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seow85
12-07-2009, 11:48 PM
My sister was 19 and i was 17 when i had *** with my sister.

That day my parents went to my uncle's house.They usually do it in every weekend and return home late at night .That fortunately the AC in my sister's room went out.That was summer.She couldn't bear the heat so she took of all the dress and lay naked int he bed. I went with my friends to play when this happened.When i returned home it was five O' clock and she didn't know i returned and she roamed the house naked. We had a big house with double floors so it wasn't easy to find her.But when i went to the living room there she was in front of the mirror admiring herself. She saw me int he mirror and quickly turned but didn't cover herself. She stood there naked and allowed me to saw her naked.She had a perfect body. She too had big apple ass.


Then she went to her room as though nothing happened and i went to my room to sleep.The thought of my sister made me awake and i thinking of herself as though fucking her i masturbated and i cummed in my bathroom. This was enough i thought. I couldn't control myself. So i went to her bedroom where she was still lying naked. If she allowed me to saw her naked will she allow me to fuck her i thought . Then i kissed her suddenly while i hugged her. We hug many of our relations but this one was different. This was hot i thought (not because of summer though!) She didn't resist to push me away but she too was liking it. Then while i kissed her i moved my hand to the breast of hers and began caressing them. i stopped kissing and began to squeze her breast and she moaned. This made my 5 inch cock stronger and longer.

"You have big boobs sexy sis" i said excitedly.


I still caressed them and she suddenly grabbed hold of my cock and began rubbing them. Within minutes i cummed all over her breasts.

Then i moved down her legs and began to eat out her vagina and she moaned deeply.

She moaned "Aaahaaa aaahaaa"

"I want you to do this very badly" she said.


After about five or seven minutes she reached her orgasm and cummed all over me.

This was wonderful i thought. Not licking her but the feeling i had around my penis when i was eating out her vagina.

The i inserted my penis into her very slowly and took out slowly until she didn't have much pain

Then i began to fuck her very fast and she too was liking it. It was a wonderful feeling having my cock inside her and that idea overpowered me and i began to fuck very fast. I was about to reach my orgasm when took out the cock and then i inserted into her asshole. She began to moan in pain and began to fuck slowly until my cock fitted into her asshole and began to fuck fast.

Then i changed the position and then sat on my cock and began to jump up and down. She stopped it for a moment to catch breath and she kissed me while i caressed her breasts again. It made my cock stronger .I reached orgasm and blowed my load into her asshole. She liked it and when she got off me the cum was leaking from her asshole and dripped down her legs. She went to the bathroom to wash and i entered to have more orgasm and we began kissing each other and i rubbed her cock in the gap between her legs and she too liked it and i reached my orgasm only after 15 minutes of doing it. It was good we said.

Then my parents came at seven O' clock and my sister said "I will sleep in nick's room because my AC is no longer working"

My parents accepted that.


We will have more fun when we are going to sleep in the same room i thought and i think she will too have thought it before asking to my parents.

I waited for the night to come.(because i can cum)

tigerprawn
13-07-2009, 07:10 AM
TS, I am not commenting on your morality by fantasizing to have sex with your own elder sister thus writing out your fantasy here.

No offence, but your story telling skills really suck big time. You have an anti-climax style of writing. Even the most erotic happenings become mundanely boring and yawningly unexciting the way you narrate it. Usually sibling sex stories are supposed to be exciting cos of the forbidden fruit element. However, from your "pen" it becomes like a bowl of cold plain porridge. I can't pin point what exactly is wrong with your writing style suffice that it has to be one of the worst stories I have read here in this forum. And it is not about your grammar which is pretty sound and much better than a lot of the other bros who relay their true stories here. Perhaps it is because you are just fantasizing sex with your elder sister and did not really f--k her, that's why your writings are totally emotionless and has no soul at all. In fact, it feels like you may still be a virgin school boy who never had any real sexual experience before that's why your sex story feels so removed and empty.

Perhaps you may wish to put in more effort in improving your writing skills OR (not recommended) really go realise your fantasy then maybe you can write with more HEART. Good luck!

seventyseven
13-07-2009, 09:19 AM
Same sentiments here....read your 2 other storys....all difference in style....my doubts are not all are written by you...no offence, just my sincere opinoin.

Good Life
13-07-2009, 09:37 AM
TS... your short excerpt taken from your fantasy has been highly entertaining that my toes are tickling.. While I think your grammar and vocabulary are decent, writing a story needs build up like a foreplay in sex.

Good attempt to entertain... but seriously you either need more practice with real action or more practice with writing or reading porn if it helps.

If it's an attempt to get pts, you would have to try harder.

prudent
13-07-2009, 09:45 AM
Hi TS,

Despite the comments of the other bros, I would like to remind you of the chinese proverbs that says "a journey of a thousand miles began with a single step".

Athenawishes
13-07-2009, 09:45 AM
hmmm TS.. perhaps its because this is a short story thus mayb those tiny winy moments has been left out.. but good try~~

err but the idea of doing it with sister.. humph..
makes me feel tat.. i m fortunate i dun hav a bro.. LOL..
but a new kinda kinky R/S... =X

Sensory Sniper
13-07-2009, 09:48 AM
I'm confused whether is it a fantasy or a story. The way its written is like its a matter of fact... doesn't play around with our imagination or like some authors, when its damn exciting... 'wait for next installment' - you knw wht I mean.

Xgenre
13-07-2009, 10:25 AM
That day my parents went to my uncle's house.They usually do it in every weekend and return home late at night .That fortunately the AC in my sister's room went out.That was summer.She couldn't bear the heat so she took of all the dress and lay naked int he bed. I went with my friends to play when this happened.

Story cut and paste from the internet? Singapore is summer all year round.

emokid
13-07-2009, 10:29 AM
Totally cmi... brush up on ur skills PLS! I read the 1st 2 lines n i stopped... no climax building @ all... :confused:

erkianpeng
13-07-2009, 10:39 AM
For the best ever story, read this and learn:

http://www.sammyboyforum.com/adult-discussions-about-sex/115742-my-auntie-i.html

Whiteblood
13-07-2009, 10:44 AM
Sound like a breast act. No good to do that.

darkschneider
13-07-2009, 11:16 AM
OMG .... TS did you make a mistake?

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Then i changed the position and then sat on my cock and began to jump up and down. She stopped it for a moment to catch breath and she kissed me while i caressed her breasts again. It made my cock stronger .I reached orgasm and blowed my load into her asshole. She liked it and when she got off me the cum was leaking from her asshole and dripped down her legs. She went to the bathroom to wash and i entered to have more orgasm and we began kissing each other and i rubbed her cock in the gap between her legs and she too liked it and i reached my orgasm only after 15 minutes of doing it. It was good we said.

Then my parents came at seven O' clock and my sister said "I will sleep in nick's room because my AC is no longer working"

My parents accepted that.


We will have more fun when we are going to sleep in the same room i thought and i think she will too have thought it before asking to my parents.

I waited for the night to come.(because i can cum)

Megatronzombie
13-07-2009, 11:51 AM
walau first time immediately do asshole liao, u and ur sis power. sounds more like a western story than a Sg one ;p Anyway incest no good!

naturegreen
13-07-2009, 11:54 AM
TS,
is she your step-sister or real sister?

bloopz
13-07-2009, 12:07 PM
good attempt on writing a story and definitely entertaining.. hehe.. good observation to fellow samster for realising the "her cork" part.. :p

Sensory Sniper
13-07-2009, 01:07 PM
What is the point of copying and pasting TS!

All pasted yesterday (12/7/09)

11:48pm
Story - fucking my sister

11:50pm
Story - Seducing a telephone Repairman

11:52pm
Story - Aunt Unbelievable (Part 1)

You might as well just start 1 thread and post the URL...

fl saviour
13-07-2009, 01:13 PM
OMG .... TS did you make a mistake?

hahaha knn the sister is a transformer ma frm cb bian lj:D

Savanna
13-07-2009, 01:24 PM
hahaha knn the sister is a transformer ma frm cb bian lj:D

This is what you call a TRANSISTER!!! :D:D:D

markck
15-07-2009, 01:23 AM
come on bro. i f my gf 4 several yr yet cant cum in ass. 1st time f n u poke ass. tell story also dont be so kua zhang ma!

友情岁月
15-07-2009, 01:49 AM
Thought it a real story. :p

waiwaiz
15-07-2009, 01:54 AM
TS........u got a very kan cheong style of writing........don't need la.........juz take your time, slowly........

keep trying.....:D

fenwick
15-07-2009, 02:04 AM
Poor Ts!! I think he or her!!! Is trying to gain some points but end up GENNA zap till minus point...............:cool:

友情岁月
15-07-2009, 02:06 AM
Poor Ts!! I think he or her!!! Is trying to gain some points but end up GENNA zap till minus point...............:cool:

Agree, up ya for that. :D

Royster79
15-07-2009, 11:50 PM
not interesting.. try harder next time..:D