Why are you smiling?

Me: Nothing Snow. Nothing.

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Camping here for more

[eeemen]

More plz? Another story that has hooked me :D. Thanks bro kopi, cheers, ....................

[Coffeecans]

Dawn's phone started ringing.

And it was a familiar number.

A number that she feared. A call that could most potentially be bad news.

Her face changed as she took the call.

And her tears started dripping.

Dawn: Mary, I have to go. It's urgent.

Mary: Ok ok. Go. Take care my dear. Let me know if I can help.

Dawn ran off quickly.

Snow was sound asleep in my arms. It felt really good to have a naked girl beside you. But I wished the one would be Dawn.

Suddenly Snow's phone rang. It should be a message.

Who could have messaged her in the middle of the night?

I know it's not right to invade her privacy, but I thought maybe it's Dawn.

I crept towards her phone and could see the message. She has no key lock.

Dawn: Sis, it's bad. Really bad. Can you help me... helpppppp.

Dawn wrote where she was and now I was in a total loss.

What should I do now?

Wake her up and tell her I heard her phone ring or rush down to where she is?

I scratched my head. Not knowing what to do.

King smiled sheepishly as he took a puff.

King: You think I do not dare touch you? Bitch. All woman are the same. Irregardless of who, you all still love my dick.

He spat at her. Gave her a kick on the stomach until he was satisfied.

He pulled up his pants, brushed away the cigarette ash and turned.

"You have not paid.."

King: Money? Here you go.

He said as he pushed the lighted cigarette on her arms and laughed as he saw her shriek in pain.

King: Why do I have to pay for sluts like you?

He said as he slapped her hard. She lost her balance, fell and hit her head on a beer bottle.

She wanted to get him to pay but what she saw was a blackout. And there was blood on the floor.

King took out another cigarette, turned and walked away.

"Sluts will always be sluts"... he whistled as he walked with his arms and legs swinging widely in an overly exaggerated manner.

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[Johnnykhan]

long continuation.. can't wait for more..

[PrinceCharles]

long continuation.. can't wait for more..

Same here as well :D

[Coffeecans]

I was at a loss now.

But my intuition told me to wake Snow up. I put the phone back, pretended to go to the toilet and flushed, hoping the loud sound would wake Snow up.

Nothing happened.

Me: Snow? I think I heard your phone ring.

Nothing happened.

Sharks. Now I was getting nervous.

Why am I to do?

Me: Snow? Snow?

I shook her.

And there was no response either.

Me: Snow?

She flipped and I was happy but all she did was go back to sleep.

Me: Why do you sleep like a log?

I shook my head. And decided that probably I should go and have a look.

Dressed up, and left the hotel.

I wrote a note on the table.

Me: Snow, I got something on. Will try to be back soon.

Luckily for me, there were ample cabs outside as I hailed.

I went into the hospital, searching for Dawn.

As I wasn't very good with signs, it took me a while to find where she was.

I walked as quietly as possible, hoping that I do not give her a shock.

My heart was thumping when I got near.

The door was ajar as I peeped in the room.

And there she was.

Weeping.

My heart sank too seeing her in this state.

I feel like walking over but I knew it would be foolish to do so. I could only quietly look at her from a distance.

It felt weird, it's as though she knew someone was looking at her.

Dawn looked up and I swore she must have since a glimpse of my face before I pretended to walk away.

My heart nearly stopped when I met her gaze.

I took the room number and headed back to the hotel.

Me: Probably a bouquet of flowers might be just appropriate, I thought to myself.

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Snow was still asleep when I returned. She was still sleeping on the same position.

I took a quick shower, leaving the door slightly open.

There were a lot of thoughts in my mind.

Was Dawn alright? Why was she there? How can I get her attention? How can I send a bouquet of flowers? Would she know it's from me? What would be her reaction? Surprised? Touched? Absurd?

Arrgh!

I let the gushing waters wash my head, hoping it would wash my thoughts away.

Thoughts of Dawn came to mind.

I wanted to scratch my head so much that it bled, to get the thoughts away but I can't. I closed my eyes, hoping for a way that I could comfort Dawn in every way I can.

The heat from the showers made the entire bathroom foggy. It felt good to have the warm water gushing the top of your head.

Suddenly I could feel a pair of hands embracing me tightly from the back. Her head pinned against my back.

Snow: Please don't leave me alone. Again. Please.

Mary: Oh my god... what happened?

Mary said as she saw the burnt wound and bruises all over. She looked at her, her ribcage might have been broken.

Mary: Poor child... tell me..who did this to you?

"King...and...he refused...to pay..."

Mary was furious.

Mary: Fucker King. I promise you are going to pay dearly for what you have done. You motherfucker. You don't treat us as your playtoys.

Mary said as she dialled a number that she had never called in a long time.

Mary: Call Seng down to my usual place. Now. Tell him its from Rosethorn.

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What Snow did shocked me.

Snow: Please don't leave me.

What was I supposed to do?

Snow wrapped her hands around me: I can do anything. Please. Just don't leave me.

I did not utter a word, all I could do is to let her finish her talk and settle down first.

Me: I'm at a loss for words Snow. I...

I turned off the tap and dried each other before going out.

Me: I'm not sure about my feelings Snow. Give me time.

Snow nodded as she knew she was far too emotional.

I looked at her.

Me: Could you tell me about Dawn please?

I know it was not a good time but this was the only way I can know more about Dawn.

Her face changed as she spoke.

Snow: Did you see the message?

Me: Message?

Snow: Then why did you go out?

Me: I went out to finish some work in my office for a while.

She suddenly calmed down. I could not be telling her I peeped at her phone.

Snow: Dawn's father is in the hospital for a while already. Her mother recently had an affair and had brought her son along with her. Leaving her dad with Dawn. Dawn's mum told his dad about her affair; about how rich he was and how he wants to marry her and he doesn't mind the son with him. She took the divorce papers, forcing her dad to sign it. They had flew off already, leaving the poor Dawn with debts and her dad's hospitalisation fees. Her dad suffered a stroke and his conditions were bad.

I stood frozen.

Was this true? Although it seems almost unreal where this only happens in movies.

Me: So she's alone now?

Snow: Yes. Now she's just living in Mary's place, a rented house. Her mother was evil, she sold the flat, took the money and left, she knew her husband would not be able to do anything in his state. I wanted Dawn to move in with me but my room is too small. I'm already living in a room with six occupied beds. And I can't squeeze in one more.

Me: I understand.

I didn't know Dawn was in such a bad shape now.

Should I do something about her?

Perhaps. I knew how.

But I know I need to get rid of the pest first. For good.

Snow: Max?

Me: yes Snow?

Snow: What are you thinking?

Me: Nothing much. I'm tired. Let's go back to sleep?

She smiled as she hugged me tightly, gave me a soft peck on my cheeks and slept.

Mary sat at the coffeeshop, smoking heavily as she waited. Sticks after sticks, and bottles of beer stood on the green round table. Mary was quite plump, with heavy makeup and curly hair. She must have been quite a looker at her younger days. She say on the chair, with one of her legs on the chair.

In a distance, a middle aged man wearing a white singlet and a pair of black pants, buckled with a huge belt came walking fast. He was heavily tattooed all over. Bald with a tattoo head, and there was a huge scar on the side of his face. Behind him were some men, dressed in a similar style.

He dragged a chair and then took a beer bottle and drank instantly.

Seng: Big sis? Call me for what? I'm busy you know?

Mary: Someone touched my girl and wants to go away for free. Even injuring her very badly.

Seng: Phua bye! Who is it? KNN tell me? CBB. Tell me I settle this for you? Limpeh sure get back money for you.

Mary: I don't want the money.

Seng: Wah piang eh. Then what you want? Siao is it? Money also don't want?

Mary: I want him to become trash.

Seng: Simi trash? Say clearly and simple le. Crude fellas like me don;t beat around the bush.

Mary gestured him to go nearer and whispered in his ears.

Seng: Orh. Say earlier la. Nabei. Say so long. I on. But what's in for me?

Mary: You motherfucker, who groomed you to where you are today. Now you ask me this stupid question.

Seng: Okie la okie la. But nabei leh, my men need eat ma. So how?

Mary: Usual commission.

Seng: Wah lau eh... this one ah... this job...

Mary: Or nothing.

Seng: K la k la. Give you face.

Mary smiled as they toasted a cup. She shared the information to him as Seng listened carefully.

King was satisfied with what he did and it felt addictive.

King: Wah so it feels so good to f**k for free. I'm going to do it again. It's satisfaction to the max!

He smiled as he laid on his bed and slept.

Me on the other hand was asking a friend who was a PI to assist me.

Seeing that Snow was asleep, I stretched and texted my friend.

Me: Hey Alex. I got a job for you can we meet tomorrow perhaps for lunch?

And I waited for his reply.

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somebody is gonna hurt real bad

[Coffeecans]

We left the hotel, doing nothing.

Snow acted as though nothing had happened as she said goodbye to me.

I headed back to my home, headed to my sculpture, took out the huge cloth and continued my own personal sculpture. This was already the third and I was happy with it.

I continued chiselling, driving the last portion of the masterpiece. They were all carefully lined up. I climbed up, to work on the details when suddenly there was a pain on my nose. And I started to get a nose bleed. I dropped the chisel and hammer as I held on my nose. Trying to stop the bleeding.

A honk was heard from outside as I held on my nose and walked out.

There was Alex. Tanned and well built, and his body was covered with 80% of tattoos.

Alex: Hey Max! Everything ok? Oh wait. Is that blood?

Me: It's fine. It will stop in a while. I get this all the time.

Alex: You sure? Want me to bring you to the doctor?

Me: It's fine. Let's talk in the living room.

Alex: How come you are still single since our army days? Hard to believe dude.

I smiled as I took a handkerchief and stopped the bleeding.

Alex: Alright? What's service do you need me for?

I discussed in detail of what I thought and felt.

Alex stood up, his face filled with rage.

He clenched his fist and i could hear the knuckle's sound.

Alex: Tell me about his hangouts. Bastards like these deserve to be taught a big lesson. And hey someone found his love eh?

Alex raised his eyebrows continuously as he nudged my shoulders.

I blushed as he said.

Alex: Ok ok don't disturb you. I go design a plan for you. Leave this to me. Meanwhile you do your best yeah?

Our fist touched each others as we said goodbye.

I took a rest and thought it would be a good time to stop first.

I went to my sketchbook as I wrote my day's journal.

And perhaps it would be a good time to go to the hospital to visit Dawn.

Secretly.

I dressed myself and left for the hospital, grabbing a bouquet of flowers from the ground floor. And headed up.

There was no sign of Dawn there as I walked into the ward. A 6 bedder, I could memorise where she was as I walked over.

She was not there. But the one who laid there was a thin and frail man, with tubes all over his body. He turned his head slowly, with difficulty before he looked at me.

I looked at him and the words slipped out of my mouth.

Me: Are you Dawn's father?

He looked at me and tears began to fall as he nodded weakly. He tried to speak slowly.

Dawn's dad: Youuu areee?

Me: Just a friend uncle. You can call me Max. How are you feeling today?

Her dad shook his head.

DD: I'mmmmm bürden... Dawn.... no money.... me... useless...

Me: Don't say that uncle. She loves you. You meant the world to her.

DD: ... I...want... die...

Me: No you won't uncle... I will make sure of that...

I did not know why but I held his hand and assured him of that.

Me: If it's about money. Don't worry about it.

He gave me a puzzled look as he shook his head.

DD: Useless... old....

Out of curiosity, I saw a nurse going round for inspection. I raised my hands as she walked towards my direction.

Me: Can I talk to you a bit?

The nurse nodded as we went out to talk.

Me: How is the condition of uncle?

Nurse: How are you related to him?

Me: I'm his daughter's boyfriend.

Nurse: Are you sure?

Me: Yes. Cause we just started.

Nurse: I see. What do you want to know about him?

Me: About his condition and how he can be treated.

Nurse sighs: Uncle needs to go for a major operation. He has been delaying it. It's not looking good. He kept saying he's a burden. But I know. Poor daughter had to work for his bills.

Me: Can I pay for his bills? But could you do me a favour?

She looked at me with a look: Are you sure? It's not cheap.

Me: Can you tell that there is a donor for his operation? I don't want Dawn to know it's from me.

She hesitated for a while.

Nurse: Come with me.

We settled on the bill as I cleared everything.

Soon she called Dawn to come to the hospital saying that it's a piece of good news.

I thanked her and probably asked her for another favour.

Me: Would I dress up as a male nurse too? So she can't identify me. And perhaps I can convince her to go ahead and pick a good time for the operation.

She was hesitant for a while as she went to discuss with the seniors. Upon hearing what I did, they turned and smiled at me, giving me a good thumbs up sign.

Dawn ran into the office, panicking.

I could finally see her, and I was fully wearing the uniform, with my mouth covered and wearing the cap.

Dawn: Is it about my father? How is he? How is he?

I love seeing her soft side, her feminine side. This was the real her.

The nurse nudged me, making me wake up from my dream.

Nurse: Your dad is able to go for the surgery now. There was a donor who helped with the bills. Here, look at this.

She showed Dawn the bill and Dawn could not believe her eyes. She immediately broke down. Her lips trembling as she could not control her body. She shivered and she tried her best to speak.

Dawn: Who is he? Please tell me....

Nurse: I can't Miss. It's confidential.

I could see her face turn to relief.

I cut in the conversation.

Me: Ahem! I think priority is to get your dad to go for the operation without delay.

Dawn looked at me and nodded weakly.

They set the date for the operation and I walked away.

From the encounter just now, perhaps I can start on the fourth sculpture now. I was eager to sketch out what I saw.

Dawn ran to her dad.

Dawn: Daddy! You can go for the operation! That's good news!

Her dad cried: Your... boy..friend... paid... good.... mannn..

Dawn: Boyfriend? Who?

She looked around. I hid in a corner, looking at them happily.

Dawn held his father's hands as they talked to each other.

Suddenly Dawn recalled the nurse's voice and built.

Dawn: Can it be?

I smiled and left. Suddenly there was a pain on my chest. And i coughed.

There.

Was blood again.

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It was becoming more frequent.

Perhaps I was getting too heaty?

Dawn dialled Mary's number.

Dawn: Hi mama, did that Max guy look for you before?

Mary: He did. But I was declined talking to him. He asked about you.

Dawn: What happened after you declined him?

Mary: Not too sure, but I think he took Snow out.

Dawn: Sure thanks.

Mary: Did anything happen?

Dawn: Nope. Nothing. I need to take a few days off mama. My dad is getting the operation.

Mary: It's great child! You managed to get the money?

Dawn: Someone paid for it. And I think it's him.

I took a rest at home. Exhausted but happy.

Now all's that is left is Dawn's contract.

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King was the same. His dad had given up on him completely. He showed no sign of giving a damn. He still spent like the old days, using verbal credit. Soon he had made a lot of enemies. And his debt was piling sky high. He borrowed from loan sharks, one after another.

Until the neighbours could not put up with his nonsense. They called the police and they could do nothing.

His dad kept apologising to them but he knew it's going to be soon before they would be asked to leave.

His dad had to work extra hard to foot his son's debts. But soon his body was giving way. He could feel his body growing weaker. He tried to tell his son but King would just ignore him, instead he would ask him for even more money.

King has picked up another habit.

Abusing ladies and molesting.

He was getting bolder and bolder.

He liked the kick of attacking woman, and seeing their unexpected expressions.

One after another.

He liked the feeling of triumph.

And then he saw another target.

He rubbed his hands. Hid in the shadows. Licked his lips.

And stared hungrily.

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I spent most of my time visiting the hospital, seeing Dawn's father, being there and lending him a listening ear.

He told me stories about Dawn, where we both laughed. His health was getting better, and now he was living in an A ward.

I knew of the times that Dawn would be here, so I could avoid her. I did not want her to know about me.

Perhaps today was a special one for me and I would like to go to the ktv, I would like to book Dawn for the night.

I said goodbye to Dawn's father as I left.

I was there early as I saw Mary, and asked if I could bring Dawn out.

Surprisingly she agreed instantly. And she appeared happy too.

Weird, I thought.

I was ushered to the room and Dawn came in, wearing a low cut black dress, her hair tied up. She wore no make up and her Kenzo rose perfume smelled really good.

Dawn: Hi.

Me: Hi.

I practically blanked out, seeing her in real person.

She liked the attention now.

Dawn: How long are you going to sit there and look at me? Whole night?

Her words woke me as I scratched my head.

Me: Sorry. sorry.

Dawn: Any songs you would like to sing?

Me: Er...

Dawn: Let me sing a song for you?

Me: ok.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vZHG5ql9oKE

There she sang this song.

She sat closer to me.

"想逃离你布下的陷阱 却陷入了另一个困境 我没有决定输赢的勇气 也没有逃脱的幸运 我像是一颗棋 进退任由你决定 我不是你眼中唯一将领 却是不起眼的小兵"

She sobbed.

She stopped.

Looked at me.

She placed her palms on my mouth.

Dawn: Say you love me.

I did as I was told.

Dawn: It's you isn't it? Why? Why?

It was like she dropped all her defences. She dropped the mike and cried in my arms. Both her palms holding my shirt tightly.

Dawn: eeeeerrrr... awwwwww.... ahhhhhhhhhhh!

She cried as the music played.

The room went silent and dark.

She leaned over and kissed me, her actions quick and cold.

I stopped her.

Me: I'm not here because I want you to repay me with these actions Dawn. You must have been mistaken. Yes I was the one. But I need not go to this level.

Dawn was quick to react: Then what do you want? Me? To screw me?

Me: No.

Dawn: Then why? Why are you here?

Me: To see you. I want to see you happy.

Dawn: What is happiness?

Me: When I saw your delicate smile in the hospital. I want to see you like that.

Dawn: How? How can I? You don't know who am I and what am I! NOW TELL ME WHY ARE YOU HERE!

Me: It's my birthday. I only wanted your company. I wanted to see you smile and not work so hard. Drinking and smoking is bad for you.

Dawn: You think I want this life? You think...

I didn't know what went over me but I hugged her tight.

Me: You've got me Dawn. You have me.

She shivered.

I could feel her body shaking.

She did not push me away but she lightly tapped me.

Dawn: you don't know my history and my background...

Me: You don't know mine too...

Dawn: No... Max. I don't deserve you. You are naive and good hearted. I am nothing but worthless. Please.

Max: Quit this job. I can support you.

Dawn: You don't even know me.

I scrolled the song list as I pressed on.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=T1nWff6zrbI&list=PLS5ZtwqA-llkl7OQkIS_J64bJNq7Du4bT&index=29

I knew I sounded awful but seeing that smile on her face meant so much more.

Then.

I could feel my nose heating up.

I swallowed my saliva.

Not now please. I begged myself. Not now.

I pushed Dawn further as I took out my handkerchief.

There was blood again. Now it's becoming more and more frequent.

Dawn: You alright?

I gestured for her to stay where she was as I went to the toilet.

I saw Snow outside the toilet and she was shocked.

My handkerchief was all dyed red.

Now there was really something wrong. Something deadly wrong.

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King pounced out, pinning her to the dark ground.

She was shocked as he roamed his hands all over her breasts, tearing off the buttons with a single hand, revealing her black laced bra, her melons were clamped nicely as he buried his face in between, smelling the sweet aroma of her sweat. She struggled but King's strength was far too strong for her.

He pushed up her bra, revealing a pair of C cups with huge eraser nipples, he savoured them whole hungrily. She struggled, then revealed her arm with the cigarette burn. This excited him even more.

King: So it's you!

He ripped her clothes, and laughed while slapping her face violently.

His hands went underneath her skirt, and forced his fingers roughly, causing pain. She screamed but he covered her mouth with her own panty.

He unzipped himself and she watched in horror, seeing his engulfed rod. She struggled, swing sideways, with her legs kicking wildly. He forced opened her legs and in one thrust, he penetrated her.

She screamed in pain as he let out the wild beast in him, slapping her face as he liked.

She was still trying to break free, trying to defend herself.

Her hands reached, hoping to find anything she could.

She could not see properly in the dark and the moment she could grab something, she took hold of an object.

King bent down to kiss her, happily shouting at her.

She did not know as she swung the flat object at his face, slid through his eyes and the object flew of with her impact.

King loosened his grip and she broke free, gathering her any garment she had left and ran.

King shrieked in pain as he gave chase. His vision turning red.

King: Slut! Don't you run you fucking bitch!

She screamed and ran.

King suddenly tripped on the rock and what hit him rendered him unconscious as he fell down a slope.

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Me: It's nothing Snow. Just maybe I'm a little heaty.

Snow: It's not. Look at you.

Me: I'm really fine.

Snow: But...

Me: I'M FINE!

I shouted at her. The people turned their heads, seeing what was happening. Dawn came out from the room. Turned towards my direction.

Snow was taken aback by my actions as she cried.

Dawn stood there.

Because she saw the drips of blood on the floor, leading to where I was standing.

She walked nearer.

My nose was still bleeding.

Dawn: Are you alright? What's wrong?

Me: I'm fine, Dawn. Perhaps could we go out for some fresh air?

She nodded as she held my arms, helping me walk out.

Snow gazed at us. And there was that tinge of jealousy.

We went to the top of Mount Emily.

Seeing the night scene was rejuvenating.

Dawn crossed her arms on mine as she leaned her head towards me.

Dawn: Thanks Max. I really don't know how to thank you.

Me: You don't have to, Dawn. Really.

We kept the silence for an hour, enjoying her company. It felt comfortable to be with her.

The smell of her hair, her feminine character, her soft breasts.

I pictured them in my thoughts and was determined to finish my fourth piece.

Me: Have you seen someone sculpting stones?

Dawn shook her head.

Me: Maybe I can show you how a sculptor works?

She nodded her head excitedly.

Me: Dawn?

She turned her head, suddenly shocked by my formal voice.

Dawn: Yes?

Me: Quit your job. Let me take care of you.

Dawn cupped her hands on her lips.

Dawn: You don't even know me, but why?

Me: I'm not sure. But I knew you were meant for me. I know I'm not that good looking nor am I very rich but I just want you to be happy. I love to see you smile.

Dawn: But...

Me: Don't worry about your dad. His bills are paid for.

Dawn: But... I don't have a home. If I stop working I can't pay the rent...

Me: If you trust me, I will take care of everything.

Dawn: Give me some time Max. This is happening all too quickly.

Me: Sure. I'll give you a job offer. Would you be my PA?

Dawn: PA?

Me: Personal assistant. Taking care of my businesses.

Dawn: I'm not really educated.

Me: It's fine. It's quite easy to grasp.

She could not believe my words.

Me: Well, let's go to my rented office then. I have a sculpture that needs to be finished.

She nodded as I held her hand.

And there was no rejection.

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more to come pls :)

[Coffeecans]

I asked the uncle to head for the hospital instead. Perhaps I can see the smile of Dawn before I bring her to my place.

She was surprised but she just kept quiet, she seem to understand my intention. This time she clasped my hands tightly.

Me: Uncle, look who's here?

Dawn's father was very happy to see us. And he was saying nonstop about us having the couple look and stuff. He was getting better and his voice seemed to get stronger too.

DD: When can I be discharged?

Me: We will have to check with the doctors uncle. But you are looking great!

Dawn: Yes dad. You are looking good!

We spent about an hour as I asked Dawn.

Me: Would you like to go to my office or you want to rest?

Dawn: I'll go with you. You've booked me the whole night anyway.

I whispered back: If I can, I would like to book you for life.

She pinched me and I tickled her back. It seemed as though we had known each other for the longest time.

We waved goodbye to her dad as we left. He was smiling happily.

We got on the cab, towards my house (rented office to her).

Dawn gasped when she saw my house.

Dawn: Oh my god. You sure this is an office?

Me: Yeap. I sort of camp here too.

Dawn: Must be expensive.

Me: I'm lucky. This house belongs to my friend an he rents it to me at a discounted price.

She took a good look at the entire house, with a lush garden in it. There was where I work. There were alot of sculptures covered in huge canvas, to prevent disturbance.

Dawn: That's a lot of sculptures you have there.

Me: Really? Yeah but I still need an assistant to help me in logistics. That would be you. Interested? I can pay you $4000 monthly. How's that?

Dawn: Are you sure?

Me: I'm very sure Dawn.

Dawn nodded silently.

Dawn: But I don't know about much.

Me: It's easy. You will get the hang easily. Leave it to me. Give me some time to draft the appointment letter. But for now you can quit your job.

Dawn: This is the best thing that happened in my life Max.

Me: I'm sure of it.

Dawn: You big egoist!

We laughed.

I brought her to the sculpture and taught her about the tools I used. She was quick and soon she knew which are the tools that I need.

She saw me continuing my sculpture with awe.

It was heaven to see her so happy. But deep in me, I knew I had to go for a checkup and the answer is not going to be happy. But there was another thing I need to do. I had to pretend that I was not that rich, for Dawn would surely get stressed.

I had to buy a flat. A 3 roomed one.

With the plans in my head, I was ready to get it all done. Within this week. And perhaps have a meeting with my lawyer too.

King laid unconsciously on the ground with blood all over. His face and all around. It took him a long time to regain consciousness.

He was lucky that there was a passerby who saw him unconscious and called for an ambulance the next morning.

He woke up.

And he isn't pleased at all.

His entire view was all dark.

And he felt an unbearable pain in his crotch.

He had lost his sight.

And his precious.

*He fell down the slope, where his head hit a boulder rendering him unconscious as he continued to fall. He rolled towards a broken glass bottle where it inflicted a huge cut in his privates. He was bleeding profusely and there was lack of oxygen running through. By the time he was rushed to the hospital, they had to remove it to save his life. Now he had to depend on a tube for his urination.*

King: What the fuck! Where am I? Why is it so dark!

He was throwing his tantrum in the hospital and he was living in a C class.

King: Why is it so noisy and smelly in here?

King's dad: Hush son, please.

King: Hush what hush? You motherfucker.

KD: You are in the hospital.

King: For what! Can you please switch in the bloody light! I can't see a damn thing!

King's dad shook his head.

KD: You can't son. Your eyes has been damaged so badly it's beyond regaining it.

King: Fuck you! What are you talking about? Then give me your eyes you useless old man.

King's dad was disappointed with his son, he rose and then turned around.

KD: What have I done to deserve this?

He placed his palm on his face as he cried.

King was still there, throwing vulgarities.

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Nice update. :)

[Travelsta]

Hi, anyone have idea what is that lotion/gel used in most porn? they can pour all over their body and even oral with that lotion/gel on..:confused: Thanks a million in advance:)

[Coffeecans]

I went over to Dawn's side and placed the blanket over her. She was sound asleep with that smile.

I carefully kept my things, and went for a shower.

The meeting with my lawyer was at 10am.

I left a note to Dawn to wait for me in the house. There were food on the table and the fridge. If she had to go, there were the keys on the table.

I was happy to meet the lawyer who was one of my best friends, we chatted and he helped me draft a letter, asking if this was a right decision.

I nodded and we parted goodbyes.

Next appointment, the property agent. We scouted and combed the area before I confirmed my flat. Paid for it in full when the agent was shocked. The paperwork was all done. Next thing is just waiting to get the keys from the owner.

The next appointment.

And the one I dreaded most.

A visit to the doctor.

I didn't know why but my heart was thumping wildly.

But irregardless of it, I had the right to know what is happening to my body.

Yup. They collected samples from my body, and the doctor asked me so many questions that I nearly wanted to just leave. Now I just have to wait for the results. They would call me if anything.

I went back and drafted the employment letter, stating the t&cs.

Took me some time but at least everything was coming together.

I took my phone and texted Dawn.

Me: Your employment letter is ready Dawn. Can you come down to sign it?

It did not take minutes. She replied in mere seconds.

Dawn: Yes boss.

She was here very fast.

Today she wore a white long sleeved shirt with gray pants and red heels. Her hair bun up, giving her the OL look. Sexy and demure. I could not take my eyes off her.

Dawn: Ahem.

I stood up straight.

Me: Yes Dawn, here's the contract... have a look.

She bent down, trying to read.

Perhaps it was deliberate.

I saw that pink lingerie which held her soft melons, with that added outline of laces, and in the middle of the bra was a ribbon with a pearl on it. I swore I would like to squish my face there and inhale all that fragrance inside me. She was reading and her slight movements caused her jellies to jiggle, sending that impulse in my mid section.

Dawn: I'm tired of reading. Where do I sign?

I sat back, pointing to her where to sign.

Dawn: Why are there so many sheets?

Me: It's just official paperwork Dawn. Don't worry.

She nodded as she signed off.

Dawn: So what now BOSS?

She teased me.

Me: Nothing at the moment. Perhaps either you stay here or you are welcome to leave.

Dawn: I'll stay. Perhaps you can teach me something about that sculpting?

Me: Nah. It's very tiring. You'll get cuts all over.

Dawn: Am not afraid.

Me: You said it.

Dawn nodded.

Me: Alright. Here we go.

I continued on the sculpture, teaching her the basics. Surprisingly she was able to pull it off, and she was really talented at it.

She paused.

Dawn: Em..

Me: Yes?

Dawn: I think the sculpture looks familiar?

Me: Familiar?

I tried to divert her attention.

Dawn: Why do I feel it's like me? Look at the details.

Me: You must be dreaming. It's just a sculpture.

Dawn: You sure?

She said as she accidentally cut her finger.

Dawn: Ouch.

She said as she dropped the chisel.

I quickly went to the first aid kit and took care of her cut. Luckily it was just a scratch.

Me: See? I told you.

She looked at my arms that was full of cuts. Her gaze now reached up as she looked deep in me.

Time stood still. We looked at each other. And we came closer to each other, feeling each other's breathing. My heart was racing.

Our lips touched for the first time.

Softness.

Wet.

Were the words to describe.

Our lips locked as we buried each other in our embrace.

I swallowed her saliva as her tongue reached for mine.

This was a time which I hope would last forever.

Snow: Mama? Dawn is not working today? Have not seen her. Is she unwell today?

Mary: No Snow. I got a message from her. She has found a job and would quit as a ktv hostess. For good.

Snow: Wow. Lucky her.

She said as she turned around. Smashing the cup that was beside her.

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King did not know how severe his condition was.

He continued to create a big scene, cursing and swearing vulgarities, becoming a nuisance to the patients.

The nurses who went over was sexually molested, he could not keep his hands to himself. They ran off and told their superiors of his actions.

His dad was called but it was futile talking to his son.

King did not believe that this was happening to him.

He could not accept the truth that his sight and manhood was gone.

Soon no one in the hospital could stand him and they distanced themselves, unless they are dressing his wounds. His hands would be tied to the bed, making sure he can't do any silly tricks.

A few weeks passed and soon he was starting to cope with it. But he was the same as usual, crude as ever.

It was finally time that he could be discharged from hospital.

Dawn and her father had moved in to my 3 room flat that I said was my actual home. I had told them that I spent most of my time in the office so they can live in peace. Furthermore, there was a maid to take care of their needs.

Dawn was an efficient assistant, and she could get things done fast.


Through her, I was able to complete many pieces of art for auction and exhibitions.

Snow on the other hand, kept waiting. Until a day she would see me visit the ktv again.

It was my appointment again.

The doctor had come to my place.

Not a good sign.

I told Dawn she could take the day off to spend with her dad. She nodded happily.

She waved goodbye to my with that angelic smile.

And I did the same.

The doctor sat down with a frown on his face.

Doctor: You are not going to like what I'm about to tell you Max.

With that, Dawn's eyelid twitched. What was that sense of uneasiness?

She wasn't always the superstitious kind, but she thought it might be a good time to go and pray for a lot. At the famous Guanyin Temple. The divine lot might reveal many, she thought.

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nice continuation :)

[B-free]

Great story, Hoping that Max can saved Snow also later in the story

[Coffeecans]

Dawn knelt and wished for a divine lot.

She had asked about me.

It took her quite sometime before a lot fell.

She asked if it was the lot she was asking for and the crescents said yes.

LOT 24.
"Your home is broken up by disputes without a cause. Like withered bloosms drifting on a bottomless ocean. Grace will hardly aid an idot or fool. a heap of troubles is all that remains."

In this scene, a fool is trapped and can find no way out. In such a situation, you can do nothing but put up with your difficulties. Tolerance can work miracles. Breathe no gossip and spread no scandal, look after everything carefully. Be as hard working, honest and friendly as you can. In this way, you may keep yourself out of disaster. Both you and your family will be in danger. Business cannot be done nor money earned. Prospects for matrimony are not promising, so parties concerned have to wait. Pregnancy is only possible through prayer. Grains, silkworms and domestic animals will all encounter disease or plague or be injured in other ways. Visitors will be delayed, and the missing cannot be found. Things lost are very difficult to find. You will lose lawsuits. It is a good year for migration. The sick person is in danger, so quickly pray for god’s mercy. Misfortune will affect your ancestral graves.


There was just something here that worried her.

Just what was that uncertainty?

I walked along the streets like how a man had lost his soul. My mind was in a total blank. How could this be true? How?

How was I to break this to Dawn?

I walked on, ignoring the surroundings. It was as though the world meant nothing to me.

Until a deafening honk was heard.

Suddenly someone pulled me back.

The driver pushed out his middle finger as he drove.

It was a familiar voice.

Snow.

Snow: What are you doing?

I rolled my eyes to my right, catch a glimpse of her as my nose bled again.

Snow: Max! Are you alright?

Without saying anything, I blacked out.

Now King was slowly resigned to his fate.

He can't see nor have sex. And it was driving him real mad.

His dad was not around most of the time due to his work. King had shut himself in the room.

Spoilt as he may be, his ability to adapt was fast. Soon he could navigate around his flat. he knew where the windows and doors were. And he could walk away with ease.

He kept laughing to himself and saying the word: Karma... karma...

He laughed and could't stop.

He was practically dancing in the kitchen like a ballerina.

His dad had shut the windows, preventing him from trying to commit suicide.

He turned and swung his arms.

The utensils fell to the ground but he didn't give a damn.

It was when he hit something.

And he ignored it again, dancing in his own world, knocking everything down.

Dawn was worried as she took the divine lot and asked the old lady who had a small table right outside.

She shook her head as she told her to be prepared.

The fear in Dawn surfaced more.

It took me a while to regain my consciousness and I saw Snow sobbing at the corner.

I tried to stand up slowly.

Me: Snow? Where am I?

Snow: The hotel where I first met you.

Me: How?

Snow: I have my means Max. Why did you lie to me? Heaty?

Me: How did you know?

Snow: I could have guessed it Max.

Me: It's nothing serious Snow. Please. Don't be like this. I need to go back.

Snow: You are not going back until you tell me everything!

Me: I am leaving.

Snow stretched out her arms towards the door and forbid me to open the door.

I brushed her aside, and opened the door.

Dawn stood outside.

Shocked.

I paused.

Dawn took a look inside and there was Snow, getting dressed up.

Dawn: What are you both doing?

Me: It's not what you think Dawn.

Dawn turned in tears and ran. I gave chase.

Snow arched her lips sideways as she looked to the side.

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Dawn ran.

But given the condition that I was in, I was not able to catch up.

I ended up with a loud thud.

Her steps stopped. And she turned around.

I collapsed on the floor with blood around. She came to me and shook me.

Dawn: Max? Max?

I could hear her voice. But my body just won't react. My eyes were running wildly. All I could manage is touch her on her face, saying "Forgive me" before I blanked out again.

Snow looked at herself in the mirror, thinking that her plot had worked. It was her who told Dawn to visit her at the hotel. She texted her. Snow paid some guys to help carry me to the room. Her timing was perfect.

Snow: Let's see if Dawn can forgive you. You are mine Max. You are mine. I met you first. I touched you first.

She walked out with a sense of triumph, trying to look at the heartbroken Dawn.

But never did she expect to see me unconscious on the passageway while Dawn was calling for help. The ambulance came and Dawn followed me to the hospital.

Snow had never expected it to turn out so drastically.

Dawn held on to my hand, asking me to respond to her. She was trying to say alot of things to me.

Dawn: I have so much to tell you Max. Please...

A sprinkle of tears came on my left arm. A trinkle on my right. Then it started falling. I could feel her but my body would not react. All I could muster myself was smile.

Snow turned white. She immediately ran. Hailed a cab to tail the ambulance.

King's dad got his salary as he bought King's favourite food. His dim sum.

He carried it up and sniffed, letting it's aroma flood his nostrils.

He lifted his head.

And there was a huge explosion.

He saw a huge gust of black smoke and orange rage. A man flew out of the window pane, as if being blown up. He was in flames. He shrieked and waved his arms frantically. Then he fell.

King's dad counted the levels. And he was getting really worried.

KD: 1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8

8.

8th storey.

8th storey.

1,2,3,4.

4th unit.

4th.

4th.

4TH!

Before he could react, the man fell in front of him. Charred and broken.

King.

He dropped the bag containing his favourite food.

And he could not believe his eyes.

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I was rushed into the A&E.

Dawn could not stop crying. And the imagery of the old lady who shook her head was coming into view. She clasped her hands together, praying hard.

Dawn: Let no harm come to you dear. Please. Though I have not told you, you should have known by now. I was moved by your every actions. The little things you did for me despite your average background. Please... god.. save him... I can't do without him. Please...

She closed her eyes as she chanted her prayers.

Snow hid herself as she pulled her hair.

Snow: Why? Why did this happen? Please... it's all my fault... let the bad come to me... why hurt an innocent man like Max? Please...

Snow stepped out, and walked towards Dawn.

Snow lowered her head.

Snow: It's my fault Dawn. He did not do anything to me. I was jealous. I wanted him. I could not take it that he was always thinking about you. I could not accept it. Even when I was totally naked or tried to seduce him, he would not yield to me. He fell in love with you the first time.

Dawn slapped her.

Dawn: Now you are happy? Happy?

She stared hard at her.

Dawn: He often spoke about you. About how good you were as a friend, as a sister. All because of your jealously. ALL BECAUSE OF YOU!

Snow covered her mouth as her vision started to blur.

She fell to her knees.

Snow: I... I didn't meant for this..to happen.. really....

Dawn's mascara had already smudged as she shook. She turned her head as she shook her head.

I was pushed out as Dawn ran to me. Snow could only look from a distance.

She did not dare take a step forward. She crossed her arms and wrapped it around herself as she looked at the floor and cried.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ScqAreuzMPE

我也不想這麼樣 起起伏伏　
反正每段關係都是孤獨
眼看感情變成一個包袱　
都怪我太渴望得到 你的保護

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[BoEngCom]

Nice story.

[Johnnykhan]

thanks TS. waiting eagerly for next installment.

[eeemen]

Waiting for the next updates bro kopi! Cheers, ....................

[weasely]

Support for one of the best writers in sbf!

[blacki3licious]

Read from first post to here continuously for 1+ hour!

Addictive.. Please continue..

[jnrwong]

Very touching ....

[Chij]

Love this story. Very descriptive, addictive, touching

[Coffeecans]

I did not know how long I was sleeping.

But I had a dream. A dream that I wished I would not wake up to.

I was smiling. And on the background there was this music which was playing. An old and classic song. There, I reached out my hand, dressed in a smart black suit and tie, with my hair gelled nicely. She was there, dressed in pure white, with laces on the ends, she was wearing a pair of custom designed diamond and pearl earrings. Her head veil revealed a happy and blissful side of her. I held her hand, as she placed her arms on my shoulders, we embraced each other and slowly danced, following the rhythm of the song.

Dawn held on to my hand, placing it near her face. She was staring at me, who was still unconscious.

Dawn hymned. She was lightly singing to me. Hoping her voice would reach me.

My hands were still cold.

思念是一種很玄的東西...

She cupped her hands on mine as she rubbed, sending warmth to my palms. Snow stood outside, watching helplessly.

恨不能立即　朝你狂奔去....

Dawn held my hands to her face.

Dawn: wake up dear....

大聲的告訴你....願意為你　我願意為你...

Dawn lowered her head. Sniffing.

The crystal droplets enlarged as they fell.

Splashing on my wrists.

就算多一秒　停留在你懷裡　失去世界也不可惜...

Dawn continued to hymn.

She could not bear to stare at me. She tried to look elsewhere. Up. Down.

And she could not control it.

She tucked her lips.

Until she could not hold it anymore.

She opened her arms, embraced me tightly. Buried her head on my chest, I could feel her hot breath on me.

It took her a while to compose herself as she finished the song.

只要你真心　拿愛與我回應

什麼都願意　什麼都願意　為你

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uyNIlRNiVR4

She wept.

Until she fell asleep.

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[Johnnykhan]

Nice touching song she got there :)

[AhBoy67]

Really great story...like it very much. :)

[Coffeecans]

King's rented flat was burnt. Everything in there was incinerated. Nothing was left. The residents was shouting beforehand telling King to open the door but King could not hear. He had turned on the radio at max volume.

The gas was fast engulfing the room. Soon King could smell it. He panicked.

He cried for help but the radio was too loud. His voice were drowned out.

He moved his hands frantically until he reached the stove. And he thought it would be a good idea to turn the knob. He had not touched a stove all his life. It was his dad who does the cooking.

He pressed the other knob.

Pushed it down.

Turned anticlockwise.

And a tick.

The spark caused the air of gas to catch fire. He instantly caught fire. He was engulfed in flames as he tried to swing it off, the fire picked up. He was running towards the window aimlessly when he kicked the gas cylinder. There was another reserve as it caught fire. It exploded with a huge impact, throwing King out of the window and then the other exploded again.

King struggled but he was no match for the fire.

Before he could do anything he knew it was all over for him.

King's dad was dumbstruck.

He knew in himself that his son was a bastard. A baddie spoilt and rotten to the core. But he was after all his son and seeing him in this state was something he could not accept. He collapsed.

King was on the papers the next day, about the fire that broke out. His face was printed.

Mary picked up the papers and there was a grin on her face.

Mary: Heaven has eyes.

His victims were all saying the same thing.

The last victim cursed King even when he is dead: Burn in hell you bastard.

But the saddest thing about the news was.

Father committed suicide after seeing burnt corpse of son.

Mary shook her head in pity.

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Snow left the hospital.

Her head bent down, saddened by her own childish behaviour.

One that left me in hospital.

She could not stop crying.

She did not know where to go but to Mary.

She requested for Mary to let her have the ktv room to herself.

Mary could not bear to see her sad self as she nodded.

Snow closed the door as she pressed on the same song, filling the entire playlist with the same song.

She closed her eyes as she recalled the first time she met me.

It was her who wiped the blood off me.

She took the microphone and sang, letting her memories of me flood her visions.

It was a duet but she sang alone.

聽聽那時我們的愛情
有時會突然忘了

She continued.

She could recall the first time she asked me to book her for the night.

再唱不出那樣的歌曲
聽到都會紅著臉躲避

But I would only tell her where were we going.

所以一切都是幸福的模样...

She would jump. Irritated by how a blockhead I was.

因为爱情怎么会有沧桑

She shook her head and tried to smile, but it could not stop her tears.

再唱不出那样的歌曲 听到都会红着脸躲避 虽然会经常忘了

我依然爱着你

因为爱情不会轻易悲伤

所以一切都是幸福的模样

She remembered how he would find her.

To dig for information about Dawn.

And how she would extort him.

因为爱情简单的生长

依然随时可以为你疯狂

因为爱情怎么会有沧桑

Her first hotel stay.

Her first tub experience.

因为爱情在那个地方

依然还有人在那里游荡

Her first time watching the beautiful magic hour with me.

Her first room service.

She remembered how we nearly kissed before we were interrupted by the doorbell.

She looked at the lyrics as she tried her best to finish.

给你一张过去的CD 听听那时我们的爱情

有时会突然忘了

我还在爱着你...

The grip on the microphone became loose as it fell slowly to the ground.

She remembered how I was determined to get rid of King.

For both her sake and Dawn's.

She wrapped herself with her arms.

She was cold.

But there was no one there to comfort her.

She would have wished the blockhead to be there for her.

With that, she broke down.

Mary could hear her cries from outside.

Mary could not help but shook her head as she knew how Snow felt about me.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VdwAkhNdZi8

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I was discharged from the hospital, where I had requested to go back to my house, 'workplace' to Dawn. She was hesitant but finally agreed.

Dawn: Why are you so insistent on your work?

Me: There is just one last piece I need to complete and it means a lot to me.

Dawn: But your condition...

Me: I'm fine dear. I'm sorry that I had messed up...

Dawn: I know its a misunderstanding. Snow told me about it.

She wrapped her arms around me more tightly.

I whispered in her ears: I heard what you said.

She did not respond but place her head on my shoulders. I could smell hair's fragrance which made my day.

I sat down on my otherwise familiar sofa, catching a breather.

There were so much to do, and so little time left.

I went to my room, took out my laptop as I surfed across the internet.

Clicked the item I liked, and purchased it.

It promises fast delivery and I was anticipating it.

Dawn poured me a cup of warm water as she excused herself.

I took the carving tools and continued the work on my unfinished piece.

I had to fasten my pace.

For there was no time left.

Dawn took a while in the bathroom. But I was focused on finishing my piece.

I would need two more full days to finish this.

Two undisturbed days.

Without disturbance. Without Dawn.

I brushed off the shavings off and analysed the progress.

I wiped the sweat off my head.

There was this sweet smell of the shower foam, fresh and it had almost filled the entire room with it.

There stood Dawn.

Looking at me with the most feminine stare.

Her smile could kill.

And.

She was only wrapped in a towel.

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I nearly dropped my chisel.

Looking at Dawn, who was wrapped with only a towel and nothing else.

She walked closer.

I stopped.

I gave her a stop there sign.

She paused.

I continued my chiselling.

She took another step.

I knew I was going to let my temptation get the better of me. But I had to control myself.

It would not be fair to her.

I tried my best to ignore her.

But she still took another step.

I stopped my work, turned around and I did not know what went over me.

My emotions seemed to get over me.

I threw my chisel down on the floor.

Me: I don't need your SYMPATHY!

Dawn was shocked by my reaction.

Me: Please. give me some time. Please. This sculpture is very important to me. I need to complete this very urgently and the timeline is very short. I need to concentrate.

Dawn wiped her tears and nodded. She went to my room and took one of my long sleeved shirt to wear.

I was relieved as I took a breather before I continued.

Deep in me I yearned so much for Dawn.

I wanted so much to unwrap her.

I wanted to see her.

I wanted to kiss her.

I wanted to grope her.

But would she just be like one in the fairy tales?

Did she act in impulse or was it true love? Or sympathy?

That was something I could not make up.

She fell asleep on the couch as she looked so angelic.

I smiled as I continued my sculpture.

Perhaps it will be done in two more days.

It has to be done.

Because it would be my final piece.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gOeFSgQEsMQ

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[ragz]

nice story bro.. awaiting your continuation.. :D

[Johnnykhan]

waiting for your next installment :)

[Coffeecans]

Snow had turned to drinking.

She had been joining the clients to drink, trying to drown away her sorrows through it. Even when she was taken advantage, she wouldn't care less. She just wanted to get dead drunk.

Every night, she would end up sleeping on the sofa. Scantily dressed and all her reaction would be smiling and asking Mary for more liquor.

Mary: Please Snow, you are hurting yourself.

Snow would smile at her.

Snow: More please. You can deduct from my pay. I need it.

Mary: Please Snow.

Snow: I will get it myself. She stood up and walked in a zigzag manner as she fell. She stood up again and tried to walk out.

Mary grabbed her hand.

Mary: Snow...

Snow suddenly collapsed on the floor. Her head bowed down.

She was almost like a jellyfish, strengthless, helpless.

Mary hugged her with tears in her eyes too.

Mary: My poor child.

Snow did not reject Mary's embrace.

She rested her head on Mary's shoulders.

Snow: It hurts Mary... It HURTS SO MUCH.... aaargghhhhhhh!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IXwt3Ysl9v0

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[Coffeecans]

Dawn was given a good two days break away from work.

I wanted her to spend time with his father, and at the same time I could concentrate on my work with nothing bothering me. I had told her unless I call her, she is not supposed to step in.

Puzzled she may seem, she agreed.

The doorbell rang as I answered.

Postman: Your parcel sir.

I quickly signed it and waved goodbye. Placing the parcel at a corner.

Now the sculpture was near to completion.

Just needed some touch ups.

I was grinning to myself.

A good piece.

Looking at the 4 covered pieces was a joy.

Now the item I ordered online was here. Time to clean up the place and prepare my exhibit.

I brushed the sweat off my forehead, smiling.

Did some cleanups on the floor, washing and watering the garden. Trimming the excess off the plants.

I unveiled the fabric off the sculpture as I began to decorate them.

Not a usual practice but it was something new that I have not tried.

Perfect.

Now it was time to type out the rationale.

Nah. Perhaps it'll be better off using a feather pen. For a more calligraphic and script-like styled words.

There was a total of four envelopes each sealed with the red wax that I had ordered online too.

I stared at my watch and stretched.

What a long day.

Went for a shower and went to bed.

There was no call or message from Dawn. Perhaps she did not want to disturb me.

I texted Dawn.

Me: Goodnight my dear.

It did not take long for her to reply: Goodnight dear. Love you.

She did not know how much the four words meant to me.

I smiled as I slept.

But I had a weird dream.

I was drowning.

And the water was not blue but blood red.

And I sank.

There was no sign of me struggling to get free.

And the last time I knew, my hands sank through the ripples.

I wanted to wake up from my dreams but my body could not react nor move.

It was when my phone rang which caused me to jump up.

The otherwise familiar number shone in darkness.

Snow.

She wept on the phone as I answered.

Snow: Help me please, Max. Help meeee...

With that, her phone went dead.

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[pleasurehobby]

nice story bro, upped your points!

[eeemen]

Going to be a sad ending story bro TS? Gotta Brace for it when it come eh? Cheers, ....................

[Johnnykhan]

sounds likes something sad is gonna happen. waiting for your next update TS.

[hunted]

Looks like its going to be korean serial type ending! Come on TS give us many twist. I want to be twisted...

[Coffeecans]

I arched my eyebrows. Not certain if I should respond to Snow's call.

Is it going to be another prank?

Should I be responding?

But she sounded real.

I let my naive side take over as I returned her call.

The number you called is not in use. Please try again later.

I tried 3 times and it was the same response.

Something is wrong.

But where was she?

Do I still follow my instincts?

I rushed down to Mary's ktv.

Mary was outside and she seemed like she was waiting for me.

For the first time, Mary ran to me.

Mary: Snow... she....

I ran into the room.

Snow was unconscious.

Her wrist was bleeding.

On the table were lots of bottles of wine, few broken.

The ambulance arrived as she was put into the stretcher.

I immediately texted Dawn.

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[Coffeecans]

Snow was rushed to the hospital and Mary was with her.

I waited for Dawn as we went together. Dawn was shocked by what she heard and we waited. Luckily for Snow, it was not fatal. She was able to be discharged tomorrow.

Snow looked at the side. She seemed as though she was somehow like a person without a soul. Mary talked to her but she did not seem to hear her at all.

She noticed a familiar walking pattern of mine and she turned her head. She smiled when she saw me but when she saw Dawn, her eyebrows arched downwards. She knew that it was impossible for Snow and me. She tried her best to smile at Dawn.

Dawn smiled at Snow as she stepped to a side.

Me: Are you alright Snow?

Snow stared at me. Her eyes yearning for my embrace.

I stroked her forehead and she nodded weakly.

Me: Please don't do this. You are hurting yourself and others too. There are people who care for you too.

The droplet was getting bigger and bigger and it reflected on the scene of both me and Snow in the conversation, as it trickled down the side of her eyes.

Snow was sniffing. And she could not control her tears.

She wept quietly but gave a smile to me.

She asked me to lower my head to her ears.

Snow: Do I mean anything to you?

I was thrown off by her question.

I could not answer her.

Me: I do not know, Snow.

It was like she had anticipated this answer.

Her hands moved to my face and she smiled.

Her hands were cold.

She spoke again faintly.

Snow: I'm sorry to make you go through all this.

Me: I was never angry with you Snow. Never.

She cried again, thanking me continuously.

Me: Promise me Snow.

She paused again, and looked at me with her tender eyes.

Me: Please don't do anything foolish. Live on. Live your life. Live your life for me.

I grabbed her hands and rubbed, letting the coldness of her palms go away.

Snow looked at me and nodded her head.

Me: Have a good rest Snow.

Mary went to her side as she held on to Snow's hand.

I went towards Dawn and we waved goodbye to Snow.

Dawn: Go and give her a goodnight kiss dear.

Me: But...

Dawn: Go. She needs it.

Me: Ok.

I went over and kissed Snow's forehead.

She was surprised but she liked the gesture.

She looked at me with a contented smile like how a kid got her candy.

I left the ward with Dawn.

After leaving the hospital, Dawn cling her arms around mine.

Dawn: I'm not letting you go dear.

Me: Me neither.

Dawn was happy as we walked.

Dawn: How is your sculpture?

Me: Thank god it's done already. Thank god.

Dawn: That's great! So...

Me: Yes?

I said with a frown on my face.

Dawn: you are not going back to your office are you?

Me: Why?

Dawn: You haven't been home for a long time dear.

It took me a while to get what Dawn was saying.

Yes she had always thought my house was a rented office and my real house is the 3 room flat.

Me: oh. I almost forgotten about it.

She slapped my arms.

She suddenly come to my front.

Dawn: Come home tonight. I missed you. I missed you so much. I don't want to always sleep alone...

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[Unknown83]

Bro Coffeecans, it's always good to read your story.. Keep it come and keep it up..
Cheers..

[kittymae]

Don't log in too often now, but can always count on a good serving of kopi whe. I do!! Keep the stories coming kopi-Kor!

[Coffeecans]

Me: Shall we check in a hotel? Just the two of us? I'm sorry for neglecting you.

Dawn: Hotel?

I nodded.

Unexpectedly what I got was a hard pinch on my arm.

Dawn: Hotel your head! You got a home. Why spend the unnecessary money? We need to save...

I was caught off by her remark.

Me: Save?

Another pinch came.

Dawn: We need to save for the future you blockhead. I went through the accounts. We are always quite marginal so we need to save for a rainy day. Having a big job doesn't mean you can splurge.

Me: Everything you say dear.

I did not expect this to come from her.

Compared to Snow who spends every single cent, Dawn was the opposite.

We took the public transport home, holding hands.

We did not exchange too many words but it seemed our hearts were connected.

It has been a while since I went to the flat I had bought for her.

She unlocked the door. And everything was well kept and maintained.

Me: Wow.

Dawn: Wow what?

Me: Everything's so clean and organised.

Dawn: Of course. You need to know who is taking care of it.

Me: How's your dad?

Dawn: He's good. He's in very good shape too.

Me: That's great.

Dawn came close to me, grabbed my hands and dragged me into the room.

The room was pink, and nicely decorated by her. On the shelfs were portraits of us in my office.

Me: Wow.

Dawn: These were our selfies. I developed them.

Me: You are amazing.

Dawn: You bet I am.

She pushed me backwards until I fell to the bed.

Dawn: I am going to make you mine tonight. All mine!

I looked with fear in my eyes.

Excited.

Yet sad.

Dawn used her heel to kick the door as it closed.

She jumped on the bed, pressing me down.

Immediately she planted her lips on mine, as we locked on like vacuum cups, exchanging each other's thoughts and fluids. I remembered when I first met her. How aggressive she was. And how she would look at me with a irritated look.

She too, tried to recall when we first met.

The aircon was not turned on, but the heat between us shot up. We could feel each other's body getting moist. We were still locked deep in our kiss. I turned and I was on top. I looked at Dawn, and the only light were the lamps outside.

I bent forward and kissed her cheeks. She closed her eyes as she tilted her head, signalling for me to move to her neck, down to her collarbone.

I sat up, and looked at her buttoned cotton tee.

My fingers started to go to the buttons as I released it slowly one by one. Her tee was soon opened, revealing a good pair of well cushioned soft pillows, set agains a pink pearled cover. Her arms were now clutched, feeling shy. But it enhanced her cleavage even more, making the entire scene so much more steamy.

There were droplets of sweat in between her breasts, I leaned towards it as I licked it up, savouring the divine dew from her body.

She was feeling aroused as a soft moan escaped her.

Dawn: Urrrr...

My tongue was circling around her cleavage, where my hand moved toward her strap, gently pulling one down.

Now I was slowly kneading her soft cushions, fingers trying to reach into her lingerie, trying to locating where her nipples were.

A soft brush against it.

Dawn: Arhhhh........

Another brush.

Dawn closed her lips and exhaled through her nostrils.

The pants were deeply arousing.

My tongue moved to her right upper chest as I pulled her lingerie down a little.

Down, little by little.

Until I saw a dark patch which sent the adrenalin rushing.

My other hand reached for the other strap as I pulled it down.

There.

There were the melons that I had wanted so much to see.

Now its in my full view.

I could feel myself taking a big gulp of breath as I swallowed my saliva.

Her breasts were perfect.

Dawn looked at me with shyness in her eyes.

She stretched out her hands as she said: I love you Max.

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I had almost choked on my saliva. Dawn was here. So close to me. And she was half naked.

Dawn sat up.

Dawn: Are you done looking?

I saw her breast jiggling.

She reached for my shirt as she unbuttoned and took it off, she too unbuckled my belt, sliding my pants down, leaving only my boxers. Of course Little Max was already all grown up one.

Dawn: Oooh. Someone's waking up.

She laid on the bed, waiting for me to take action.

I took off her blue 3/4 drawstring pants, revealing her matching pink panties.

My heart was thumping wildly now.

Where should I start? What should I do?

We kissed again, letting our desires control the night. Her soft lips and her tongue were now engaged, sending bolts of feelings towards each other.

My fingers was caressing her , pushing her hair behind, exposing her full shoulders.

I moved to my right, going down her neck, to her collar bone.

She feeling ticklish, yet was enjoying it.

It was wonderful, her body was like a canvas to my tongue. I brushed her chest, as I painted the calligraphic strokes of the poetic Shakespeare, writing it through, from the left to right, to the next line.

Dawn was shaking from the ticklish feeling.

Dawn: It's ticklish dear.

I continued to write.

I am too bold, 'tis not to me she speaks:
Two of the fairest stars in all the heaven,
Having some business, do entreat her eyes
To twinkle in their spheres till they return.
What if her eyes were there, they in her head?
The brightness of her cheek would shame those stars,
As daylight doth a lamp; her eyes in heaven
Would through the airy region stream so bright
That birds would sing and think it were not night.
See, how she leans her cheek upon her hand!
O, that I were a glove upon that hand,
That I might touch that cheek!

And then there were tears. From me.

For I knew already the ending.

Dawn: Are you crying Max?

I said nothing, but took a huge mouthful of her right nipple.

Dawn: hurrrrr.... hurrhhhhh....

I sucked.

And licked it upwards, making her nipple erect as I cupped her breast with the other hand.

Soft, delicate were the touch.

She was giving out moans that was making Little Max want to explode.

Her fingers were now searching for it.

And she was getting very wet.

Dawn: I want you... now... in me...

Me: But...

She pulled down her own panties and threw it in a corner.

Dawn: Take me now.. dear... I want... I want...

Her eyes now yearning for me.

She looked at me with her deep brown eyes, and brushed the tears off my eyes.

I took off my boxers.

And Little Max was the one who wanted to go wild.

Dawn stopped me for a while.

Dawn: Tell me about the words you wrote.

I spoke, as I could not control myself but broke out in a quiet breakdown.

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There I put it in slowly.

Dawn suddenly tensed up a little.

She stared at me, her shoulders shrugged a little.

I pushed in a little.

Her eyes closed.

Her lips parted.

And widened.

And her first slow pant.

Dawn: Eerrgghmmmmm

I took it out slowly, and rocked slowly, feeling her full luscious moist pink walls, engulfing my rod.

She was tight. And I pushed it in slowly.

I could see Dawn swallowing her saliva as she closed her eyes.

Her fingers were now roaming all over my upper body, before she placed it on my neck.

She looked at me.

Dawn: Deeper...

I pushed it in.

There were tears at the corner of her eyes.

Dawn: Pain... gently please dear...

I took it out as I tried pushing in slowly.

The bed was screeching but we did not pay attention to it.

Now I was fully in her. It felt really good.

Dawn's head was shaking a bit when she suddenly sprang up, pushed me to the bed and she rode on me, her tongue now wildly fighting with mine.

Her hands rested on my abs, as she rode, sending the sounds of our body claps to the walls. Her soft melons now bouncing with rhythm. She was riding hard, without any intervals in between.

Our bodies glistered in the night. I sat up and we hugged each other while riding on each other.

I could feel the gush of sperm through the veins.

Dawn: I'm coming dear...

She rode even faster.

Dawn clawed my back as she came.

Dawn: God... ahhhhh..... ahhhh...AHHH....

Her lower body was convulsing a little.

Then out came the streaks of sperm exploding out. She could feel my rod expanding and contracting.

She moaned as her embrace became harder.

Loads and loads Little Max shot.

I could feel Dawn contracting her love hole.

Me: Ahhh..... eeeerrrhh...

Dawn rested her hands on the bed as she laid down.

Her legs shaking.

I rested on her side, totally drained out like an emptied mummy.

My legs too were getting wobbly.

She rested her head on my shoulders as we embraced each other to sleep.

I looked at her for a whole night.

For I had wished I could have this moment forever.

In the middle of the night, Dawn turned.

Looked at me.

Her eyes had changed.

She asked me.

Dawn: There is something wrong isn't it?

Me: Nothing dear. Nothing.

Dawn: You are hiding something from me. I need to know.

Me: Really nothing dear. I'm hiding nothing.

She sat up.

Dawn: Screw you! Tell me what it was all about Max! I need to know!

I turned away from her.

Me: I don't know what you are talking about.

Dawn: Why are you lying to me? Why?

I grit my teeth.

Dawn: Please tell me what is going on?

I kept quiet.

It was then her words struck me like a chisel to my heart.

Dawn: Journeys end in lovers meeting,
Every wise man's son doth know.


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=74c8eQBzJB4

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[eeemen]

Wow, this is getting in deep , in thoughts and in feelings! Dreading the end ....... Cheers, ....................

[GorDJilla]

Well done TS! Waiting for more to come! =)

[Coffeecans]

What caught me was how could she knew what it was all about?

How could she knew the ending to this poem?

I was shattered all over. Even beyond what I had expected. I had thought she would not know. I thought I could get away with it.

My heart tightened.

Dawn: Something is wrong. Tell me. Tell me please dear.

I avoided that question.

Me: It's nothing dear. I'm tired. Can we go to sleep?

Dawn held on to my arms.

Dawn: Tell me dear. You are hiding something from me. I can sense it.

Me: You are over thinking. It's just I suddenly thought of the story about Romeo and Juliet. A tragic love story. I got emotional. It's almost like us. We been through alt to be together. But... how did you know the phrase?

She seemed a bit more relieved.

Dawn: Your dear likes to read. And am a romantic fan.

I hugged Dawn.

Me: Sorry to make you worry. I will make you some amendments.

Dawn: And what is that?

Me: Another round of hot sex?

Dawn slapped my arms as she smiled.

I wiped off the tears of her face.

Perhaps I would know what to do next.

I hugged Dawn and she dozed off soon after.

I took my phone and scrolled the internet.

It took me a while before I switched it off. And I smiled.

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I woke up early, kissed Dawn and left the house.

I do not look forward to it.

It was my checkup with the doctor.

As fear engulfed the deepest part of me, I stepped into his room.

He smiled at me as we shook hands.

But his smile soon changed.

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Snow was discharged from the hospital. Mary was there, helping her settle the procedures.

Mary: How are you feeling?

Snow smiled at her.

Snow: I will live on. For him.

Me: Are you sure doc?

Doc: Yes.

Me: Tell me you are kidding me.

Doc: I'm not.

I took my medical report.

And the whole world seemed to be grey.

I texted Dawn.

Me: Dear, can you pack your luggage? We are going for a three day escapade to Phuket. Meet me at the airport at 12pm.

Dawn: Wow! You sure?

Me: Yes dear. Can you pack mine too?

Dawn: Of course! Then how about your office?

Me: I've already set that the office would be closed.

Dawn: Thank you dear!

She was excited as she quickly packed. She had not went overseas before and was all ready to go.

I stared at the report and tore it to pieces.

There she was, dressed in simple blue jeans with a pink tee shirt.

Dawn: Dear!

She gave me a kiss as we checked in.

Dawn: When did you book it dear?

Me: Secret.

Dawn: Thanks dear, you are so sweet!

We hugged as we checked in and boarded the plane.

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[limesmile]

Camping for more bro!

[simifly]

Up 6 pints of beer for bro coffeecans.

Awaiting yr Phuket adventure...

[Coffeecans]

Dawn was jumping when we arrived in our villa in Phuket.

A luxury villa overlooking the tranquil water of Chalong Bay, she was excited over seeing the huge room.

Dawn: Wow wow wow!

She could not keep her excitement from bursting.

She jumped and hugged me while giving me small kisses on my cheek.

Dawn: It's so huge!

She said as she shouted an "I'm in love".

Her voice echoed the walls as she looked cheekily.

I tipped the bellboy who carried our luggages. For the first day, I was not planning to go anywhere. I only wanted to spend my whole trip just having the two of us.

While Dawn was busy checking out the rooms and the facilities, I took out the pack of medicine and gulped it down before I went to the balcony and took a deep breather.

How would this vacation turn out?

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There was a knock on Snow's door.

A man dressed in suit and tie greeted her.

Man: Snow?

He showed her his pass and they sat down.

Snow's expression changed.

Dawn jumped at me happily, but I lost my balance and we fell.

Dawn: Sorry dear, I can't contain my excitement… this is freaking awesome!

She was still jumping around the apartment so happily.

I smiled seeing her in this state.

There was a dripping feeling.

Oh no. Not that again.

My nose was bleeding again.

I quickly ran to the toilet and shut the door.

There were drips on the floor where I prayed Dawn would not see.

I raised my head, and stuffed the tissues to stop the bleeding.

Dawn: Dear? Are you there?

Me: Hmmmm

I could hear her hymning.

It took me a good fifteen minutes until the blood stopped.

I took another piece and attempted to clean up the mess out there.

Luckily Dawn did not notice the small spots on the floor.

She was standing on the balcony, wearing the bathroom, together with a one piece swimsuit.

Dawn turned around and smiled at me.

Seriously I was quite stunned by her.

Do girls still wear one piece swimsuit nowadays?

Dawn seemed to know what I was thinking.

Dawn: Never seen a pretty girl wearing one piece?

I nodded.

Dawn: But I bet, you never knew one piece could be so fun too. Let's go to the pool outside shall we?

She pulled me and then winked.

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Dawn excused herself for the moment as she went to the toilet.

She was quick and she ran to the pool, plunged in and gestured to me to quickly join her.

I walked and slowly went in.

I did not swim but laid on the pool as I was feeling tired. Dawn was busy swimming. She held her breath as she was underwater most of the time. I turned myself around and stared in the blank blue sky. Spacing out.

Dawn suddenly pulled down my shorts. I was caught unaware as I sank in the water. She immediately took the shorts and threw it off before she quickly swam away.

Took n gulps of water before I choked. The water gushed into my nostrils as I coughed.

It took me a while to compose myself as I stood up.

I rubbed the water off my face and tried to locate where Dawn was.

She must have been enjoying herself in the water. I took a breather as I smiled before I laid on the wall.

Dawn suddenly appeared and sprayed me with water using her mouth before she went back again in the water.

I went under the water and took in a huge gulp of water, ready to spray at her.

She was at the other end as she waved. I saw her took a big gulp of air and then she came.

I was all ready. Set my head straight, ready to spray the water in my mouth at her face.

Get set. Ready.

She did not come up for water.

I spat out all the water in my mouth.

Her hands pushed my legs apart as she took my rod totally into her mouth.

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[tanner132]

Nice story. Simply amazing.

Hope the ending will be good and not sad.

[stand_98]

I can't help but wonder why is the title of this story "The Garden". I am assuming that all of Max's sculptures are placed in the garden and hence, the title. Or perhaps, TS will reveal more in the coming episodes. Hmm...

[Coffeecans]

Her mouth gobbled it like those goldfish mouth, slowly bobbling the top of my rod, like how a jelly moves. The sensation trickling into my veins as I let out a soft moan. It was getting really hard now, I could feel the streak of cum through the veins, trying to make their way out. Dawn's actions were slow and sensual, and it feel really good.

Then i could feel bubbles surfacing.

She came up for air. Took a deep breather of air and then went on for my rod.

This time she was taking it faster.

She took it whole inside her, then she swam the breaststroke, then backwards so she could control her motions; her mouth still locked on my rod. Her motions fascinated me.

She would slowly push herself backwards, stay for few seconds for her mouth to slowly move to the tip of my rod, then she would move both her hands and legs, so she could move forward in a full fast motion; letting in my rod fully in her mouth. I could feel her gag but she did not stop.

Dawn knew that I would not be able to hold it much longer. Her legs landed on the floor and her fingers stroked it faster as she increased her suction speed, and the other hand massaged the underneath of my balls in a circular motion. She then gently squeezed it.

Out came the gushes of white semen, swimming into the walls of her mouth. She choked and then blew bubbles. But she did not release her hold. She waited for me to finish my full load.

She surfaced out of the water, her mouth closed. She was staring seductively at me as she walked towards me.

Opened her mouth to show me what I rewarded her.

She lowered her eyes as I saw her tongue twist, giving me that foxy look.

Dawn came out of the pool and sat next to me.

She was still staring at me, seductively.

And the next thing she did blew my mind.

She pulled the top of her swimsuit a little as she opened her mouth, letting my semens seep into her body, underneath her swimsuit.

I could see my white semen slowly trickling its way down her breasts.

There was cum dripping out from the sides of her mouth too.

Her hands then moved all over her swimsuit, coating the semen in her body throughout.

I swore I never wanted to screw anyone more than now.

I had never wanted to screw her so badly like now.

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[eeemen]

Wow, vey descriptive bro kopi, well done! Cheers, ....................

[2335 Man]

TQ TS for the story. Got some parts abit like what I've been to. Really brings back those memories. My tears drop too while reading the sad parts. Good one TS. Your story are in the lists of B.O.B. Goodday n Goodluck orh n Good Health to U.

[Coffeecans]

How would her body be like with my cum coated all over?

Many visuals came to mind. How would she feel on her body?

How would her nipples feel with my semen? Would it give her that touch of naughtiness? Perhaps kinky?

She then pulled one of the straps to the side, letting her right arm free.

Dawn placed her index finger to her lips as she stuck out her tongue.

Her right hand moved into her swimming costume and it seemed like there was a snake underneath her one piece. I could see her rubbing all over the body.

Her hands rubbed and kneaded her soft melons, then tuning her nipples. I could see her nipples protruding against the fabric. Then she rubbed it all over her tummy. She took it out of her costume as she licked her fingers in front of me. I could see her coated fingers.

She was slowly licking it whilst her eyes locked at me.

My hands were already on my rod, pumping it.

She spread her legs in a M shape where she rubbed her privates while the other hand kneaded her breasts.

Her eyes never left me and then suddenly she pulled the bottom of her swimsuit sideways, revealing her fresh pinky.

I could not contain the urge anymore.

I came out of the pool.

Me: I'm going to fuck you so hard Dawn.

She gave me that frightened look as she quickly stood up.

And she ran into the villa.

To make things hotter, she said.

Dawn: Please sir. No… You can't do this… I'm already taken… ahhhh...

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[EnigmaofSorrow]

Why am I always one of the last to catch your stories??? Must camp more often.

[Coffeecans]

I charged into the villa, thirsty with lust. Eager to rip her costume apart, to see what lies beneath the semen coated body.

She hid, but I could easily find traces of where she was through the wet footprints on the floor. She squad down and hid in the corner, confident that I could not find her.

As I saw the footprint going to a corner, I took off my swimming trunk and stroke my rod as I crept slowly towards her hiding place. But perhaps, it would be more fun if I can get her an unexpected 'assault'.

I knew where she was now. And I was near where she is.

As my eyes scouted the area, I took the notepad on the side table and threw it. It landed on the floor in a distance. Silence.

Dawn was caught by the sound and she was curious what it was all about.

I stood quietly beside her hiding place. Hidden from her.

She waited for a while. Silence.

Dawn: Where's Max?

She thought.

Perhaps I can check out what created the sound. She thought.

She stood up slowly. Looked around.

Nobody.

She started to walk towards the notepad.

Curious to see.

When suddenly, a strong force from behind pinned her to the ground. She lost her balance and fell to the ground. My hands immediately ripped her straps down, attempting to tear her swimming costume.

In a single strong pull, her costume tore into half.

There were signs of my semen sticking to the fabric, her body still wet with what I shot. I forced her legs apart as I thrust it in fully.

Dawn: Ppppppain…

I did not know what went over me as I forcefully shafted it deep and rough. I could not contain the lust I have. I knew I wanted her so badly.

I buried my tongue in her mouth as I continued making love to her. There were tears in the corner of her eyes but I couldn't control the beast within. I flipped her sideways and thrusted even harder. She was tight and it felt really great.

The friction of our bodies were great, as the sweat on our bodies glistered under the light. We exchanged positions but I was not having enough of it. I painted her body as she arched her back. Her body tasted sweet with a tad bitter; which may be my semen I presumed.

She was sweating down as her hair was dripping wet, she turned around and she requested to be pounded in doggy style, which was her favourite.

I pulled her hair and pounded with the remaining strength I have left.

Dawn: I'm……. ahh… ahh… I… can't… take… it…anymore…..

She convulsed a little as she squirted, her legs started shaking.

I was feeling aroused too as I fired the second shot into her.

Both of us collapsed onto the ground, hugging each other.

Her legs were still shaking as she tried to raise herself. She rested on my chest as we laid on the floor.

Me: I love you Dawn.

She gave me a smile that I could never forget.

She then closed her eyes and fell asleep.

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[Coffeecans]

Seeing her was the best thing that ever happened in my life.

It feel almost so surreal now that she is by my side.

Soon she was deep asleep. I carried her to the bed as I cleaned her up using the hand towel. She was tired till I could hear a little snore from her. Covered her with the blanket as I kissed her on her forehead.

Now everything seemed great but my heart raced.

I went towards my bag as I took out the medicines. And gulped down them.

I could feel the air trapped in my chest as I took a deep breath, slowly letting the air in. It was all starting again. A drip of blood. And then another.

Immediately I closed the door, raised my head as I stuffed my nose with the toilet paper to stop the bleeding.

Luckily for me, it stopped. The medicine must have been working well now.

Quickly I cleaned up the shower room, leaving no traces behind.

I sat in the living room, and switched on the tv, the mtv channel.

Was watching it until I dozed off.

A warm embrace woke me up as Dawn hugged me.

I rubbed my eyes as I saw her, sweet and beautiful.

And the tv was playing the right music for the right time. The oldies.

The time was past midnight.

And this song told so much about my story with her. Or perhaps my feelings for her.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UBYnT8JY7sE

I stood up, as I held her hands.

She was surprised at first.

I placed her arms on my shoulders as I placed my hands on her waist. A step outwards, then sideways. We looked at each other, reminiscing the times where I first met her. She too was looking at me with the same thoughts.

Inside my mind
And in my dreams I've kissed your lips
A thousand times

I stroked her hair.

You're all I've ever wanted
And my arms are open wide
Because you know just what to say
And you know just what to do
And I want to tell you so much
I love you

Our lips touched.

We hugged each other tightly as we danced to the song.

Tell me how to win your heart
For I haven't got a clue
But let me start by saying I love you

She did not know why but she teared.

And her eyelids were twitching.

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Dawn stared at me as we kissed.

Time seemed to stop at this very moment.

Her embrace felt so comforting and secure. For she would be mine alone.

Slowly we danced till we reached the bed.

We cuddled each other and slept till morning.

Snow could not believe what she was given. She sat at her quiet room and thought for a long time.

I woke up, surprised to find Dawn still sleeping.

I went to wash up, as I did not want to wake her up.

Me: Dear, time to wake up.

I smiled as I kissed her forehead.

And it was hot.

Me: Dear? Dear? Are you ok?

She was burning. And she was having a fever.

Immediately I called the concierge to arrange a doctor. But they sent her to the hospital.

Dawn was pale.

I held her hand as we went to the hospital.

Finally after few hours, she was looking better, but still weak.

Doctor: She's having an infection. But it will go off soon. She just needs a rest.

Me: Thanks doctor.

She smiled as she left the room.

Dawn smiled weakly at me.

Dawn: Sorry to spoil our trip.

Me: Don't be silly. What matters is that you are fine.

She slept for a while as I sat beside her.

It was already in the evening when we reached our hotel.

She rested as I packed our luggage, ready for our departure tomorrow.

She spent most of the time sleeping due to the medication.

I sponged her from time to time, just in case the fever shoots up.

It was good that the fever had subsided before our departure.

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Dawn was fast asleep on her bed when we arrived home.

Dawn: Nothing beats home dear.

She said as she slept.

Her dad said hello before he went to his room.

Me: Dear, I'm going back to my studio for a while yeah?

She nodded as she turned to the side.

I stood outside my house, and cleared a lot of my mails. Now I could feel my heart racing.

Not a good sign.

And the doctor's words came to mind.

As I walked towards my creations, I took out the last piece of paper as I wrote. The surroundings suddenly became a blur. My head was swirling. I placed my hands on the table, trying to get a hold of myself. I closed my eyes, and prayed for this to be over. It seemed that the world was spinning rapidly as though I was in a small raft, caught on top of a turbulent wave.

In a matter of 15 mins, everything was back to normal. And the symptoms stopped.

It took me a while to adapt back to the light. I continued my writings for the art piece despite some smudges. But the smudges gives the descriptions more depth and graphically more beautiful.

I was getting the hang of it and visuals flooded my mind, writing vivid expressions as I smiled.

I sealed the envelope. And placed it on the sculpture.

And looked at the collections. I started to record the descriptions of each piece, ready for the exhibit.

I stretched.

Took one last look of my masterpieces and left.

I got a message from my doctor.

And I replied "Sure."

I looked at my phone, seeing our selfies.

Before that, I texted Snow.

Me: Free to meet up?

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[Coffeecans]

Snow was shocked by my message and she immediately replied yes.

I met her for coffee near her place, asking how she was and what she was doing. A casual chat with her seemed nice and an hour slipped without knowing. She told me that she was starting a small business now.

I gave her words of encouragement as I patted her shoulders.

I waved goodbye to her and I boarded the taxi home.

Called Dawn if she wanted anything and she replied dessert.

Me: How you feeling dear?

Dawn: Better. Thanks dear.

Me: Your favorite cheng tng.

Dawn: You are the best.

I fed her as she enjoyed the sweetness of the soup.

Me: Dear? I got a piece of good news for you.

Dawn: What is it?

Me: I'm selected for to give a talk for an award show, happening in three days time. But I will be there for at least 2 weeks plus.

Dawn: Go dear. It's good exposure for you. I will take care of the business. Don't worry about work and me.

Me: You are the best dear. I'm going to the shower first.

I hugged her and wore a smile.

The moment I closed the doors, I knelt down and cried softly. For I was not even sure it was the correct thing to do. For now I could just spend the three full days with her.

I came out of the shower room.

Dawn: You took longer than usual. You ok?

Me: I was thinking. I decided to spend the full three days with you before I leave. Can I request you not to send me off? Else I will feel very sad.

She hit me gently.

Dawn: Ok. But you must give me a call when you arrive. Don't call me too often, it's expensive.

Me: I'll try ok?

We cuddled and slept.

But I could not sleep.

I took my luggage and waved goodbye to Dawn.

I embraced her for a while and I kissed her.

Dawn: What's wrong dear, why are you hugging me as though it's the last?

Me: I will miss you dear.

Dawn: I love you.

I tried hard not to look back. Holding my tears.

Waved and boarded the cab.

I placed the luggage outside the room as I knocked on the door.

Me (takes a deep breath): I'm ready doc.

He patted my shoulders as he brought me through what I was to go through. I signed the papers as I took another breath.

Doc: It's not going to be easy Max. And I can't guarantee…

I stopped him abruptly: Go ahead. I know.

I swallowed my saliva as I went into the white room.

I closed my eyes as he prepared the first dose…

In my eyes I envisioned myself happily spending good times with Dawn.

The first dose came and I could feel my body break.

I grind my teeth.

My strength was slowly drained away.

My heart thumping furiously.

My eyes were tearing.

Then, I spat out blood and lost consciousness.

Dawn suddenly woke up from her sleep.

And she was sweating profusely.

There was a sense of helplessness.

And the first one she thought about.

Was me.

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[Coffeecans]

I did not know how long I was unconscious. The moment I came to I tried to text Dawn that I have safely reached my 'destination'.

Me: I've reached dear.

Dawn: That's good to hear. You need to take care of yourself ok?

Me: Yes dear. I'm tired. Text you later.

Dawn: Sure dear. Love you.

I did not know that the treatment could drain out so much of my strength.

My hands were shivering.

I could feel my legs shaking.

Felt that half my strength were gone.

And there were lots of fallen hair.

The doctor came and told me about the treatments. But his eyes did not give me the signs of assurance.

I was to be there for more treatments and observations.

I texted my good friend as he came in and out of the hospital. Giving me the support of a good buddy and friend.

Dawn and me texted each other quite often and she was asking when I will be returning. She was saying she have a surprise in store for me. But due to the prolonged stay I had to give reasons.

One day I was moving about the hospital in a wheelchair, looking all frail. I met someone whom I had not really wished to see.

Snow caught sight of me.

And the container containing the fish soup she had made for Mary fell to the floor. She covered her mouth and stared at me blankly.

I tried to turn around but my body strength could not allow me to.

She ran towards me with tears in her eyes.

Snow: What happened to you? WHAT'S WRONG?

I knew I could not hide it any longer. I whispered to her ears.

Snow: No no no…. this can't be happening.

This was a scene that I would wanted to stay away from. I looked away with pain in my eyes.

Snow: Does Dawn know about this?

I shook my head.

Snow: I need to tell her. I need.

Mustering up my strength, I held her hand and shook my head.

Me: She deserves better than me. I can't be a burden.

Snow: But…

Me: Promise me Snow.

Snow looked sideways and reluctantly agreed.

She asked my ward and visited me once she had time.

The treatment was getting more and more tedious. And I was not sure how long I could hold out.

The results wasn't good.

There was a day that I felt really good. And everything seems to be looking great. I called Dawn finally and felt the strength in my voice. She sounded happy to hear from me. We discussed everything from the house and the business. We ended our conversation with a wide grin on my face.

Doc: You look great today Max. Really great.

I smiled as he did his routine checkup.

My friend too said the same thing as he waved goodbye.

Snow was the last to visit me. She looked relieved that my face shone with colour instead of the usual pale face.

And my words to Snow was: The secret is only between two of us.

Snow was reminded that she can't utter a word of me in the hospital to Dawn.

Dawn received almost a letter every day from a friend of mine in Europe which I had asked him to write a letter to show evidence that I was not in Singapore. She would wait and read the letters everyday.

I made a call to my European friend, telling him that I would be returning soon so he could stop the writings. I thanked him so much for putting up with my nonsense. He had to bear with my mushy messages that I have emailed him in order for him to write.

I texted Dawn that I would be coming back home finally.

I could feel my life recovering. Perhaps it was a good sign.

Her return message was filled with excitement.

Dawn: Great! I missed you so much dear. I missed you so!

Me: Me too. See you soon. Goodnight. Goodbye. Love you.

Dawn: Goodnight dear. See you soon! Muacks! :D

I placed the phone away and closed my eyes.

I slept peacefully.

In the middle of the night, suddenly I could feel my heart thumping wildly. And I could feel my chest getting really tight. Soon I was breathless. I was trying to grab hold of the emergency button. My whole body was convulsing now. I could not keep my eyes focused. I could not control my body. I was panting loudly now. My vision were turning dark. My body was feeling cold as if it was winter now.

My body felt light. As if it was saying to let it go.

Memories of the doctor's voice came into mind.

Doc: "It's already at the terminal stage, Max. I'm sorry that it had to come to this. But there is not much time left."

Me: Isn't there any treatments I can undergo? Please don't tell me that there's no hope.

My doctor arched his eyebrows: Undergoing the treatment of chemo might or might not be successful Max. It will all depend on your body.

Me: I will take the risk, doc.

Never did I know that the aftermaths would be this drastic for my body.

I closed my eyes: Live for me Dawn. Live for me.

I knew I could not win the battle against fate. But at least there was good news.

I could leave without any worries.

Me: Goodnight. Dawn.

I knew it was coming but I wasn't prepared for it.

The last droplet of regrets fell from the corner of my eyes as my hand left on the side of my bed.

This time everything would be final.

不能給你未來　我還你現在
安靜結束也是另一種對待
當眼淚流下來　傷已超載
分開也是另一種明白

〔我給你〕最後的疼愛　是手放開

I took the last few breaths as they became my last.

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[Desires]

Amazing story just like before!

[Coffeecans]

Dawn awoke.

There was discomfort in her heart.

Did something happen to Max? She thought.

She went towards the altar, lighted the incense and she started chanting. The beads gave way and dropped all over the floor. She gasped.

Dawn: Is it a bad omen?

The doctor ran into my ward. Took my pulse. Opened my eyelids. And checked on any signs of heartbeat.

He gave a sigh. And shook his head. The nurses covered my head with the blanket.

My lawyer was called and he rushed down.

There was sorrow in his eyes as he had lost a good friend. But he knew what to do. He went to the drawer next to me and took out something where he placed in his pockets.

As he picked up his phone, he called Dawn.

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[GrieGzEters]

sigh... :(

[sexyonfoot]

camping for more ! Thank you TS ! :)

[Coffeecans]

The phone came.

And…

She didn't want to pick it up.

And it continued ringing.

With trembling fingers.

Dawn: Hello?

Lawyer: Is that Dawn?

Dawn: Yes.

Lawyer: Hi Dawn, this is Wayne. Max's lawyer.

Dawn: Yes?

Lawyer: I need you to be at the hospital now.

Dawn: Hospital?

Lawyer: Yes.

He gave her the details and she stormed out of the room.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7qH4qyi1-Ys

Wayne was standing beside me.

The doors sprang open as Dawn ran into the room.

She stopped.

There was a figure on the bed, with the blankets covering the entire body.

Wayne turned and saw Dawn.

Wayne: Dawn?

Dawn's eyes turned red.

She walked towards the bed.

Dawn: No no no. nononono. Please…

She lifted the blanket.

Dawn: Arghhhh…..!!!!!! arrghh!!! ARGHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!

Her mouth arched downwards, as she trembled, her legs soft from the shock.

Wayne went over to hold her.

She pushed off his arms.

Dawn: WHY! WHY DIDN'T YOU TELL ME EARLIER! WHAT THE FUCK ARE YOU DOING? WHY? WHY? WHY?

She pushed him to the wall and slapped him until she could not muster up any strength.

Dawn: HE MEANT EVERYTHING TO ME. EVERYTHING! NOW HOW AM I SUPPOSED TO GO ON LIVING!

Wayne knew how painful it was to her. He let her finish venting her anger.

Wayne: I'm as painful as you Ms Dawn. He was my childhood friend. But I was ordered to hide everything. It was a promise. He did not want you to worry about him.

Dawn: Worry? So everything was a lie isn't it? Going overseas?

Wayne: I'm not sure about that. But this is what he wanted me to pass to you. And he said when you finish hearing what it contains, you are to come to my office. Again, I'm very sorry for what had happened. Please take care.

He bowed as he left.

Dawn held the voice recorder. She cried on the cold and lifeless me until the nurses dragged her away.

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[PrinceTze]

Bro Coffee, u're really a nice writer...read a fews story wrote by u...really touching and romantic

[rakionant]

I cried, tho im a guy. I cried after reading it.

[Coffeecans]

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Dawn hid in her room. Unable to accept the fact that I was gone.

She buried herself in tears for the entire night. She did not have the slightest sense of hunger. Her dad knocked on her door but she had refused to open.

The very sight of seeing the lifeless form of me was etched in her mind.

She wept.

She stared at the room that was once filled with the laughters of both of us.

Now empty and quiet.

Leaving only her.

For almost a week she had been crying to sleep.

She would look at my clothes, hug and smell it. Hoping to get the otherwise familiar scent, but there was none.

A week of sorrow. How long would it be for her to recover from it?

The light from outside illuminated the voice recorder that was lying on the dressing table.

She moved slowly and took it, as she laid in the corner of the bed.

She took the earphones and plugged it to her ears.

She took a deep breath.

As her trembling fingers pressed the play button.

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*Heavy breathing*

Me:
By the time you have listened to this, I might have already been gone.

I'm sorry dear. I don't mean to deceive you. But I do not want you to feel sad. I really love being by your side but I would never expect that ill be struck down with cancer and it's already at the terminal stage. The doctor told me that I would have less than a month to live. Going on a treatment would not give a full recovery but it might help, but there was a risk. *Coughs*

I took the treatment. But I could never know that the after effects would be so drastic. I could not bear to see you in tears seeing the way that I am.

I'm sorry that I have lied to you.

I have so much to tell you. So much to tell you.

But fate just…(starts to weep)… like to make fun of me…

There was a long pause.

Promise me Dawn. Live for me. Live for your future.

And… for us.

*coughs. coughs*

Please call Wayne. He will let you know everything about me.

For me, it's already the end of the road.

I will always be there for you when you need dear.

And I always will.


Dawn walked out of the room, and washed her face. She was vomiting.

It took her a while.

She took the phone and called Wayne.

The next morning, Wayne was there early to bring her through my will.

She gasped by the amount of assets that was left to her.

Wayne was very detailed as he went through everything.

Again there was another letter written by me to her.

*Next up: The final episode*
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Dawn took the keys and opened the doors of my house. Everything was intact and my workplace was closed and locked.

She sat at the couch, taking a breather as she opened the envelope.

Me: Dear, again I can't express the pain that you may be going through now but it's with excruciating pain that I wrote this letter. I'm entrusting all my assets with you, forgive me for not telling you about my background, cause if I did, I was afraid you might not accept me from who I am. I lost my parents when I was young. And I had never fall in love with anyone but you. You gave me light when I was gloomy. And everything was good because of you.

How sweet would it be if I could dance the whole night with you? How nice would be if I could walk down the aisle holding your cold fingers?

But there would always be rain.

There would always be an end.

Live your life happily, with or without me.

Take a walk in the garden.

Take a walk through the visions of you. In each sculpture there would be stories. There would be memories.

Even when I'm gone, I would always be by your side.

I'm sorry that I mentioned that the sculptures are for an exhibit overseas.

They are in fact, carved for you.

Dawn's vision started to blur as she walked slowly to the door, and turned the key. What stood before her immediately made her break down.

In the huge garden was the sculptures unveiled, with the pretty greenery that complimented the surroundings, with butterflies roaming freely.

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She saw the first sculpture of herself. Perhaps with a gentle smile. It must have been in a first glance.

There was an signature at the sculpture that was engraved: The first sight.
Dawn picked up the envelope, and opened up the waxed seal.

Me: The first and only girl of my dreams. Her smile, her gentleness. How I wished that I could get to know her. Know how she's like. Know the way she lives and how would she be like being my girl. She is just so beautiful. But perhaps I would be just day dreaming.

"As for me, to love you alone, to make you happy, to do nothing which would contradict your wishes, this is my destiny and the meaning of my life." — Napoleon Bonaparte

Dawn walked and saw the second sculpture.

She was sitting on the ground as if she had lost her balance. But there were tears in her eyes.
"I met her" was the title of the sculpture.

Me: I met her. Finally. In the most uncommon place. She was looking the same. How I wished I could know her name. We met each other when she knocked onto me. And she fell to the ground. She stared angrily at me but I could see in her eyes that there was a sense of sadness. A sense of helplessness. I wished that I could be the one to mend it. To put back the hurt she had. To bring back the happiness she has and deserve to be.

'The greatest thing you'll ever learn is to love and be loved in return.' -Unknown


Dawn touched the sculpture, as the drops of memories fell. She stayed at the sculpture for a while, letting the scenarios of our first encounter play.

She breathed deeply as she went on.

The third sculpture.
A close up sculpture of her smiling. The butterflies were roaming freely on this sculpture.

Happiness was the title.

Me: I saw the light in her eyes. Everything is over. She can now live her life freely as the birds, out of the enclosure, a paradise awaits. It has been a long journey. But I could assure her that it was the beginning of a fairytale. It has been the sweetest moment in my life too that I knew her name was Dawn. And despite her strong front, she has a fragile heart that I would be able to mend. A beautiful heart and a beautiful mind. It was a start of us being together and the most wonderful of my life.

“Love is begun by time, And time qualifies the spark and fire of it” - Shakespeare

Only the last sculpture was covered with a red velvet cloth.

And there was the letter with the word "Last".

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Dawn picked up the last envelope.

She knew that this would shatter her to pieces. The last. And how would it be after she finish reading?

Me: How could she have known? How?

Journeys end in lovers meeting,
Every wise man's son doth know.

I have cried every night about the remaining days I have left. Why is it such that I have to go through this? We have just been together? This pain is just too real. It hurts. It hurts. Why do you have to play this trick on me. Why me? Just like Romeo and Juliet, why does every love story needs to have a tragic ending?

In less than a month I will be saying goodbye. One that would never be back again. Why am I going through this?

I loved Dawn. I love everything about her and the times we have together. But I know there isn't a future. I'm so tired. I really am. Why are the happy times ending so fast?

Perhaps this would be the last piece that I will be doing and able to do.

The final piece that reflects all of how I feel towards you. Perhaps it may be a selfish act to lie to you but I do not want you to see the way I am. For I would stay by your decision. I love you Dawn. And I would be behind your decision.

She took off the velvet cloth and there was a delicate sculpture of her hand with every single detail. She smiled at how much detail he had placed on it. And on her fingers was a ring.

She gasped as tears rolled down.

It was my final question.

Dawn took off the ring and wore it on her left finger.

She smiled as she raised her hands in the air.

As she whispered while she rubbed her tummy.

Dawn: I do. Together with our little one.

The end.

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[GrieGzEters]

Truly a master piece. I just can't believe I am tearing just by reading your stories and also by the fact that its on sammyboy

[rooter]

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Being a silent reader all tis while but really felt tat i had to appear n thank u for such a wonderful story:)