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SexyStan
30-07-2010, 11:11 AM
I have been reading the threads and sharing by other brothers for with mixed thoughts for some time. Each time I come across a truely sexciting story with detailed narratives, I'd either go "wah... so lucky" or "wu ya bo" (Is this possible in Hokkien). I wasn't exactly convinced that I might strike lucky as my sexual encounters consists of only ONSes from clubs, FLs & of course my very own missus until one day, not too long ago, I finally had a story worthy of telling that's of my own... This is my story... to protect the identity of the parties involved, names & details have been changed....

First time sharing... Hope you guys go easy on me. Also, as I am usually busy with my own hectic schedule, developments may be slow...

jasper10
30-07-2010, 11:31 AM
please carry on.....

SexyStan
30-07-2010, 11:33 AM
It was only at the beginning of this year I paid attention to a neighbour of mine. I was unemployed that having recently been out of job and looking for a new one... With all the time in the world now, I had finally the luxury of taking notice of the simpler details in life... which includes my neighbours... Lol...

It all began at the lift lobby. I was back from buying breakfast (It was 12.30p.m. bros... Breakfast. Ha! All ya fella bummers will know) and she was hauling a her little boy-cub of about three years old, presumably back from pre-school. I didn't take specific notice of her until we walked into the lift. Seeing her hands are full, I took the initiative of asking her "Which floor?"

This was the first time I heard her voice, a mid-ranged one that is extremely stready one. She replied the floor on which she resides on and thanked me with a steady voice all the while keeping her hands firmly gripped onto a bag, an unbrella and her cub who was trying desperately to break free.

I pressed the button to the designated floor and thought nothing of it "Hmmm.... same floor..." staring blankly at the closing lift door. Looking down, I saw the struggling cub trying to break away from his mother towards me. Cute. I thought still paying absolutely no attention to her as my focus is on the cub, who was now looking at me wide-eyed with wonder (and probably fear) (most likely it was due to my height).

Sensing I was looking at her cub, she apologised with that steady voice of hers again, this time sounding a little sheepish and embarrassed. "Sorry... Glen! Hold still....!" Her voice promptly turned firm & resolute as she looks down on her boy & tightened her grip. "Its okay... Haha... Kids are inquisitive by nature. That's their way of learning about the world..." I laughed & smiled at her... "You've got a cute cub" I added. She smiled back at me "Cub? *Chuckles* Yeah..."

The door of the lift car opens and I held the open button while she drags her stubborn cub out. This was when I caught a whiff of her hair... "Wow... I thought to myself" It suddenly dawned on me that she is hot... as I slowly grew aware of her existence (Slow, I know... it should have been earlier...).

"Thanks..." She turns and smiles as she walks on by... "No worries..." I smiled back... As she walks out and turns left to the corridor that leads to her apartment (My unit is on the right), I couldn't helped but notice the way she walks... Alluring.

I thought nothing of it as she disappears from my view (I'm turning right now to go home" and my thought shifted to my prata & my stomach that now screams "Feed me..."

shark89
30-07-2010, 11:43 AM
Good writing! Do continue soon bro!

SexyStan
30-07-2010, 11:53 AM
Job hunting was difficult for me. My previous job was an absolute nightmare. Being my first job, I was inexperienced and unprepared to deal with the real world of work and the politics that came with it. Still reeling from that horrendous experience, I took time to rest, recuperate and wonder about life and what I wanted from it. Everyday was now a routine of sleeping late, waking up later, the jobstreet & jobsDB surfing that took no more then 30mins just as to tell the world, especially those that care for you, that you are looking for a job real seriously. Yeah, right... Lol.

I was recovering from all that and the next few days proved uneventful with no thoughts nor traces of that woman and her cub appearing in my head. I had more important things to be worried about... i.e. getting fed (hey... I was bumming then and my savings are running low).

Then one day, about 3 weeks from the initial encounter with her, I was entertaining random tops that were important nonetheless such as how to get fed, how to save the world, where to find a freaking job that pays millions in a year with minimum workload, fucking inflation, my fucked up ex-colleagues (You know these thoughts bro... don't you...) when a voice randomly floated into my head. "Thanks..." Hmmm... don't I know that steadfast voice from somewhere?

This was when I was her face again. A petite face with a sharp chin that complimented her petite body frame... she stood no more than 1.65m. She had short hair dyed in auburn streaks (that also smelt really nice by the way... primroses I think) that framed her face nicely. She'd be someone one would classify cute. I only classified her a woman due to the cub she was hauling. She'd make a girl in so many ways. She had pixie features, big eyes, not exactly a nose with high bridge but a sharp one at its tip. Small mouth but lucious lips. Not the kind that looks like lap cheong (taiwanese sausages) but something that's just nice. She was nicely tanned... again, not charcoal but just nice. Cladded in mini denim shorts & a black long sleeved top (the kind that allows the baring of a shoulder) and closed off w/ white sandal flats, she didn't looked like a mother and screamed 'style!' in every way. Yet the way she held onto the cub and restrained him with her grip & voice, you'd know immediately that the cub could only be hers....

I promptly closed off that short reminscent of an initial encounter with the way she walked... She didn't walk... she didn't strut as well. I do not know what its called but it was kindda a runway strut with really confident strides.... Confusing... Fine... just one word.... Alluring...

SexyStan
30-07-2010, 11:54 AM
Oh yea... One more word... WOMANLY....

SexyStan
30-07-2010, 12:16 PM
Having closed those thoughts, I tried to contribute to my family's home economics (the least a jobless bum can do) by taking out the trash. I opened by gate with a big bag of trash and stepped out......$$$$$LESS..... as I was thinking there shouldn't be anyone would see me in that span of two minutes.

I opened up by stride towards the shared rubbish chute right in the middle of the corridors to complete my very simply 2 minute task. It was then, halfway fulfilling my work... my the blind of the wall that hides people appearing from the other side of the corridor... was HER! with a hugh bloody bag of trash as well! I was nonchalent initially but I was now completely in a state of shock!

Like a deer in full view of a charging car with High-Beamed headlines, I was wide-eyed, frozen in my tracks, with a hugh heap of trash at my feet (Yeah, I dropped it in shock). "THUDCLANK!" (Sound of the my trash falling). How stylo, a topless male with unkempted hair & unshaven for the day, hugh pile of trash at his feet, clad in white boxers. I wasn't even wearing a pair of sandals. Guess you guys get the picture right? I felt hell vulnerable.... damned...

She frozed in her path as well and I could feel her eyes roam up and down the vulnerable me... No... not in a ISHIEYU (I'm-so-hungry/horny-I-could-eat-you-up) manner... Get it right and real you horny goats! lol.... But in a insinuating & disapproving manner. I would never forget that look on ger face. Absolute disapproval has caused her petite facial frame to cringe right in the middle, forming a cute three-lined frown (or was it four... lol). Something different about her today, she was wearing white horned-rimmed glasses, so somehow that disapproving look coupled with the glasses has those stuffs-of-fantasy, ya know... the dominate boss, the disapproving teacher, blah blah blah... Cute, Sexy & Alluring. Her hair was swept back... then (Ummm... I think you should put on a shirt... and yea... wear something over your boxers!) She said firmly, breaking the impressions I was forming while looking at her in shock....

"sorry..." I said sheepishly and bent over to pick up the trash... "I wasn't expecting anyone... no excuses tho..."

She walked towards the chute, opened the lid, & dumped her trash in.... as she turns to walk back to her apartment, she turned around and looked at me with her contemptuous look once more... before walking away in that alluring & confident manner of hers. She's even more dressed down today... big oversized (& over-washed) shirt with baggy bermss... yea the kind tt flaps around yr knees....

I felt like a complete moron... yet as I recovered and took care of my own trash... I couldn't help a smile forming on my face... Cute...

dj19
30-07-2010, 12:22 PM
camping for more..

SexyStan
30-07-2010, 12:32 PM
As I read back on earlier posts... I realized got lotsa grammatical errors... But I don't think anyone cares ar...? Lol.. Apologies nonetheless.... I'm rushing thru the posts and alt-tabbing all the way as I'm multi-tasking now... and I do not wish for my boss or colleagues to see what I'm actually doing. Please feel free to give me feedback on how you find my story. Also, brothers, if you like my story and how I depict it, please do up my points as you please. Thanks.

SexyStan
30-07-2010, 12:52 PM
For another week, I didn't see the woman again nor did I consciously wonder if I would ever (of course I would, she's my freaking neighbour). I was preparing for my irritating annual ICT which was commencing soon. Packing my field pack, buying miscellenous combat essentials like cigarettes & potato chips has taken up all my time. Now you know why BMT emphasizes so much on Admin Time, simply too much combat essentials.

Mon... ICT Commencement... By order of the Singapore Government, I am to report to my camp with my FBO by 0730. Sir.... YES SIR! I grumbled under my breath as I got up to my cold shower. 0500... of so many army camps in Singapore, MINDEF had to assign me to one that's damn bloody far away. No work, no money, no car.... which leaves only our most effient mode of travelling... the EZlink, SMRT & SBS. Even my dick had no morning glory that morning, shrivelled from the early morning cold.

Donned my Smart 4 and my stupid FBO, I walked towards the lift. In the extremely short span of wait, Someone bounced out from the blind of that stupid wall again...

This time she was in Nike, FBT, Sports Bra with a really loose T-shirt hanging over... hair swept back by a white... errr.... thick white rubbery woolen band? Is that what its supposed to be called? lol...

Yes... she still has her white horned rimmed glasses that morning... She was so cute, sporty, sexy.... While her T-shirt was loose and baggy, it didn't matter. It still showed her shoulders and the sports-bra underneath accentuated her ample bosom still despite the T-shirt... It didn't matter I couldn't see her waist... for I already know that it didn't look anything like she ever had children. And yes, her hair still smelt nice....

"Hi & Good morning..." I said as I tried to fake a disapproving look (haha... back at her) with a smile... scanning her with a fake insinuating look. She looked at me, silent for a moment, before removing a side of those famous white ear-pieces.... "Sorry?" Yea... the music was loud... & it wasn't some cheesy mando or canto pop... nor stupid boy band shit... It was R & B and I could hear Fergie going "Fergielicious...."

Crap... I thought to myself & broke into uncontrollable laughter.... She continued to look at me with surprise and idiot spelt all over her face "What!". I took composture and replied "Nothing... I said Hi & Good Morning..."

3 seconds of awkward silence before the lift car appeared and the door opened. She stepped in as I held the door open. "Not bad soldier. So how come you laughed?"

"Sorry... I just can't help it... Is this what aunties listen to now?"

She frowned and the same look of disapproval appeared on her face again... "Sorry... just teasing." Can't blame me for feeling intimidated, Hell Hath no fury like a woman scorned after all"

Silence till the lift door opens... awkward... but the smell of her....

My thoughts are broken with the door opening and once again, I held it open for her.... She muttered a thanks, this time without the usual conviction... it sounded a little unsure, a little embarassed and a whole lot pissed...

Oooops... I just pissed a hot momma off...

SexyStan
30-07-2010, 01:18 PM
ICT being ICT, was arduous aand lame. Endless waiting time for anything to happen... all for that 5 days 4 nights exercise to commence at the second week. Crap... the blind leading the blind, the lions being led by lambs. All that pent up frustration turned into sexual desperation at the end of the two weeks.

I reached by lift lobby late about 10 on its last day. I had not thought about her in that two weeks... but am now hoping to catch just a glimpse of it... It didn't happen. So during my first home shower in that week, upon stripping myself clean of my stupid Smart 4 and sweaty underpants, I wanked... while thinking of her (What a loser you horny goats might say... I cldn't agree more). I felt sick... but I couldn't help it.... I imagined myself ripping pieces of what she donned on our initial encounter (recap, black long sleeved shirt that allowed the baring of a single shoulder, denim shorts & white flats). I threw in red lacy undergarments for fantasy purposes & even included her glasses tho I didn't knw what undergarments she wore (I know its red coz of that red strap on the shoulder she bore) & she wasn't wearing any glasses.

I tried to throw out all thoughts of me committing that sick act (admit bros... we all do it but it is sick nonetheless) and promptly changed into casual to join my ex-colleagues for a round of drinks... As I just ended ICT & my stupid military exercise, I was shagged out & couldn't last the night. "I have to go... I'm damn shagged..." I told my ex-colleagues as I bade a hasty farewell & disappeared into the first cab in the long line of waiting ones outside the club.... I was shagged... but I knew I was sexually frustrated once I got in the cab... "Crap... KNN..." I reprimanded myself.... "Damn weak". I drifted into sleep....

"Eh... di ah... gao liao (Bro, reach already)" I was interruped from my uncomfortable sleep in the cab. I paid the fare & staggered to my void-deck for a puff... before making my way up...As I made my way across the lobby (no prizes for guessing who I saw), I saw her again...

She was seated at the void deck (at this hour? crazy bitch!), the one I intended to sit at! Crap! Images of my sick act and her "pissed-off" voice when I teased her at the commencement of my ICT appeared in my tipsy little head. All traces of alcohol evaporated. Being shy & sensing a awkward scene should I make my drunken entrance, I backed off & decided to smoke just next to the green bin at my lift lobby...

I was thinking nothing further, dragging my cigarettes and feeling my legs go wobbly from the aftermath of ICT & drinks when all of a sudden. I heard those familiar footsteps again... whirling around in anticipation of her...................... I watched as what appearred was not her and was some lame auntie instead (This auntie is no where near the one I was expecting hor... she's at least farken 20 years older!). My heart sanked and I thought to myself.... she's probably still seated at that stupid void deck as that stupid auntie (ya, the stupid one... not the one I wanted to see..." stare at me in suspicion from top-to-toe... I flicked my cigarette and walked to 7-11 to get a drink for my parched throat while cursing the auntie... "CB... WTF are you staring at me like that for... I'm not gonna rape a piece of shit like you".....

SexyStan
30-07-2010, 01:37 PM
I was in 7-11... having picked a drink & approached the counter for payment... there she was... paying for her drink... I queued up behind her, awaiting the cashier to process her purchases, not knowing what to say.

Awkward silence... Maybe she doesn't even know I'm behind her. She grabbed her stuffs and backed into me... I could sense her jump a little in surprise whilst she muttered "Sorry...." under the breathe in embarassment and shock....

"Oh...?" She raised her eyebrows having made sure of the situation...

"Its ok... You couldn't have seen me" I said as I shifted for her to pass and to pay for my drinks....

"You just smoked?" She quipped.... Damned... she looked so cute. I could feel my drunken dick trying to stir itself from its slumber.... pink mini T-shirt (NICE BOSOMS!!!!! SHAPELY WAIST!!!!! with shorts and slippers.... Her hair was unkempt this time round... but she looks all the more stylish that way... Yes... Glasses still...

"Ummmm... Yea..." I grabbed my drink... and once again, held the stupid glass door open for her.... "Errrr.... you are anti-smoker"

"Nope. I'm a social smoker" As she walked on by.....
"Social Smoker? Lol... There's no such thing..." I chuckled and followed after her...
"There are..." I found myself staring at that familiar glare, abeit not so intense this time round as she stopped in her tracks and made a turn almost crashing into me again...
"Hey... watch it!" There was exasperation in my tone this time round, probably due to the drinks I had earlier. " And there are no social smokers! 'Cause social smokers are closet smokers looking for some lame ass excuse to smoke because they can't smoke over and aboveboard!"

I felt like a moron.... What? I found myself asking that upon finishing that sentence... I peered at her face, trying to hold that exasperated face despite feeling shy and embarassed by my own outburst. I found her looking at me with amusement "Well, you are right! My hubby doesn't like to smoke. Its also bad for my babyboy. So think you can spare me a stick?"

What???? I asked myself as I found myself reaching into my pockets... "Here..." I said she took a stick & popped it into her mouth while I struck my lighter". It simply refuses to light.

SexyStan
30-07-2010, 01:57 PM
"Hmmm.... I think its easier to light it in an enclosed area... Let's go somewhere to finish our drinks & smokes" She walks off without even turning her head. Dominating... I thought to myself... I appreciate her firm demeanors... as I trailed after her, enjoying every minute of appreciating her beauty from behind. This lady doesn't spell sex... She spells class. I needed to know her story, that much I know for that material moment.

We reached the void deck and she sat down, helping herself to the lighter that I had put on the table together w/ all my barang barangs. I took a seat on the chair adjacent to hers and lighted a cigarette as well.

"Here..." I shoved her drink to her after opening it for her. She laughed uncontrollably in a girlish manner "I thought u were gonna drink my drink... I was staring at you!" She paused... "You are pretty sweet aren't you [MyRank] Stanley!"

"Huh....?!?" As if she expected my surprise... she continued to quip "Saw your rank and name that day what... you were in Uniform???" Oh yea... drats...

"I saw you at the void deck just now when I got back" *pause... "I thought you were angry with me for laughing at you that day..." *Pause... "Er... wanted to smoke here actually but saw you here and didn't dare to come over..." I said sheepishly...

She laughed and looked so beautiful doing so... "Orh... so you decided to stalk me all the way till 7-11?" I defended myself in the most defensive tone I could muster... I didn't want her to misunderstand "NO...." as I told her where I hid and why I went to 7-11.

"So... you a regular?" She asked, sounding absolutely uninterested with a its-so-bloody-obvious-I wanna-break-the-silence-coz-I-have-to-be-nice-for-you-just-spared-me-a-cigarette tone. "Err.... no... what makes you say that?" I asked...

"Coz I saw you in uniform? Or are you an NSF since you were carrying such a huge bag" She laughed. "Please... Too old to be an NSF. Rank too small to be a regular. Reservist" I answered while taking a sip. "My husband's a regular... air-force" she quipped "Can I have one more cigarette?"

It was soon I got to know the name of this lovely lady... Lorraine.... 29... married for 3 years coz of her cub... Yea, the cub's hers.... & she got to know I'm 26, unemployed and a complete bummer....

After 4 sticks of cigarettes for each of us, that moment of understanding that I sub-consciously longed for was broken. "I need to go up now... its late... and my hubby will get insecure if he finds I'm not in bed with him... *Laughs* Toodlez junior...."

"Junior...?" I protested as I followed her into the lift....

"Yeah... junior.... thanks for the cigarettes.... and good luck in your job hunt soon...." She smiled.

Silence till the lift door opens.

"Hmmm... Lorraine..." I muttered as I drifted off into sleep...

chikoman
30-07-2010, 01:57 PM
Thanks! Camping here for next develpoment.

SexyStan
30-07-2010, 02:17 PM
The next one-month was absolutely uneventful. I was desperate for a job and was hunting aggressively... (finally!). I did see her 3 times though (Yes, I counted) and in each of the three encounters, we did not speak further than the usual courtesies of Hi, Bye & How's your day. Nonetheless, I did felt lifted each time I saw her and honestly, to me, she was cuter with each passing day. The only cold shower I had from her was that 2 out of the 3 times, she was dragging her little cub, clad in the green uniform of his pre-school, with her. It reminds me that she has been choped, booked and confirmed by some luckily ass regular (Sorry, I have a thing against regulars) who probably didn't deserve her.

Then one day, while I was having breakfast at the coffeeshop(yes, it was at 1p.m. in the afternoon... Hah, life of the unemployed). I heard a familiar voice "Oei...! Alone ar?" It was followed by giggles as I looked up. "Hi..." I said in the most nonchalent voice I could muster....

"Eeee.... you sound dead!" She said, her voice monotone as if she's using every known effort to mimick me as she drags a chair and sits down.
"Err.... where's your boy? Glen right?" I asked, merely trying to create conversation. Her iced teh-si (milk tea) was served promptly and I tried to pay for it... "Save it... you aren't working!" She said firmly as she pushes a bunch of loose change to the auntie. "How you know that my boy's called Glen?" She asked as she sucked on the straw (nothing pervasive here hor bro... she sucked on a straw... we all do!). I thought she did eye me suspiciously for a while, like she believed I'm stalking her or something...

"Er... that time... you were restraining him? You called him Glen" I reminded her (as well as myself) of the first encounter... she was so attractive! I thought to myself.

"Oh... and you can remember until now? Not bad huh soldier..." she replied while looking blankly at my face... I thought I had a Nasi Lemak rice grain stuck to my face... Awkward..... "So, found a job?"

"What do you think?" I laughed "I'm eating breakfast at this time!"

A look of disapproval formed on her face again... (Yes... that look... sianz...NB). "Is it really so difficult to get a job now? I thought government mentioned that our job market is improving with the overall improvement in our economy?" Yes, that was what she said. Chim... this is no normal auntie or soccermom or whatever you call it...

I found myself confiding in her my difficulties & the bad working experience I had. I was even more surprised to find that she used to be from the same industry before she and had a cub of her own. She is learned and well-read as she shared her experiences with me. We soon found ourselves discussing about our common experiences, laughing & crying over them (Exaggerated... no we did not cry. LOL). As we went on, she started to be concerned with my predicaments and dropped lotsa jiejie advises as well.... Crap....

After three rounds of coffee... we went up together (not the same apartment or bed la... not yet! just the same floor)...

"Seeya around" She quipped as she turns to the left again... Damned... I am smittened...

SexyStan
30-07-2010, 02:26 PM
1 hour later... I found her knocking at my door. LOL!

I opened the door, after hearing knocks. Thinking it was some salesmen, I opened the damned door, topless again.... only to find Lorraine with that bloody look of disapproval.

""Eh... put some shirt on before you open the door or go out la!"

"How you know which unit I'm in!" I asked in absolute shock and disbelief!

"Er... Corridor is not very long? And I saw you walk out from your apartment to throw trash? Naked as usual?"

"Topless is different from naked! and yes? what can I do for you?" I jested.

"You can put a shirt on for one.... some trousers for two.... and since you are bumming, I guess you wouldn't mind accompanying me to Cold Storage to help me with the load hor...? I'll buy you coffee. Not cheap kopitiam stuff, Starbucks?" Simply an offer I can't say no to but being courteous, I asked "Don't you have to take care of your boy? Oh ya... I asked you just now you conveniently didn't answer lo!"

"At my mother-in-law's. You drive?" She answered as she fidgetted about her handbag searching for God-knows-What... "No... Unemployed people don't get car benefits from the government you know..." I answered and waited for that look of disapproval to form. And yes, did it form....

"Tsk. Lucky I drive...."

Well, I changed, did my hair and soon we were in her car covering the extremely short distance to cold storage....

SexyStan
30-07-2010, 02:38 PM
In HER car.... I almost blew my top....

That 10 minutes car ride seemed like eternity... with her calling me "Junior" once every 30 seconds. She knew I didn't like it... It was obvious even if I didn't make it known... much less I DID MAKE IT KNOWN! She was going on and on about how a guy should have a car.... how a guy should never allow himself to be jobless.... blah blah blah blah...

To shut out the noise, my thoughts simply closed the noise out and started admiring how she looked. Her hair's nicely done. She was casually dressed in a RL polo T-shirt, those mini ones for ladies, jeans & flats. Clutching a coach bag, I was wondering how one like her could be a mother! Save for her nagging, she looked nowhere like one. She wasn't wearing any glasses today and she wore light make-up. Hmmm... make-up.... I've never seen her in make up and boy did she look good. I continued to shut out the noise... "Glasses??? or no Glasses..." Haha.... I couldn't choose... I liked both...

"Oei... junior.... are you listening anot? Bloody hell!"

"Did you just curse?" I was tickle into laughter... when she curses... its cute beyond description... so many sides of her, the poise, the cute, the vulgar... I was wondering which I prefer more... "Ya la ya la... I heard..." As I continued to mimick her voice "Junior... Guys must always have a job.... blah blah blah blah..."

I retaliated by calling her a crazy bitch who runs at 5 bloody a.m. and a stupid one coz she can drive to Cold Storage and ask me to help her out only when she's back....

Her reply with a mischievous look and twinkling eyes...

"Well, I don't look like a mother do I? It takes efforts... Stupid? Hahahaa... I'm smart... 'Cause you'll be carrying everything to the car and after I drive back.... you'll be carrying everything up! Btw, I can't call you down... I don't have your farking no...."

"Did you curse again?" I laughed as I opened the door... yes... we have reached our destination.

SexyStan
30-07-2010, 02:55 PM
At the supermarket... I felt like a slave.

She was making me carry her basket & reaching for high shelves where her 1.65m body frame couldn't reach. I walked behind her most of the time, because the basket was getting heavier and heavier which each bloody item she dumps in it and of course, to admire her without her knowing. Boy does this girl knows what she wants, chocolates, twisties, lays... you name it, she's dumped it. Crap... I couldn't help wondering how someone like her can remain so slender. She was reaching for a lays on a high shelve and I was admiring the lines of her waist when.... "Oei... are you looking at my waist? Hahaha.... kidding. Can you get that Lays for me?" What a turn off.... Lol

Aisle to aisle, I grumbled and yet I couldn't help being amused whenever we chit chat. It was weird. I barely know her. We laughed as we walked, I dumped a few more items on behalf of her, recommending to her stuffs I knew I was good. As we were at the cashier, she proudly declared "30% groceries, 70% my girly stash!" That familiar twinkle in her eye was there once more... I melted.

The items were heavy I assure you but she made good her word. Starbucks... but I should have known.... Things are never free. They've never been, its the laws of the world.

"Hahaha... I asked you here because I wanted my Starbucks fix. But a starbucks fix is never completed without ciggies... so..."

Automatically, I shoved my cigarette box to her... "Should have known..."

We both chuckled as we sipped on our coffee & dragged on our cigarette... and started chatting about everything we have in common. Our industry, the market, politics. I realized now... to put it simply she's definitely democrat (farking liberalists) & I'm definitely republican (in-the-mud conservatist). Our discussions were deep and lively... hoping effortlessly from topic to topic.

I got to know more about her. She was young and aspiring then, but naive. Fell in love, got pregnant and married her present husband. Husband's a regular so she gave up her fledging career so that he could focus on his since he's nowhere near his gratuity. Gave it all up and her life changed...

"Yah... nowadays people call me auntie... my ex-colleagues as well... you as well.... WTH!" She ranted... and chuckled. "Life changes after marriage, even for women, question is... is the change worth it?"

I saw in her eyes then, a slight hint of regret. I knew she was asking herself that question. I fell silent. I know she loved her job and her life back then.

"I respect the choice you've made. Your husband is extremely lucky..."

The cuppa session at starbucks was the most engaging ones I had thus far.

"I've gotta go... My husband will be back at 6 and we need to pick Glen up... Let's go..."

SexyStan
30-07-2010, 03:02 PM
A number of hi-byes and some more shots of coffeeshop coffee went by in the next month. After bumming for so long, I've finally found a job after severe deliberation and consideration.

3 days into my new job, I bumped into Lorraine again...

I was heading downstairs to set off for work in the morning. As the lift car door opened on the ground floor, there she was, looking beautifully casual as usual.

"Wow... Looking smart. Shirt, pants, tie... Nice." She took a step back and said, examining me from head to toe... "Hair's made up too... no longer scruffy". "Interview ah?"

I laughed and told her I've got a job. "Really? What as?" I briefly described my new job to her and how I came to make that choice. She had a part to play in my decision after all, she kindda approved of it when nothing was concrete back then.

"Wow... Good.... Ya... I think it'll work out. This is what you need now. Do you have a card?"

"Sure!" I said confidently and gave it to her.

"Good luck..." She smiled and bade me as she walks into the lift.

Yeah... I need it... and I'm so gonna do well in this.... I told myself as I watched the door close.

SexyStan
30-07-2010, 03:14 PM
Later that day, while I was in the office trying to get a hang of things... My mobile phone rang...

"Hello... Stanley speaking..."
"Guess who????" You could tell at once the voice was a falsetto...
"Errrrr....." I said as the line broke into hysterical laughter...
"Lorraine.... Sleepyhead... Wei... still asleep ah? Be serious at work!"
"Hi Girl... Yes, what can I do for you?"
"Ahahaha... what can you do for me? How's work?"
"Okay... Still learning the ropes...."
"Yah... its always as such in a new place... but it should come on pretty quickly for you. You are bright... moreover, its the same industry what. Its not like you've never done whatever you are doing now before. You use to do it everyday! I'm sure you do fine..." She encouraged. "Good luck, by the way, you wanna go run with me tomorrow morning?"
"Sure... what time?"
"5a.m." She replied. "Seeya then.... All the best for your newfound career".

Click

Madness... I was thinking... I'm a working man and I'm schooling as well, having taken up a part-time degree... 5a.m.?

Nonetheless I was longing to see her....

SexyStan
30-07-2010, 03:28 PM
At the agreed time the next morning... Yes... five bloody a.m.... I waited for her downstairs... at the void-deck... I was feeling lethargic as I have not fully awaken from my sleep yet...

All that changed when Lorraine appeared in white running shirt (the kind where the collar is really a lil low-cute peek-a-boo and shorts (by shorts, it really is damn short!). She was wearing her white band again w/ glasses. My dick had a slight erection as she walked towards me. Boy... I'm a sucker for legs...

"Let's go" She quipped as she broke into a run"
"To where? No iPod no fergie today?" I asked in jest.
"Nope. Its rude to have ear-pieces stuck in your ears when someone's running next to you. I'm nice boy..." she laughed.

We started our jog? No ear-pieces? Right... it wasn't like we were gonna talk to one another. I couldn't talk through-out the run, I was simply breathless. This girl had stamina. On our 1st run together, she took me on a 5km wild goose chase.

"You need to train my boy..." She said at the end of the run. I felt my dick getting aroused again as I looked at her panting, sweaty self. Haha... nice... her tanned skin tone was radiating nicely in the morning sun.

"I need to ready Glen for school. You have any early morning appointments?"

"Uh no... since I just started...." I replied.

She smiled and said... "Good... I've helped you gotten a few clients already... be nice to them." She paused and then continued "If you can, I've got a friend whom you should see today, if you can afford the time that is."

"Sure" I was all excited....

"K... I'm gonna take Glen to school first... Meet you downstairs at 930..."

yang punk
30-07-2010, 03:35 PM
Wow you are very productive...I like! Hate those who post 1 para and then disappear for ages...besides you're a good writer. Like your style.

Your're in insurance?

sonny
30-07-2010, 03:36 PM
Eloquent. Thanks for sharing.

SexyStan
30-07-2010, 03:52 PM
I hope brothers here don't find my story too draggy. This is my first real fling encounter (story is real with only minor details changed to protect identities) and I do not know how else to tell other than by how it progresses. All above posts have told you how Lorraine and I met. The story is still progressing today.

Story continued...
9.30 a.m. soon came and I went out to see her contact together with her. With Lorraine's assurance that I was a responsible person who could be counted on, I did my presentation without much objections and the deal was closed. She went on to refer some more clients to me and of course, I had my initial good fortune with my new career due to her. We became fast friends, confidantes de-facto, and were jogging together every morning at 5a.m. on weekdays. As such, my day always started early and I was never late for work.

Lorraine later confided in me that she was willing to recommend her contacts to me because she knew the person I was and truely hoped I'd make it in my field. And one day, she mentioned after our daily jog that she'd like for me to deal in professional capacity on behalf of her as well... the appointment was set for her place and yes, finally juicy details are gonna commence....

It was the first time I had stepped into Lorraine's home. Glen was at school and her hubby was at work. Lorraine's home was neat and cosy. It was simply across the corridor and yet I felt I had stepped into another world... At the designated appointment timing, I showed up, with tons of presentation material I was prepared to show her. I was still going through the presentation whilst I pressed her door bell. I was calm and well-prepared. Having been in a similar industry before, Lorraine was gonna be easy as I could spare her as well as myself the technical details. Boy was I wrong... I panicked the minute she opened the door.

There she was, her hair swept back nicely with very light make-up on her face. The skin looks to be glowing in the darker contrast of her living room in contrast to the outside where I am standing, probably the light reflecting of her. The rosy look on her cheeks, her well-shaped cheeks, looked even rosier... Her eyes twinkled beneath her glasses...

There she stood at the door as she held her hands upwards to unlock her huge metal padlock, her white translucent dress (dress??? more like a fucking piece of lingerie or sleepwear) hanging off her tanned slender shoulders. The dress was short, the above-the-knee kind, showed her legs and without shoes, she seemed so naked. From beneath the translucent dress, I could make out the lines of a slender womanly body... not thin... just nicely slender with such perfect lines. I knew she had a great body but this peek-a-boo is too much for me to take. Nothing I had ever seen before about her or thought I had seen about her compared to that moment at that material time (later on, yes... the moments just get better... hahaha). I couldn't take my eyes of her body and started to wonder if there is anything beneath. "No bra straps..." I found myself telling me "just the dress straps..."

"Err.... big padlocks... haha... how come you are still in sleepwear? you put on your sleepwear again?" I asked sheepishly, trying to cover the fact that I was severely embarassed by how she was dressed (or by how much she wasn't dressed).

"I'm always dressed like that at home... its more carefree... moreover, at least I ain't topless or simply clad in boxers... mind you." Her gate swings open to let me in... "Yea... how you are dressed? You need that big padlock..." I teased.... "Sorry?" Lorraine glared as I entered the house... I suspected she heard me though...

SexyStan
30-07-2010, 04:08 PM
It had never struck me that I've never met the husband until that day, when I stepped into her home and saw pictures of her cub and her husband... including one in his No. 1 Uniform. He's actually pretty suave. That photo, and her interior decor, convinced me that this was one dutiful provider...

"Errr... Iced Coffee right?" She said as she walked into the kitchen and I continued to examine her place. Neat... Modern... chic was all that came to my mind. A different world compared to the HDB heartlands atmosphere passing by our very feet downstairs. I ran to the kitchen when I heard the whirl of a coffeemaker.

"You have a freaking coffeemaker? WTF!" I exclaimed as I popped my head around the wall... "Yea..." she laughed... "Go sit down in the living room... it'd be ready shorty. Moreover! Its rude to poke your nose in other people's house the 1st time u are there!" she said in a jokingly commanding voice.

"Yes Ma'am..." I mocked a standard salute (My salutes are really damn standard ones... lol... even more standard than wayang regulars! Lol... something against regulars). I plopped down on her sofa and started preparing my presentation when.....

"Here's your coffee.... try it.... I'm good at this!" She set the large glass of ice coffee right in front of me. I looked up from whatever I was doing only to stare right into the exposed gap of her dress. There it was... the left nipple! She's really not wearing anything underneath! I screamed and cursed in my head... not knowing how to react... "Er... thanks... I looked away promptly.

There it was... the elusive pink blop on her ample breasts. As I looked away quickly, she had not detected that she had been exposed as she had her gaze on the presentation materials I was laying out....

"Wah... you are damn serious aren't you! I don't have so much money for everything hor..." she joked as she took the couch adjacent to mine. "But I'll make it easy by sitting adjacent to you..."She jokes..."I was in sales... I know..." and winked.

What an amazing girl....

SexyStan
30-07-2010, 04:19 PM
Throughout the presentation, lorraine only raised minor questions to justify why I made my recommendations as such. She shared with me her concerns & her needs which I heard her loud and clear and take into account to slowly modify the presentation to her needs. She's a technical person, like I am, so I hear her loud and clear even without her telling me all these.

Other than hearing her though, I was hearing another voice screaming in my head "Its pinK! Its pink!" and a third one "Shut up you farking perv!she's a client, a friend and she's married!". The exposed nipple popped up from time to time in slow motion... the exposed gap of her dress opening up slowly more and more till it is exposed.... It was driving me crazy and I was having a hard-on. As I was wearing those tight tapered pants around the ankles, I was afraid the bulge would show...

"If I might ask, how come you are only planning for Glen & yourself..." I asked in the most professional tone I could muster... "You were formerly from the same industry as well... I trust your judgment and I don't believe there are recommendations I can make that you don't know of..."

I was trying hard to concentrate but I have been finding it extremely difficult to focus, more so as the presentation dragged on by, as I was easily distracted by her every movement, her gentle shifting of positions, each time she bends over to look at my presentation or to raise earnest questions... The nipple was nothing. She is so beautiful...

But having completed my question, my focus was drawn to a hint of unhappiness in her eyes... Tragic I would say... she willed a smiled by curling her lips... but the gaze in her eyes did not change?

"Liked the coffee?" She got up from her seat... "I'll get you some more..."

SexyStan
30-07-2010, 04:32 PM
The incredulous part comes now... with its endings even more incredulous. My eyes were wide-opened with shock when it happened...

I was lying back on the couch when Lorraine came back with the coffee again... As she walked out of the Kitchen, I had a good view of her. She is so beautiful... she set my coffee down and was exposed once more... No nipples though this time... Just the cleavage. It was enough to drive me nuts.

I held my breath as Lorraine recovered to an upright position. She then walked behind me and around the couch I was on to take a seat next to me. I could feel my hands quiver as I reached for the new glass of coffee... It is a good cup of coffee... Starbucks can't compare... I told myself, trying to focus on the glass that is in my hands as I sipped from it with deliberated appreciation.

"So where do I sign?" Lorraine asked as she leaned towards me. I could feel her left breast on my arm as her voice gently travelled into my ear. I could feel my senses heighten... My sense of hearing detecting a type of sensuality I know to be in her but never seen it manifest... my sense of touch detecting the erected pink nipple on her ample bosom (I do not know the size though... but agar-logy tells 34c?) which I had a peek of and now feel pressing on my arm...

Coffee was now flying in all directions as she chuckles concurrently... She reached for a piece of tissue from the box that is on the coffee-table...

"Here..." She attempted to wipe the coffee off my stained sleeve. In doing so, she leaned closer to me and that was when the strap on her lft shoulder slid down her slender arms....

SexyStan
30-07-2010, 04:39 PM
With the strap holding whatever that's flimsy piece of cloth that supposed to be held together out of the way, you can be sure whatever that flimsy piece of cloth was supposed to be cover is now left uncovered....

Well, just part of it, not all of it. But what was elusive is now clarity, with 3/4 of her left breasts exposed and her left nipple sticking out invitingly... It was a beautiful sight to behold... something I'd that bring a tear to my eye. But no, at that moment, when all else stood still, so did my breathe.

Regaining composture, Lorraine brought the strap up to her shoulders once more whilst working on the stain on my sleeves... "Ooops... awkward......" She teased....

In my mind, I was thinking how the fuck can this crazy bitch be so composed! I'm already losing my sanity! But being professional, my face managed to muster a simple smile and I muttered.... "Yea... awkward..."

Lorraine laid on my chest quietly and I found myself wrapping my arms around her... that moment seemed to last forever until I could no longer control myself and planted a kiss on her forehead....

Frankiestine
30-07-2010, 04:44 PM
I love it, one can sense the build up to a eruption of passionate love making.

SexyStan
30-07-2010, 04:47 PM
That was it... I'm sure you guys have impressions of a calm lake full of graceful flamingoes? Then all of a sudden a gunshot went off and the graceful, nonchalent flamingoes take off in all directions? This moment was something like that...

After the kiss was planted, Lorraine looked up gently... and started kissing my neck. One thing led to another and she was soon straddled on me with her tongue in my mouth. I remembered running my hands up her back with the tune "sexyback" playing in my head repeatedly refusing to go off...

Before I knew it, I was feeling her back not from outside her dress but from the inside... She was on me, tongue in my mouth and I was reciprocating... She was moving her hips in an alluring mock riding fashion and I was feeling her wonderful bum and telling myself "NO PANTIES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"

She moved her head in a graceful fashion as I planted kiss after kiss on her neck... before her tongue was in mine again... She only moved her head because she needed to let out a moan?

It was beautiful... I remembered telling her "You are so beautiful..." with her letting out the most subtle of moans... My hands were running down the side of her body and up to her bosom when I stopped....

I can't do this... "We can't do this..." I heard a voice repeating what's said in my head... She looked at me, and smiled the sweetest smile I've ever seen...

"I know...." Lorraine planted the gentlest of kisses on my forehead and buttoned my unbuttoned first two buttons of my shirt... tightened my tie and said "So... where do I sign?"

dj19
30-07-2010, 04:54 PM
if got some visuals to go along the story will be belly good le... heheheheh:D

SexyStan
30-07-2010, 05:33 PM
if got some visuals to go along the story will be belly good le... heheheheh:D

Sorry Bro... I have to disappoint you here as the relationship between Lorraine & I is one based on mutual respect for each other's privacy. Pics were never taken for the purpose of enhancing the atmosphere and kinkiness simply because it cannot be done. She's married and she's not the only person involved... =)

Please continue to furnish me with your valuable feedback bros. Thank you for those who have upped me by giving me valuable points. To those who think that the story thus far is a bit of a anti-climax... do not worry. There's more to come, not forgetting that the story is still developing....

SexyStan
30-07-2010, 05:53 PM
"Where do I sign..." Lorraine's once again composed voice rings out in my ear, reverberating through every ounce of muscle I have. We have both regained our composture. While I can only manage a sincerely smile that somehow looks sheepish, she was perfectly composed...

I watched as she puts her signature on every line she's suppoised to sign on. Her signatures were crisp and perfect, every single one of them.

"Done!" She exclaimed with her last stroke of the pen in place on the final page of tedious documentations. I smiled at her "Thank you!" and inspected every page. All in place, nothing missing...

I looked at her pretty pixie face and found her staring right back at me, both her hands raised to sweep her messed up face back into a tinny bunch. The fringe still falls perfectly on her sweet face, her gaze a twinkling one...

"Yup!" She said. "All done... thank you..." Like a child riding his bike for the 1st time, she inspected the documentations... "Yup, all done..."

"Er... Lorraine... I think you should hold onto the documentations first. I feel, after what just happened, that you should consider seriously if I should be allowed to service you... or if you should indeed go ahead with whatever you've just signed" I looked at her blankly and said. Deep down, i felt this was the only way to maintain my professionalism and morals.

"What happened?" She retorted jokingly with a mock look of confusion? Her eyes twinkled on still as she looked at me. I knew she was scanning for all details available on my face and I felt sure she saw my brows twitch in anxiety...

"Look..." She saw that I wasn't gonna relent.. "I can buy all these myself... I was in the industry... I Know..." She paused "I chose you not because I find you good looking or because we are close..." *Laughters... "Ok... Maybe because we are close... but more importantly... because I know you can be trusted as a friend, as a person, as an advisor."

As she was saying all these, the look on her face was imprest in my mind. Even now, I can see it so vividly... Her staring right into my eyes... "I trust you are professional. Things could have gotten so much worst back then. You stopped it didn't you?"

She got up and walked to the door. "Besides... we are both adults. Shit happens..." She laughed as she opens the door. "I'll go ahead... and I need to pick Glen up."

"Bye Junior..." I walked right out the door in absolute disbelief and disorientation. She's one amazing girl, I told myself, as a whiff of the smell of her drifted into my nostrils, reminding me how she smelt just then...

Crazy was the next thing I said to myself, a smile forming on my face...

SexyStan
30-07-2010, 06:08 PM
I spent the next two days being confused about what happened. Not wanting to be distracted from my work & studies, I numbed myself with work and revision so as to prevent myself from thinking about what just happened.

Nonetheless, she's still my neighbour and my client after all and I cannot avoid the unavoidable. This fact was made known to me on the third day since the last incredulous encounter we shared.

"Wei... avoiding me ah" That voice that greeted me... Shit.... I thought to myself as I stepped out of the lift on the ground floor

"Huh... No ah..." I replied with a smile.. Damn fake I thought.

"No???" Lorraine jested... "Then how come you weren't downstairs over the last two days to jog? I wait until 6 everyday still don't see you le...." Pause. "Take it easy. I'm not gonna eat you up... You submitted my case already anot..."

"Yes... Was fully done up yesterday... your cheque was also thrown in already" I replied with a smile... still looking damn fake and more stoned.

"Good... I thought your silly ethical nature will cause you to sit on it... Luckily you still have some brains..." She looked at me with a gentle smile.. "Breakfast?"

yang punk
30-07-2010, 06:09 PM
She was sexually cultivating you, junior...so what the heck you should just let your small head do the thinking! Bet you she was disappointed at your lack of balls! She was literally hand holding you to her pussy and you had to embarrass her! :D

Hope the next time round you took the initiative and not make her lose face!

songsong1213
30-07-2010, 06:38 PM
Ya...ya... Let the small head do the thinking... When the army officer get to know about it then you know:-) is the ts parent prepare to move house...

To ts, please proceed with your story. Just be more careful:-)

SexyStan
30-07-2010, 06:45 PM
Breakfast was the usual, which was what I hate for the first time, the usual chatter without the usual ease. Atmosphere between us was still a little awkward after what happened. But at least this time, I got to pay for the breakfast as I was no longer unemployed. That made me feel better I guess.

It was at MacDonalds, over muffins, sausages & scrambled eggs with shitty Iced Cafe Lattes... That was one thing we laughed over, further loosening any awkwardness in the air. Gradually, as the banter went on, the awkwardness diminished.

The chat wore on over how shitty MacDonald's service is, how shitty the coffee is... and finally...

"How do you think two persons get attracted?" She asked with her usual point-blank straightness. Ouch, I felt shot.

"When two persons are most drawn to one another no matter how hard they try to fight it?" I found myself answering without even thinking.

"Exactly..." She quipped, her eyes twinkling once again. She paused a moment to examine my expressionless face... and broke into laughter. "So no biggie about what happened betwene us that day right?" Pause... "Like I said, we are both adults..."

"Let's go... I'll give you a lift to your office, if that's where you are headed..."

As I waited for her to get into the her and the moment she did... "I'm attracted to you and I know you are to me as well... Physically, Intellectually, whatever. It is attraction nonetheless."

She buckled her safety belt and once again, I had a peak of her accentuated bosoms the minute the belt went across her body and into the holster. With a look of indifference, she stepped on the accelerator and we were on our way on road and in thoughts...

SexyStan
30-07-2010, 08:10 PM
She was sexually cultivating you, junior...so what the heck you should just let your small head do the thinking! Bet you she was disappointed at your lack of balls! She was literally hand holding you to her pussy and you had to embarrass her! :D

Hope the next time round you took the initiative and not make her lose face!

Hi Bro... Thanks for your piece of advise... but really didn't wanna be attracted to her for physical or sexual reasons, nor partake in any act together with her back then... There are complications due to our relationship as friend and client. Moreover, she's married....

Most of all, she's a nice person to begin with so I really didn't want her to regret in the aftermath....

But yeah, things kindda change a little towards as the story progresses. Thanks bro for your encouragement...

SexyStan
30-07-2010, 08:11 PM
Ya...ya... Let the small head do the thinking... When the army officer get to know about it then you know:-) is the ts parent prepare to move house...

To ts, please proceed with your story. Just be more careful:-)

Yes I will, not in posting but also in the act of seeing her as well... Still trying to fine-tune the art of balancing...

SexyStan
30-07-2010, 08:16 PM
Lol... luckily today the workload isn't great... I'm trying to fast forward as much as I can to the actual juicy parts for bros who are camping. I was just in school and my lecturer was drawing the local min, local max graphs. When he marked it the top of the curve with a big red dot, all I could think of was the pink left nipple and I almost threw my coffee out (I was drinking while he was talking...

To Bros who liked my story and what happened to me, please give me your feedback for reference purposes so that I might know where to go henceforth (story is still progressing as we speak). If you truely like it, then please allot me some precious points as you will...

Thanks and I look forward to hearing comments from you guys...

SexyStan
30-07-2010, 08:26 PM
The entire day at work... I was not able to focus and I kept hearing Lorraine's voice ring in my head "How do you think two persons get attracted to one another?" The lively conversation with my dead-panned voice kept going on and on like a broken tape recorder.

Couldn't take it anymore and I went to the washroom to freshen up. As I washed my face with water, what happened between me and her over the past couple months or so kept replaying in my head. I must be nuts.... I knew I wanted her and yet I know full-well I had to push her away as well. Some brothers encouraged 'Small head over big head' but I was not ready to apply that maxim on Lorraine. To me, she was a caring mother, a good wife and a very good friend whom understands me to a great extent, much more than my own friends whom I've known for years ever did. My professional relationship with her only serves to complicate things further...

I was also wondering as well and deduced eventually that she was merely teasing me when she said that she was attracted to me. I justified that if she was truely attracted to me, she would share the woes of her marriage (she doesn't look too happy with it anyway) with me but she never mentioned more than she should nor was ever willing to share more.

I knew I was attracted to her charisma and poise, as well as to how beautiful she looked and how sexy she was. Finally, I convinced myself that I would never have felt any urges if I had not seen her pink nipple... hahaha... coz all guys would be extremely turned on by that...

I decided that I'll run with her the following day...

michaelrocksam
30-07-2010, 08:37 PM
Bro Stan,

your phrasing and style very readable and vivid.

You can be Singapore Woody Allen.

Well done.

Keep writing....

SiliconVibrator
30-07-2010, 08:52 PM
nice story/ real time story bro, witing for your continuation...:)

SexyStan
30-07-2010, 08:57 PM
I met Lorraine again at 5a.m. the following morning and for many more days to come. These days, as long as its a weekday, we'd make that run together unless it rains.

Life resumed to normal and our friendship grew as nothing was mentioned of that faithful day at her place. To prevent myself from fantasizing, I reminded myself continuously of one observation I made at her place... Her man is one dutiful provider. I did not want to wreck whatever it is that she had then.

We continued our practise of jogging together in the morning and I grew more and more comfortable with presence next to me. We started talking and joking more than ever. Jogs in the morn, the occasional tea or cuppa bundled with our usual hearty banters and jokes. Dinners and weekends are reserved for her family but occasionally she would SMS me for a discreet puff at the staircase. She was a great guidance to me and we would even discuss schoolwork (calculus, economics problems) blah blah blah. We would also discuss about the economy in general and about investments, including investments she or I held. But yes, deep down, I was badly smittened with her.

I finally had a chance to see the husband though... It was one evening, at the lift lobby again when I saw her hubby, Glen and her waiting for the lift car.

I had seen them including the guy of which whom I suspects is her husband (duh... which other man could it be?) carrying huge ikea bags and I queued up behind them next to the lift... Lorraine was turning around to talk to her hubby when she saw me...

"Hey junior..." She smiled as she held onto her hubby's arms with one hand, the other one restraining her cub. She quickly introduced me as a neighbour, a friend and her... ummm.... 'financial advisor'. "Stanley, my hubby Darren." Well guess what, without even looking at me, her husband grunted in impatience.

WTF... there you have a beautiful woman for a wife who's trying to talk to you and all you did was maintain your aloof silence. That's not it, when she introduces a friend, neighbour and 'advisor' to you... you bloody grunt without even turning your eye or batting and eyelid.

That was it. I found myself eyeballing him. Truth be told, he is imposing... strong mascular frame & tall. Few guys can match me in terms of height but this one can. In fact, he was taller (damned). Nonetheless, I eyeballed him till he strutted into the lift without even waiting for his lovely wife.

I was enraged.... that guy's a complete brute... a farken Uruk-hai from LOTR. Piece of shit regular.... Cocky bastard. Nonetheless, I sensed Lorraine's discomfort and anger (shows on her face) and backed down....

Pressing the common floor button and subsequently holding the door open while the bastard struuted before Lorraine without giving two hoots about her, I watched as she turned left awkwardly to her apartment...

I'm starting to realize why she was unhappy and the worthy impression of 'dutiful provider' was beginning to change.

SexyStan
30-07-2010, 09:05 PM
We continued our morning runs and occasional lunches and tea. Each time we ran, I would be trying real hard to observe Lorraine from all aspects and what warranted such a behaviour from her Hubby, Darren. Due to what happened between us at her place the previous time, I couldn't help but wonder if she had been promiscuous or unfaithful towards her. Yet, the more I knew about her, the more I found that unlikely. On hindsight today, I can tell you its practically impossible of her but everybody has a breaking point no matter.

I did not ask and she did not speak of it, neither what happened between us back then nor what happened between her husband and her. I did not have to wait for long when I was heading off to work when I heard a very familiar agitated voice.

"Who the fuck is she! You better tell me know... It's no longer about the both of us anymore! We fucking have Glen now and if you are a fucking man...."

Lorraine was railing at the top of her voice at a the void deck of a different block, not too far away from ours. I saw her put the phone down in anger and complete exasperation as she sat down on the stone chairs.

"Girl... you ok?" I found myself walking towards her, genuinely concerned. She wasn't crying, but had a drop, or two, tears welling in her eyes. Knowing her, those weren't tears of sadness... it was tears of anger. She calmed herself down and looked into my eyes, point-blank and expressionless...

"Can I have a fag junior..."?

SexyStan
30-07-2010, 09:19 PM
As Lorraine dragged on my cigarette with me dragging on mine, I knew something was seriously wrong. She never referred to a cigarette as a fag before. "May I have a smoke/puff/cigarette" were terms she used... never fag.

She continued dragging her cigarette and moments passed in silence. This time round, the silence was no longer awkward and you could sense her deliberating... finally...

"What do you think of Darren?" She asked, the lips curled around the sides...

"What???" Pause was my reply before I came up with this... "Honestly? Muthafarker..."

She laughed hysterically at my straight-forwardness.... "Oh junior... ", gave me a pat on my shoulders and looked me in the eye...

"You know you once asked me how come plans are only drawn up taking into account myself and my son?" She said in a cold, serious tone...

I maintained my silence and composture whilst trying hard to soften my gaze on her... I knew something was coming... something big that she's gonna let me in on....

"Coz I married him becoz I had to..."

Lorraine then proceeded to tell me the story of Darren and her. Darren was an aspiring young man, full of potential but none the heart. He is considered a high-flyer within the force. Woman would consider him a golden catch, his prospects, background and all but he was a player.... from their dating days... he was already a player. Having heard her story, I was convinced that Darren was never a man to begin with... he was a boy....

Darren had courted Lorraine with his manliness back then while he was young and suave (well, truth be told, he is still suave)... Lorraine had fallen for him when he, back then, grabbed a guy who was trying to hit on her in a club by the collars and told him "If you think you are good enough for her, why don't you just try it?" before shoving him away in force before a wide-eyed and naive young Lorraine.

Well, he's gotten her alright... and many other girls as well. She knew about it but was doubting the relationship only by the time she was pregnant... That was how they ended up together.... This is in gist... of course many more details are in between... but I sense many bros here are inpatient as this is turning into a fucking soap. Haha...

Simply put, he wouldn't even have married Lorraine if not for the fact that she had the balls to insist giving birth to this child whilst giving up everything she had for it.

Lorraine continued her rants whilst I look on at her in admiration while listening to here tale... This here, is a woman by all definitions, I told myself.

"...and if not for Glen, I swear I'll fucking kill him!" Lorraine looked in anger before breaking into a smile... "Thanks for listening... I won't kill him... not to worry. I'm used to him being a complete asshole."

"Thanks junior, breakfast?"

huh??? again...?

SexyStan
30-07-2010, 09:25 PM
Breakfast was served her place this time... (Yes, I walked her up and waited for her to scramble eggs... I honestly didn't know that it was gonna be at her place). It was simple, toasts,. scrambled eggs, ham, bread and of course her famous ice-coffee which I so loved.

We continued bitching about her bastard hubby who thinks that as long as he provides, he is god... Of course, to cheer her up, I tried to comfort her by digressing a little...

Since she cooked, I did the dishes... I was running hell late for work and she offered "Since you listened, I'll drive you to work..."

Work's actually only 15 mins away from my place if I walked and a similar time taken if on wheels. Crap... lol. However, as she insisted, I could find no reason to reject. We proceeded to the MSCP and towards her car... and this was when and where shit happened again...

kade123
30-07-2010, 10:12 PM
nice style of writing, and here comes the exciting part.

bigmannow
30-07-2010, 11:34 PM
sibay drama and sexciting ... hope not too late to camp here :D

siansianla
31-07-2010, 04:36 AM
Nice write, haha now I noe wat WND = .

Thanks

Frankiestine
31-07-2010, 08:28 AM
Keep it up Junior, you doing just fine. Your writing style makes for easy reading.:)

soccerpicks
31-07-2010, 09:06 AM
keep it up bro, may I know you are in which industry?

baoroy
31-07-2010, 09:35 AM
Way to go!! Last thing I go to bed is to check for tupdate. First thing I wake up is to check too... camping here too!!!

shark89
31-07-2010, 10:05 AM
Work's actually only 15 mins away from my place if I walked and a similar time taken if on wheels. Crap... lol. However, as she insisted, I could find no reason to reject. We proceeded to the MSCP and towards her car... and this was when and where shit happened again...

Very good writing style with so many updates in one day. I am like following this thread ever so closely for updates. This thread is hot!

Bro, waiting for you to come back. But I would not term what was going to happen as 'sh_t' though. :D

Vectra
31-07-2010, 11:30 AM
Nice encounter, will stay here for more:cool:

YingYang
31-07-2010, 01:01 PM
Hey junior. Keep up the shit.. I'm reading in my office right now and I can't wait for the next installment.

soulrapper
31-07-2010, 01:28 PM
keep it up man! get ready for a good 'meal'.. :D

houses100
31-07-2010, 01:30 PM
Great story... nice style... enjoyed the "soap opera" I think its good to give a little context and detail.. not just about the deed...

Rain-Men
31-07-2010, 05:30 PM
Great details unfolding as we move through the pages. She's such a gem that I wish I could get to meet her someday...:) Well am impressed that u r such a gentleman and do take good care of her yeah!

MaleInSG
31-07-2010, 08:49 PM
Keep going, Bro.
Nice story and good writing..
Waiting for more..

SexyStan
31-07-2010, 09:34 PM
Hi thanks Bros for the support, encouragement & of course, the points.

I'm glad you guys liked my story. HOnestly, if you asked me, I like my encounter very much as well.... only the encounter part without the complications... lol...

Apologies for the last update being yesterday but as I clarified earlier, rapid developments only happened yesterday due to my unusually minimal workload. Also, I was trying to rush the progress as much as possible until it reaches the saucy parts. Guess not many bros will like to read the exact details of how we met huh...

Please do continue to provide feedbacks as yes, I need as much feedback to reflect and ponder if possible... this encounter is kindda throwing the both of us into a slight emotional wreck...

SexyStan
31-07-2010, 09:37 PM
Oh yea... btw as I was going through the post, I realized multiple (should I say uncountable grammatical & spelling errors)... Apologies (not that anyone would care tho) but still I have to say this, the earlier posts were made under a rushed circumstance as I couldn't be focused on it (I was in the office and at school, so multitasking and multi-tabbing)... Also trying to rush to the saucier parts as soon as possible... hmmm lotsa earlier posts about development as I felt I need to type it out so that feedback may be provided to me for reference by brothers...

Thanks for the support.

SexyStan
31-07-2010, 09:52 PM
Her car was parked in the usual spot where it always is, as long as Lorraine could afford to. I've come to identify that that was her special spot.

It was seems to be moderately high (no, not the top of the MSCP) though as she has the impression that would keep vandals away from it (she had her car scratched once upon a time). It would be at a corner, nicely tucked and seperated from other cars by a pillar. Small spot, but then again, she didn't have a very big car (Didn't need to... small car for her, moderately okay saloon car for hubby) as the car was for her to pick her cub up and do her groceries as well as the occasional coffee with friends.

I got into the car after she did and she already had her seatbelts buckled.

"Hey... you don't find it very squeezy for someone big like you meh? Shift the bloody seat back la..." She quipped in an amused voice whilst looking at me struggling with the seat belt and that huge bag I had with me on my lap. "put that bomb of yours in the backseat first la?"

I complied, it made sense after all and I was kindda amazed with my stupidity for not having figured that out earlier (Clarification: I did figure it out but was embarassed to do so as this is not my car after all). Bad timining though, my compliance (and rapid movements) was met with her enthusiasm to help me with my load.

I shifted my body to my right, while being restrained still by the seat belt... and of course bag (or bomb as she called it) just as she shifted her body to her left whilst trying to lift the bag off my laps with the left hand joint my her right hands shortly. I already mentioned the bag was huge, rest assured it was heavy as well with my laptop and numerous files & documentations inside. It wasn't something a girl of Lorraine's frame could handle easily...

"Argh..." She said as she tried to manipulate that bomb of my laps... while I was trying to do so as well.... Too much for her to take and with the confusion (or rather concurrence) of both our actions at the same time, she tugging with me tugging as well, her hands gave way and she leaned forward towards me...

"Ouch..." She laughed while I said the same deep down in me. I was met with her enthusiasm to help me with the bomb... and with her head as well. As she looked up in complete embarassment and me to apologise profusely for that unintented boo-boo, our eyes met...

Lorraine backed-off slightly giving her forehead a rub with her right-hand...

"So much for seatbeats... Hahaha... not much good for restraint apparently..." before leaning forward and planting a kiss on my lips....

SexyStan
31-07-2010, 10:33 PM
I was muttering a yeah in agreement with what she said about seatbelts while recovering from the shock of banging my forehead against hers (errr... not so much shock tho... more of feeling apologetic, guilty and clumsy) when her lips met mine...

I had seen her eyes close... I had seen her leaning towards me gently... but the entire timeframe of which she took to do so was less than 3s... I couldn't possibly have reacted... at least that was what I told myself after that... Deep down, I knew I didn't react because I wanted her as well... How couldn't I?

She's beautiful. All the developments in our friendship and professional relationship in recent weeks and months have caused me to forget just how beautiful she is and turned on I was each time I see her. All that platonic developments have caused me to not pay attention to the way she looked (perhaps even smelt)... I told myself... or was it because I deliberately suppressed all emotions and interests towards her?

I soon found the answer as we continued kissing each other gently on the lips as I was soon aware once again, of how she looked and smelt. Her eyes were closed and so were mine but the minute I opened them to try to get a grip of what's happening, her beauty was there once more.... Suppression on my part definitely, for her beauty had always been there...

Dark Blue Denim shorts (Denim shorts once more, just the Denim shorts... not the colour... different colour now... Haha) and a white FCUK T-shirt with a really cute caption emblazoned across her chest. Her hair, now slightly longer but short nonetheless, was pulled back and tied into a tiny bunch. Because her hair was now pulled back, the auburn streaks now ran across her hair in a stylishly neat manner, with her fringes, which was too short to be tied up, falling across her face and framing it nicely. She now has one slipper off, nestled nicely to the side of where she's seated, as she inches forward...

The gentle kissing continued. Her lips were now wet from the kiss, so was mine. They were locked and our heads were now tilted slightly to our left shoulders in a symmetrical manner as we planted kiss after kiss on each other... Silence prevailed in the car...

I shifted my body and lifted my right hand slowly, to place it at the back of her head... running my fingers through her hair while my left hand fidgetted for the red lever on the seatbelt buckle....

"Twack...zip" my seatbelt retracted only to be caught by the left hand of mine that released it from capitivity and restraint. I moved my body slowly to break free... Another twack sound soon followed as Lorraine fidgetted around as well...

All the while, while the seatbelts broke free from their restraint and our bodies fidgtted slowly to break free from our capitivity, our lips remained locked, ever so gently....

Restraint... Capivity... We were now both free... at least, I was sure that was how both we felt at that moment...

SexyStan
31-07-2010, 11:19 PM
The floor on which Lorraine's car was parked at was moderately high, that was how she preferred it. Her favourite spot, her favourite floor... "To keep the vandals out..." She'd say while laughing in her girlish yet womanly manner. "Some stupid muthafarka scratched it before... damn long...!(scratch damn long, not anything else she was referring to that point in time horny goats... keep it in context!)... Not cheap to get a paintjob done, not worth it for such stupid damages..." was her reply when I recalled asking her on the third time I took a ride in her car on why she preferred to park it so high up for a lady such as herself, having observed that it was thrice in the same lot on the same floor.

She likes her car sheltered, just like how I sensed she had hoped to have that similar shelter in her life; That pillar from which her car hides behind from full view of hunting vandals to be in her life; To hide her from the a scratch such as that her car once bore, from happening in her life. That scratch, a testament of a minimal deed of vandalism causing maximum damages in restition thereafter...

Sheltered lot, moderately high floor, coupled with the time being moderately late in the morning whereby most people's day would have commenced and most cars driven out, we were well protected from the views of nosy HDB dwellers. The floor was mostly filled with empty lots with the view was well kept out by a tall protective concrete pillar in white-washings, our passionate yet gentle kisses were well private and between only the two of us. That MSCP floor, public yet so private between the two of us, was causing our gentle kisses to scream "MORE!"...

I could sense her breath as our lips were interlocked, meeting each other with rthyme and deliberation that didn't do too well to hold either of us back. My ran my fingers through her cropped hair repeated, occasionally running into the band and bunch that holds it all together still, the only thing that's in order despite the disorder that's filling the car now...

We both knew it was disorderly, which was why the kisses were so gentle and deliberate. We couldn't help it which was why the time-span in seconds, of which our lips met each time it seperated was lengthening gradually with the time-span in nano-seconds of which they seperated diminishing...

Seconds seemed like hours as my hands caressed her head and hair ever so gently with her and her left hand was now on my right cheek, occasionally rubbing the lobes of my ears, with her head nestling on her headrest supported by my palm. Her touch felt warm and gentle.

CK's very successful marketing tagline for its line of watches showing a naked couple kissing echos the silence in the car and the gentleness of our kisses...

"Take your time..." I heard the silence whisper in our ears...

fatfart
31-07-2010, 11:30 PM
good story.... nicely written....

otamay
01-08-2010, 12:10 AM
Nice and shiok :) up your rep points yea..:D

David_Ginola
01-08-2010, 01:06 AM
Yes upped u too......

yang punk
01-08-2010, 03:26 PM
TS she must have deliberately parked where she did hoping each time the privacy would prompt you to take action!

Any guy who have tried to seduce a gal in a mscp would have done the same...park in a discreet spot.

If it is safety concern I would do the opposite ... park where there is more human traffic so that it is not so easy for vandals to vandalise the car.

You lucky sob...she must have been cultivating you for a long time!

SexyStan
01-08-2010, 08:59 PM
TS she must have deliberately parked where she did hoping each time the privacy would prompt you to take action!

Any guy who have tried to seduce a gal in a mscp would have done the same...park in a discreet spot.

If it is safety concern I would do the opposite ... park where there is more human traffic so that it is not so easy for vandals to vandalise the car.

You lucky sob...she must have been cultivating you for a long time!

Hi Bro... Hahaha, could be but I doubt so. There are many minor developments which I have not included in the story as I felt that t wasn't material and their inclusion would slow the progress down alot....

She has always parked in the same lot and would always be frustrated if she couldn't, which I find cute. One example was after the Cold Storage shopping in one of the earlier posts, we got back to find the lot occupied. She was cursing and swearing...

But come to think of it, I do like the idea of her cultivating me alot. Nonetheless, nothing was deliberate and the progress between me and her was pretty natural to begin with...

SexyStan
01-08-2010, 09:01 PM
Hi to all brothers who have been tremendously supportive thus far

Thanks for the support and I am glad you guys liked my story.

My apologies for the slower update as like I mentioned, my schedule is usyally hectic...

Will post the next update late tonight as I am still outside now... just logged in to check for response and yes, I am pleasantly surprised by the support given.

Thank you all, will post further development tonight... Cheers.

GeMiNiZzzzZzz
01-08-2010, 09:59 PM
Hi Bro, i like your attitude to follow up on your events & your timely info to bros here even if you cant continue.

Unlike some point-beggars here, your humility & humbleness is a benchmark for some want-to-be story writer here :D

Keep it up mate :p

keltoh
01-08-2010, 10:02 PM
I seriously like your writing style, unique and suspense:D

EvilInside
01-08-2010, 10:20 PM
When is the next? Eager for read more...:)

SexyStan
01-08-2010, 11:47 PM
Hi Bro, i like your attitude to follow up on your events & your timely info to bros here even if you cant continue.

Unlike some point-beggars here, your humility & humbleness is a benchmark for some want-to-be story writer here :D

Keep it up mate :p

Hi bro...

Thanks for the support and the encouragement given. The appreciation is not simply towards you but to all supportive bros out there. I'm glad you guys like the story. I'm also a LFC fan btw...

You will never walk alone...

Posting further developments now... Am on the way back on Mobile Broadband... stay tuned...

SexyStan
02-08-2010, 01:16 AM
As I mentioned in the previous post, I am currently making my way back home in a public transport and am crafting the development thus far on my lappy and mobile broadband. It is thus clear that I am a fledging youngling who's working towards that pride of owning my own set of wheels someday just like many bros here would have accomplished and those who hadn't, dream and aim towards.

Having said all these, because I do not own my own mode of transportation, I never had any idea of what it was like to make out, or in the trophy encounters some bros here have had and had been so unselfish to share in their postings, make 'love' instead of 'out', behind a dashboard and in the protection of the steel body and comfort of leather seats. It did feel weird for me though for my virgin encounter then, for I have seen and read enough (courtesy of developments in Information Technology, Mass Media & generous postings from bros) to know that the male ought to be in the driver's seats... Hahaha... (Damned...)...

The gentle kisses and echoing silence continued as the flames of passion burnt on, our longing, mutual respect and attraction its very fuel. My lips worked their way across her cheeks and to her neck, making small, gentle nibbles... While our engagements thus far had been gentle, you could sense the tension and anticipation heighten and solidy within that very steel body that we were both cocooned in...

Her beautiful features now seemed so clear in the close proximity, with me making out the hint of a pink blush forming beneath her very light make-up. Lorraine, gently and slowly, tilted her head a slight 40 degrees to her right, allowing me more exposure to work with; Her eyes closed as she lets out the occasional soft, low, sensual moans. I could feel her right hand, now on my tie and left hand, now on my waist tighten their grips as I put my tongue on her slender neck, which now seem long and beckoning, and ran it upwards to where her ear lobes were...

Clarity filled my head as my senses heightened once more; My nostrils widening to let in more of the vapour filled with her wonderously feminine smell as I detected the sweet hints of flowers from her shower foam and spicyness from the alluring female fragrance that she wore... With the heat of whatever that was happening, the vapour felt like steam... boiling hot as it enters my nose...

The atmosphere seemed so suppressed, as our gentle making-out progressed. I guess its due to our situations then, that we were both held back despite both of us really wanting it the go the other way instead. We were both waiting for a sign to confirm the mutual concession to move on further...

This was when it happened. Still kissing the lobes of her ears gently and with my left hand still caressing the back of her head, my fingers hit the band that held her hair still in an orderly bunch once again...

The band gave way in a snap (No, it didn't snap... Lol... We weren't that violent... Lol... It merely flew out coz my fingers were in the way...) and her hair was let down once again, the stylish layers evident before my wide-opened eyes now looking directly into her shy, evading one. Unkempt and sexy, you can be sure that the neatness and orderliness of whatever that was held together just now was now gone with that very 'snap' echoing covering the very screams of silence I described earlier.

A gentle kiss on her forehead, then tip of her nose, followed lastly by one on her lips was met by a bite... a forceful one from her, on my lips...

As I backed away a little and pulled my head away while her gentle, sweet smile manifested on her face, I found my lips parting with these words formed...

"Blow me..."

SexyStan
02-08-2010, 02:06 AM
"WTF did you just say...?" A bewildered voice, which could only be mine, screamed in my head as clarity dawned on me once more coupled with the hysterically amused chuckles from Lorraine... She was hell tickled, I wasn't.... as embarassment and sheepishness hit me like a log in my face. She was in absolute disbelief and so was I, no matter how much I had always known that I wanted her...

I could feel my body shudder at the sheer stupidity of my request... wait... a request should sound along the lines of "Could you blow me please baby..."... "Blow me..." sounds like a demand in every aspect; Well not exactly an unreasonable one, but a horrendously stupid one (It still sounds damn stupid to me now the way I asked it as the scene replays while I'm writing this...)...

Her chuckles continued while I fidgetted with discomfort...

"What..?" Lorraine fought back her tears of amused disbelief while taking her time to study my contorted face, the twinkling in her hazel eyes magniflied by a slight sexy crowline forming at their corners and the double eye-lid that frames it with the lucious long brows that they come with.

She uprights her body gently, looked me right in the eyes, and connected with the man behind them, before leaning forward gently towards me. The tip of our noses met once more, before she planted another kiss on my lips coupled with another firm bite on my lips...

"Well, my car's too small for that..." She said firmly in her own unique composed tone which I know so well before breaking into a deliberate pause... With her unkempt hair moving slightly on her 'pixie-fied' face with a slight draft coming from God-knows-where considering all doors and windows were closed...

"But I guess I could try..." The low, composed tone turned into a lively, chuckling one with a hint of shyness as she evaded my eyes once more... the hint of blush which I had detected earlier on now filled with a slightly darker shade of rose. As the words came our of her lips, her slender shoulders pulled backwards into a sheepish shrug before pulling me towards her with both her hands once more...

SexyStan
02-08-2010, 02:46 AM
We should have been making-out a good 15mins or so with so much inhibition and now, all traces of that has vanished...

I felt my body lurch towards hers and we were locked in a passionate kiss once more. Our tongue met for the 1st time that day, that moment and for the 1st time after all these while... It wasn't too long ago that shit happened in her encounter but it did seem like eternity to both of us. We were teasing each other, kindda a mini-game to see who could entice who's tongue into who's mouth... Occassionally, she'd take a little bite on my lip or tongue as she sees fit... and each time, I would retaliate by restraining her body against her seat so that she couldn't move...

Her body squirmed a little under the physical duress I imposed on her as I teased her with deliberate provocation... "So bite me..." I whispered into her ear... and she retaliated by landing three huge chews on my ear lobe, neck and arm...

Promptly after her retaliation for my restraint, she landed a huge wet kiss on my neck. I could feel my spine shudder as thrill ran up towards its enormously physical structure of nerves. My legs tingled as the back of my hair stood on its ends...

She was now pressed into the corner where her door and seat laid and with the encouragement that came with her kiss, my left hand ended on her right thigh with my right remaining on her slender waist... which was now sexily extended due to the beautiful contortions of her body...

How the fark did it get there? ...I recalled that question popping in my head the very minute my left hand landed on the top of her thighs, with her denim shorts extending backwards to expose more of it invitingly, before promptly moving down in a ticklish teasing manner. As it ran down and reached the calf, my hand automatically gave it a loving squeeze which brought about another sensuous moan right in my ear...

"Oh..." the soft, gentle yet incredibly wet moan echoed and reverberated my right ear-drums as hot, wet air from her breath poured in... Her breathings grew heavier, the increased movement in her chest which was now pressing against my body moved in tandem with each time my hair stood as air flowed into my ear...

As she ran her tongue romantically around my lobe and down my neck, I gripped her waist passionately with my RH and my left fumbled clumsily with the very steel button and fly which held her denim shorts together.

"Ah..." She lets out a soft moan, her head arching back gracefully before she chuckled cutely while her right hands met my clumsy left on the arms... Gripping it tightly, I could feel her pushing it away gently... and unsurely...

I paused a little and her pushing ensuedl I looked into her eyes once more, pleadingly in a courting fashion. I was unsure too till that cocky look of that farken bastard who did not deserve her appeared once more in my head...

I could see ever so vividly how aloof he looked as I approached the lift lobby and with Lorraine trying to patronize him... How he grunted when I was being introduced without even looking at me while I managed a smile... and how he strutted in and out of the lift without once turning to look at her...

As Lorraine kissed me once more on the neck with her hand still on and attempting to manage my runaway one, I tried once more to fumble at the stubborn button and fly...

Denim shorts are always hard, especially when you have a space constraint. As I fumbled on and she her breathings gained in weight and rhythm, I could feel her grip on my LH relent and the button gave way...

All that stands in our way is just a mere, vulnerable...... fly...

nishikado
02-08-2010, 05:39 AM
very nice story :)
support you ~ camping here

SexyStan
02-08-2010, 12:36 PM
Hi once more to all bros who have been following this thread closely and rendering me support in so many ways...

I really appreciate the points you generous bros have provided me and am glad that you liked the story...

Am in my office now... Errrr.... I didn't have any chances to work the developments out yet as it is damn crowded with my colleagues today and I'm running out in a short while...

Will develope further tonight...

In the meantime, feel free to give comments as you will...

Thanks and errr.... Monday sucks? Lol...

SexyStan
02-08-2010, 01:02 PM
Lorraine giggled in a girlishly playful fashion as the steel button broke loose..

"Hahahaha... You are damn bloody clumsy... Don't do this very often do you...?" She asked, giggling and in a soft fashion as her zips rolled down in the direction my LH was tugging in...

I retracted my poise slightly and looked at her in a bashful fashion. Honestly, I was embarassed by her comment. Lorraine broke into giggles seeing this. "Kidding baby..." She cooed gently in my ears as she plants another kiss on my left cheek. "Oh..." Lorraine lets out another low-pitched moan softly as I tugged at her Denims gently, revealing her lacy purple G-String snuggled nicely in a triangle where its supposed to be, with a trimmed, sparsely neat bush peering our from the lace nettings...

Lorraine threw her head backwards slightly as the denims slipped just a little above her knees and I parted the string and slid my middle finger into her pussy easily, the fact that it was already moist offering no resistance to my immoral act...

She's wet. I told myself in genuine appreciation as I savoured her every breath and contortion. Lorraine closed her eyes and grabbed my collar closed to her, pulling me towards her... Once again, our bodies were pressed as I licked her lips, seeking invitation frm her to allow my tongue into her warm, wet mouth... Tough position to main, minimum space, maximum constraint... You guys get the picture...

I could feel my back cramp in discomfort and my arms getting numbed... I couldn't care less though as my finger continued to work and tease her down there... Most of the time, I would merely slide it up and down without any hints of moving inwards... I would only do so when she let out a loud passionate moan, an excited one... We kissed over and over again and I remembered how sweet her tongue tasted...

I necked her as she placed her left hand right where my bulge was. I remember feeling my manhood throb once, twice then thrice as she stroked it gently before feeling for my fly... Before I know it, the bulge was revealed in the full glory of lime-green stripes with white base, courtesy of CK underwear...

SexyStan
02-08-2010, 01:16 PM
I never had so much laughters in a make-out session before... This time, it was sensual yet lighthearted as well as happiness lingered on over our very heads...

"Hahahaa" Lorraine teased... "That was easy... and that's how you manage buttons and flies!" She proclaimed proudly. With what seems to be a single flick of her fingers, the button of my pants popped apart (No... again you Horny Goats with the kinkiest of thoughts, it did not POP OUT of its seams, it merely popped open... you know... like how it was meant to do!) and my pants slide downwards a little obediently.

She continued stroking the now exposed bulge in its uniform of lime-green strips... It looks just exactly how Celtic players would look if they ever won the Europa's Champions League... Hahaha...

She gave a final moan of pleasure as I worked her pussy still, my fingers (just now finger... Now fingers... You guys know the drill, trust I don't have to be too graphic in the process hor?) enjoying the inviting damp warmness therein. "My car's too small for all this action..." She said as she held her quivering voice steady... "Or could it be that you are too big?" She whispered, low tone and giggling before motioning for me to get on my seat with a slight push on my chest. Her eyes twinkled as I complied with her directions...

As I laid back on my seat, Lorraine gently reclined hers and requested that I do the same... "Move your seats backwards... big guys like you need a little more space" She advised, "Oh yea... recline it slight as well..."

I reached for the lever and as I laid back in a bid to push the seat down into a slightly reclined position, Lorraine pulled the rubber straps of my underwear like how that stupid Celtic players, that I was describing earlier, would look if they took/ribbed off their jerseys (with green strips) after they had won the Europa's Champions League (extention of early picture described)...

Throbbing, extended and hard, she slid her fingers sensually down the length of it creating a whirlwind of sensations with her nails and before sliding it into her mouth via very controlled lips...

I almost died then... No Kidding...

shark89
02-08-2010, 01:30 PM
Thanks and errr.... Monday sucks? Lol...

Monday doesn't suck anymore as we have got your thread to keep us 'fired-up'!! :D

SexyStan
02-08-2010, 04:25 PM
Crap Monday... been busy... Updating in between my waiting time before my next task and appointment...

A chill that felt warm and fuzzy to the touch ran down my spine as I struggled to lift my head up just a little, just in time to watch my throbbing dick disappear into the warmth of Lorraine's mouth...

I groaned uncontrollably, in absolute ecstacy and pleasure, and I couldn't have wished for anyone to kill me more at that moment as my heart whirled, awakened and fully aware of how emotional I felt, and leapt crashing into the very rib cage that kept it in...

I tugged away at the first button of my shirt, now loosened and hanging loosely as I tried desperately to loosen my tie. It was warm and in steamy in the car; As for me, sweaty... as I could feel the beads of perspiration form on my forehead and temples...

I squirmed in my seat uncontrollably as I felt Lorraine's tongue run up my dick before promptly placing it once more in her mouth... As warm wetness engulfed it, I could hear the words "I love you..." form in my head.... Big mistake, that much I know, and struggled to fight these words from forming in my mouth...

I held my tongue stiff to prevent those words from forming and in their place, was intermittent, masculine panting... I could feel her suction whirling around the head of my manhood as she ran her nails gently around the contours of my balls, occasionally peering at me with half opened, sleepy eyes...

She slurped a little and moaned, like a 3 year-old girl (its just an analogy, not meant to create any sick paedophilic fantasies here, damn it!) tasting solid food for the 1st time and trying to tell her parents how good it tasted with her mouth full and stuffed...

It was too much for me take... like I mentioned earlier, I almost died there and then in the seat (You might recall news of a couple who died in the car on our LianHe WanBao about 1-2 years back? Well, I cannot explain how the girl died... but I honestly suspected if I were the die, this would be how I died...). I could feel an eruption forming just beneath the skins and tissues of my dick...

I continued to groan in a pleading fashion that spells "Spare me... Spare me from the torture...." when clarity filled my head once more...

"Cut it dude... its wrong..." The angel of me spoke. Calmly, Gently, I gave her bobbing head a nudge as I tried to upright myself...

"Lorraine, that's enough..." I heard myself say...

"You didn't like it?" Her eyes were squinted into a slit as she asked innocently with a slight disappointment...

I laughed as I struggled to pull up the green jersey of my still throbbing champion (from Celtic if you recall my earlier posts... hahaha). Yes... You've scored a goal... so what... match's far from over... I could hear the manager in me screaming at its champion midfielder and playmaker from the sidelines...

"I loved it..." I laughed as I found my voice.... I looked right into her now wide-open, smiling eyes and held her hands.... "But I'm late for work..."

Lorraine chuckled once more, the chuckling sounding more like a baby's coo...

She planted a kiss on my cheek once again before pulling everything on her that's now down up once more... Finding the band, or rather, scrunchy, that snapped right out of place, she tidied her hair into an orderly bunch once more... before turning around and smiling at me... "Yea... Glen's almost ended school... Guess we better run..."

Once again, hands on wheels (no longer shifting the gearstick... I'm the manual transmission that requires gear shifting, her car's fully automated), seatbelt buckled, the car whirled steadily into life as it climbed slowly out of its protective lot....

I don't think anyone has seen us... We have not encountered anyone yet... I looked around, trying to spot any persons whom may be hiding behind pillars with a camera thinking about how much points he'd be upped if he posts it in SBF and how much attention if he posted it in STOMP... No one... I recalled feeling relieved before a fuzzy feeling filled my heart once more when I saw Lorraine's face, now focused on manuevering her car down the slopes of the MSCP.

I so wished I can tell her how much I love her... I'm pretty sure I did...

"What?" She turned around and laughed, her eyes twinkling once more in the noon sun that hits the exiting car from the dim MSCP and reflected in her eyes from the windshield as she turned around to find me staring right back at her with appreciation that cannot be spelt...

She gave a gentle smile before saying after a brief pause... "Don't I know you from somewhere...Mister?" We completely cracked at that joke as she planted another kiss before the traffic light which was red turned green....

SexyStan
02-08-2010, 04:39 PM
As bros following my thread closely would know, journey to my workplace doesn't take too long...

The 10 minutes drive to my office was pretty much in silence as we both tried hard to maintain our nonchalent and unaffected demeanor in a leisurely poised manner after that kiss before the traffic light, as we tried to pretend that we were simply enjoying our moment of mutual silence as well as the music that's coming out from her tweeters.

Truth be told, music was good as this girl as a taste in music (except for stupid ole fergulicious... lol), but nothing her stereos were playing were getting into our heat-fried brains...

"Ok... Guess you are here..." She quipped as she pulls the car over by the road for a stop...

"Yea... I guess..." Reluctance was every bit in my tone and none of those efforts to hide it were evident.

"Hey Stan..." My ears pricked. First time she called me Stan as I could feel my heart skip a bit.... "Wait..."

I turned my head around to face her, unsure and afraid of whatever she was gonna say next...

My anticipation grew to a roaring crescendo as it formed in my pursed, curled lips.... Evading my eye, Lorraine said "Nothing... Ummm... have a great day at work yea? Toodlez..." Before breaking into a warm, hearty smile...

I sat rooted in my seat even after she said that.... counting down the seconds... 1s... 2s... I didn't know how to react as I stared at her bearming smile.... On the third passing second though, her beauty dawned on me once more as I leaned forward and kissed her smack right on her lips...

You could see that look of pleasant surprise mixed with complete uber shock form on her face as she chuckled... "Thanks Stan... toodlez..." She said firmly.... "You are late... & So am I..."

julius247
02-08-2010, 06:01 PM
She's one in a million...Treasure her well TS :)

Great story and writing keep it up!

SexyStan
02-08-2010, 09:33 PM
Woah.... Really damn a lot of spelling as well as grammatical errors... and the number of those are increasing...

Hope you bros even understand what I was trying to tell you guys... hahaha..

Sorry, today's updates are really rushed in between my tasks-on-hands... so yea... Go easy on me...

I hope bros don't find the story too draggy... if yes, please let me know... As mentioned, I really appreciate your feedback. Ummmm... feel free to discuss how you feel about the developments thus far... I'd really love to hear what you guys think....

SexyStan
02-08-2010, 10:35 PM
Story continued...The aftermath

I walked into the lift of my office building like a zombie, the graphical scenes which Lorraine I just shared playing repeatedly in my head. Well, two scenes in my head actually, one of the said replays, the other one a scene showing a steamy chariot whereby all windows were fogged when all of a sudden, a hand slaps on one the side window before sliding downwards, creating the blurred trail of a palm against the dense condensation... Yea the scene from that movie whereby the ship took more than a bloody hour to sink and the entire audience floor wanted to pee but couldn't as they watched tons and tons of water gush into the gaping broken hull....

I examined my very own reflections in the mirror, uncertain of just how I should feel. Knowing only that work oughtta be the only thing that mattered, I buried myself in calls and tons of paperwork as I tried to numb the emotions in me despite the fact that, well, honestly, I didn't even know what I was feeling. I only knew I was feeling alot or emo, as some of you might call it. I couldn't focus though as Lorraines face appeared with every recollection I have of her poise and demeanors.

Once again, the All Holy (or rather "All Holey", being full of shitholes you take a dump in) and sacred ground of enlightenment and reflection awaits me. I made my way to the gents, in a bid to freshen up, and make sense of what just happened and how to proceed henceforth.

I went back to work without any nirvana or enlightened gain, my mind still infested with worldly woes. Calls after calls, from me to clients, from clients to me again, tons of paperwork, and somemore calls (some of them pure pranks) from friends later, I found myself yearning to hear Lorraine's voice or engage in some form contact from her. I knew I was yearning by how disappointed I was whenever my phone rang and it wasn't her, whenever SMSes blipped and it wasn't her... and by how I was looking at my mobile expectantly even though it wasn't vibrating and its screen wasn't even lighted...

Nothing from her, nothing heard at all as my day wore on and my situation-crisis heightened. Then.... "Blip..." and SMS came through my mobile...

Hey Junior...
Hey gal....
I do nt quite knw wat 2 say... or rather hw I shld put it...
I knw hw u r feeling... blif me... wat is it? u knw u cn tell me n e ting... I'm listening... I coaxed... my heart simply yearning and all prepared for whatever she's going to say...
Well, nthg much really... I juz hope tt after wat happened... U don't tink I'm promiscuous or sexually wanton... or n e ting
No I won't silly ger... I've nvr seen u in tt lite...
Errr... K... I'm relieved & glad den...

I looked at my mobile, unsure of what to type as I fidgetted its touchscreen....

"Blip..." Another message came in...

Hmmmm... hope u'd a gd day @ wrk...

As the day wore on, I couldn't take it any more and keyed in Err.... Babe... Juz wnted 2 send u tis.... Muackz... before hitting the send button & watching the animated envelopment fly away and disappear into the background...

Hours passed... No replies...

absoluticeberg
02-08-2010, 11:05 PM
Hours passed... but don't leave us with no updates :)

Like your writing style. Please continue...

SexyStan
03-08-2010, 12:01 AM
Hi Bros

I hope you guys have realized the change to structure in my postings. Apologies if earlier posts were hard to follow, gained the experience and made the improvisation having taken reference from the postings of other generous bros...

Will post a further update soon... Need to cool down a lil as I just got home...

SexyStan
03-08-2010, 12:36 AM
Story continued... The Rules of Engagement...

I went home that day from office heavy-hearted, the load of my laptop bag & documents making it feel so much worst than it should. She didn't reply, and I knew not what else I could add. Should I call? Or should I simply drop another SMS... I decided against both, for as Lorraine did not want to seem wanton, I did not want to come across as being needy, desperate or worst still, horny and keeping her next to me for my own sexusl convenience...

I could not sleep that night and I simply couldn't wait for 5a.m. to come. By 4.30a.m., I was dressed in my singlet, running shorts and jogging shoes. I wasn't that ready to run, having lacked sleep the entire night; I simply yearned to see her. I did not manage to meet her that morning and for a further 3 more mornings to come. I could have called her, I know, but masculine pride and chauvinistic sheepishness prevented me from doing so. I bumbed myself in work and was sleeping later with each passing night, the aching in my heart increasing each time the times we shared floated into my mind. With each disappointing "blip" and ring of my mobile, the aching wore on with increased intensity. I felt her heart close, just like the steel gates with huge padlocks of her house, each time I waited for the lift at our common lobby and peeked in the direction of her apartment.

The ROE, or Rules of Engagement, of such games especially when dealing with married woman: -

1. Never expect a future; It was doomed to fail;
2. Never shit in your own farking backyard, especially friends with common friends, colleagues and especially clients or bosses;
3. Make the relationships clear. Its either a fling or a BGR... it was never meant to be complicated with blurred lines;
4. Never get involved in such relationships; and the last rule
5. What know? If you do not know the answer before leaping in, you simply do not leap in.

I was at a complete and utter lost. Then came a blip at 2a.m. as I tossed and turned in bed. My heart whirlled to life once more in hope that it was her after so many disappointments...

yang punk
03-08-2010, 12:39 AM
Just keep to your own style...your short paragraphs make for easy reading. No need to waste time on coloured fonts. Can use spell-check to cut down on spelling errors though not many.

Your standard of English can be considered very good by sbf standard!;) Love the details btw.

otamay
03-08-2010, 12:40 AM
Thanks for your periodic update, I am addicted to this thread.:):D

SexyStan
03-08-2010, 01:29 AM
Just keep to your own style...your short paragraphs make for easy reading. No need to waste time on coloured fonts. Can use spell-check to cut down on spelling errors though not many.

Your standard of English can be considered very good by sbf standard!;) Love the details btw.

Hi bro yang & otamay, thanks for your support and precious upping. I will not claim myself to be a great writer but I thank your valuable support and assure you the greatest appreciation accorded. I am merely sharing and this is the purpose of the thread....

Hmmm, some clarifications here as there have been some sincere feedback from bros which I feel I need to address....

Errrr.... I understand some bros find this thread draggy like those ah-mah soap opera, my sincerest apology and I feel I need to clarify that this thread was never meant to be the tell-and-wank kind...

I'm sure there are bros with such experiences, being involved with married women... or bros who had found out that their wives have cheated on em... perhaps even some Lorraines here... married and involved with another man... or like my case, not only another male but a younger one...

Details were included so story could progress and flow like how it should with developments natural... Hmmm, I understand some bros find some of the developments posted redundant or unnecessary. My humblest apologies if I had wasted bandwidth. Having said that, I do believe that while we men are sexual, I'm sure that sometimes to all of us, or most of the time to some of us, it can be sensual as well, with sex being emotional or perhaps, even spiritual when we find the right one... I hope bros who supported me thus far will put themselves in my shoes in this story, be it fiction or non-fiction, and offer me their invaluable insights...

This story was intended to stir emotions and reactions, its details a process of sharing...

Thank you bros once again... and humblest apologies if there have been disappointments...

SexyStan
03-08-2010, 01:53 AM
Story continued... Moving forward... and climbing...

The message came through in the middle of the night, breaking its tranquility. Not that it mattered, I wasn't asleep anyway... I reached for my mobile and tapped on the "New Message" icon, watching an animated envelope flap outwards to reveal the SMS that had just come in...

"Sent By: Lorraine" the details read. I fought back my emotions and squinted for a better look at the message that followed...

Aslp? the message read...

My finger flew over touchpad, tapping the animated keys and watching the following materialise... No babe... Nt yet... y?

I'm sry Junior... :)
Huh? for?
Hmmm.... nthg... I missed u alot... I donnoe y...
My heart froze in its beat... I missed u too babe...U've no idea... =)
I do hv an idea actually...Hahaha... I'm sry Junior... Smokes? ;P
U'd only miss me when u r in cold turkey... tt much I knw... Haha... Yea... Y nt?
K... C ya...

Bloody hell... My curse not sounding like a curse at all as I put on my berms and T-shirt. Picking up my keys, lighter, cigs and wallet, I closed my gates gently knowing her door would be open any minute. I needed to ensure I don't wake her hubby up as we share a common corridor...

Moments passed and Lorraine couldn't be seen anywhere. I jeart the opening of a door followed by the deliberate & muffled sound of a large steel padlock pop open.

I knew she was coming as I held my breath... there, from the blind of the wall that seperates our longing, stood Lorraine, her beautiful eyes squinted in the lfluorescent lights above our heads.

With slow, deliberated steps, Lorraine walked towards me, her hands behind her back...

With only a metre left to spare, the only distance that kept us apart, she bounded with childlikedness into my uncontrollably wide open arms...

I smelt her hair again after all these while... "I missed you..." She whispered as I fought back that single drop of tear that formed...

houses100
03-08-2010, 11:07 AM
Great story junior... brings back memories...

abcxyz1606
03-08-2010, 12:53 PM
this is really good...real feelings and not just lust involved..

i hope you just go with your feelings, otherwise you will definitely regret in years to come..

soccerpicks
03-08-2010, 02:00 PM
nice style bro, looking forward to yr updates.

CibLover
03-08-2010, 04:05 PM
TS, dun mind another camper.

Nice write-up. Cheers. :)

SexyStan
03-08-2010, 06:04 PM
Thank you bros for the support

I'm really glad that most bros have been extremely supportive and liked the story thus far. My humblest apologies for not being to manage timely updates today, I've been hell packed thus far...

Will post updates late tonight, perhaps later in between my tasks as I usually do I'm able to manage (though I have to say it's a little unrealistic at this point in time, but who knows...)

Once again, deepest apologies for disappointments, if any.

SexyStan
03-08-2010, 06:38 PM
Oh yea... btw... to bros who have upped me thus and requested I return the favour, please provide me some time as I have been extremely busy, with focus on my work, studies and errr... this thread at this point in time. Hope you will understand. Now I shall rush a small piece of further development with some time to spare in between...

Story Continued... Moving On and Climbing

If you guys understood why this section of the development is called Moving On but are absolutely clueless how the word 'climbing' came into the picture, your bewilderment will be addressed shortly...

The picture froze with my hands around her waist and my nostrils picking up every hint in her scent, with me absolutely reluctant to let go for fear of losing her once more, and my heart screaming "I missed you too..." repeatedly. No words formed in my mouth though, I was savouring every moment of our mutual silence. She had her pixie head buried in my chest, her left cheek pressing against it. Lorraine held still for God-knows-how-bloody long when... "Errr... I can't breathe..." She chuckled. I promptly released my grip with silliness hitting me abruptly with the realization of how much strength I had used to wrap my hands around her as she lets out a mock, low-toned chocking voice "Er hem... *Cough Cough" before raising her brows and with her eyes that she widened so big till it seemed they were gonna pop out of their sockets any minute, she raised a finger to her lips "Shhhhhhh...."

Lorraine giggled after her girlish entics and placed her right hand on my left before walking briskly past me as she tugged and dragged... I could only laugh at her sweet girlishness as I'm definitelt more used to a more decisive and perhaps "manly" Lorraine...

She was clad in those huge, oversized T-shirts that hang loosely from a feminine body frame, the kind that extends to your knees and slippers... Her hair was unkempt, no make-up and "obiang" white horned-rimmed glasses... An auntie in every possible way that comes with a face I can only call "hot"... Not that it mattered for I really didn't care...

Comical sight as she walked ahead of me and tugged, till we reach the staircase landing adjacent to my unit, she planted a feet on its steps and started to ascend... trudging and struggling to get me to follow...

I laughed "Why are we climbing the stairs?"

She whirled around "Let's go upstairs for a change? Void-deck's boring? Besides, people might see us?"

I laughed as the picture of her trawling her struggling cub appeared in my head... Hey, I'm not as easy to manage as your 3 year ole cub, I thought with of course, that very thought and opinion kept silently to myself.

I followed and after numerous flights of steps and of course, floors, we reached the top most floor of our flat...

Lorraine bounced over the a ledge and with her arms folded and resting on it, she looked outwards in a dreamy state...

There, we watched the view of the whole estate with the occasion passing car moving into the MSCP and with occasional late-nighters coming home, or going out...

As the world passed by beneath our feets, we remained motionless and outward looking (perhaps downward looking) as mutual silence ensued...

SexyStan
03-08-2010, 07:05 PM
Story continued... From Way up....

Lorraine's voice finally broke the silence as she faked a shiver "Brrrrr.... I need some of that stuff... Give to me please..." She begged and gripped my arm with every ounce of her strength and giggled as I withdrew my arm in pain... "What are you dreaming about..."

She then widened her eyes in a ferocious stare and grabbed my T-shirt near the collar "Mugged... Now drop your fags..." I could only chuckle as I muttered a damn loud "Stupid" which was every bit intended for her ears...

"What?" She protested adamantly. In a swift swiping motion, the cigarette box which I had just pulled out from the pocket of my berms was now in her outstretched hand... "Lighter?"

As the flame leapt out, I held it close to her face as she tilted her head and lighted the cigarette, her face frowning with appreciation... She blew the first cloud of smoke in my face and extinguished my flame as I tried to light my smokes. Giving her an irritated look, I lighted my cigarette before retaliating with my own cloud which I exhaled in her face... "How old are you btw?" I asked, my voice cold with mocked sarcasm...

"Older than you are..." Lorraine reminded me, poking my nose with a finger.

Silence engulfed us once again as our cigarettes burnt on, the lighted portion being dragged closer to its tips...

"You know Stan... I'm not so sure..." Lorraine's voice trailed as she flicked her cigarette out into the open air...

I looked at her face with anticipation, maintaining my silence...

Lorraine looked away from my face and I recalled saying to myself "Shit, what does this mean now" as I scanned for hints in her demeanors pertaining to her intentions...

She kept her silence. Finally breaking the pause, Lorraine whispered "What now?" Without even turning her outward-looking head, or eyes, towards me, she continued..

"I'm not promiscuous that much I know... I'm not sexually wanton... and I did not mean..."

"I never felt you were like this..." I interrupted but my sentence ended at "were..." with the "like this" cut off as she looked at me abruptly and cut me out completely...

"Look... if you are with me simply for sex... fuck off now..." She stared intently into my eyes... I felt insulted.

Her gaze softened almost immediately after... "Otherwise... listen..." She waited for a reaction from me "I'm married... and I didn't expect that you'd come along..." She paused... "Just like how I didn't expect Glen to come along..." Her voice trailing off...

I placed my palms on her waist in a bid to settle her. "Hmmm... What happened between us? I'm gonna have to end it..." Lorraine said firmly...

Her gaze softened further... "But I've come to realize that I can't after the past few days... I can't..." She shook her head lightly in dismay all the while maintaining her gaze...

I stared on at her every move... I really didn't know how to react and more importantly, I didn't know how she was gonna react...

"One more cigarette?" Lorraine requested, her face breaking into a smile once more...

We lighted our cigarettes and sat on the steps with her sitting on my lap as I told her not to get her shirt, overalls, whatever, dirty...

As she dragged on a puff, I placed a hand around her waist and my head on the back of her left shoulder...

"If I might say something..." I told her steadily "I'd like to return a favour..."

keano
03-08-2010, 09:14 PM
it never pays to get into a relationship with a girl who has a husband.

u in a deep shit lol

silvers
03-08-2010, 09:17 PM
its a good story, dont stop :D

SexyStan
03-08-2010, 11:52 PM
it never pays to get into a relationship with a girl who has a husband.

u in a deep shit lol

yeap... I couldn't agree more... =)

{SPUD}
04-08-2010, 12:15 AM
Good writeup, SexyStan!!!! Wish I can give you some points..

SexyStan
04-08-2010, 12:16 AM
Story continued... Down Below...

I found myself looking at Lorraine's blank, puzzled face...

"Huh..." She said, almost choking, her face indicating that this gal was absolutely clueless about what I had said or implied...

I looked into her eye calmly, my voice steady and sure "I have this to say... I am not keeping, or hoping you'd remain, next to me due to sexual convenience..." My manner in speech slowed down as I waited for a reaction. I received none, only her intent, anticipating stare "I like you very much... very much..." I had trouble substituting "like" for "love" and thank God the right word came out "But I understand as well that you are married..."

"We both share so much... too much in fact..." I continued "It has never been about sex when it comes to you..." My voice trailing off as I paused to consider how best to phrase whatever I was going to say next... "And one thing about me, as a guy, whenever I receive favours... I return them...."

One should have seen how Lorraine's face cringed from puzzleness to complete bewilderedness as I smiled after my statement... There... I've finished saying my piece...

In a split second, before Lorraine could finish the last puff that was left on her cigarette, I dropped mine and scooped Lorraine up with both my hands... Lorraine's eyes squinted and closed in a mixture of shock and delight (more shock I think... thought I'd like to think delight, but yes... delight was there though I just didn't know and still don't know how much...) as she dropped her cigarette as well and covered her mouth which by now, had a very muffled laugh coming out from it...

I could feel Lorraine's body quivering from her laughters as I walked two steps up before sitting her on the railing at the landing. a flat rectangular supporting her bosom. I slid my right hand up her left calf as her left slipper felt onto her floor.... "Shit...." I heard her mutter under her giggling breathe... "You are mad...!" Her whisper punctuated with an exclamation mark at the end of it...

She scrutinized me with an amused expression as my right hand continued running up her inner thighs while my left was kept in its position, supporting her... err.... butt cheeks?... to prevent her from falling...

"I can't sit here..." She exclaimed again in whispers... "You are out of your mind... bonkers?" Breaking out into giggles once more when my finger was exploring just right at the door of her pussy... I had suspected she didn't have any undergarments beneath her shirt... now I know...

I pulled her body forward with my left hand still on her butt before planting a kiss on her full lips...


"Mmmm..." Lorraine stared in complete shock as I pulled away from her and placed my body right in between her legs before bending my body downwards slowly...

"Shhhh....." She protested in vain as I lifted up her shirt slightly before kissing the lips that are not on her mouth... but down below...

"YOU ARE MAD!!!!!!" She hissed....

SexyStan
04-08-2010, 12:18 AM
Hahaha... so now you guys know my captions... "Moving on... and Climbing..", "From way up" and finally "From down below... " :p

nishikado
04-08-2010, 12:20 AM
support ! today points cannot up again ~ tmr up you :D

k3lvin123
04-08-2010, 12:29 AM
Brother sexystan, try to get a couple of pics of her la let us see at least her figure lor

SexyStan
04-08-2010, 12:33 AM
Brother sexystan, try to get a couple of pics of her la let us see at least her figure lor

Bro

Apologies but I have disappoint you here... I simply couldn't and can't and she simply wouldn't have let me... I hope you understand that its all discreet between me and her?

sennheiser
04-08-2010, 12:50 AM
Bro

Apologies but I have disappoint you here... I simply couldn't and can't and she simply wouldn't have let me... I hope you understand that its all discreet between me and her?

understood bro. Great story. Like your writing style. =)

MaleInSG
04-08-2010, 01:58 AM
Torture, this suspense..
No need for pictures, Bro, more space for fantasy..

otamay
04-08-2010, 02:29 AM
You are very descripitive in your writing :)

shark89
04-08-2010, 12:34 PM
Apologies but I have disappoint you here... I simply couldn't and can't and she simply wouldn't have let me... I hope you understand that its all discreet between me and her?


No need pics bro. Respect the lady. Your writing is good enough. More please?

oLdMaN68
04-08-2010, 01:45 PM
it never pays to get into a relationship with a girl who has a husband.

u in a deep shit lol

You wont know till you try it right? And you are certainly wrong, I had been there, did it, won, and still alive lol, although it took me more then 10 yrs of waiting.

So NEVER NEVER GIVE UP JUNIOR, IF YOU REALLY REALLY LUV HER.

SexyStan
04-08-2010, 07:34 PM
You wont know till you try it right? And you are certainly wrong, I had been there, did it, won, and still alive lol, although it took me more then 10 yrs of waiting.

So NEVER NEVER GIVE UP JUNIOR, IF YOU REALLY REALLY LUV HER.

Thanks for the encouragement... Will not disclose how to story progresses yet as it'd spoil all developments...

Apologies to all bros who have been anxiously awaiting further updates. As mentioned earlier, my days are usually tight and this thread is taking up quite a fair bit of time after all....

Nonetheless, my assurance that this thread will not be updated as much as I can afford it to till story developes fully... What I'm unable to assure, however, is a happy ending though I really hope for one...

SexyStan
04-08-2010, 08:38 PM
Story Continued... Discomfort...

With my eyes peering over her precariously balanced body that's now leaned slightly backwards, I could see Lorraine bite her lips in an expression that's a mixture of shock, anticipation and resistance as my lips made contact with hers (the ones down below if you guys recall)...

Her protesting hiss rang in my head as "You are mad...." played on in slow-motion... Yes I am... absolutely mad... and I couldn't agree more... She was driving me nuts with the sea of emotions welling up within me. Lorraine's hands were now gripping the parallels of the metal railings, her bum snuggling nicely on the back of the palms of her gripping hands; Both my hands are nestled at the back of her bum in a bid to prevent her from falling over from the excitement, or rather absolute shock, whichever the case... I do not need to reiterate where my face, or rather my mouth and lips, are placed... You guys have a better picture than I do, I trust... Lol...

Lorraine threw her head back slightly as I kissed her pussy gently... "MMmmmmm...." Letting out a muffled moan as I ran my tongue in circles around her trimmed cunt. I had a good look at it, pinkish and alluring, bush, tan-lines and all. I could feel her thighs, which are now hanging over and from my shoulders, closing inwards to give my neck and head a squeeze, the respective muscles hardening to form a sort of tong (yes, the tong is spelt without a 'h' and completely different from 'thongs'....lol)...

Half moaning, half giggling, Lorraine squirmed just a little, but as much as she could, whilst trying to maintain her balance, as my tongue explored her inside as it felt the heat coming out from within and the increase in moisture inside...

I wouldn't say it was odourless and tasteless for to me, it tasted and smelt sweet and I could feel myself screaming out how much I more I wanted out of her, not only physically and sexually, but also emotionally and sensually. Her squeeze tightened as she fidgeted a little to release her left hand. Placing it on my head, she tugged at my hair a little and tried to exert a resistant push on my forehead before letting out another moan as my tongue pushed further inwards and increased in its rhythm of alternating upwards-downwards movements. I gave her butt cheeks a little squeeze, the firmness present therein merely served as an encouragement to "return the favour"...

Her push relented, gradually and slowly, as my tongue worked its way inwards to her clit. I allowed it to run in tiny circles around it in a bid to stimulate her further. I knew I've succeeded in my bid as I felt her gentle touch run across to the back of my head as she tugged at it gently, beckoning for me to go deeper...

"Ahhh...." She moaned and panted in sweet, alluring whispers... I didn't make a sound for I had my "mouth full", savouring how she tasted like how a connoisseur sipped wine. To me, she was a bottle of fine rose with excellent vintage, the type perfect compliments to dessert...

"Set me down..." She finally whispered softly as she looked intently into my busy face... "Its uncomfortable..." She said firmly before letting out her giggles...

"You are mad..." She reminded me once more as she leapt down from the railings into my once again opened arms. Looking at me with her head slightly cocked to one side, she swept the creases in her shirt and pulled it downwards, all the while maintaining her silence while she nestled her face in my chest. With my wide open palms placed on her waist with perfect awareness of the charming slender lines they were basking in, I could feel her protruding and erected nipples by the way...

Uncomfortable... yeah... it wasn't only just her position on the cold, hard, steel railings... Discomfort was now every bit a norm in our relationship...

yang punk
05-08-2010, 12:02 AM
Hmmm...once Lorraine tasted your tonguefu she'll be addicted to you! All woman loves a man who can oral well;)

SexyStan
05-08-2010, 01:17 AM
Story Continued...

We walked down the staircase together, our hands clasp together, both silent as Lorraine wore an expression that showed she was deep in thoughts...

As we approached the floor that both she and I lived on, she turned around and took a good, long look at me... hesitant, before she finally broke the silence.

"Stan, what now?"

That was the question I was stumped at all along and now that she has finally raised it, I felt like a complete moron for there I was, I had no answers for a lady as a man.

"Lorraine, I don't know... honestly." I replied in slow fashion, allowing myself the time to think, and breathe... "I like you alot, and its not because you are hot... I'd like to think that you know me..."

Lorraine placed a finger on my lips, motioning me to remain silent, before taking a step as she tiptoed, leaned towards me, and kissed me gently on the lips...

"I like you too Stan and I'd like for you to know me as well..." She said in a deliberate tone... "Let's take one step at a time..."

One step at a time? It all dawned on me, all of a sudden, how many more steps we needed to take...

"Good night junior..." She said as I watch her back shrink into the corridor. Lorraine slip in her apartment, before sticking her hands out to wave me a big goodbye and to blow me a kiss (blow me a kiss... not blow me!)...

One step at a time... My thoughts drifted off as I began to wonder how it could be done...

Blip my mobile phone went as I laid in my bed...

"I'm not gonna be able to wake up to run junior... But I'll call you in the day..." the message read and ended with... "Love you...;P"

My eyes closed as my eyelids gained in weight. It wasn't only my eyelids that were heavy as my heart felt lifted by the message but only to be pulled down by twice the amount of force it lifted off with.

I don't know how to feel anymore....

SexyStan
05-08-2010, 01:18 AM
Sorry, missed out the caption for the above development. Let's call it "One step at a time..."

SexyStan
05-08-2010, 01:20 AM
Apologies bro... for what appears to be slower developments... Its not only my schedules and all... but err.... I'm think I'm feeling a lil more emotional as I post each development...

Hope you guys understand...

mr_missile
05-08-2010, 09:55 AM
Apologies bro... for what appears to be slower developments... Its not only my schedules and all... but err.... I'm think I'm feeling a lil more emotional as I post each development...

Hope you guys understand...

Understood. Will wait patiently for your updates. Great writing skills.

Read somewhere where you mentioned something about the sticky situation you were (or still are) in with a married woman. Guess Lorraine's the one you were referring to huh? ;)

jidol
05-08-2010, 10:48 AM
No need pics bro. Respect the lady. Your writing is good enough. More please?

wow! so hard to find you ... return your favor THANKS :D

GiftonJS
05-08-2010, 12:44 PM
Great writing, keep up the good work

EuroFanatic
05-08-2010, 12:59 PM
bro sexystan,

I like your stories. Please continue...

keano
07-08-2010, 03:34 AM
yeap... I couldn't agree more... =)


actually i got into a situation like you too..but now already kinda die off as she felt guilty.

For me there was a period of sadness too as maybe got into her too much.

Just have to think ahead and give each other the needed time out if one day decided to end yeah..

meanwhile conti e story ^ ^

SexyStan
07-08-2010, 01:02 PM
Sorry guys for the delay in updates...

Realy damn busy the past few days... Will try to squeeze in a update now...

SexyStan
07-08-2010, 01:43 PM
Apologies once again....

I can't manage an update. Please check back after the NDP hols...

Really sorry but am really tried up.

Hope u guys understand...

simple2kee
07-08-2010, 01:45 PM
good story! take your time. awaiting for ur updates. :)

nightsmith
08-08-2010, 08:50 PM
Interesting story.;) Waiting anxiously for the next episode.
Like all others, I thank you for sharing.:D:D
NS

alen_555
09-08-2010, 09:21 AM
take your time bro
jst paste the updates later on.
eagerly waiting for more

hahaha1980
13-08-2010, 02:13 AM
bro waiting for u to come back and post!

sealwoon
13-08-2010, 11:45 AM
TS. A very good narrative of you story. Keep it up. :)

shark89
13-08-2010, 01:51 PM
Apologies once again....
I can't manage an update. Please check back after the NDP hols...


Come back soon bro. You are missed here. Hehehe

hornylamb
13-08-2010, 03:02 PM
bro, really envy you for having such a hot woman next door and being able to own her. i also have a hot neighbour but she is always working late...so no chance. looking forward to your update.

SexyStan
13-08-2010, 06:48 PM
bro, really envy you for having such a hot woman next door and being able to own her. i also have a hot neighbour but she is always working late...so no chance. looking forward to your update.

Hi Bro... Thanks for your support and no, I do not own her.... Her hubby owns her.... =)

To all bros who have been eagerly awaiting, my humblest apologies. Been busy, really... Hope you guys understand.

Anyway, TGIF and I hope Friday 13th have not been unlucky for anyone of you thus far...

SexyStan
13-08-2010, 07:19 PM
Story Continued... Steps higher than Mountains...

Call me Lorraine did the next day, just as she had promised the night before, my phone vibrating with her name popping out on the screen as I went about my day's task without a soul.

"Good morning Junior... Ya Busy?" Her cheery voice sounded at the end of the line...
"Hey gal... I'm with someone now... Call you later..."
"Oh.... Ok..." I heard her say before a click killed the line off promptly.

I was in the midst of an appointment when she called, throwing me into absolute disequilibrium. I tried to focus to no avail; My lips were moving and my voice was being projected in a monotone manner. My mind wasn't in sync with anything I was doing then though and I suspected my client could tell as he looked occasionally into my eyes. All I could hear was not my voice, or his, but just the "Love you" I had seen in her message the night before.

Despite my absolute lack of focus, the deal was closed eventually and I found myself heaving a sigh of relief. "I'm so sorry if I'd seem distracted, I've had a bad week..." I found myself saying to my client's amused face. Thankfully, he had never known me to be like this and its the first time he's seeing this off-balanced me.

How could he when I've never seen this side of me either. True, there were moments of which I felt I was off-balanced but none of those moments measured up to this... As I headed back to my office, I wondered about the various possibilities, or rather, the various impossibilities that are likely to pop up after the little rendezvous that was shared between Lorraine and myself.

"What now...?" echoed over and over again my head only to be met promptly by Lorraine's trailing voice "One step at a time..."

Steps? Sure... Mountains more like it... I ran through the transition in my head over and over again as I grew aware of the shift in dynamics in our relationship...

Pesky neighbour... to friend... to professional services rendered... to attraction... and now to sexual immorality...

What now?

SexyStan
16-08-2010, 08:46 PM
Story Continued... 嫩牛吃老草

The dynamics of every relationship are sensitive, i.e. they shift easily to the smallest of influence from random occurences. Both Lorraine & I certainly didn't plan for our relationship to develope into something like what we were having then. We didn't even know what to call it, other than the lame facebook tag "Its complicated". Needless to say, while we felt this way, neither of us put it up on facebook as we both lacked the guts to declare what society would call absolute immorality. Coinciding with all the media attention on 老牛吃嫩草 (thanks to Jack Neo... and his wazzisname colleague) (old cow eating young grass, a chinese anecdote depicting a old man lusting after young gals), especially when 联合晚报 (the chinese evening papers w/ unbelievably saucy news and crap gossips) published another article shortly after the debacle on 嫩牛吃老草 (young cow eating old grass, another anecdote depicting young man lusting after older ladies), only served to make matters worst for the both of us; Both Lorraine & I knew that in such politically and socially sensitive climates, getting found out would only mean the commencement of WWIII or eternal damnation of our souls as we die on stakes while being stoned to death by our relentless busy-body neighbours or anyone close enough in proximity or relations to sense the very change in our relationship that we were both aware of...

On the surface, nothing changed, i.e. morning jogs as usual as well as the occasion breakfasts, lunch or coffee dates whenever either of us could afford it; That's only on the surface. If there was anything that we were aware of, its how our relationships hace We were more self-aware, in that we both knew how much we wanted each other did within but never dared reveal how is it we felt in public; We were more aware of our surroundings as well as the people in them, often sighting familiar faces that we never care for in the past; We were always talking and acting in a mock platonic manner that could only be too fake, our hearts and hands meeting only in the very few occasions we were in her car as well as the late-night smokes at the stair-case or lobby.

We got to see lesser and lesser of each other as our usual dates diminished with me trying to stay focused on my work & as she tried harder to reserve her afternoons for the little man in her life and the evenings and weekends for both the little and big one. Absence does make the hearts grow fonder is anything to live by and whatever lack of time we spent with each other, we made the best of it with our passion whenever, we could while we are in her car, while at the staircase, or even the occasional early morning playground while at our morning jogs...

We became used to our underground relationship and gradually, without speaking, we laid down unspoken rules...

1. We'd never be seen people we know
2. We'd never get intimate in the sanctity of her matrimonial home or my place as a form of respect to the people around us
3. That it be understood that she didn't give a shit about her shit hubby but things are different when it comes to the angel cub of hers

You know, general rules of the game, there could well be a fourth rule as well... I don't know... which probably spells

4. Whatever we both do and felt... there wasn't gonna be any sex...

At least... There really wasn't for some time... and for quite a while, this 嫩牛sure didn't have much of 老草 to feed on...

SexyStan
17-08-2010, 11:57 AM
Story Continued... Boiling Point

Yeah, and so as described in the last development posted, Lorraine and I may have performed most acts of passion, which includes painting & BBBJs but somehow, like it as unspoken rule, we have never had the real deal; The 1st intimate moment at we shared at her place was the closest we had to the real deal (This is how we both felt I guess, which was what probably explains why we knew never to get intimate in each other's place again. After all, her's was a matrimonial home... respect dudes...).

Well, if you put a lid on something and yet at the same time are heating it from within, you have a pressure cooker or one of those boilers you have in your kitchen. Take time and things would reach a boiling point... soon, with one brand advertising they can do it faster than the previous one. For Lorraine and I, we didn't have to wait to long to reach our boiling points... Changes in our lives due to the development of our "friendship" wasn't that hard to observe; On my part, I wanted her more and more by the day. We could never go out like regular couples due to our complicated circumstances but I knew deep down that is very much what I wanted; On Lorraine's part, I could sense that she probably wanted to the same as well. Furthermore, her relationship between her hubby and herself was deteriorating fast and whatever happened between us, like it or not, is contributary to our negative emotions and not just a simple coincidence.

All these, thought strong emotions and factors, were still insufficient to bring both of us to our common boiling point... What was needed, was a stroke of luck, which soon came...

SexyStan
17-08-2010, 12:23 PM
Story Continued... Hubby's Days Out

Note the "days" and not day, Lorraine's LOTR hubby Darren was to go overseas on an assignment for 3 full weeks. The news came when I was at work one afternoon in my office, in the most surprising of fashions.

I was staring intently at my laptop when my msn indicated I had a new "friend" attempting to add me. The e-mail address kindda giving a clue as to it was though I wasn't quite sure it was Lorraine.

Hey junior... The window popped out with Lorraine's beautiful face frozen in a cheeky fashion appeared.

Huh... uh... how did you know my msn addie? Lol... It wasn't that hard to guess, but still I had to ask...

Hahaha... Surprised, shocked or glad? Very easy... all I did was to change your corporate e-mail to the different possible messengers... I tried hotmail.com, yahoo.com, blah blah blah... smart?

Ya ya... you are the smartest cow I know (oh yea... I forgot to tell you guys that cow's my nickname for her halfway into the r/s... coz I always joked about how the 老牛 her was trying to eat the 嫩草 me... lol)... I m shocked really, but in a really pleasant way... =)

kekeke... I knew I'd make your day... anyway... I have another piece of good news for you...

????

Darren's going overseas on an assignment in about 3 weeks... on dd/mm... He'll be gone for 2 weeks... so we'll have some time to ourselves... happy?

The screen remained frozen as my fingers remained frozen and my face contorted to an expression of ecstacy mixed with pure shock...

*Nudge* ??? eh... so silent... u don't seem too happy...COLOR]

"Of course... I am..." these words formed in my head, in slow deliberation but what translated on keyboard was... [COLOR="Navy"]of course I am! as I tried to handle the mixture of emotions in me...

I have one more piece of news for you...
Darren couldn't have gone on an assignment at a better timing than this... Hahaha
I'll tell you tomorrow... when we go jogging...

Huh? y so secretive? can't u just tell me now? I typed, as I eagerly awaited the answer...

Nope... tomorrow... muackz... bye junior... gtg...

I found myself staring at Lorraine's faded pic as she went offline. Husband overseas sure is a nice situation for me to be in, but she had one more piece of good news for me? What could it be?

cool.dan
17-08-2010, 02:13 PM
Story Continued... Hubby's Days Out

Darren's going overseas on an assignment in about 3 weeks... on dd/mm... He'll be gone for 2 weeks... so we'll have some time to ourselves... happy?

I have one more piece of news for you...
Darren couldn't have gone on an assignment at a better timing than this... Hahaha
I'll tell you tomorrow...

Husband overseas sure is a nice situation for me to be in, but she had one more piece of good news for me? What could it be?

Let me make a wild guess. The timing of her hubby's trip coincides with her 'safe' period so she and you can finally do it? :D

Skypiea
17-08-2010, 02:17 PM
nice story bro, please keep it coming

Cunt-Sucker
17-08-2010, 03:09 PM
Nice story ... keep it up! We'll need to draw from your experience so as to ensure our own respective successes!:D

SexyStan
18-08-2010, 12:55 AM
Let me make a wild guess. The timing of her hubby's trip coincides with her 'safe' period so she and you can finally do it? :D

Wrong guess bro... clue... even better than that. Stay tuned...

CyberRod
18-08-2010, 01:58 AM
Wrong guess bro... clue... even better than that. Stay tuned...

She's on pills...! :D

SexyStan
18-08-2010, 02:23 AM
Story Continued... The Big Break...

If you guys are frustrated w/ the recent slow developments in the story and can't stand the anticipation at all, well, my r/s with Lorraine was like this. As I went about my day's work, I was amazed at her absolute ability to hold me at a constant state of heightened anticipation. Simply put, high and dry, all the time, though this time round, I was higher and dryer than I ever was...

That night, I drifted into sleep hoping that she'd text me for a late night fag... Nope, didn't happen. The minute my alarm rang at 5.00, I sprang up from my shallow sleep and as I changed for our morning routine jog, I can't help wonder... Just exactly what did Lorraine had to tell me and why the need for such suspense?

I took the lift down to the ground floor and saw Lorraine seated at the void deck, adjusting her socks, the minute I turned a corner to where we always waited for each other in the morning.

"Moooo....." I laughed as I tried to disguise my eagerness to break the Da Vinci Code "So what do you have for me?"

"Huh?" Lorraine whirled around, still bent over with both hands on her shoes, her fingers on a lace, with a look of almost-genuine (almost... damned, that's how good she is at conjuring expressing on that pixie face of hers) befuddlement. Almost... for what gave her away was a radiance in her that I've known to exist but had not yet had the chance to see in full glory (full glory of her radiance... not the full glory of my morning ovation... if guys have been getting the wrong images throughout my visual narratives, then you know you are seriously sick shits... lol...)...

I scanned her face wearing my very own perplexed expression mixed that of abashment. Perplexed, because I swear I heard a louder "Huh" in my head in reply to hers... Abashed, because I've come to realize how much more beautiful she seemed with this new-found radiance in her... I mean, Lorraine's always been radiant to me... but today's was something different, something more... All the radiance in the past somehow seemed suppressed by an unhappiness that couldn't be understood. Though it did show occasionally through her cheeky nature and wits, it certainly retracted into her as quickly as it manifested. What I got today, was a steady flow that only seems to increase gradually in intensity... Abashed, because the intelligent Lorraine I know must have been smart enough to notice what I've realized at that material point in time...

Breaking into a girlish grin with twinkling eyes, Lorraine quipped "Gotcha Junior..." before breaking into the infectious laughter that I've come to grow familiar with... "Not now... after the run..."

Lorraine got back into a upright position before lifting her body up without turning around with any indication of waiting.

"You'll know... If you can catch me that is..." Her gentle jeer trailing off as I saw the bunch of a mini ponytail bob up and down at the back of her head as she broke into a run once more...

Once again, I find myself in a chase, as my legs went into auto-pilot on the resolution that I wasn't gonna be left behind by her in anyway... including the suspense she was gonna leave me with...

SexyStan
18-08-2010, 02:46 AM
Story Continued... The Big Break continued... and finally revealed...

The narcotizing effect has been making its presence felt in the relationship between Lorraine and I; I wasn't consciously aware (i.e. only sub-consciously and prolly beginning to take it for granted) of just how exactly how beautiful she was as the mundanities of daily life took control of both she and I; Either that, or her beauty was simply too great, IMHO, to be full fathomed. I wasn't even aware that such an effect existed until the radiance I had seen in her hit me that morning...

I found myself appreciating Lorraine once more, not just as a whole person, but in many tiny details once again, like how I did when I was met her at the lift lobby on our first "chance" encounter; I was once again aware of how she smelt, like flowers, the names of which I do not know and prolly have never seen. She was wearing the white-top that I've seen so often that I already numbed, but once again, I grew aware of the womanly lines that lie beneath. The auburn in her hair seemed obvious once more as I realized just how great she looked, as always, with her hair tied back...

That appreciation didn't last long as the jog wore on, with both of us silent and panting, not in shagging fashion but a shagged out one, my mind drifting away from appreciation to keep focus on how I may keep pace with the seemingly deliberate intensity she added into our usual jog...

"Phew..." She heaved as she lifted both her hands into the air, her palms clasp as she stretched to her sides at the end of it all... Me? I was in a completedly defeated posture, bent over with my hands on my also bent knees, poised in a "I'm-so-gonna-puke" fashion, screaming "BITCH!" at the back of my head while trying to give her the most macho of expressions...

Lorraine laughed at the contortions of my facial expression... I had been looking gradually constipated that morning as both our chests rose up and down in a bid to catch our breathes (Yes, her chest was rising up and down, nice bosoms and all, but I wasn't enjoying the view of it... trust me, go for a fucking 5-click run and try buayaing a gal immediately after... you'd prolly faint if your heart-beat increases in absolute horniness!).

"Hmmm... You are gonna get some private time with me..." Lorraine broked, as she turned to face the glistening water of the reservoir we just ran around like headless chickens...

"Aren't I getting just that?" I said as I upright my posture, barely successful... "Errr... Occasionally, when we both can afford it?"

Lorraine laughed in a musical fashion, like she swallowed a freaking xylophone "You think? Then what's gonna happen is gonna thrill you to death..."

Lorraine continued as we sat down on opposite sit-up benches at the exercise corner "Darren's going overseas for three weeks, in about three weeks time..." She beamed... "Well, I was gonna let you in on that later, probably a week before he's gone..."

She giggled again uncontrollably as she continued..." Didn't wanna excite you too much. After al, you are a small boy..."

I glared at her mockingly, my glare revealing more of a twinkle than aggression as I landed a play-punch on a button on her shoulder which said "Press for hysterical laugher.."

"Ok.. Ok..." Lorraine protested, obviously tickled... "Well, but it turns out an ex-colleague whom I extremely close with called me the day before yesterday..." She held her voice in obvious deliberation before continuing with a strange "one eye big one eye small" expression "to tell me that she's getting married..."

"So..." I played it cool, well on the surface for deep down within I was serious confused... Just WTF is she trying to get at? I screamed within...

With a "You-obviously-don't-get-it-for-you-are-a-dumb-guy" look, Lorraine finally revealed... "Hen's night... we both get to go... That's on top of three weeks private time..."

exskk
18-08-2010, 04:24 AM
Keep it up bro....

Wapol
18-08-2010, 12:03 PM
Nice story,please continue.

PIMPY
18-08-2010, 01:13 PM
Awesome writing! You should be making serious money from this. Will rep you as soon as I can though it'll be quite a while. :o

siaokia55
19-08-2010, 12:48 AM
come on, carry on the hens nite!:D

Lennyberg
19-08-2010, 12:45 PM
please continue

i love tits
19-08-2010, 02:40 PM
hey stan
the stories is great....
more please.

SexyStan
19-08-2010, 08:22 PM
Story Continued... The Men Don't Get It...

Still seated on the sit-up bench with a blank expression on my face, I was going "Huh?!?" at the back of my head. Well, I'm certainly happy about the 3 weeks private time with her and I've never loved MINDEF more for this wonderful opportunity that it has presented to me (You guys would know that MINDEF has a serious problem presenting opportunities to people, haha...) but Hen's Night? Ex-colleague's marriage?? Eh... seriously, what does that have got to do with me? :confused:

Lorraine obviously picked up the vibes I was giving off for her expression changed instaneously to one of slight annoyance. "Hey... How come you don't look too happy?" She asked, her voice distasteful. I looked at her my eyes went *blink* once... *pause*... *blink twice*... sensing I'm on thin ice. "Hmmm... I don't quite get it?" My words came out in slow deliberation, one after another so that I could sense for any signs of danger and brake the sentence just in time... Remember what I said earlier on in this thread... Hell hath no fury like a woman scorned... particularly this woman. "I mean... Ya... I get the private time... Nice... we can go places we've always wanted to without interference... But you still have Glen so we can't really hang out as much as we want to?" *Pause* "Besides... if you wanted to go clubbing, we could always go since Darren's not in Singapore... But why the excitement over Hen's Night?" Enlighten me here... I'm genuinely confused...? I screamed out from within me...

Lorraine's face softened but her glare maintained... "You seriously are a dumb cuckoo aren't you?" Dumb cuckoo? Now where did that come from... "Er... Where did that come from?" I laughed, my voice repeating the very question in my mind... "Chey...! Can't be bothered with you... Let's head back..." Lorraine jested as she got up to walk back home...

Not knowing what to do or say for I'm appearing utterly clueless and dumb, I stretched out my hands and pulled her close to me....

"Ouch..." She protested in shock as she fell on my laps, chuckling... "Hey...." Her voice trailing off as I did the only thing I felt I knew would cover up for the stupidity I just displayed... by planting a kiss on her lips...

"Are you nuts?" Her stern whisper arising in pitch in a crescendo. "Darren's not out of Singapore yet and we are in public!" She hissed as she landed her palms on my chest to push me away just that slightly...

"Let's go..." Lorraine said, getting up once more... "You can slowly figure out what's going on for the next 2 weeks plus before he flies off..." She grinned...

SexyStan
20-08-2010, 12:16 AM
Story Continued... My Best Friend's Wedding

Not my best friend of course... Its Lorraine's best friend's wedding. I got to hear first hand, though I have to admit that it was a lil irritating as she went on and on, how Lorraine and Charlene, Lorraine's best friend and ex-colleague who was getting married, were the best of gal-frens (yea... gal w/ tt irritating flower-power slang) from their JC days, to their Uni faculty and even joining the same corporate together... It was their dream, there was even that girl-lish BFF pact, you know, to get promoted or leave the company together... Well, all good parties come to an end and all these young girlish ambitions were brought to disappointment when Lorraine had a slight bump where her tummy was and she got married and Charlene left to join a rival organisation shortly after. None of my business really, and slightly irritating, but Lorraine simply wouldn't stop, tugging my sleeves like a lil gal if she sensed I was switching off into screen saver mode...

On and on she went and she still wouldn't stop even when we were at the lobby until the unexpected happened, when the lift door opened and Darren stepped out in a swagger, daunting in his light-blue Smart 3 uniform (Yea... I could see all the service award shit, badges and his farking rank, though really I have to admit that he does look impressive and I did feel secretly that he looks quite smart in it... something I'd never admit)... Stop Lorraine did with her mouth slightly ajar and she quickly recovered her composture. "Leaving so early?" Lorraine questioned, the obvious quiver that was supposed to be in her voice either not present, or not detectible at all (I suspect not detectible and that she was as freaked out as I was...). "Ya..." Darren grunted (How can this farker grunt everything he say instead of say it?) as he looked on at me, more like eye-balled me from head-to-toe in a who-the-fark-is-this-clown look. Sensing the challenge, my mongrel instinct took over, my gaze hardening, as my lips parted to pronounce a "Hi" that could only be pronounced by Arnold Schwazenager. I stretched out a hand most unwilling, only to have his hand meet mine in between our distance in a doubly unwilling fashion as he let out what sounded like a scoff (more like a snoff actually)...

"Errr... You remember Stanley right?" Lorraine quipped... and laughed. Artificial, I thought... Darren acknowledged slightly as Lorraine bade goodbye to him and all the "great day at all..." and "be home for dinnera" wifey shit. Darren acknowledged with an impatient, silent nod and strode off towards the multi-story carpark.

"That was close..." Lorraine giggled as the lift door closed before us after we had entered. Yea... I thought in silence... as my balls slowly lowered themselves into the sag they are supposed to be in. Hey, I felt challenged yes, and I felt provoked.. yes..., but still, it doesn't mean my balls won't retract upwards or they won't shrink after what Lorraine and I have done... It ain't right after all... And shrink they did. I'm just glad we weren't holding hands or anything....

Unspoken rules do have a place and purpose in this world after all... and they certainly saved our pathethic skins...

SexyStan
20-08-2010, 12:17 AM
hmm... comments on this thread like dying down. Look's like nobody in this forum would comment unless they get sex stories right...:D... WTH...

Breadpig
20-08-2010, 12:36 AM
hmm... comments on this thread like dying down. Look's like nobody in this forum would comment unless they get sex stories right...:D... WTH...

No, no, no. Brother you are doing great. Enjoy your stories and your style of writing. Great effort you've put in to continue despite your heavy workload. Support your thread and upped you, of cos with my points and not the other type of upping.:D

SexyStan
20-08-2010, 12:45 AM
No, no, no. Brother you are doing great. Enjoy your stories and your style of writing. Great effort you've put in to continue despite your heavy workload. Support your thread and upped you, of cos with my points and not the other type of upping.:D

Thanks bro... but I think you got it wrong... Haha... I'm asking for comments or reactions not as in points begging or sorts... though I really do appreciate your points... I guess I just hope brothers tell me what they think of the story, not as in the "great writer" sense, though again those are appreciated as well, but errr... You know discussions as in whether our r/s was right in the first place, how they think the story will develope (so I can contrast it against how it really did as it continued and as I reveal more..)...

Errrr.... if any bros feel its too draggy, feel free to criticise as well coz I really don't know whether you all would wanna see a story that's not all bang-wham and shit...

SexyStan
20-08-2010, 12:47 AM
No, no, no. Brother you are doing great. Enjoy your stories and your style of writing. Great effort you've put in to continue despite your heavy workload. Support your thread and upped you, of cos with my points and not the other type of upping.:D

Oh yea... btw... I really like your signature... "I tried to drown my sorrows but they've learnt how to swim..." Nice... Hahaha...

Developing the story in the meantime as I speak, stay tuned and hope you bros aren't disappointed by the lack of sex scenes thus far... coz there really isn't that much.:o

Lennyberg
20-08-2010, 12:58 AM
hmm... comments on this thread like dying down. Look's like nobody in this forum would comment unless they get sex stories right...:D... WTH...

really nice stories mate. :D

SexyStan
20-08-2010, 12:59 AM
Story Continued... On and On she went...

The lift door opened to reveal the corridor, on our common floor, which both Lorraine and I have grown to be hell familiar with. I was still recovering from my initial shock (Hey, I wasn't expecting to see my nemesis though we technically stay in the same block and on the same floor even...) when I heard Lorraine say... "Eh... Breakfast at 9 hor... Downstairs Coffeeshop..." as she untied her hair and walked towards her apartment, her head cocked slightly to face me while doing so...

Huh?!?!?! Again... I can almost hear her going on and on about her friendship with Charlene.... Shit! I thought.... Not Again!!!! I could almost hear myself groaning as I unlocked my door.

Upon finishing my morning shower and having changed into working attire (and of course after watching Suzanne Jung on CNA), I proceeded to the RP (redenzvous point) that Lorraine had set for the both of us. Ordered my coffee and of course her teh-si (again.... milk tea) and waited for her to come down, not eagerly for I already know what was in store... At the back of my mind, I was already picturing her going on and on... I could hear her and all... and I was already going yea yea.... ya... ummmm.... at the back of my head... Don't get me wrong... Its interesting to hear stories and escapades about her younger days... Its all in the process of knowing a woman better and I do wanna get to know her... but on and on... about the same shit????? Hell no...

Lorraine's car turned into the open-air carpark before the coffeeshop shortly, presumably having sent her precious cub to pre-school. Sigh.... as I watch her walk towards in my direction, shortly after. Again, she looked nice... and fresh as she must have taken a shower as well just as I did... But really, I was braced for incessant girlish banter and really wasn't in the mood to appreciate her beauty then...

True enough... On and on she went... I know you bros must feel like killing for actually developing a section on how she went on and on... Trust me... I felt like killing her too.... 15 mins of suffering... 30 mins of suffering.... as I sipped coffee and munched prata while she talked as she sipped on her teh-si and ate her fishball noodles.... Kill me... Please....

"OEI... ARE YOU FUCKING LISTENING ANOT?" Huh? The spacebar was tabbed (more like smashed) while lappy is in screen-saver mode, I could feel the processor in me whirl into life..... in fear....

"Errrr..... ya?" I said... looking at her with puppy eyes... hoping she'd feel sweet about the whole thing...

"No... you weren't!" Lorraine replied sternly, obviously finding my lack of focus offensive.

Sigh.... here we go... our first official tiff....

xAhKingx
20-08-2010, 01:04 AM
nice story bro ... keep up the good work ...

SexyStan
20-08-2010, 01:07 AM
haha... I didn't know you could edit your posts until now... Looks like I'm learning more and more about the functions here as I post... Interesting...

yashirob
20-08-2010, 01:09 AM
really great story. im just one of those silent readers haha. anw ur story reminds me of myself. falling for a married woman. i definitely understand all the emotional turmoil that you're going thru. it just eats me up inside and life is never the same anymore. you don look at things in the same way anymore and you grow up way faster than you should.

StillLearning
20-08-2010, 01:22 AM
hmm... comments on this thread like dying down. Look's like nobody in this forum would comment unless they get sex stories right...:D... WTH...

Keep it up. Keep writing. You have a good command of the English language, except for the odd spelling mistake.

SexyStan
20-08-2010, 01:27 AM
really great story. im just one of those silent readers haha. anw ur story reminds me of myself. falling for a married woman. i definitely understand all the emotional turmoil that you're going thru. it just eats me up inside and life is never the same anymore. you don look at things in the same way anymore and you grow up way faster than you should.

Thanks bro... Yea... never an avid poster but this thread really an outlet for me I guess... haha... disagree w/ the growing up part tho... I'm already 26 la... considered grown up...

SexyStan
20-08-2010, 01:32 AM
Keep it up. Keep writing. You have a good command of the English language, except for the odd spelling mistake.

Hahaha.... noted. Please pardon my grammatical and spelling errors. Most of the time, I rush thru the postings to develope the story in time so bros won't be disappointed (so that I won't kenna zap... lol) and I just click post the min I'm done... Mostly in between travelling from Point A to Point B or... like now... when I'm bored of my work and wanna multi-task a lil...

So yea... hope those silly errors won't affect the story's articulation and you guys can still understand what I was trying to say in the posts...

Apologies...

eXia-san
20-08-2010, 05:42 AM
fuyoo.... ur story abit different than d others... but do continue ur story cause getting excited for the latest encounter... XD

StillLearning
20-08-2010, 11:21 AM
Hahaha.... noted. Please pardon my grammatical and spelling errors. Most of the time, I rush thru the postings to develope the story in time so bros won't be disappointed (so that I won't kenna zap... lol) and I just click post the min I'm done... Mostly in between travelling from Point A to Point B or... like now... when I'm bored of my work and wanna multi-task a lil...

So yea... hope those silly errors won't affect the story's articulation and you guys can still understand what I was trying to say in the posts...

Apologies...

Your continuing saga is interesting, and makes a compelling read. I hope that if your story and your relationship progress, you do not get into trouble. I am anxiously waiting for your next episode(s).

Lennyberg
20-08-2010, 12:26 PM
Hahaha.... noted. Please pardon my grammatical and spelling errors. Most of the time, I rush thru the postings to develope the story in time so bros won't be disappointed (so that I won't kenna zap... lol) and I just click post the min I'm done... Mostly in between travelling from Point A to Point B or... like now... when I'm bored of my work and wanna multi-task a lil...

So yea... hope those silly errors won't affect the story's articulation and you guys can still understand what I was trying to say in the posts...

Apologies...

grammer is the least of the concerns bro :D

Frankiestine
20-08-2010, 03:12 PM
You know discussions as in whether our r/s was right in the first place, how they think the story will develope (so I can contrast it against how it really did as it continued and as I reveal more..).

Dude the silence means everyone here are waiting in eager anticipation of the next installation...asking them to comment on the r/s is like opening a can of worms...that we can do without....:p

juswannahaveFUN
20-08-2010, 04:58 PM
excellent stuff Stan! i can so relate to you..tasted forbidden love before too and i am now a full time bummer on the job hunt. :) keep up the good work dude..awaiting the next instalment.

mvmhjki6
20-08-2010, 07:37 PM
hi bro i always look forward to your next episode. machiam soap opera. Ur england also very powderful. so no need worry about grammatical errors and stuff. Get the big picture can oredi. hahaz

SexyStan
21-08-2010, 02:58 PM
hi bro i always look forward to your next episode. machiam soap opera. Ur england also very powderful. so no need worry about grammatical errors and stuff. Get the big picture can oredi. hahaz

Lol... Thank you all bros for the support, though I was worried that the "soap opera" likeness would not cater to the taste of bros here... Really appreciate the support given, it motivates me to update the developments of the story despite my busy schedule...

yang punk
21-08-2010, 06:57 PM
Haha...perhaps she had you in mind as the "star" of the hen party and you might just get rape by the bride to be. Stand by a 'blue' pill to impress the ladies!
;)

SexyStan
21-08-2010, 07:04 PM
Story Continued... Men are from Mars and Women are from Venus...

I found myself staring at Lorraine's pissed off and disappointed face that screams you-so-obviously-don't-give-fucking-damn, a frozen portrait against a moving background. In a manner that reaks so of "flower-power" and I'm the female here, she maintained her silence and her pissed-off glare into my eyes, her body upright and arms akimbo, before retracting back into her seat in a I-couldn't-care-less-because-you-don't care posture with her hands folded across her chair.

"What?" Lorraine asked me, a dangerous note of threat present in her soft, chilling voice...

Sigh... and I thought it was highly unlikely we'd ever fight, considering how much understanding we have of each other... before composing my thoughts, choosing between a witty comeback line, which was likely to diss her further, or a serenading line to sooth her shrewish temper. I decided on the latter, for safety reasons, for there was still some tea in her cup and I was in white-collared attire, i.e. shirt and tie, not exactly fighting-fit long 4 camos...

"I was listening gal..." I replied, my tone calm and gentle...

"No you weren't..." Her voice shot back low, cold and fast...

The debate wore on, not in a lively manner but a hopelessly dead fashion, on establishing whether I was listening or not... It went on for a good 15 minutes I think as I tried to tame the shrew... Hopelessly... Nothing worked... Wits didn't work, it only riled Lorraine up further, big-watery puppy eyes didn't work... apparently there wasn't enough water in my eyes to douse the fire in her... and I'm too proud a man to try a pleading tone on her... I decided to try the last trick... Playing dumb... Not too difficult apparently, for I really didn't know what was going on...

"Sigh... I was... but you can't blame me for wondering really... what has Charlene's marriage got to do with me?" I said, deliberating my tone... "I mean, fine... I love MINDEF for taking Darren away for 3 weeks so we can spend some time together... I see the dates that we were never able to go on materializing... I'm dying to take you out for movies and stuffs... and yes, Hen's Night means we'd go clubbing... but we could have gone even without the Hen's Night right? So really, don't mind me, but what's the big deal about Hen's Night, Charlene's Marriage, and all...?" .... "I don't even know her..."

Big mistake... I thought as the final words formed and came out of my mouth just like that with a hint of protest in my voice. There, I had blown it... I had tried to deliberate what to say, controlling my tone, and the last 5 words that came out blew it all... Shit....

Lorraine tapped her fingers on the table dangerously for seconds which seemed like hours... The world behind her passing by us still... "So?" She said... "Why are you men always the same?" Clearly irritated, Lorraine continued... "Can't you even listen for a minute?"

"You may not know Charlene but she's my best gal... Can't you at least show some interest?...... I'm happy for her as she's finally found her man... Can't you at least be willing to let me share it with you? ......(sentence trailing off, blah blah blah blah.....) IS SEX THE ONLY THING YOU GUYS CARE ABOUT?" Screen saver mode and the spacebar was punched once more by her last sentence...

"Lorraine... you know me better than that..." I said in a stern voice... "If that's the way you see me? I can only say I'm sorry..."

Sensing the challenge, the fighter I've known her to be quickly rose to size me up... "Yea? Then say you are sorry..." Fighting... but I sensed plea in her tone...

Oh Lorraine... Lol... I thought... "I'm sorry... K?" I looked on at her and smiled...

"K..." Her eyes twinkling once more, sensing she's won...

Crap....

SexyStan
21-08-2010, 07:05 PM
Haha...perhaps she had you in mind as the "star" of the hen party and you might just get rape by the bride to be. Stand by a 'blue' pill to impress the ladies!
;)

Haha... Mr Yang... Glad to see your comments once more... I thought I had lost your support in this battle of mine... Far from it... Hope the story's not progressing too slow to get to what happened.... Coming soon... I hope...

SexyStan
21-08-2010, 07:26 PM
Story Continued... The Men do Get it... Finally...

I always felt that UOB's marketing department has done a great job on their Ladie's Card with the tagline "The Men don't get it..." with their initial advertisement that ended with a really hunky male model scratching his head in confusion. Now, that's what I call witty... Lol...

Its true how little we know of our female counterparts, other than the fact that we'd like to get into their pants if they were really hot. Shame on us (Don't zap me here yet for if you time to think, you might well find it true...)

I've always known Lorraine to be a manly-gal, i.e. she's a tough nut w/ a really fiery temper. Feisty some might say but having known her, I know she'd put many guys to shame, in particular, in the way she drives her car around (Now who says females can't drive for nuts...). Throughout the months of acquainting her, servicing her (not in the sexual sense dudes... in professional capacity... Sigh... Horny Goats... hahaha) and being immensely attracted to her, I've always felt that we had an immense mutual understanding to an extent that our thoughts, needs and wants did not need to be spoken aloud for us to understand. It was like we were telepathic.

Her earlier girlish outburst made me realize that the feeling I used to have, that we knew one another already, couldn't be further from the truth in fact. Yes, complacency is dangerous and I got complacent, forgetting how much I wanted to know her as a person as I remembered the initial smoke we had at the lift lobby and how I craved for her to tell me more about herself then, with me quietly listening to her stories, nodding and laughing with her. On top of that, I've come to the realization that although her manly nature and decisiveness is what I respect and love about her, Lorraine is still a woman first and a gal-at-heart second and that all she'd want, likely any other gals, is for a man to feel her through and through... Now, that's feeling a lady, I thought to myself...

Lorraine went on and on once more... and I listened... careful not to get impatient... as she shared her happiness with me on Lorraine's marriage. In wasn't just the happiness for Lorraine had for Charlene, that Charlene's finally found a man she trusts and is willing to place her life in his hands... It was about how Lorraine wasn't happy in her marriage and is now hoping that this fate does not befall her best female-pal. Lorraine didn't say that at all, she went on and on about how happy she was for Charlene... It was in her tone, voice and completely obvious in between the lines...

I get it now... and as we left the coffeeshop for her car once more (nothing kinky, sorry)... I held her hand and gave it a little squeeze with mine... In full view of the public...

I don't give a shit anymore... I finally get it and if Darren does find out from the mouths of nosy aunties or whoever-shits... so be it...

Lorraine turned around to face me with an expression of shock... pleasant shock... "errr... are you nuts?" She beamed...

"No I'm not... I get you finally" I said, laughing, careful not to reveal too much of what exactly I get in case in brings out the pain in her, simply trusting that she'd be able to feel me and get it figured out...

She did and I was well-rewarded for my effort in understanding her (again, no kinky shits!!!!! How many times do I have to tell you horny bros this? hahaha... rewards come in many forms dudes....) Finally, on the car to my office, Lorraine went on and on about something else that was exciting truely...

"... ... So Charlene brought her Hen's Night forward, and wedding as well... so I could go... ... ... After all, I'm her best gal (yes, with that irritating flower-power slang) fren ... and I'm gonna be her sister on marriage day... ... ... There's gonna be a party and hell lotsa drinks and she's suggested we check into a hotel after that...." Lorraine chattered on in a tone only an excited school-girl could have, saying that long piece above, much of which has been omitted for band-width reasons... hahaha... in one single breath...

"I think we should have a room to ourselves..."

I love MINDEF... I thought... as the journey, and whatever Lorraine had to say, came to an end... I could have screamed it out... if her lips weren't on mine and I wasn't too busy trying to get my tongue into her mouth.

Triple-X
21-08-2010, 08:11 PM
Nice narration.Clear and addictive! This gal Lorraine has one hell of a character!Brings back some memories of my own! Go for it man if u think she's the one! All the best and do keep updating! :)

SexyStan
24-08-2010, 10:40 AM
Thank you bros for your patient wait. I hope the developments didn't come too slow and I didn't lose too many "fans" in the process... Here's the latest instalment I can afford.

Story Continued... Are we the Waiting...

I took the lift up to my office with Lorraine's sweet kiss still lingering on my lips; Yes, I can still taste her kiss and tender lips, I thought to myself as my vision zoomed in on my pursed lips reflected in the mirrors the lift car had for walls.

As I examined myself further, I grew aware of something else other than my pursed lips and usually orderly dressing. Was it my hair? No... It was the twinkle in my eye.... Pursed Lips, but I was sure I was smiling deep down for I was excited, about the countdown to the three weeks I would have Lorraine all to myself and ecstatic for her company I was going to enjoy throughout that duration. Yes... Finally I was gonna get some alone time with all, though not all her time will be mine for Glen was still in the equation and she had to tend to her precious cub. Hen's Night and a stay-over at a hotel was even better, I could envision her head on my chest while we both drift into sleep in the sooth and lull of her sweet scent... Heh, I found my reflection grinning back at me...

Like a new-born, wide-eyed and full of things to look forward to, I felt consciously alive for the 1st time in my life. It dawned on me I probably felt this way as a baby but I could never have been conscious back then of how good life felt. The refreshed me lasted the entire duration of the wait of two weeks plus and I felt more and more alive as each day wore on and we were one day closer to our lil "time-off"...

One thing I know for sure, the wait’s gonna be arduous and completely torturous for the both of us, but I was determined to make the best of it, i.e. the wait and the times that come after that...

my_preek
24-08-2010, 10:45 AM
waiting for more updates !

SexyStan
24-08-2010, 11:02 AM
Story Continued... Laws of Attraction... Que Sera Sera

Two and a half weeks waiting time was more than enough for one to reflect and I found myself doing just that. As mentioned earlier, it felt like I was doing everything for the first time, which includes each and every encounter (not the one's that result in "shit" happening... lol... the usual ones, which includes msns and SMSes, as well as our jogs and coffee sessions) w/ Lorraine. It felt like I've just gotten t know her at the lift lobby that first time, with her hauling Glen along...

And I started to wonder the What Ifs...

1. What if I had never resigned from my previous job?
Well, I wouldn't have gotten to know Lorraine and things certainly couldn't have been more different.

2. What if timing was wrong the first time I saw her at the lift lobby and I didn’t get to see her and Glen, of if they had not boarded the same lift car?
Simple. I wouldn't have known she existed, much less just how hot she was.

3.What if I didn’t manage to draw her chuckle (and attention) by not saying “cute cub” in the lift?
Would I have left an impression still? I don't know...

4. What if I had not decided to be so nice, for once, to take the trash out and that sheepish encounter of me clad in only boxers didn’t take place?
Same answer as (3) above.

5. What if I didn’t bump into her on the first day of ICT and didn’t pissed her off coz I was laughing at the cheesy songs on her ipod?
Same answer as (3) above. Likewise, she wouldn't have left an impression on me.

6.What if I didn’t bump into her in 7-11 after my ICT? What if she had not smelt the cigarette smell on me and asked me for a smoke?
Again, I don't know if I had left an impression but she certainly did her. It was here I understood the difference between pretty, hot and beautiful. If anyone ever tells me now that beauty is only skin deep, I'd reply w/ so is shallow.

7. If I had not gone to Cold-Storage to help her w/ the baggage and had Starbucks w/ her tt very day?
Like (6) above, I would have missed out on an opportunity to know just how beautiful she is...

8. What if I had not bumped into her and gave her my card and what if she hadn’t become my client?
Question to be asking here is what if I never agreed to a crazy run at 5... Sheesh... To the later part of the question, I wouldn't have worried so much and prolly made sweet tender love to her much much earlier hahahaahaha

9. What if she never popped the question “How do two persons get attracted to one another?”
Errr.... I wouldn't have thought so much?

10. What if I never got to see Darren?
Then I'd prolly never have wondered if Lorraine was unhappy and perhaps never have made up my mind to be attracted to her...

11. What if Darren hadn’t pissed Lorraine off, presumably from his infidelity, and she didn’t asked for a “fag”?
Errr.... No breakfast, no car ride... & no shit... Haha...

12. What if she didn’t reach out in an attempt to help me w/ my big bulky bag?
Again, shit might not have happened coz we wouldn't have crashed our heads clumsily against one another's.

13. What if I hadn’t said those stupid two words “Blow Me...”?
Errr.... I wouldn't have sounded so stupid?

14. What if we hadn’t attempted to avoid each other each time shit happens?
I'd never have known the true meaning of absence made the hearts grow fonder...

15. What if she hadn’t asked me for smokes after shit happened?
I wouldn't have returned her favour...

16. What if Darren never received his posting orders?
I wouldn't have been so alive and excited?

17. What if Lorraine and I never fought over something as stupid as “because I don’t get it?” Or what if the fight had escalated?
Prolly no more alone time despite Darren being away. W/ regards to the first part of the question, even if Darren was away, we wouldn't have made the best of it... On hindsight, make the best of it we did... ;P

18. What if Charlene was never in the picture, or if she didn’t get married?
No hen's night, no biggie (I was wrong btw...) I'm more interested in what if Lorraine never got married really...

Having pondered the chicken and egg questions above, I was convinced that Lorraine was a life-changer to me. Without her, I could never have breathed and talked like how I'm doing so today, considering I was a jobless bummer not too long ago... which brings me to one more question, the mother of all chicken-and-eggs...

19. What if Darren had been nicer to Lorraine?

... Then I would never have had a chance to fall for Lorraine and we'd never have gotten started... More importantly, I wouldn't have made up my mind to hold her hands in full view of the public coz I wouldn't have decided that "I no longer give a damn"....

SexyStan
24-08-2010, 11:03 AM
waiting for more updates !

Wah bro... u damn fast... Lol... I thought I've lost my fans, apparently not...
You are prolly reader no. 1 in this new developments... HAHAHA...

Thank you very much for your wait, and your 1 point up.

puxihongqiao
24-08-2010, 12:28 PM
Bro,

Impressed with your writing, its almost taking us to the place where you were when you are doing all the emotional descriptions. No matter, its more entertaining than then cut off the mill wham bam stories

No points to up you, but you have my support.

SexyStan
24-08-2010, 01:11 PM
Bro,

Impressed with your writing, its almost taking us to the place where you were when you are doing all the emotional descriptions. No matter, its more entertaining than then cut off the mill wham bam stories

No points to up you, but you have my support.

Thanks bro for your support. On the other note, I realised my thread ratings have fallen... lol... Hmmm... coz someone just placed a vote for one star, pulling the average down (yes, my maths is that good...). Just hope the person who votes one star may share his honest opinion on why he feels this thread sucks. Its the least I'd like to know... unless the reader is Darren himself of course... then I suck thumb... Hahaha...

SexyStan
24-08-2010, 01:26 PM
Wow... Working on another update when ratings drop again... Lol... Well, if anyone has any comments, please do share openly... I really do appreciate them. If you guys feel that the story is developing too slowly, just say la.... Lol...

SexyStan
24-08-2010, 02:00 PM
Story Continued... The Plan...

Remember how I mentioned I didn't see the point in Lorraine's excitement over Charlene's Hen's Night and I wasn't too excited about it myself? And how I again didn't understand the whole big hullabaloo over Charlene's marriage and all (I even out in brackets after that that I was wrong... on hindsight... hahaha)? Well, Lorraine was right, in that I'm such a complete dumb ass...

That fateful day, the commencement of my life once more, after our tiff and I held Lorraine's hands in full view of the public, while I was in the office, Lorraine's msn message popped up while I was halfway-thru my work. Well, it wasn't like I was doing any work in the first place for excitement was gradually taking over... But it can only get better...

R u excited? =)
Hey gal... What about?
Do you always have to be so nonchalent? *animation of a frowning face* About 3 wks we have to one another!!!!

I could almost here Lorraine scream out in frustration with that glare I was just shown w/ about an hour ago... Still, me being me, especially the reborn me, just enjoyed frustrating her the way Glen probably did, when he was freaking 6months old (Well, I was reborn, wasn't I? Of course I have the luxury of enjoying what babies enjoy the most... Hahaha)

Oh.... ya.... Wrking nw... wad abt it?

Silence and no further lines appeared on the screen... Lol... I can seriously sense her seething, though she's definitely nowhere near me...

Lol...
WHAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! My screen nudged... Hahaha, the no. of exclamation marks used here is seriously not exagerrated. She used more in fact.
K k... chill cow... I was only jesting... I juz lk 2 c u angry smehw... tt's when u r e cutest... muackz...
Yes... I'm looking 4ward 2 everything... very much. I'm thinking of where 2 bring u 2... There r so many places I've always wanted to go w/ u...
Yea yea... don't try tt trick on me... DOESN'T WORK!!!!!!

Haha... Deep down, I sensed she was appeased and grinning behind the screens...

Really... I better stop trying and get back to my wrk then...Lol...
...
Where r u planning on bringing me? Lol... whr can u bring me tt I've not gone to junior...
Good question... I don't knw... U've prolly been to most placest... but u've not gone thr w/ me tho... Who knws? U might c something new... or at least c something old w/ some new perspectives...
Really? I've somewhr to bring u to tho... bet u've nvr been thr!

Hahaha... This girl sure is competitive, I thought as my fingers flew over the keyboard for a comeback line...

Oh Yea? I'd hope so really, for u to bring me somewhr I've nvr gone b4. But unless its timbuctoo, u'd prolly get a wet blanket over yr kind intentions... =P

Yea? Well, rmb hw Charlene wanted to stay over @ a hotel?
Nope.. don't rmb... I dun even knw her... *Kidding kidding...Yes, U've told me just nw... Wad abt it?
The gals were suggesting RWS...

Deep down inside, I was thinking... Siao... attas freaks... i'm so gonna get burnt... but I kindda liked the idea tho... Hahaha...

But no vancancies... sigh...
Really? Hahahaha... tough luck gal... RWS would have been one place I've not visited yet...
Haha... Me too... I've not been there... but we can still check it out... coz we'll be putting up at the Siloso Resort instead...

What??? I could feel my fingers trembling from the excitement as I struggled to sound come over cyberspace (Not a difficult task, considering that she can't see nor hear me)... Bros who've been there would understand why...

Oh? Haha... I've already been there =)...

rh8611
24-08-2010, 10:27 PM
u truly deserve my 5 pointers!! all the way! cheers :D

SexyStan
24-08-2010, 11:03 PM
Story Continued... D-Day

The wait was long, and completely torturous, every bit what I had imagined it to be. All that pent up frustration could be felt, not only by myself, but by Lorraine as well, as we exchanged messages over MSNs and SMSes outside the times we met face to face...

We discussed incessantly, how we both would make the best of the 3 weeks. I thought endlessly, deep down and secretly, how she'd all be mine at the end of 3 weeks as well. I knew I had lost time to make up for, not just the lost time for whatever we were both unable to share due to the circumstances, but the lost time she'd lost since she got married... To a certain extent, I felt, there might really have been a need to ruin her marriage. As the discussions wore on, day by day, and as we started to list down the things we hoped to share during Darren's period of absence, our inhibitions started to wear down and we both threw all caution to the wind. Such frivolous acts would include kisses in the security of a sheltered children's playground after our jog, holdings hands while on the way back again after the jogs, more and more sweet nothings and blatant declarations of I love you whenever we were accorded the opportunities...

As countdown to Darren's departure day wore down and inhibitions gradually wore out, I felt like an allied soldier landing on Normandy w/ scene's from HBO's band of brothers playing in my head... (Departure Day... so D-Day, get it? Hahaha...) Like the allied troops, Darren was scheduled to fly on a Tuesday on an early morning flight, @ 0645h. Historically, and coincidentally, actual D-day assault was scheduled for 6 June 1944, a Tuesday as well, @ 0630h...

I'm so gonna charge charge up those beaches... I swore w/ resolution in my heart, which was now on my sleeves...

1700H D-14H (Incoming MSN Brief from Lorraine)
hey junior... Can u feel it?
Yea... I can't breath... Lol...
I knw.... I wanna c u 2... muackz
Incessant banter carries on as we both discussed our plans further, teasing each other high and dry and in the process... nothing pornographic tho... just longing... lots of it...
K... Darren's comin hm. We r gonna take Glen out 4 dinner... Can't wait 4 u to take me away somewhere... haha... love you... muackz...
Love u 2... muackz...

Debrief ended as Lorraine went offline & her picture faded off into the background.... Debrief closure 0615 @ approximately D-13h

2200H D-9H
Nothing heard from Lorraine... Lights out for early rest in preparation of landings & counter-invasion...

0000H D-7H
Nothing heard from Lorraine again, no matter how much I checked my mobile phone... No further ops orders, no further instructions...

0300H D-4H
Day's breaking, still tossing & turning in bed w/ light sleep...
Radio silence observed.... No comms check from Lorraine...
Drifting in and out of sleep...

0500H D-2H
I knew the enemy was gonna be out of sight soon... Assault commencing in T-2. Butterflies in my tummy... Can't wait... Got up to peer downstairs from my kitchen window in hope of catching sight of the leaving enemy. Intel spotted our double-agent Lorraine sending the enemy off...
Hold your fire still... enemy must not be alerted...

Equipment check and sitrep.
Guts... Checked...
FBO... Checked...
Ammo... Lots of it... Checked...
Helmet... checked checked checked checked checked...

0700H D-0H
D-Day!!!! I screamed
Beautiful shores of France loomed up before me... No enemy fire like what my allied counterparts have suffered 66 years ago... We've done our intel well, enemy has been sent away and completely in shock at the landings and our well-planned counter-invasion...

One thing remained similar... like beautiful france w/ its magnificent countrysides... Beautiful Lorraine laid in the hands of the Nazis...
We will liberate her... No matter what it takes...

Viva La France!!!! Viva La Lorraine...

SexyStan
24-08-2010, 11:24 PM
u truly deserve my 5 pointers!! all the way! cheers :D

Thank you bro for your support and points, as well as to all bros who have shown your appreciation by upping lil ole me. Erm... if bros have upped me and do want me to return your favour, please PM me so that the favour may be returned as I really don't know if I'm upped coz my thread and effort is being recognized and appreciated, or if you want your favour returned...

Thanks bro for your support. On the other note, I realised my thread ratings have fallen... lol... Hmmm... coz someone just placed a vote for one star, pulling the average down (yes, my maths is that good...). Just hope the person who votes one star may share his honest opinion on why he feels this thread sucks. Its the least I'd like to know... unless the reader is Darren himself of course... then I suck thumb... Hahaha...

If humble me may request... humbly of course, please do not rate 1 if you've got a personal vendetta against me for not returning your favour... Lol... If you feel the thread is farked up, then please do as you please but kindly share your opinions as to why you feel so...

Just finished a further development and the 1st thing upon doing so is the realization my ratings dropped further because another bugger just voted 1 star to pull the average down... Lol... Like I've said, my maths is good enough to do simple averages instantly... ;P

Well, perhaps there's no need to be perplexed bros might advised me... but I am... coz I really do believe that even if I do not have a 5 star story, I am confident I've shown at least a 4 star attitude to continue it despite my schedules... So really, please do point out why its worth 1 star to u nay-sayers so my story may b improved... Just hope u guys (those who have done silly deeds as such) have enough integrity as to not wank to my story lo... even though wanking parts are few and apart... Lol...

waahaa
24-08-2010, 11:30 PM
gold, sword, juno, omaha, utah. pick them off slowly, normandy was a massive operation :p

SexyStan
24-08-2010, 11:39 PM
gold, sword, juno, omaha, utah. pick them off slowly, normandy was a massive operation :p

Lol... bro... I liked the way u put it. Don't worry, it'll b elaborated in the next posting... once I finish my pile of work... But yea, whatever it was... I wasn't posted onto the hopeless and disastrous Omaha Landings but definitely the highly effective Utah... and like Utah, a stroke of luck was evident in the success of my landings... Haha

Well... Commander of tt landing did state after all... "We start the war from right here..." after he realized that he "Holland" (Lol... he landed far off course, btw... but made the fastest inroad...)?

badboy
25-08-2010, 12:42 AM
looking forward to your next update bro!

cant wait 2 see yr flanking n advancement to liberate yr precious Lorraine..haha..


Cheers
Badboy :cool:

sennheiser
25-08-2010, 01:55 AM
Story Continued... D-Day



Viva La France!!!! Viva La Lorraine...

nice one!! :D

waahaa
25-08-2010, 08:21 AM
Lol... bro... I liked the way u put it. Don't worry, it'll b elaborated in the next posting... once I finish my pile of work... But yea, whatever it was... I wasn't posted onto the hopeless and disastrous Omaha Landings but definitely the highly effective Utah... and like Utah, a stroke of luck was evident in the success of my landings... Haha

Well... Commander of tt landing did state after all... "We start the war from right here..." after he realized that he "Holland" (Lol... he landed far off course, btw... but made the fastest inroad...)?

well, that was kinda cool. seeing as he managed to siam the defenses. sometimes things work out that way

mr_missile
25-08-2010, 09:28 AM
Love the way you write TS. D-day has arrived. Waiting for your charge, conquer and raising of the victory flag. :D

Ravenzou
25-08-2010, 10:32 AM
Very well written and Keep up the assult. Freedom Fighters GO GO GO
Ha HA Ha.

amir4812
25-08-2010, 12:46 PM
Damn you man, missed my dinner yesterday. Missed my lunch today.
Got screwed by my boss for going out early for lunch break.
All because i had to read your thread from start to finish.
It's just to good for me to stop. I should have check this forum regularly
but the other threads don't intrest me as its mostly

Target infront fire.
Load weapons
Target infront fire.

To much screwing from start to end.
Unlike yours with all the emotions, drama and bits of comedy attached.
Up you for your GREAT work and gave you an excellant rating for tread.
Thanks for entertaining us. Cheers!!

beachaway
25-08-2010, 02:00 PM
great story bro!

during my younger days i also get involved with quite a number of attached/married woman, it's full of love, sex and emo-ness... .. .

oh man, i miss them... .. . LOL

loren
25-08-2010, 07:11 PM
bro, u have here a new fan. been a silent supporter since i wandered into this forum few days ago.

pitched tent; now let the games begin!

SexyStan
26-08-2010, 12:26 AM
Thank you bros for your invaluable support. Glad you guys likes my reference to D-Day... Lol...

SexyStan
26-08-2010, 01:32 AM
Story Continued... Blitzkrieg: We'll start the war from right here...

A lil history background now, before I continue w/ the developments. Landings on Utah beach, in the Normandy Landings (as explained by waahaa, thank you, as well as History Channel...), is considered to be the most efficient and effective amongst the five operations the Landings comprised off. The other factions faced heavy resistance, the worst being the Omaha Landings, and this was what the Utah party did not encounter. They encountered minimum resistance, not because the operatiions are well-planned, but by a pure stroke of luck; Somehow, they had landed much further up than the originally planned contact point. Simply put, of course and completely lost, which prompted the commander of that particular operation, BG Theordore Roosevelt Jr. to say "We will start the war from right here"... Well, not like that lucky bastard had anything else more appropriate after all...

Likewise, my landings on D-Day, were met with minimal enemy fire. It was none existent in fact, for the enemy wasn't even there (Or so I thought) and it wasn't by pure good ole ingenius planning (What Planning? Lol...) but things between Lorraine & I just somehow fell into place with a click... just like that... like how you'd snap your fingers...

The shores looked barren as my landing craft touched down on its beaches with a bump, the terra looking strange and isolated with not an enemy in sight. With a plomp, I landed in the warm waters... Wait... Warm Waters?!?!?! Wasn't the water supposed to be cold? Well, books written by WW2 veterans who participated in the Normandy Landings did describe the biting cold of the waters...

It soon dawned on me at we were on different fields... They were liberating France, cold and lifeless in Nazi control; I was liberating Lorraine... Different and the same conditions, and rules, my poor allied counterparts had been subjected to and had to endure, simply did not apply to me.

I ducked once more into the waters of my showerhead... Time Check... Landing made @ 0900h... Known enemy resistance is now gone... for sure... and certainly the warmth in Lorraine would be coming back...

My heart leapt in ecstacy at what a lucky breakthru my landing was. Without enemy resistance, Lorraine's shores didn't look hostile. It was inviting even... Pulling myself back into combat awareness, I did another quick equipment check... I have plenty of helmets... which I know I was gonna use... Red berets... or rather caps... no less for my lil commando break... Armed with a throbbing 50 calibre that comes with one single rapid burst-fire of 1million runs at each go... with a cooldown timing of approximately 1H... I was confident Lorraine could be re-taken... Question is, how far can I go? Would only the shores be re-taken... or would I march right into the heart of Lorraineville?

Knowing full well that resistance was gonna be minimal and having known that the rules of WW2 didn't apply, I decided to use the tactic those pathetic loser Nazis had used to over-run Poland, although I wasn't quite the Nazi in this story...

Blitzkrieg... loosely translated into lightning attack. I was gonna strike hard and strike fast into the very heart... No flanking, no routine, no complex combat manouevers... Simple, effective...

I dried myself from the water on me (from my showerhead) and put on my combat gear for the day... My nicest shirt, tie, pants, belts and shoes... W/ my only protection being my trust 50-cal... I ran up the shores of Lorraine w/o any fear whatsoever...

NO FEAR!!!!! I screamed as I huffed and puffed up the shores of Lorraine and fast-marched down the beautiful rural country trails that lead me straight into the heart of my conquest.

D-Day T+5H 1200H, Lorraine smiled as the first sounds of my artillery boomed (No... No sex... no ejaculation... no firing... Pls read on... hahaha) and a single shot of cluster rounds hit her.... Cluster round? That's only before I can't call it a bunch round... A cluster round of 21 roses rained right into the heart of Lorraineville as I shoved that bunch of flowers I had pre-ordered in her face right outside the steel gates that once kept me out...

I knew then that all resistance that kept me out once before are now completely shattered by the supporting fire of that very powerful and accurate artillery shot. There was only one way now... In...

mr_missile
26-08-2010, 03:02 PM
There was only one way now... In...

Yes bro, only way is IN and out and in and out......oops.... :D

SexyStan
27-08-2010, 01:37 AM
Sorry bros... unable to manage any more updates this week due to my hectic schedule... I've got backlog to deal with.

Hmmm... thanks for your support. Stay tuned tho and please check back next week...

otamay
28-08-2010, 10:10 AM
Just control abit and shall await here for your D-Day landing assualt.:)

SexyStan
30-08-2010, 03:47 AM
Story Continued... D-Day + 1... Trooper at the Gates...

So there Lorraine stood, looking more beautiful than I ever remembered her to be, a strange glow within that could only be felt in the past is now seen so clearly behind the steel gates she stood, that very steel gate being the only thing that stood between us.

And there I was, right opposite her, realizing how close I was to the "Mission Objective". I fell back on the D-Day mission brief, to secure Lorraineville and set up defence perimeter therewithin in the heart of Her. To rescue hostage & double-agent Lorraine there within before Nazis can realize what exactly happened and place her into safety once more, a place where Nazis no longer have a hold over her.

A single artillery shot rang out at the back of my head. Bunch shot, if you guys recall, as I lifted the bouquet of pink roses to her eye-level, making sure it was close enough to the sharp tip of her pixie nose for her to take a whiff of it. She beamed as the glow in her, which was only felt in the past, could now be seen clearly. Blood gushed to her face as her eyes twinkled behind her white horned-rimmed glasses and a wide smile with her pearly white teeth clearly showing stretched across her face.

Town secured, I thought, with initial trepidation, if any, evaporating into the air heavy with the smell of fresh arti shells that just rained down (in this case, lame old 21 pink roses... haha). Confidence took over as I smiled, a gesture in reply to hers, knowing full well that the overwhelming show of firepower had worked so well in the absence of well-trained enemy Nazi troops. Civilians are so easy to take, haha, I laughed deep within, proud that the Blitzkrieg I had planned had worked just as it should...

*Chuckles*... "That was fast!" Lorraine quipped, completely surprised by my "Blitzkrieg". She had not known I was gonna show up. The element of surprised had not been compromised.
"Yea?" I laughed... "I should have been faster! After all, 3 weeks is not a very long time..." I quipped, flashing the most charming smile I could muster...
Lorraine laughed, her head nodding with her eyes squeezed into a slit at my apparent enthusiasm while fidgetting with the keys to unlock that big steel padlock that once kept me (and many other leering man... haha...) out. "True... But you oughtta know I've got to pick Glen up from school? Like now..? Lorraine's steady voice, which by then had sound so sweet, trailed off as the padlock popped open.

Objective wide opened by civilian assets, I thought. Now's the moment!

"Really?" I mocked a tone of surprise before dropping it low... "Let's make it quick then..."

I opted for the old Pincer maneoever and side-stepped the slow outward swinging steel gate and made my move inwards, both my hands swinging forward to enclose her at the same time.

"Assault on a fixed enemy position is best performed by two parellel moving lines of troopers otherwise known as a Pincer Movement!" I could hear my instructor shout out while he repeatedly taps the A-Frame with a branch that he picked off the ground, tracing it to make the lines more visible on the flapping map.

Pincer manouever successful with objective secured. We are now in Lorraineville as I pulled her close to me in one swift motion, the bouquet of roses that smashed all defences wide open so effectively still in my right hand and now tucked behind her back with Lorraine safely in my arms... and giggling non-stop...

zapbait
30-08-2010, 01:29 PM
kinda disappointed ... finally come to the sex parts and you do a D-Day rendition of the exciting parts... some ppl might enjoy it but it's really distracting and turn off for me ...

just my 2 cents worth .. can resume to normal writing? pretty please :o

talismann
30-08-2010, 07:32 PM
Bro SexyStan, kudos to your writing to so far, have really enjoyed it and can only admire your talents. Just to chime in a little, I agree with bro zapbait, this D-Day thing is a little unromantic/asexual to your tantalizing tryst.

GeMiNiZzzzZzz
30-08-2010, 08:35 PM
kinda disappointed ... ..

.. I agree with bro zapbait, this D-Day thing is a little unromantic/asexual to your tantalizing tryst.

TS is trying to make this story of his more than interesting by adding spice to it.

To most of us, i think we are sick of hearing stories which is all only about sex, tryst which will probably takes you 1-2 day to forget all about it.

He is making so much effort in here, unless both of you can show us something more interesting :rolleyes:

TS, keep it up :D

talismann
30-08-2010, 09:25 PM
TS is trying to make this story of his more than interesting by adding spice to it.

To most of us, i think we are sick of hearing stories which is all only about sex, tryst which will probably takes you 1-2 day to forget all about it.

He is making so much effort in here, unless both of you can show us something more interesting :rolleyes:

TS, keep it up :D

Not to flog a dead horse, it has already been said that its an opinion myself and another bro share. You don't have to use the cliche "show us something more interesting" line because I have definitely not said I can do better. Perhaps if you want a war story, you should get a pure war story.

Taking nothing away from TS, once again a respectable effort.

GeMiNiZzzzZzz
30-08-2010, 09:55 PM
Not to flog a dead horse, it has already been said that its an opinion myself and another bro share. You don't have to use the cliche "show us something more interesting" line because I have definitely not said I can do better. Perhaps if you want a war story, you should get a pure war story.

Taking nothing away from TS, once again a respectable effort.

Hi Mate, the additional scene was actually linked to the whole story, it was definitely not a total new scenario/story if you read it carefully.

Its like reading a 100 pages novel to build up the suspense rather than a 10 page sex story which goes into the sex details immediately.

Thats his style i guess.

Anyhow, let us await for the nxt chapter shall we ;)

mr_missile
31-08-2010, 09:20 AM
To most of us, i think we are sick of hearing stories which is all only about sex, tryst which will probably takes you 1-2 day to forget all about it.

He is making so much effort in here, unless both of you can show us something more interesting :rolleyes:

TS, keep it up :D

I agree totally. Not your type of story? Can always go read the others which suit your 'tastes'. There are many out there. :D

zapbait
31-08-2010, 10:30 AM
To most of us, i think we are sick of hearing stories which is all only about sex, tryst which will probably takes you 1-2 day to forget all about it.


I thought that the long drawn out affair was something "new"... and if sex written nicely (using simple terms) can be unforgettable too ... "KISS" the golden rule of writing ... but that just my 2 cents worth

Not to flog a dead horse, it has already been said that its an opinion myself and another bro share. You don't have to use the cliche "show us something more interesting" line because I have definitely not said I can do better.


Thanks for agreeing with me Bro and I agree with you too... I was wondering why the sudden challenge to do better. I have been toying whether to write down some of my sex story but my post here are merely in the capacity of a fan who didn't like the new changes.

I agree totally. Not your type of story? Can always go read the others which suit your 'tastes'. There are many out there. :D

yeah ... moving on, won't disrupt the story here anymore... Peace ;)

SexyStan
01-09-2010, 04:18 PM
Lol... I must say that I am extremely amused at the lively banter that developed recently... Hmmmm...

Let me start my response by thanking Bro Missle & Bro Geminizzzz for defending my thread and postings, and more importantly for defending my style of expression & writing. It is most appreciated by me and your support is most invaluable, together w/ other bros/sis who likes this story thus far.

On the other hand, I really would like to thank Bro Zapbait & Bro taslismann for their invaluable feedback as well. As mentioned much earlier on in this thread, I'd love for feedbacks to be a norm in this thread. It keeps it alive and at least I'd know I ain't reciting a story to a mere liveless wall... That'd really dampen my enthusiasm to carry on...

kinda disappointed ... finally come to the sex parts and you do a D-Day rendition of the exciting parts... some ppl might enjoy it but it's really distracting and turn off for me ...

just my 2 cents worth .. can resume to normal writing? pretty please :o

Just some clarifications here, the sex parts are really still some time off... There are sex parts, but as mentioned earlier, its far & apart. Haha, I've kindda anticipated that there will be responses like yours and I must apologise that the soap-opera likeness of this thread will not cater to the tastes of all (I've mentioned and cautioned that already). The r/s between Lorraine & I wasn't a "wham-bang-bye" affair and that's not how I intend to flow this story along. So why this story then? Sorry bro, inexperienced me only has this one story in my life that I've felt have shaped me so please do pardon a young bro here. Hmmm... why post it then? Well, Lol... as some bros have commented, as much as this encounter is memorable to me, it stirs up some of their memories as well... As guys, we all like sex and I like it very much myself as well... But I've always felt that sex is a mean to an end and I'm sure there are many bros here who would agree that they've found unrequitted love a challenge to get over and it has prolly formed, be it consciously or sub-consciously, a major part of their live w/ prolly the sweetest of memories. Some still pursue it till this day hoping that it'd one day be requitted...

And so I share... in hope that some will share with me as well... I'm a learning youngling after all.

As to your remarks on "KISS" way of writing, I couldn't agree more. That's a style I keep to for my proposals and reports. It is also my sincerest belief that this story is "KISS" as well. The "war scenes" are not war scenes per se, ..., but hmmm you'd realize that it is consistent with the way I right from on-start. I like to draw parallel inferences to real life events (as I did using CK & UOB ads) and D-Day was really how I felt like when Darren was first away. It was added as humour and spice and I really didn't expect such an uproar... hahaha. Errr... its just me. I enjoy making jokes outta everything in life & this is just one of my ways to illustrate my feelings in a visual manner....

Bro SexyStan, kudos to your writing to so far, have really enjoyed it and can only admire your talents. Just to chime in a little, I agree with bro zapbait, this D-Day thing is a little unromantic/asexual to your tantalizing tryst.

I hoped I've clarified why its linked to D-Day, unnecessary as some bros might feel. Its not a reference to war... or war stories... Hmmm... simply put, this is not a wham-bang story as well... Well, I don't wank on a daily basis but I'd laugh many times a day... I do believe there are some bros like me as well.
Some people prefer "desperate housewives" (I think most Singaporeans do in fact) but a few (myself included) are faithfully followers of "Sex & the City" due to the way its presented and the wits therein.

Having said all these, all feedback, positive or negative will be valued greatly. I assure you that I understand your points and hope most sincerely you'd get my picture as well...

Well, once again, thank you all bros for your feedback and responses. Thanks for keeping this thread alive... Cheers...

talismann
01-09-2010, 06:30 PM
I hoped I've clarified why its linked to D-Day, unnecessary as some bros might feel. Its not a reference to war... or war stories... Hmmm... simply put, this is not a wham-bang story as well... Well, I don't wank on a daily basis but I'd laugh many times a day... I do believe there are some bros like me as well.
Some people prefer "desperate housewives" (I think most Singaporeans do in fact) but a few (myself included) are faithfully followers of "Sex & the City" due to the way its presented and the wits therein.

Hi bro, its great to hear from you again though I was hoping for more narrative. :D Perhaps I wasn't clear in my remarks, point being your writing so far, regardless of the contents (yes, perhaps no sex is more factual), has been a delight to read (until this controversy). My opinion was that the sudden change of theme felt like my TV set was suddenly changed to black and white picture, the connection was absent. Pre-dating that, I almost felt that I could connect with your writing, identifying with it because it felt like an everyday event. But its your story to write, appreciate it nonetheless. Thanks.

Triple-X
01-09-2010, 09:21 PM
dont need be bothered by people's comments,the majority silent readers that never post are in support of this read,cheers :)

harv
02-09-2010, 02:05 AM
nice story bro ..keep up e good work .. add u le .. cheers.

zapbait
02-09-2010, 02:00 PM
It was added as humour and spice and I really didn't expect such an uproar

Well, once again, thank you all bros for your feedback and responses. Thanks for keeping this thread alive... Cheers...

No Uproar la ... just a passionate feedback ... cos passionate about ur story ma

:)

you also impressed me with the way you handle 2 different types of responds to your writing... not only a good writer but good at handling "fan mails"

will hang around here for more of ur writing then :D

JackieTan
02-09-2010, 06:03 PM
nice one you got there bro. I'm staying tuned for more updates on u n lorraine. Up u 6 humble points. :)

SexyStan
03-09-2010, 01:42 AM
Hi bro, its great to hear from you again though I was hoping for more narrative. :D Perhaps I wasn't clear in my remarks, point being your writing so far, regardless of the contents (yes, perhaps no sex is more factual), has been a delight to read (until this controversy). My opinion was that the sudden change of theme felt like my TV set was suddenly changed to black and white picture, the connection was absent. Pre-dating that, I almost felt that I could connect with your writing, identifying with it because it felt like an everyday event. But its your story to write, appreciate it nonetheless. Thanks.

Thank you for your understanding and support, which I've never doubted. Hmmm... Hope you can see now that there wasn't really a change in style and the story is still progressing in a real time fashion. Lol... well, sometimes, black and white cute scenes are thrown into scriipts to create a parallel inference like I've said... Apologies tho, if I've done a lousy job on this... haha.

No Uproar la ... just a passionate feedback ... cos passionate about ur story ma

:)

you also impressed me with the way you handle 2 different types of responds to your writing... not only a good writer but good at handling "fan mails"

will hang around here for more of ur writing then :D

Thank you bro for your vote of confidence.

Shall try to continue the story now... considering I've some time before I head to bed...

SexyStan
03-09-2010, 02:14 AM
Story Continued... Currahee

Yes... I know I am so going to get flamed for importing another quote from HBO's Band of Brothers and pushing the "WW2 rendition" further... Haha...

Well, as explained earlier, my writing style and thought patterns are really pretty much based on parallel-inferences and I draw on them alot; Battlecries and Normandy landings because I really felt that way then the minute Darren was no longer in the picture. Battlecries because my attempt to win Lorraine's heart and mind was an uphill task... and yes, I really compared Lorraine to France. Departure day for Darren was D-day to me; Just as how it was pivotal to the Allies winning the war, I had felt it would be pivotal for the development of my relationship w/ Lorraine.

Well, if you guys think that war is an inapt description of events to come... I hope you'd understand by now that the fight for Lorraine was indeed war to me... The most brutal of wars in fact. That was how much I needed to win her.

Band of Brothers fans would be familiar with Currahee, the famous war cry for the 506th US Airborne regiment. It's an old red indian word meaning "We stand alone, together" and that was how I felt as Lorraine fell into my arms, giggling... which I stiffled almost immediately with a kiss to her lips.

Lorraine reciprocated with her eyes closed and promptly pushed me away, laughing "I'm late! I need to pick Glen up..."

I looked on at her blankly and obviously disappointed.. Day 1 and she needs to pick Glen up... sigh... reality check, I will never be the only man in her life. The fact that the big one's gone, only means that the little one is still here. That blank look lasted not more than a second and I planted another kiss smack right on her lips again. This time round though, my tongue met hers as well as I could feel her grip on my waist tightening.

Lorraine bit my lips in a fashion that I was familiar once upon a time, and once (Please refer to my earlier posting on the time we made out in her car, Lol... you'd know its really just that once I was bitten...) as well, a fashion I've almost forgotten... and boy can this girl bite.

"Ouch..." I pulled away laughing as I found myself looking straight into Lorraine's scrunched up face "Ok, I get it... you are late..."

Lorraine broke into a smile "Now, let's not get overboard shall we? Its just Day 1, Darren's just left? I need to pick Glen up? And my door's fucking open? Whatever are you thinking Junior?"

Seeing no reaction from me, Lorraine chidded "I know what you are thinking..." Lorraine laughed as she threw her head backwards and eyeballed me with mocked contempt in her eyes. "If you are thinking you gonna get some action now... All I can say is NOT IN THE HOUSE!" There, she finally had to speak of the unspoken rules. Speak of? Spelt it out more like it. WW2 was unromantic? Now what do you guys call this? Hahaha...

Awwwww.... I thought silently, disappointment showing in my eyes...

Lorraine must have sensed it as she reached for my hand and took the bouquet of roses. Planting a kiss on my cheek, she whispered "Thank you junior, that was sweet... Not in the house, not today... but we've got plenty of time..." before pulling away and flashing a wink at me... "If you are thinking anything cheeky... *Giggles*... All I can say is you young boys need to learn a lesson or two about patience..." She teased...

"Ok! I need to pick Glen up..." Her tone changed as she held onto my hand and started to drag me out...

Currahee... As long as Darren's not around, we stand alone, together... free to do whatever we want....

Not quite, I've still got Glen to deal with... I groaned as realisation hits me almost immediately...

"I can't give you a lift..." Lorraine hissed... "I'm late!"

SexyStan
03-09-2010, 02:40 AM
Story Continued... The Longest Day(s)...

Bros flaring up and screaming at me now with "NO MORE WW2 SHIT YOU FUCKING MORON! I CAN'T FARKING WANK TO ALL THESE..." hold your horses (or your dicks, whichever is more apt...:D). If you guys are frustrated with the recent draggy developments on WW2, imagine how I must have felt!

I must be a pretty good writer; I did not just narrate did I? I made you feel how I felt... :p

All that wait, the deliberate set-up with 21 roses and all, was completely wasted. There Lorraine was, in my arms, clad in her white-horned rimmed glasses, her pixie face looking so damn cute with infinite changes in expressions, her twinkling eyes... I could smell her with that light fragrance on her! I could smell her hair which was so carefully swept back and clipped. I could feel her lips and tongue as well as her warm breath. I could even feel her bite! I had my arms around her slender waist and yes I could feel those sensual curves!

And there, she had to say it... "Not in the house..." The unspoken rules finally spoken of, "a lesson or two about patience..." She had to lecture... I'm sure you guys get the picture. My bursting heart, my throbbing dick after three weeks of waiting and splash! Cold waters of Normandy... sunken heart and sunken dick, as dead as the sunken Bismaark or USS Arizona...

If Paramount Pictures "The Longest Days" depicted D-Day landings... my movie would be called "The Longest Days...'

0700H to 1200H a long wait? Yes, Darren's gone... but Glen's still here... For the whole of that particular day, Lorraine kept herself busy with the prince in her life, despite the absense of the Fuhrer.

Hahaha... =P... Happy waiting Junior... I'm sorry, Glen's still around... =P My mobile phone mocked with Lorraine's name right at the top where "Sender" is.
... I replied with the very dots I had punched appearing at the back of my mind as well...

Patience my boy... Hen's night next week... ;P

Yea remind me... as three more days of her fussing about Glen continued... *Groan*

shark89
03-09-2010, 10:09 AM
I am enjoying every bit of this story. :)

SexyStan
08-09-2010, 11:05 PM
Hi Bros, many apologies for not being able to manage further updates until today, hope you guys haven't lost too much patience. I know its been long cause I couldn't even find my thread when I wanted to... Lol. Here goes nothing...

Story Continued... Pictures of You

Hold your horses bros... Let me clarify first... the above caption does not suggest in anyway that THERE ARE NOT GONNA BE KINKY SHOTS OF LORRAINE... IT SIMPLY ISN'T RIGHT THAT WE TOOK PICTURES... Sheesh... its tough managing the expectations you guys have on this thread... Hahaha...

Lorraine's fussing over her precious baby cub continued for the next few days in Darren's absense to the extent that we couldn't even do our daily jog as she wasn't comfortable with leaving Glen alone in the house. I understand, of course, that it was only right that Lorraine felt that way but as mentioned earlier, if bros here can't stand the dragginess, I wouldn't be able to stand the cold water treatment I had to go through after an arduous 3 weeks wait just got Darren to be gone so that Lorraine and I could have some alone time...

Alone time? Yeah right... Hahaha

Though we could not carry on our runs, we made it a point to have breakfast... yes, every morning. If I had expectations on how the relationship was gonna turn out for us in Darren's absense, Lorraine had her own set of expectations as well for the breakfasts. Like mine, her's was doused with a blast of cold water as my frustrations began to show over the initial days of Darren's absense...

Uneventful breakfasts, uneventful days as I focused on my hectic daily schedule, keeping the disappointment outta my head for the subsequent days to come.

"I sense frustration in you!" Lorraine quipped as she eyes me curiously with a hint of smile forming beneath her face... This was D-Day + 3 and breakfast was at her place (i.e. no action bros... remember the rules Lorraine & I adhere to mutually... sigh); 3 days of uneventfulness EVEN IN DARREN'S ABSENCE... WTF DID YOU EXPECT?

Oh yea? How observant... I thought as I munched on my toasts and muttered beneath my breath "Nope..."

"Really? You can't really hide your emotions very well you know... Young boys usually suck at that!" Lorraine teased...

I stopped my chewing, looked up at her and mustered a smile from my obviously stoned face "Really? I thought I was doing quite a good job (considering how I'm getting even lesser attention from you compared to when Darren was around)..." The words in brackets didn't come out of course... and what came out was "I suck at sucking by the way..." and gave her a you-know-who-else-is-good at-that kindda look.

Lorraine frowned and stood up from across her dining table and walked over to me before bending over and planting a kiss on my right cheek. "Cheeky eh? Hahaha... why are you so damn cute?" before walking away, laughing...

Cute? I thought as I faked a smile while looking at Lorraine's enthusiastic face...

"Hey... You wanna see some pictures?" Lorraine's voice trailed from across the hall...

Grrrr.... Can I say no? I'm being farking tortured!!!!!!!! I cursed and swear deep down but parted my lips to say the complete opposite "Sure... Why not?" only to find a stack of big fat photo albums landing on my thighs...

Groan... This can't be happening... I told myself as I flipped open the 1st page of many pages to come...

"Hahahaha...." My laugh was sounding every bit fake... "So many huh? This oughtta be interesting..."

Lorraine picked up the sarcasm in my voice and landed a punch on my right arm...

"Ouch...! Ok ok... I'd look at these over there on the sofas..."

Getting up, I lifted the massive pile of albums (and boy were they heavy) and plopped down on her couch. With a sigh, I opened the first of them and bursted out laughing right away. I was greeted by a toddling 2-year old Bibendum (For guys wondering who or what Bibendum is, that's the name of Michelin Man :p... Or in this case, Michelin Baby-Gal! Think you guys do get the picture...).

"Is this even you?" I bent over in hysterical laughters as Lorraine rained girlish punches on me. She must be mad if she even genuinely thinks that such pummelling oughtta hurt...

We poured our heads over pictures after pictures, which included sheepish ones of her in Cross-Colours, her preggy pinnafore girls-school uniform, pictures of her in JC, Varsity Graduation, working life and of course, shots of her marriage w/ Darren.

I had a crash brief as well, on Charlene who was captured in almost every picture from primary school & secondary school pinnafore uniform (yes, with the obiang look of having their belts undone), all the way till working life... The both of them really do go a long way back...

"Yup! That's my gal... Charlene... and that's Charmaine, her baby sis... Of course, she's no longer a baby now... but back then, she's only in primary school!" Lorraine quipped as she pointed at one of those pinnafore pictures...

We laughed over her pictures, and mine as well (I had gotten her to wait as I hopped over to my place and back with pictures of me in yellow jeans... corny and humiliating... Haha...)... I couldn't have known this woman more in the time I have gotten to know her till now than in that 1 hour we've spent pouring over pictures...

Our lips locked once more as Lorraine slided down from the armrest of the single couch I was seated on to my laps. As we both locked in a loving embrace, I could feel my hands slide down her back and attempting to feel under her top...

Lorraine placed her hand on mine firmly, stopping whatever I was attempting in my tracks.

"Uh uh uh... Patience my boy.... and not in the house..." She hissed in a tone I could only be so familiar with... firm and alluring...

Groan...

yang punk
09-09-2010, 12:12 AM
Haha bro, Lorraine reminds me of some women who would offer their a..hole in order to keep their virginity! She'll do you anywhere except her marital home... weird principles she has.

In contrast, my 2nd fb brought me to her marital bed for our first fuck! Her wedding photo was staring down at me as she cowgirl me...:o

SexyStan
09-09-2010, 12:19 AM
Haha... Not that Bro Yang, just that we were still struggling w/ the whole idea that it is nothing less than an affair... We do have moral conscience... considering up till now, we still haven't had sex...

julius247
20-09-2010, 11:26 AM
Pls continue bro...

BT8888
20-09-2010, 01:51 PM
TS, thx for sharing.
Pls continue...

andythai
20-09-2010, 02:21 PM
bro SexyStan, can feel your frustration but once you get hold of Lorraine I think both of you all will be having hell of a good time. :D

Humble newbie
20-09-2010, 02:22 PM
A nice story, waiting for more.

shibume
08-11-2010, 05:05 PM
TS,

Could you continue with this story? All of us miss your update with sweet sexy Lorraine and her "hen" party, leh!!! Thanks.

SexyStan
18-11-2010, 03:23 AM
Hi Bros...

A million apologies for MIA-ing for so long. Reason is due to my work & schooling schedule. Yes, I will definitely pour my hearts out in this story... but do give me some time...

Just some real life updates if you guys are interested, r/s between Lorraine & I have officially ended. The story will definitely continue though... but I need time...

oLdMaN68
18-11-2010, 09:20 AM
Be strong junior, take care..

TamKorSang
18-11-2010, 10:29 AM
Woah....ended already??? Ok, waiting for your updates dude.

KitKat
18-11-2010, 03:29 PM
Wow. What a story. I took almost the whole day to read through from page 1. It is very well written. I will be back.

waterbottle99
18-11-2010, 10:05 PM
har.. ended already ah... :(:(:(:( i really feel for you.. goodluck.. waiting on your next posts..

tender
19-11-2010, 02:44 AM
It's such a pity that everything had ended between you and lorraine ,but all the best to you as well :) awesome story !

cheapthriller
23-11-2010, 12:05 PM
waiting for your latest episode man..

I need to find a running mate too... :D

LowKa
23-11-2010, 04:47 PM
Great story Mr FC.

Keep it coming.

zzzdg
27-11-2010, 02:27 PM
nice one!! caught it a bit late but loved it so far .. :) .. would love to see the rest of the narrative, thnx bro

soccerpicks
29-11-2010, 05:15 PM
w r u Mr Sexy Tan and his stories :)

SexyStan
26-06-2012, 08:32 PM
I owe bros here an apology, especially fans who have been supportive and followed the story to an abrupt halt. Story between Lorraine and I began in mid Jan 2010 and ended early Nov 2010... all 11 months of it.

The reason why I brought up the thread again, was because, as I was reading through it once more, memories came flooding back, both the good, the bad, and the ugly.

Its been almost 2 years now, and hopefully open wounds suffered by all parties have since closed. I'll be continuing the story soon... 2 years on, my writing style may have changed... please pardon me... People and Personality do change, and grow...

Kalv
26-06-2012, 08:41 PM
.. reading through it once more, memories came flooding back, both the good, the bad, and the ugly. ... Its been almost 2 years now... I'll be continuing the story soon.....
Great. Will Upz U in support of (continuation) great story. Have a nice day. :) Cheers.

SexyStan
26-06-2012, 08:43 PM
yea... give me sometime tho... its like rubbing salt on a wound.

SpeedoStar
26-06-2012, 11:06 PM
Awwww man this was the story i read 2 years ago that got me hooked!!! i wanna know what happened in the end!!

jj_jj
27-06-2012, 12:19 AM
i don't know about others but you just made me read all over again. pls continue when you can.

Kalv
27-06-2012, 09:51 AM
yea... give me sometime tho....

Do not feel pressured - take your time. Good things always worth waiting. :) Cheers.

Kenneleon
27-06-2012, 06:17 PM
Silent supporter for the past 17 pages..good read..excellent way of writing though can be abit (just abit) draggy..

I think we are in the same line of work bro stan..

sp150
28-06-2012, 03:01 AM
Well written bro gone through the 17 pages til now (damn!!) gonna wake up by 6 and go for ICT...better finish up bro seems like u were online as well. Hope I didn't let my few hours of sleep go to waste lol.
Cheers bro