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joannelee
09-04-2005, 09:50 PM
My Boyfriend’s Younger Brother (Part I)

My name is Hui Qing, and I have a boyfriend named, Alan. He was not a Christian, but liked the Canto Pop singer, Alan Tam, hence he got himself that name. He came from a single parent family, his father died when he was very young. His mother, works as a factory production worker, doing the graveyard shift, it was paid good, and in those days, like mid 80s, it was still good times. Alan also had a younger brother, Andy. He was 3 years younger than Alan, and shorter and less lean, more stout. Alan was 1.75m tall, and Andy was only 1.68. He was a quiet boy though, preferring to keep to himself and do his own stuff.

I lived not far from their HDB four room flat, just 2 blocks away. Alan and I were together since secondary school. His house was like a second home to me. I lost my virginity to him at his place. It was easy. Alan’s mother would only come home after 9am, and her room was our playground. It was my eighteen birthday, and Alan wanted to do it before he entered the army. It felt like the natural thing to do, since we had been going out for so long. Besides, his family was already treating me like his wife.

After the first time, Alan and I did it as many times as we could. Alan always bought condoms from Desker Road, I never liked that place, went there at night once, and was disgusted by the sights of transvestites and the cheekos there. Andy paid no heed to our doings in the house, he just minded his own stuff, and that never really bothered me until I stumbled on his physical abilities.

Since Alan entered the army, he could only book out of camp once a week during his Basic Military Training. So I sort of moved into the house. His mother welcomed me, as I was doing the cooking and laundry all along. I stayed in his mother’s room, sharing the bed. But, as their mother was only back in the mornings and afternoon, it was no trouble at all.

After Alan entered the army, I started noticing Andy’s clothes having stains. I was not unfamiliar with these type of ‘stains’, as Alan had them too. Especially when we were engaging in foreplay before taking our clothes off. It was sperm, and I was curious as to what Andy was doing to actually make his t-shirts have these stains, instead of his underwear.

I decided to pay more attention and one night, when I closed the door to pretend to sleep, I could hear Andy slowly pushing his door open and bumping into the furniture in the dark. I put my dears to the door and tried to hear what he was doing. All I could hear was sliding noises and some mechanisms sounds. I realized that Andy had switched on the video player, and I instantly knew that Andy must have found Alan’s hidden stash of porn videos. I was laughing in my heart, as I pictured Andy’s face in my head, his delight at finding porn videos.

After a while, I could hear nothing more. I was quite puzzled, because most times, Alan loved to watch the porn, with me of course, with the volume on, not loud, but just barely audible. But right then, I could hear no noise. I could not imagine Andy watching porn without the sound, it seemed weird not to want to hear the noises the actors and actresses make when fucking each other.

Curiosity took over me and I slowly pushed the door open, just wide enough for me to peep into the living room, where the video and tv were. Since it was a four room flat, the design was such that the two bedrooms were facing each other, with the doors facing the living room, along with the front door, with the kitchen being at the far end of the house.

Alan’s house furniture were placed with the tv and video facing inwards from the front door. The sofa and chairs were facing the tv, which meant it faced the front door and the metal windows. As I opened the bedroom door, I saw Andy sitting on the floor, with his back against the chair, his back faing me. He had a headphone on his head, and that was the reason why I could not hear anything from the porn videos. When I looked closer, I was shocked. Andy was never someone that really caught my attention in Alan’s house. He was quiet and his build was less than appealing to me, I preferred leaner and taller guys. But, Andy was relatively more muscle-bound than Alan. This was because Andy loved sports, weight-lifting, and martial arts. He took up Judo in his secondary school, and even represented his school to win a few competitions before.

But the fact is, I was not shocked by his muscles, because he showed none, he was still wearing a singlet, his favourite wear at home, but the sight of his erection, which he was stroking happily away. It was the longest and thickest cock I had ever seen. Although Alan was my first steady boyfriend, I had seen other guy’s cock before. A few other guys went out with me and I did some hand jobs for them to escape them from trying to fuck me. But that was in early secondary, and I had not met Alan then. But, Andy’s cock was the longest and thickest I had seen.

I once measured Alan’s cock, and it was around 6 inches, a little bit over 15cm. But I could tell from where I stood, Andy’s could well be more than 8 inches, around 20cm in length. His thickness was like almost 2 inches, almost 5cm, and he was stroking it hard and fast. I did not really notice what porn he was watching, because my eyes were affixed on his huge member. It was almost purple in colour, almost like it was lacking of oxygen, but yet it shorn like it was made of metal.

My shock was to extend to not only Andy’s cock size, but how long he lasted, masturbating. I could not really remember the time, until my legs got a bit tired from watching him masturbate. It was then I took a glance of the clock in my bedroom, and since I got into the room at 11pm, I thought it might be around 12am, since it took a while for Andy to think I was asleep. But, to my horror and amazement, the clock stood at almost 1am. I figured that Andy must have been masturbating for over one hour. His pace was a constant four strokes for every second, I took the time to count as I was wondering how fast he could go.

At that moment, I felt my nipples harden, as I had a wild fantasy in my mind about letting Andy fuck me. Somehow, that fantasy made my cunt juices flow, and my body seemed to get hot all over. My breath quickened as I continued my voyeuristic behaviour towards Andy. I could feel my legs give way, when I could no longer help myself but put my hand to my crotch. It almost felt as if Andy was pleasuring me with his ‘performance’. I moved my right hand away from my crotch and grabbed at my own breasts and it felt so good. I could never have imagined that masturbating like this, was so stimulating.

It continued for another few minutes like this, before Andy reached for a t-shirt next to him, on the ground. Then he used it to cover over his glorious cock, making me make a disappointing moan under my breath. “Why did he had to cover it up?” I thought. Then, as his strokings got faster and faster, he finally arched his head back a bit, and took a deep breath, before slowing breathing in again. Then, I realized that Andy was using his t-shirts to masturbate. I smiled in my heart, thinking how stupid this young boy could be. Did he think no one would know?

But I had to stop my thoughts quickly, as Andy stopped the video, and quickly packed his headphone, and used t-shirt, before going to his bedroom. I managed to close the door before he got up from his sitting position, and slowly pushed the door shut. As I didn’t really opened the door too wide, closing it was neither too hard nor loud. After that, I had so much difficulty sleeping, I simply masturbated until I went to sleep.

Upon waking up the next day, the image was still fresh in my mind, and I had a hard time going to my part-time job at a hawker stall in the hawker center near the house. My parents didn’t really mind that I was spending so much time at Alan’s house. They practically gave up on me when I was 13, as I had so much problems at school before I met Alan. They figured that it was the best for me to stick to Alan, so they did not bother me and Alan much.

With my mind plagued with thoughts about Andy’s masturbation, I spilled food onto customers, dropped bowls and plates, and even gave the wrong change to customers. It was like that for two days, and the stall owner, my uncle, decided to let me rest for a day.

I decided to try to live out my wild fantasy, and try to seduce Andy.

joannelee
09-04-2005, 09:54 PM
My Boyfriend’s Younger Brother (Part II)

As I started out, I tried to wear more revealing clothes in the house for Andy to take notice of me. I usually wore a t-shirt and shorts, but changed to wearing sleeveless t-shirts and sing-lets that were male sizes. They had larger openings under the arms, so that I could let Andy see more.

I tried to be more attentive to Andy, asking him if he wanted drinks when he was at home doing his homework, or if he needed snacks. At first, he was quite surprised and seemed quite embarrassed by my attention towards him. I found that really cute, and that also made me think that he might still be a virgin. Though I could not confirm this, I was intent on getting that monstrous cock of his inside me.

For two weeks, I tried the tactic, revealing my bra to him, bending over and letting him see my bums, pretending to be interested in what he was doing and leaning closer to him to let him feel my breasts. Somehow, he just blushed and remained still. I must say that I got very frustrated. In my heart I was thinking, “What will it take for this lug to be interested in fucking me? Do I have to rape him?!!”

Then, I tried to be even more daring, going topless under my tees and sometimes going bottomless and just wearing long pajamas. I made sure the pajamas were translucent enough for him to make out that my batch of pubic hair. Andy had such an erection, it was hard not to notice. I saw him gulp down saliva as he took quick glances at my crotch when I wore those translucent pajamas. I too, was getting turned on. I felt so much in power, seducing this young man, at least 3 years my junior. I remembered some movies, where an older man seduced a young girl to bed, and instantly knew the feeling the old fart felt now.

joannelee
09-04-2005, 09:55 PM
But still, my efforts proved futile. Andy was certainly a stickler and remained unmoved, he seemed fiercely loyal to his elder brother. Curse his good upbringing! I was running out of ideas, and it has been at least 9 days. Alan had some guard duties the last weekend, and he stayed over at a friend’s place, close to his Nee Soon camp, so he did not return home. I realized that I had only a few more days till he came back, I really needed to hurry.

While going down to the hawker stall, I overheard two school girls talking about how to catch a guy’s heart.

Girl A: “Why you take so long to ask him out?:
Girl B: “I shy mah. Besides, how I know what to say to him?”
Girl A: “I oledi told you he liked badminton liao. Take you so long to ask him to teach you.”
Girl B: “Ok lor. I should have taken your advice earlier. So I show interest in his interest and get him to teach me… haha. Ok.. if I become his steady, I give you a treat.”
Girl A: “A treat ah? I think three treats sound better.”
Girl B: “Wah, why you so tam xin one?”

As they giggled and walked past me, their conversation struck me an idea. I would definitely have to make things turn to my advantage. One way or another, I would get Andy to fuck me.

joannelee
09-04-2005, 09:57 PM
The next day, I approached Andy to ask him to teach me some judo moves.

“Eh, why you want to learn?” Andy asked
“No lah. There got some guys try to touch me here and there, then wait for me to finish work and follow me, asking me to have a drink with them.” I pretended
“Oh, I go down with you. You show me, I take care of them.” Andy patted his chest and said, “Whoever dares to mess with my Da Sao, I teh si (flatten him to death) him.”

I was smiling at this point, happy that he cared for me, but at the same time, annoyed that he had to bring up that I was his Da Sao, his brother’s wife.

“Andy, you teach me first. If I cannot handle, I call you. Can?” I asked, grabbing his hand and almost pleading.

Andy instantly blushed and murmured a silent yes. As he proceeded to teach me, I pretended to ask a lot of questions and made him feel that I was beginning to like Judo. I asked him about what kind of clothings and where he trained, and what were his favourite moves. Andy was happy to tell me all that he knew, as if he had found a close friend, someone to share his passion. As Andy showed me how to grab a person’s arm and break that person’s balance in order to go for the throw, I instantly grabbed the opportunity to ask him to let me try on him. Without much hesitation, he agreed.

Since Andy was not wearing any long sleeves, he allowed me to grab his singlet, both Alan and him loved to wear those things at home, or even go around bare-bodied. Next, I used both hands to try to jerk him, trying to break his balance, as to what he had taught, but Andy was too strong for me and I could not do it. He smiled at me, and almost seemed to taunt me and gaud me into trying harder. I instantly pursed my lips and used all of my strength to try to jerk him off balance. He moved a bit, but it still did not work. Then, I pretended to lose my balance and fall onto him. Andy reacted fast, as a trained judoka would and put hup his hands in front of his chest, thereby placing his palms right onto my breasts. I was again, topless that day, wearing only a light blue sleeveless t-shirt, and a very short black sports shorts.

Once his palms touched my tee covered breasts, which were 33B, going to a C, courtesy of Alan’s molding, my heart pounded and my pulse quickened, my eyes closed and my body went limp as I let out a small sigh of relief. Andy had to use strength to not let me fall, and that made his palms turn into claws, adjusting the fingers to cradle my weight.

The next thing he did, was to let me slump into his chest. What worried Andy was if he had hurt me, but I just smiled at him, still in his arms, and said that I had lost my footing, and that I ws too embarrassed to do anything else. I adjusted myself and Andy said that it was not safe for us to practice on the open without mats to cushion our falls, or rather my fall.

I asked him what he suggested, as I explained that I was really interested in this sport, and also wanted to learn something to defend myself. Andy was lost for words, his eyes posting quick glances at my chest. He must be still reminiscing the feel of my breasts. The thought made me feel proud and I felt that I had accomplished the first objective.

I then suggested to Andy that he should lend me his judo clothes and then he can teach me better when both of us were in the right gears. Andy smiled and agreed. He even commented me on my enthusiasm in the sport. He would soon learn what kind of sport I was really enthusiastic about.

joannelee
09-04-2005, 09:59 PM
We went into the bedroom; both Alan and himself shared one room, with two beds, each to one side of the wall. He took out a clean set of judo clothes, which comprised of a thick overall, tie-up pants, and a belt. I was thinking that this was going to be so easy. I had actually read up a bit on the clothing in the Queenstown library nearby, and knew what I needed to do.

I got into the bedroom that I shared with his mother and changed, while Andy changed in his room. As it was during mid April, the weather was still warm. When I came out, I saw that Andy was not wearing any t-shirt underneath, actually only the girls wore tees under the overall, for fear of their bodies being exposed when engaging in practice of Judo or even competitions. I had the overall closed right up to my neck, and before Andy could say anything, I motioned for him to go into my room to practice on the bed.

“Your room? But you share that bed with Ma. What if we break it?” Andy said.
“Eh, you going to use so much strength on me meh? Don’t kill me you know.” I teased him, using my right index finger to poke his chest. Andy’s chest felt solid, not like Alan’s. Andy was always in better shape than Alan. Though Alan was in the army now, he could not have got Andy’s muscular chest, and hard abs.

Reluctantly, Andy let me pull him into my bedroom, and up onto the bed. I could hear my heart pounding in my ears, as I anticipated the upcoming events that could snag Andy and get his cock into my pussy.

joannelee
10-04-2005, 12:17 AM
Part III of My Boyfriend’s Younger Brother

Once inside the room, Andy was a bit shy about the surroundings, he seemed to be in that room for the first time, and that was so cute. Watching him take glances at the dressing table, with my makeup and all, then seeing his eyes flick over to the bathroom, where I deliberately hung my bra and panties. His face grew red instantly.

The lesson started well enough, with Andy showing me how to get an attacker’s arms into a lock, and then throwing them down to the ground, but this time it was the mattress. Andy was really good in his sport, it was so hard to use the same tactic that he had taught, back onto him. Time and again, he would get out of my arm-lock easily, and put another hold onto me. It was really thrilling for me, to have him put his hands over my neck, grab my waist, and he would put his body so close to mine that I was drowning in his musky scent. I cannot really describe it, except that it was a mix between cheese and freshly baked bread. It wasn’t smelly, just musky and new. Alan never had this scent, he never really liked sports, preferring to play arcade games and bowling, rather than physical activities that required him to perspire.

I can tell that Alan was really enjoying teaching me, because he was actually using his hands to guide my hips, bums and shoulders, short of my breasts though. He seemed so enthusiastic in teaching me how to break “that guy’s” arms, that I was kind of taken aback.

“When in trouble, make sure the attacker is immobile. Otherwise, you will be in trouble.” Andy said seriously.

As we were both covered with sweat, I told Andy to go switch the fan on. The fan was just by the bed, so he didn’t have to go far. Once the fan was on, I asked him how to get out of situations when the guy was on top of me. Andy smiled brightly and told me, “Ground Work.” It seemed that I had asked his favourite part about Judo, pinning opponents on the ground, and he was really getting into the whole thing.

I asked Andy to simulate as me and I would be on top of him, so he could show me how to get out. Andy lay flat on the bed almost immediately. My heart was pounding harder still, I almost could not hold back my desire to sit on top of Andy’s crotch and grind into him, but I bit my lips and fought on. Laying across Andy, with my body diagonal his, I felt his body tense up as he prepared to show me how to escape. I suddenly got up and started to undo my judo pants.

tittyhawk
10-04-2005, 12:21 AM
Good work....steaming yes.... ;)

thefirstname
10-04-2005, 12:25 AM
Wow, very nice piece of work. Keep it up... Here's some rep points from me.

Eternity_Gal
10-04-2005, 12:27 AM
Good work....steaming yes.... ;)

Good Composer, Joanne! Nice one.. I actually like reading ur story. U are simply setting a benchmark for the ladies.Kool!!!Keep it up

oxilary
10-04-2005, 12:32 AM
are these actually original compositions?

72229
10-04-2005, 12:40 AM
Good work....steaming yes.... ;)

great imagination......:)

nuclearkid
10-04-2005, 12:43 AM
are these actually original compositions?

I do not think they are original compositions, bro. I have seen it before, unless the author now and then are the same person.

oxilary
10-04-2005, 12:50 AM
I do not think they are original compositions, bro. I have seen it before, unless the author now and then are the same person.

ahhh.. ic. :)

Eternity_Gal
10-04-2005, 12:51 AM
I do not think they are original compositions, bro. I have seen it before, unless the author now and then are the same person.

Friend Nuclear kid.. Even they' aint her composed experiences, even she did adapt frm somewhere else. I think you should allow joanne to continue posting her part. It's kinda rare to read from a gal's pt of view. Even I dont 've good sex original experiences myself nowadays(refer to my sole thread!)Rather i'm posting my day-to-day life. And I do 've pple reading rite? Haha! No good for u to bully a lady here, u scaring her off just like that.. give her a chance oki.. Peace out.

tokkon1
10-04-2005, 12:57 AM
I do not think they are original compositions, bro. I have seen it before, unless the author now and then are the same person.

It dosn't really matter if it's original or not as long as it's steamy and interesting... Thanks for sharing joannelee. Looking fwd to the rest of the story.:D

MachoDevilX
10-04-2005, 12:57 AM
My Boyfriend’s Younger Brother (Part I)
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Hi Joanne, it's been a long time since we have last chat. Hope everything is well for you...

Keep up with the good post...
:)

nuclearkid
10-04-2005, 01:00 AM
Friend Nuclear kid.. Even they' aint her composed experiences, even she did adapt frm somewhere else. I think you should allow joanne to continue posting her part. It's kinda rare to read from a gal's pt of view. Even I dont 've good sex original experiences myself nowadays(refer to my sole thread!)Rather i'm posting my day-to-day life. And I do 've pple reading rite? Haha! No good for u to bully a lady here, u scaring her off just like that.. give her a chance oki.. Peace out.

Bully? Did you read my post correctly? I was merely answering a question quite innocuously.

asdfghjkl
10-04-2005, 01:01 AM
i read it b4 too.. so is s/he adding on something to make it more exciting? :rolleyes:

oxilary
10-04-2005, 01:03 AM
Cool people.. woah, slow down..

Nuclearkid was just answering my question and it was purely out of good faith i strongly believe.

and to the threadstarter, hope u dun get the wrong idea! it's just an innocent question. carry on posting and keep up the good work..

Eternity_Gal
10-04-2005, 01:40 AM
Bully? Did you read my post correctly? I was merely answering a question quite innocuously.

Nope..I just notice joanne's rep pts falling from 25-22..hmm. Could be someone 'doing. I wasnt saying it was you lol.. Kool it..

JaguarLuv
10-04-2005, 03:29 AM
Nope..I just notice joanne's rep pts falling from 25-22..hmm. Could be someone 'doing. I wasnt saying it was you lol.. Kool it..

No worries. Upped her back. Great story.

dennisma
10-04-2005, 03:54 AM
Great great story joannelee , but don't let me wait for too long :D .(i wish i can up u but i have not enough power)

lancer_dar
10-04-2005, 04:42 AM
tot tis stiory was up a long time ago?

oxilary
10-04-2005, 04:45 AM
tot tis stiory was up a long time ago?

but good stories deserve to be back mar for audiences like me who never read b4 :p

tittyhawk
10-04-2005, 07:35 AM
Can we just have one thread without the heated exchange of words?

TREKLIM
10-04-2005, 08:53 AM
Cheers to Joanne , she is getting better in writing erotic stories. keep it up we want more :D

vader69
10-04-2005, 09:00 AM
Nice story :)

joannelee
10-04-2005, 09:11 AM
Hello all,
thanks for all your understanding,
Machodevil, I'm feeling great...
eternity_gal,.....I luv your opinion too and all your posting.
Will posting the rest of the chapter later....I do write on my true story.....some could have read it and received some good remarks and a few bad remarks, cos they dun agreed to my life style...that's their problem. As long as I'm happy with my life, I will post more story...too but i was stuck half way of my own story, need some inspiration to write and finish-off it. (Love reveal after many years).
To all others bros, thanks for the support.

tittyhawk
10-04-2005, 09:13 AM
Keep going Jo... Enjoyed reading.. Its like an erotic novel of some sort...

sunny302
10-04-2005, 09:42 AM
Looking forward to the next chapter :)

joannelee
10-04-2005, 09:44 AM
“What are you doing?” Asked Andy.
“I am really getting too hot in these, I want them off.” I protested as I kicked them off.
con't part III

Andy’s judo outfit was huge, and it seemed to go down to my lower thighs, almost like a short skirt. I had to roll up the sleeves at least three times, to get my hands out. And with my pants off, I quickly got on top of Andy again, before he could make any objections.

So, there I was, on top of Andy, with my hands on his shoulders and lower body pressed close to his. Andy began to feel a bit awkward, as my bare legs was on top of his, and he seemed worried.

“I think you better put your pants back on.” Andy said.
“Why?” I asked, afraid that my plan would fail.
“Because I am still wearing mine, your skin might get scratched from the material.” Andy said.

I smiled at him sweetly, and my whole body got all warm and relaxed. I realized that Andy was giving me the perfect opportunity to let me succeed in my plan. It was almost as if it was scripted, and he knew the exact words to say.

“Well, take them off. You’re wearing shorts inside, right?” I asked.

I had hoped that Andy would not wear any shorts underneath, but only underwear, but I could not be certain. My ‘request’ served as a test, to see what he likes to wear, as well as to let me switch tactics if need be.

“I … I actually wear my undies only. It’s too hot to wear another pair of shorts.” Andy said shyly.

‘Great!!’ I thought. This was my moment, and I immediately told him, “Take off your pants then. As if I never seen you two brothers in your underwear before.” It was the truth, because both brothers lover to wear their undies around the house, with only their singlets on, especially Alan. Although they both changed their habits since I started to live with them.

Andy was still hesitant, but I took control of the situation and went up to him to untie the drawstrings and pull his pants down. Andy was so shocked that he just stood there on the mattress. With his pants off, I pulled his judo shirt, or Gi as he called it, lower to try to cover his briefs a little. It was not much help, but I liked it. He had on a deep blue brief that day. Both brothers loved the brand, Crocodile, and stuck to wearing this brand since young.

With his pants off, my plan was making headway, but Andy was still stunned by my actions.

“Look, if you are going to teach me ah, better hurry up. I have to go to the stall in two hours time, you know?” I said with a stern expression. It was hard to do, but I did my best and hoped it came out ok.

Andy agreed with a sigh, and resumed his position on the bed. I laid on him and deliberately pressed my chest hard, onto his chest. Andy looked at me with a funny expression. His eyes took several quick glances at my chest, before going on to teach me the moves.

He first taught me how to break a hold, but grabbing my last fingers and twisting them. It was painful and I cried out. Realizing that he had used too much force, Andy apologized and used lesser force on his next try. All the while, I was slowly easing my lower body over Andy’s, and he had no clue what was going to happen.

By the time Andy finished teaching me how to break the hold, my lower crotch was directly over his. Andy was surprised that I had come into such a position, I was laying right on top of him, my chest on his, crotch on his, and legs on his too. I could feel his cock starting to get hard under my crotch, and that made my pussy juices start to flow. My pussy seemed to have a slow fire lighted, and it was burning fast. My lips were beginning to go dry, as I looked into Andy’s eyes, finding a mixture of feelings etched in those small orbs. Surprise, soothing relaxation, contentment, they all seemed to be in his eyes. And I could only hold back, waiting for the next moment to present itself to me, waiting for that chance to ‘seal the deal’.

With quickening breaths, Andy told me to try the moves that he had taught on him. I smiled and quickly laid on the bed, while Andy slowly got on top of me. He laid his body carefully, gently almost as if he was afraid that he would damage me. I smiled at his tenderness, and that made me want him all the more. In my mind, images of his big, hard cock seemed to almost drive me insane. My lust was in overdrive and I had to have him then. I then asked him, “So, how do I do it again?”

“Ok, I put my hands on your shoulders, and you go for my last fingers. Careful not to twist too hard, otherwise I scream louder than you.” Andy joked.

I smiled wider, and let him grab my shoulders. I then used my hands to try to grab his last fingers, however I seemed to have pushed instead of grab and his hands wound up on my breasts. Andy’s eyes widened with shock, and his mouth made a big ‘O’.

“I I I I…. I didn’t mean it… I I I I …” Andy stammered, tying hard to let go, but I held his hands there firmly.

“Don’t worry. I wanted you to do this. That guy might do this what, right?” I asked, lowering my voice, trying to sound more sexy and seductive.

Andy nodded, but was still struggling to get his hands free. He still was not using too much force, still afraid to hurt me. It was so sweet of him, Alan should learn from him.

Innoncent$
10-04-2005, 09:46 AM
are these actually original compositions?


You are right to make such doubt to her work.. indeed, this is not the 1st time I read this 'story'... well.. so young boy!!! :D

joannelee
10-04-2005, 09:47 AM
Without much thought, I pushed my plan into full activation, and raised my hips and crossed my feet around his waist, locking my feet behind his back. It made our crotches meet, and I could tell the amount of shock that Andy showed on his face. I can tell that he must be feeling my moist and hot pussy, rubbing against his hard, erect cock. He must have felt the dampness there, cos he was swallowing saliva like mad, as if he was in a desert and his saliva was the only thing keeping him alive. He still tried to struggle free his hands from my breasts, and since he used more force because of the shock he had, he broke free his hands, but also in the process, pulled apart my judo Gi, and revealed my breasts, all 33B of it, bouncing free of the constraints of the judo attire.

What Andy didn’t know, was that I had not worn any underwear under the judo attire. I had planned so, that I could reveal my beautiful body in front of him. I was gambling on the fact that he would not resist me, but to make sure he would also be consumed with lust, I forced my crotch onto his, in the hope that he could not escape and in the end, end up fucking me.

(End of Part III)


Part IV of My Boyfriend’s Younger Brother

There we were, Andy and I, locked in an erotic position, and all I could do was continue to grind my already wet pussy on Andy’s hard cock, and holding onto him.

“Please…. Ugh… Da Sao… stop… we cannot do this…” Andy seemed to plead. His struggles getting a little bit stronger than before.

“But Andy, your cock is already hard. Let me ease it for you… you must be.. mmf suffering down there.” I gasped and struggled along with him, trying hard not to let him go.

Andy’s struggles grew more frantic and he was using more strength now, he seemed so afraid to be in that position with me that he was twisting my hand, in an effort to get free.

“Arr.!!!” I screamed, not too loud, but enough for Andy to stop his struggles.

“Huh.. did I hurt you?” Andy asked, and his movements came to a stanstill.

I laughed inside at his innocence, and used my left hand to encircle his neck, and with my right hand, slid down to his crotch and reached inside his briefs. This sent Andy into a slight tremble with his body. His body seemed to shake like he was being electrocuted, and I instantly knew that he was feeling immense pleasure from me grabbing his cock and stroking it.

“Ahhhhh…!!!” Andy let out a loud groan as he arched his back a little, before easing back onto my body.

I continued my stroking of his cock and rolled him over so that I was beside him. I also stuck my tongue into his ears and swirled it around his ear crevices. It seemed to send more pleasures to Andy’s body as he let out more moans and groans. My hand constantly switched paced while stroking his cock, alternating from hard fast strokes, to soft and long strokes. Andy seemed to enjoy it so much, he gave up pleading and seemed to relax his whole body to my manipulations.

I was quite surprised at how easy Andy caved in to my ‘grabbings’, but my confidence grew and I gently licked and bit his ear lobes. I was using almost all of Alan’s techniques on his own brother, and it worked better than it did on me.

Then, releasing his cock, I straddled Andy and worked my tongue from his neck to his muscular chest. I kissed, licked and sucked on his big chest and nipples and he loved it. My hands were not idling too, as they went for his briefs and worked them off his butt. Andy’s hard dick sprang up and gave me a standing salute, as if saying, “Thanks for freeing me. I am ready for action.” I wasted no time and hungrily engulfed his whole member with my mouth.

“Arrhhhh….” Andy moaned in what sounded like pure ecstasy, and it drove me to pump my head over his hard cock. It tasted slightly strange, him not bathing and still with sweat, but I couldn’t care less, my lust had consumed me and I worked hard to get as much of his cock into my as I could.

It was no easy task, Andy’s cock WAS bigger than Alan’s and I almost choked myself trying to force only half his cock into my mouth. His penis head hit my throat and I immediately had the gag effect, almost losing it and throwing up.

Andy noticed this and used his hands to to lift up my head. My mouth pulled away from his cock, with saliva trailing from my lips to his cock head, and our eyes met. I could see that he had the same animal lust in those eyes, as I had in mine, and somehow I felt our minds met in a strong surge of lusty passion. I pushed away his hands and went for his cock again, determined to get as much into my mouth and not fail this time. Andy groaned and used his hands to gently press on my head, helping me achieve my quest, albeit only slightly.

I lapped, nibbled, sucked and practically tried to gobble up his hard member, but the most I could do was three quarters into my mouth, and his cock head was already in my throat. I could not explain it, but I felt light-headed and my vision seemed to cross, as I kept on sucking on his long, big, hard cock. It was as if I was approaching orgasm, without Andy fucking me, or even touching my pussy. I never felt so fulfilled in my life, not like this moment, with Andy’s cock in my mouth, almost choking me into spitting his cock out.

By now, Andy was already adjusting to the whole scene and he seemed to take control from then on. With his big hands, he pulled my head from his crotch, with a whimper of disappointment from me, no doubt. And then he pressed me onto the bed and buried his face into my breasts. He used his face to wipe over my breasts, using his cheeks to feel their softness and suppleness, turning his cheeks from left to right, moving from my right breast to the left, as if my breasts were some magic cloth that cleaned his face and brought delight to him at the same time. I was squirming under him, trying my best to use my shoulders to add more pressure for both his and my pleasure. The sensation was not new, but Andy’s reaction to my breasts was definitely new. He made me feel that my breasts were a treasure, something to slowly enjoy. Not like Alan, he would always use his mouth and tongue and slather over them, he seemed like a big baby who was trying to suckle on my breasts. With Andy, the feeling was more intimate, though still lusty. Andy would gently kiss my breasts and nipples, almost like he was exploring every inch of them, making sure that he missed no inch of skin and also licking and nibbling gently on it. He seemed to be experimenting with every inch of my breasts and nipples, trying every move in his capabilities to see what kind of reaction I had. It was like I was having sex for the first time, again.

joannelee
10-04-2005, 09:48 AM
My first time with Alan could be depicted as more of a 100m dash, than any other thing. He was quick to start, and so quick to finish. I was left lying on the bed, the same bed that Andy and me were lying on now, wondering if sex would always be like that. Alan was not a guy that pleased his partner, always demanding it but never really satisfying me. He was horny all the time, which was still ok because I was horny too. But what really get to me was the fact that he just took off his clothers, made me take off mine, rubbed my pussy a little with two of his fingers, then stuffed his cock in, and was done in less than 5 minutes. The only time Alan lasted more than 10 minutes was when we were watching porn and trying to imitate the positions. He almost twisted his back, and I got cramps in my legs, that made us stop the whole thing altogether.

Andy, now he was a totally different person. He was taking his time, enjoying what he did, and enjoying how I reacted to what he did. In a way, he was pleasuring me by seeing how I reacted to his touches and caresses. If I gave no response to something he did, he would try another approach, and he was diligent in getting a response from me, no matter what he tried.

Andy slowly worked his way from my breasts, all the way to my tummy and used his mouth to smother my tummy with kisses. My whole body seemed to be both his playground, and his temple where he is now praying. It wasn’t before long that he reached my pussy, using both his fingers and tongue at the same time to drive me to cloud nine. And I never got back down to Earth from there.

Andy probed my pussy with his tongue, licked it and sucked at it, making my hips shiver and buck up and down. I swear, I almost threw him off when my hips bucked up. He was caught off-guard, but smiled and held on with his hands and continued to give me immense pleasure with whatever he could. My hands were gripping the pillow, grabbing the bed sheets and I even took the pillow to mouth to bite on it. He was that good!

By the time he was done, I had already reached my first orgasm with a low, drawn-out groan. As I lay there half-panting, I could almost make out Andy pushing up my legs with his hands, and kneeling before my pussy. With his right hand, he held on to his huge cock and pushed it down to aim at my hot and dripping pussy. I almost gasped as his cock head touched my pussy lips. But Andy fumbled a little, it seemed that he had trouble finding the hole to which he and I could achieve more pleasure. It was then that I knew for sure, he was a virgin. He tried so hard not to be rough, but his inexperience showed. As I could not wait any longer, I used my right hand to guide him into me. Andy closed his eyes as he inched his cock slowly into me. My mouth opened and got wider and wider from his slow and steady invasion of my pussy. My body felt as if it was lifted and I was higher than cloud nine, rising even away from the Earth’s atmosphere and reaching outer space. And as he suddenly plunged his final inch into me, I let out a low animalistic growl, satisfied and also wanting more of this filling sensation his cock was giving me.

(End of Part IV)

Gullwing
10-04-2005, 09:49 AM
Steam..me precum by just imagine...good story

GuyonGal
10-04-2005, 09:51 AM
You are right to make such doubt to her work.. indeed, this is not the 1st time I read this 'story'... well.. so young boy!!! :D


I read this 'identical' story before about half year ago time.... hmmm... this guy really good for entertaining the samsters at here! :D

joannelee
10-04-2005, 09:54 AM
Final Part of My Boyfriend’s Younger Brother

On the bed, with Andy inside me, I was feeling a sense of fulfillment and satisfaction that I never quite had with Alan, and there was also a sense of victory; victory over Andy’s resistance to my earlier tries on seducing him. I can say that I was very much proud of what I have accomplished.

Andy on the other hand, was the exact virgin that I had just found out. He was awkward in his thrusts and seemed unfamiliar to what sex with a girl was all about. He did not seemed to get his rhythm right at all. I could not help but compare him to a male dog in heat, humping hysterically at anything that resembled a bitch. Hmm, I did not mind calling myself a bitch, at least not when the word came from myself.

Feeling a little bit frustrated at what little grounds Andy has made, I pressed on his bums and whispered in his ear, “Slow down, let me teach you…”

Like a slave, Andy obeyed and stopped his reckless thrusting. His body was slightly raised above mine, so I used my hips and legs to lift myself up to quench my long-awaited lust. As I looked at Andy, his eyes were closed and mouth open, clearly enjoying the pleasure that I was giving him. I too was enjoying the sex, although it could have been better if Andy could show me some of his prowess that I had peeped upon. But, that did not daunt me and I continued my rhythmic movements onto his hard cock.

Although I did my best, I could not seem to be able to get Andy’s cock to hit the right spot, and somehow, that was adding further frustration to my growing tiredness. I don’t do a lot of hip exercises, so this constant raising of my hip was really wearing me out. Andy was still enjoying the whole thing, oblivious to the fact that I was slowing down. Sweat rolled from my body, onto the bedsheets, and my legs, especially my upper thighs, were beginning to tremble and shake. I was clearly not in good shape as Andy. He was still doing fine, hovering over me in a push-up position, never budging for a moment. Panting, I stopped my motion of raising my pussy onto his cock, and that was when Andy opened his eyes to look at me.

He seemed to realize that I was tired, but somehow his expression was asking me for something.

“Wha.. *pant pant* what … is it?” I asked.
“I think I know how to do it now… can…?” He asked… almost afraid that I would refuse and reject him.

“Of course… *pant pant*… go … go ahead…” I assured him.

Those words must have given him much confidence and encouragement, because he pulled his legs into a kneeling position again and began a slow pumping of my pussy. My goodness, it was so fantastic to actually feel his huge cock going into me that I opened my eyes wide and let out a long low moan, “Ahhhhhhhh……..”

However, that made Andy stop in his tracks again. “Did I hurt you?” He asked.

“No… silly… keep on.. I feel good… just like the blue tapes you watch… ahh.. re..remember?” I told Andy.

Andy looked surprised that I knew he watched porn, but a smile grew on his face after that and he continued to slowly plough his cock into me. It was really something else, I felt his every inch in my pussy. It was as if my vagina walls expanding because of his cock size, pushing them aside as he easily invaded my inner sanctum.

Andy was really getting the idea on how to pump his cock and gradually worked up a faster rhythm. I tried my best to open my eyes and look into his, but the pleasure was just too much, I would cry out every so often with my eyes closed that I had no chance to watch this magnificent sex warrior in action. Andy made no noise as he fucked me, almost quiet as a mouse. But his cock made all the difference, and he seemed to be so effortless in wielding it, that I was flopping wildly in bed, from side to side like a woman high on drugs.

As Andy quickened his thrusts, my cries grew sharper and shorter, my eyes were closed hard now, the pleasures that Andy was giving me was sending me into a frenzy that seemed to make my brain explode. But Andy kept on, and this was when I experienced the full potential of his big cock.

I thought that he had put all of his cock into me, but it seemed that every now and then, Andy would shove in another inch, short and sharp. That made me jump with both surprise and immense flooding pleasure. My eyes opened wide again and my hands held onto his arms, my nails digging into his muscled forearms, leaving visible traces of blood.

joannelee
10-04-2005, 10:04 AM
Andy grinned and continued his unending thrusting, never letting down on his rhythm and pace, it was too unimaginable. And to think that he was a virgin. Who knew that he was such a lover to begin with. And just when I was getting used to his cock and the thrusts, he pushed in another inch, making me scream out in shock and ecstasy. I was beside myself with lust and pleasure, uttering unrecognizable words of praise and other things. Andy just grinned and carried on. His performance exceeded whatever my expectations were, he was like a machine, never stopping nor letting up.

I don’t know how long he was fucking me in missionary position, but suddenly he pushed in another inch, and I felt his balls slap against the underside of my pussy. Finally, he was all in me! And my pussy felt as if a whole flagpole was inside, my insides felt as if Andy’s cock had reached the end of my vagina, and almost go into my womb. Animal noises came out from my throat, as I made sure he knew how satisfied I was. And then, he stopped.

Regaining my senses slightly, I opened my eyes and saw that Andy was looking down at me with eyes that seemed to search for an answer. As his cock was so big, my vagina was so filled up, and also burning, I could not really feel anything but a sensation of pleasure and also a numbness down there. I though he had cum, and was going to use my hands to pull him towards me to cuddle. But Andy held onto my hands and asked, “Can we change positions?”

I was dumbfounded, I really did not think he could last so long, and so I asked him, “You did not shoot yet?”

“No. I … I want to try a different position… can?” Andy asked, almost sheepishly.

“Hah… ? You.. you mean you want to change…?” I asked, surprised that he was so skilful in the art of lovemaking. “How.. how did you make your cock.. go like that just now?” I asked out of sheer, burning curiosity.

“I I… it felt too tight… so I go slow… Did I hurt you?” Andy asked.

It was quite a long time since I heard someone tell me that it was too tight, my pussy I mean. Alan only mentioned it twice, and then he just helped himself to my pussy, using it when he wanted to. Arousing my lust and then finished before putting out my flames of lust and passion. I complained to Alan quite a few times, but he just made me give him more blowjobs and then he would cum in my mouth, before even putting it in my pussy. Thinking about it made me angry. But, somehow Andy made it all go away.

I smiled sweetly at Andy and asked him which position he preferred, and he said, “All that I had seen.” My heart beat faster as I heard him, and I swallowed hard. I wasn’t sure if I could handle him, but I sure was not going to stop now.

“Ok, do what you want. But be gentle with me, ok?” I told him.

Andy complied in the most affectionate way, and the next position he tried was the side position, or as some called it, the spoon. He lifted me to lie on one side, then lay behind my back and I guided his magnificent cock in. It went in with wet slurping noises, a testament to how horny I was and how wet I was getting.

Andy then lifted my legs and used his hips to push his cock in. He could not find the momentum at first, missing the rhythm and he seemed to be triple thrusting before he could even pull out. I had to slow him down again, amidst the warm pleasure that was following through me. Andy slowly pulled out his cock, then slowly used his hips to grind it back in. It worked better this way, letting me feel the full length of his cock, stretching my pussy to it’s maximum, and also making me cry out loud.

Andy was soon using harder and shorter strokes to fuck me, and he even lifted my leg up to make it easier for him to enter into me. All the while, my moans and cries never seemed to stop, I was practically uttering nonsense and though Andy was afraid that I would bother the neighbours at first, he soon forgot about it, and continued with his fucking of my pussy.

I reached my first orgasm in no time, and my whole body shook so badly, that Andy was almost certain I had fits. He stopped and that allowed me time for me to subside from the first climax. As Andy cradled me in his arms, he hand patted my cheek, in an effort to “wake me up”. But, I opened my eyes and told him that it was ok and that I had my first orgasm.

He looked puzzled and asked me if I could still carry on. I realized then that he had no idea how a female’s body functions. I assured him that I could cum at least four more times before I go into a coma, and he looked stunned and surprised.

“I can only shoot one time… then I have to rest for at least 30mins, before can do again.” Andy said innocently.

I licked my lips and asked him to try another position quickly. Andy bit his lip and asked me to sit on him. My cheeks grew red from his request, as Alan had never allowed me to go on top. I always wanted to try that position, as some of my girl friends told me that it was the best to achieve orgasms. Needless to say, Alan never really bothered with my orgasm, just his, so I only had sex with him in either mission or doggie.


I nodded at Andy’s request and wanted to get off his cock, but Andy stopped me. I looked at him and wondered why he did that for, but he used his hands to bring my body onto his, and he lay on the bed, bringing me rolling on top of him. I gasped at this sudden movement, by it was really a thrill for me. Then I used my hands to push off from Andy’s shoulders and held them in place there, and using my hips, raised and lowered my pussy onto his still hard cock. With each stroke, I was growling from my throat, mixing with yelps of joy and even cries for help. If you asked me who I was asking for help, I think it was to anyone and everyone.

As I was facing away from Andy, I could not see his facial expressions, but I could hear him breathe, and he was still quite quiet. Only his breath is audible, and that made me pound my dripping pussy onto his cock with more force. I was practically grunting with each downward motion, feeling my bums wobble and shake from the impact with his hips. My head shot back when Andy grabbed my hips suddenly, and used his own hips to pump his cock into me at an incredible speed. My jaw dropped open but no sound could be heard, as I felt my pussy almost catching fire from the friction with his cock. Luckily my juices were still flowing; otherwise my pussy might have burnt up from the action.

joannelee
10-04-2005, 10:06 AM
Andy’s rigourous pounding made my whole body shake, wobble and tremble with joy, pleasure and even fear. Fear that he could go even faster and send me into a coma, as I approached my second orgasm. I was boasting to him, of course. I wasn’t sure if I could handle four orgasms, because I only had one orgasm since Alan and I had sex. But now, everything changed as my second orgasm ripped through me, sending me in total darkness as my eyes closed. I could feel my eyeballs rolling up and my neck strained back more as a low groan finally escaped from my mouth.

“AARRrrggggghhhhhh…….”

Then, I lost my hold and fell backwards onto Andy’s body. He used his hands to cushion my fall, almost like he anticipated it. Andy then used his hands to roam over my breasts, rolling them in his palms and lathering them, making me squirm as they were still sensitive from my second orgasm.

“Ha…. Ha…ha ha … that was… ha ha… that was so good… “ I said as I lay on him, panting away.

“I felt something warm gushing onto my… my… err.. thing.. inside… inside you… What was it?” Andy asked, his voice vibrating over my body as his mouth was on my shoulder.

“I… I got my.. got my… *pant pant* orgasm… “ I told him.
“Really? Then I be careful… otherwise you pass out from the fourth one…?” Andy asked in a shocked voice.

“Don’t.. du… dun worry… It… it’s not so fast lah…” I assured him again. Actually, I wasn’t sure if Andy’s skill and prowess could give me another orgasm, but I knew that if I let him stop now, I would probably miss out on the most memorable experience of my life.

So, Andy now turned me onto the mattress, his cock still inside me; got me on my hands and knees and we were in a doggie position. This was a familiar position, and I sort of felt a little let down with Andy’s creativity. But Andy soon made me realize that I was far from the truth. When Andy steadied himself, he took a deep breath and pulled his cock out, then with one swift motion, shoved it all the way in. My eyes opened wide again, and I gave the sharpest scream ever. Andy had stuffed my pussy to the hilt, and I felt his cock head entering my womb slightly. My pussy muscles instantly contracted in fear and pleasure, and that made Andy grunt softly somewhat.

I immediately reached behind me and grabbed Andy’s hand, which was on my bum. I looked back with pleading eyes, and said in a slightly panicky voice, “Softer… ahh… not so hard…” That made Andy a little scared, as he apologized and pulled his cock out slightly. That eased the feeling, but I was somehow hooked on the sensation. It was not pain, but more like eating too much and my inside fill up to my stomach. I told Andy to go slow, but don’t go shallow. Andy was quite worried, but I told him that I was not used to his size and needed time to adjust. He smiled at that comment, and did as I said.

My advice did not really work out, as Andy’s cock was too big and long. I tried adjusting my hips, twisting in one direction, and then another, in an effort to not allow his cock reach deep inside me. But it was not working, until I gave up and flopped my head and shoulders onto the mattress, curling my body. Now, in that position , Andy’s cock could not reach deep inside me, and I heaved a sigh of relief. But my twisting and turning caused Andy’s lust to rise and he increased his speed, grabbing my bums harder and pounded faster into me.

The mattress served as a muffler to my wailing moans and yelps. The bed sheet was also getting wet from the saliva coming out of my mouth. I reached my third orgasm, and my whole body tensed up for a few seconds, but what felt like an eternity, before relaxing again. Andy did not stop his thrusting, and was even picking up more speed, but by this time, I was too exhausted to cry out or even move. I allowed him to continue to fuck me in that curled up doggie position, and I could hear him grunt and groan louder now. It seemed that Andy’s pleasures seemed to coincide with his faster strokes, the faster he fucked, the more groans and grunts he made. I didn’t know what to do, and in truth, I could not do anything but let him fuck me. I twisted my head to try to look back, but I could only see half of Andy’s face and body. His eyes were opened, but with a scary concentrated look. His lips formed a wicked snarl and sweat was rolling his chest and forehead. Andy would reach for my breasts now and then, to fondle them and pinch my nipples. It would send jolts of electricity through my whole body and caused my body to jump a little.

Before I knew it, my fourth orgasm came, but this was a short and fast one. I felt my eyeballs roll up and turn my eyes into whites, and then a sense of calm came over me, as Andy stopped a while to take a breather.

“ha ha.. har.. har.. you ok?” Andy asked.
“…. Yes… you not shoot yet?” I asked weakly.
“No… “ Andy was at a lost for words.
“Let’s try… another… another position… ok?” I asked, taking the initiative to suggest.

Andy nodded, and it seemed that he was in a hurry to reach his first climax. I was wanting it too, wanting to feel his cum shoot into me and fill me up and bring a conclusion to this spectacular thirst.

Andy got off me and I laid on my back. I raised my legs up and guided him in. Next, I raised my legs high over his shoulders and asked him to hold them together in front of him. That made my pussy tighter and Andy felt it, as a smile grew on his face again. Then I hissed at him, “Now.. fuck me as hard as you can… than cum inside me1” In other circumstances Andy might have stopped in his tracks there, perhaps not wanting to shoot his sperm into me. But I think the lust and all made him lose his judgement, and he just obeyed and got on to a fast pumping start.

His strokes were wild and rough, and that send fresh waves of pleasure through me. My hands gripped the sides of the mattress as hard as I can, as I held on to Andy’s all out assault. He was truly relentless, so obedient and so strong. My cries of pleasure, and even pain, filled the room again, and that somehow excited Andy, who by now could not tell the difference in my voice anymore.

“Arrhh arrhh… ah ah ah… arrrrgh… oh… yah… ow.. oooo… oh oh … yes.. yes.. arr… no.. oh … harder.. .oh .. not so hard.. aw…. Mmmf… oh .. please.. slower.. oh.. faster…” My cries would have made the normal male go scratching, but Andy ignored them and just kept on pumping, determined to reach his orgasm and flood my pussy with his seed.

“Arrrgh.. arrgh… arrgh… ahh… ah ah….” Andy’s cries and groans became more quicker and his brows knitted closer, and I was sure his climax was finally at hand.

Then, as he shoved his cock in me, one last time, his cum spurted into me like a jet of warm liquid, and that gave me my fourth orgasm. My mind went blank and I lost consciousness.

It was a while before I came to, with Andy patting my cheek. According to him, I was out for almost 3 minutes, and he was about to call an ambulance. I smiled ever so weakly at him and thanked him for the immense pleasures that he had given me. Suddenly Andy got very silent, and then he got up, picked up his judo attire and briefs, and left the room.

After that, I only had one more tryst with Andy before I broke up with Alan. I left their house and tried to get in touch with Andy. He did not want to see me or speak to me. He told me that he felt very guilty, as he and his brother were very close. He told me not to call him again as he was moving out. And, that was the last I heard from him.

I never told Alan about what I did with Andy, and I doubt Andy told him. I was quite regretting my actions, as I had lost the both of them. But, somehow deep within me, I knew that I enjoyed the moment I spent with Andy. It will definitely stay with me for the rest of my life.

End of Final Part.

machoman
10-04-2005, 10:17 AM
I do not think they are original compositions, bro. I have seen it before, unless the author now and then are the same person.

Actually, I doubt if they are original compositions, too. Just my opinion, judging from the standard of English used by the threadstarter in other posts. :cool:

Eagle Hawk
10-04-2005, 01:15 PM
interesting piece of work..anymore?

sunny302
10-04-2005, 01:21 PM
It will definitely stay with me for the rest of my life.


Fitting epilogue to an interesting story about your past :) ..Keep them coming :p

joannelee
10-04-2005, 02:03 PM
Of-cos, it is not original, and I have never make a claim to it. Came across this story in one of the erotic story site...(couldn't remember anyone had posted it before, pardon my ignorant)so guess jus to share it with you guys...knew you guys luv this type of story...neber knew it cause so much fuss with some samster brother....guess they r too engrossed in this virtual world. I even got pm from guys warning me that i'm playing with fire!!!!!
Wow......What a guys....

DipItLow
10-04-2005, 02:08 PM
but still gal,i lurvveee your story..it does rock my world..haha :)
wld like to see more of these soon.

machoman
10-04-2005, 07:32 PM
Hello all,
thanks for all your understanding,
Machodevil, I'm feeling great...
eternity_gal,.....I luv your opinion too and all your posting.
Will posting the rest of the chapter later....I do write on my true story.....some could have read it and received some good remarks and a few bad remarks, cos they dun agreed to my life style...that's their problem. As long as I'm happy with my life, I will post more story...too but i was stuck half way of my own story, need some inspiration to write and finish-off it. (Love reveal after many years).
To all others bros, thanks for the support.

joannelee, now you say that you did not claim that it was original.

I refer to your earlier post above in which you wrote words like "I do write on my true story" and but i was stuck half way of my own story, need some inspiration to write and finish-off it. (Love reveal after many years)."

Please clarify as it seems to me that the above words implied that you were actually writing your "true story" and your "own story". :confused:

free
10-04-2005, 07:56 PM
Sigh, ssems like many samsters are getting "kriiat maak maak" (stressed) like many if not most SGreans. Writer never claimed it is her own story, even from her last post. Yet some of us will read things between the lines even if they dun exists. Why can't we just see back, relax and "watch the world go by" happily? Enjoy what we see, laugh with others and at ourselves.

Is this a result of living in a "more" developed country? No more life anymore? Frankly I learned so much from my Thai girlfriend. Take a deep breath, relax and medidate a little. When one's body, mind and spirit relax, things are as bad as they seem. There will be a way out, to carry on, if one only believes.

alphonsus
10-04-2005, 08:11 PM
Bro Free, agreed with u 100%. All here to have fun :)

Other Bros, relax leh. Like tat no more gal wat to post here liao. Besides the E-gal, she's the only one being active recently. Peace please.

Sister Joan : Nice one on your story :D

joannelee
10-04-2005, 08:22 PM
joannelee, now you say that you did not claim that it was original.

I refer to your earlier post above in which you wrote words like "I do write on my true story" and but i was stuck half way of my own story, need some inspiration to write and finish-off it. (Love reveal after many years)."

Please clarify as it seems to me that the above words implied that you were actually writing your "true story" and your "own story". :confused:

machoman,
If you had read my earlier posting, i.e.: "Love reveal after many years" (which had been moved by chief to the link plaza), that's my true and my own story... gotti... :)

joannelee
10-04-2005, 08:24 PM
Thankyou free....you so understanding.....smoochhhhhhhhh.......
:)

joannelee
10-04-2005, 08:25 PM
Thankyou also alphonsus....... ;)

sabaluck
11-04-2005, 12:32 AM
Whatever the case is.....it was a good effort...a great and erotic story.
Thanx for the good stuff, I enjoyed the read! :)

machoman
11-04-2005, 03:25 AM
machoman,
If you had read my earlier posting, i.e.: "Love reveal after many years" (which had been moved by chief to the link plaza), that's my true and my own story... gotti... :)

joanne, thanks for your clarification. I have not read your post, "Love reveal after many years" which you have clarified is your true and own story.

I wll find some time to read it. BTW, many thanks for taking the time to post erotic stories for the benefit of all SB members. :)

gogg3r
11-04-2005, 06:23 AM
nice read... very interesting how the story works out. :D

keep it up!

CNNcmg
11-04-2005, 06:51 AM
NIce posting Joanne.... Keep it up...
We need more ladies here to post.......

monster.cookie
11-04-2005, 03:21 PM
Whatever lah..orginal or not doesn't matter. What matters is a damn good read. Knn read liao feel steam while sitting in the office. Jialat after work have to seek release :(

However, this reminds me of a female friend who one day came to me and told me she comitted incest. I was like fucking shock becos her younger brother is only primary 6 then...Sekali she told me she juzt slept with her boyfriend's brother...ask me like that consider incest or not...cb fucking stirrer.

eddy
11-04-2005, 05:45 PM
true or not I dont care......all I know is that I had a great time reading the story! up your reputation points!

72229
11-04-2005, 10:56 PM
Hello all,
thanks for all your understanding,
Machodevil, I'm feeling great...
eternity_gal,.....I luv your opinion too and all your posting.
Will posting the rest of the chapter later....I do write on my true story.....some could have read it and received some good remarks and a few bad remarks, cos they dun agreed to my life style...that's their problem. As long as I'm happy with my life, I will post more story...too but i was stuck half way of my own story, need some inspiration to write and finish-off it. (Love reveal after many years).
To all others bros, thanks for the support.

great....look forward hearing more of ur true story.....:)

MachoDevilX
12-04-2005, 11:58 AM
Machodevil, I'm feeling great...


Joanne, I am really glad to know that you are doing well.
It has been quite sometime since we have last chat. Keep in touch. My email is still the same if you still have it...
:)

joannelee
12-04-2005, 07:16 PM
Thanks eddy for your pts., glad you all enjoy it, I had post other story as well, you can enjoy it too.
Machodevil,
Yes, I still had ur email........
:)

blade
12-04-2005, 09:52 PM
nice story!

Triple-X
12-04-2005, 10:07 PM
nice read there!thks! :D

vin^_^
17-04-2005, 03:20 PM
Of-cos, it is not original, and I have never make a claim to it. Came across this story in one of the erotic story site...(couldn't remember anyone had posted it before, pardon my ignorant)so guess jus to share it with you guys...knew you guys luv this type of story...neber knew it cause so much fuss with some samster brother....guess they r too engrossed in this virtual world. I even got pm from guys warning me that i'm playing with fire!!!!!
Wow......What a guys....

I agreed with u. Me also had such problems before. Trying to share for the benefit of those who had not seen before and it created so much fuss with some others.

PayFuckForget
29-02-2016, 09:26 PM
Fug la! Not origninal then liddat lor! She at least added a local touch to it.

forlive
29-02-2016, 11:40 PM
this story is nice, shall up and continue

Logically
01-03-2016, 04:37 AM
this story is nice, shall up and continue

Yup very good stuff

LogGal
03-03-2016, 01:28 AM
this story is nice, shall up and continue

Agree with you

Connert
04-03-2016, 01:52 PM
Nice sharing of juicy stories

Connert
04-03-2016, 01:54 PM
Nice interesting stories